1、大学英语四级考试大学英语四级考试写作培训写作培训语言表达的三档次：低低档次：语言支离破碎，错误百出；中中档次：语言中规中矩，错误不多，但平淡乏味；高高档次：语言精雕细琢，变化多端，妙语连珠。好作文的好作文的“遣词造句遣词造句”v 单词的应用应准确到位：单词的应用应准确到位：参加课外活动：主要原因：About 可以被替换为：as to,as regards,with regard to,regarding,concerning,related toextensive knowledgeparticipate in extracurricular activitiesget involved in
2、 main,primary,essential,crucial,fundamentalreason广博的知识：v 正确搭配词语：正确搭配词语：提高生活水平：提高阅读水平：提高文化水平：upgrade the living standardimprove ones reading ability/skillraise the intellectual level提高英语水平：improve my English level1、避免使用缩写形式，例如：do not而不是dont;it is 而不是its;2、表达同一意思时，尽量使用词语而不是短语，后者较前者更为口语化，不够精炼，例如：invest
3、igate 比look into更正式；determine 比make up ones mind 更简练；3、使用标准的表述方式，例如：gonna,wanna,I think,make it,之类的口语或俚语在作文中尽量不要使用；5、尽可能多用具体词汇或者闪光词汇例如：most of 用the vast majority of替换 see用witness 替换 never用on no account/in no case/under no circumstances替换 face用confront替换 know用recognize,be aware of,be conscious of,ide
4、ntify替换 same 用identical替换4、使用较委婉的语气比命令语气更能让读者接受，例如：Youd better,Youre supposed to,It would be better v 修辞手段运用中的问题：修辞手段运用中的问题：运用合理的修辞能够给作文锦上添花。但错误的使用修辞，会让你的作文画蛇添足，句不达意。例如：When we walk out of school doors,we will find our knowledge is out of date.graduate from college leave schoolThe use of grammar bec
5、omes a big stone in the road of the improvement of my English.an obstacle/barrier to 适当运用修辞手段会展示自己的语言功底，获得老师的青睐。设问句设问句A.Will so-called lucky numbers really bring people good luck?I do not suppose so.B.So far as the present situation is concerned,is it a good or bad thing to open the university campu
6、s for tourists?Different people have their own opinions.反问句反问句A.Why not work together to put an end to such immoral behaviors?B.Isnt it high time we eliminated fake commodities from the market?活用谚语活用谚语A.It is known that interest is the mother of success.But we never say pressure is the mother of suc
7、cess.In fact,excessive pressure is the mother of resistance.B.Where there is oppression,there is resistance.When students get more pressure from academic studies,they may naturally reject it in their deep mind because they feel that they are forced to study by the pressure but not their own willing.
8、造句中应避免的错误造句中应避免的错误1.词性不分2.主谓、人称、时态不一致3.指代不清4.成分残缺5.断句错误6.垂悬结构(非谓语动词作状语时，其逻辑主语必须与句子的主语保持一致。如果没有保持一致，就构成了垂悬结构。）7.For example:8.Having considered his economic situation,we gave him some 9.help finally.10.7.正式语体与非正式语体混用v 英语写作中常用的过渡词英语写作中常用的过渡词1 1、表顺序、表顺序first,firstly,first of all,in the first place,to b
9、egin with second,secondly,in the second place,nest third,thirdly,in the third place,finally,still2 2、表因果表因果so,therefore,hence,then,thus,otherwise,so far,because,because of,for for this reason,for this purpose,thanks to,on this account,owing to,as a result,since,for this purpose,as long as,now that,a
10、s,in that,in the sense of3 3、表比较、表比较In contrast,nevertheless,on the other hand,otherwise,in spite of,instead,still,unlike,different from,however,yet,conversely,despite,in comparison4 4、表举例表举例as an illustration,a case in point,in particular,especially,namely,that is,for example,for instance,for one t
11、hing,for another,to illustrate,specifically 5 5、表强调、表强调In fact,indeed,as a matter of fact,above all,surely,especially,clearly,of course,that is to say,in this case,no doubt,chiefly,anyway,in any case,obviously,first of all,at any rate,on any account6 6、表总结表总结to conclude,to sum up,in other words,in s
12、hort,in brief,in conclusion,to end up,therefore,hence,in sum,in summary,as a consequence,accordingly,all in all,on the whole,in a word,as a result 7 7、表递进、表递进again,also,and,and then,too,moreover,in addition,another,besides,whats more,not only but also,meanwhile,furthermore,similarly,equally importan
13、t,most important,whats worse,even worse8 8、表对比表对比In the same way,in fact,likewise,like,equally,even so,accordingly,but,regardless,on the contrary,not withstanding,yet,nonetheless1010、表让步表让步It is true that,admittedly,even though,after all,although,clearly,no matter what,even if,in spite of,irrespecti
14、ve of,regardless of,for all9 9、表时间表时间soon,until,once,presently,immediately,in due time,shortly after,at last,before,after a while,later,as soon as,formerly,subsequently,afterwards,at the same time,currently,lately,at present对立观点类作文：对立观点类作文：要求考生就某一事物或社会现象的两种 对立观点进行论述，表明自己的看法和立场。Recreational activitie
15、s1.娱乐活动多种多样3.作为大学生我的看法2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害2008年6月四级作文题：解释现象类作文：解释现象类作文：对某一事物或社会现象进行客观地分析和评 论，提出自己的观点。College Students Owing Mobile Phones1.随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的大学生拥有手机。2为什么会出现这种现象？3我的看法。问题解决型：问题解决型：要求从试题给出的提示性文字或图表等入手，解释其反映的问题，指出问题的危害性或解决该问题的紧迫性，然后展开分析，提出解决问题的方案或措施。2001年1月四级作文：How to Succeed in a Job Inte
16、rview?1.面试在求职过程中的作用：2.取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是 观点论证型：观点论证型：具有逻辑合理性，能够以理服人。表达方式以议论为主，叙事说明为辅，根据题目所给论点，按照提纲要求通过摆事实、讲道理的方式对该论点进行论证。20032003年年1 1月四级作文月四级作文It Pays to Be Honest 1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2.诚实利人利已，做人应该诚实 应用文应用文最重要的是信函。给出一个特定的场景，试题要求考生按照此特定场景给 相关人士写一封短信，并在信中明确表达自己写信的原因和目的。类型：邀请信、申请信、求职信、感谢信、道歉信、批评信、抱怨信、演说辞等。
