1、As a result the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.（辽宁高考标准范文）Well try our best to improve the working conditions.Well spare no effort to promote the working conditions.（山东高考标准范文）2短语优先写作中，要想写出“亮点”就要注意挖掘自己现存的词汇潜力，多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，会使短文内容丰富，表达更有力度，增添文采。To achieve ones dream，one must t
2、ry to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach.To achieve ones dream，one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach.（北京高考满分作文）Whats more，we can pour out the troubles we face，and release our pressure from different aspects.Whats mor
3、e，we can pour out the troubles we are faced with，and release our pressure from different aspects.（重庆高考满分作文）To tell you the truth，I dont really like your new novel.To tell you the truth，I really show no interest in your new novel.（湖南高考满分作文）3手法多样在表达相同或相近的意思时，要尽量避免过多地使用同一个单词，用其他相应的词或短语来代替，这样能让阅卷老师感觉到你词
4、汇量丰富。实在找不到，可以变更说法，“曲径通幽”或许会有更好的效果。I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.（江西高考满分作文）It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite different from the way of education of China.It showed me that the wa
5、y of education in Canada is quite different from that of China.（湖北高考满分作文）【即时演练】用较高级词汇代替黑体的单词或短语1We all have the same opportunity.2More and more visitors have been attracted to this place.3The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.4Well try our best to develop the tr
6、aditional friendship between us.5I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us.6Would you please help me to turn down the radio?答案1.possess2.An increasing number of3.challenging4.promote5.put up with6.do me a favor二、运用高级句式的七大策略1运用被动语态，重点更鲜明We will have selected about thirty volunteers to the Mars thr
7、oughout the world by 2015.About thirty volunteers will have been selected to the Mars throughout the world by 2015.（广东高考书面表达）Im delighted to know that the Shanghai Museum will organize a famous art exhibition and you are collecting opinions of the public as to selecting the location for the exhibiti
8、on，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.m delighted to know that a famous art exhibition will be organized by the Shanghai Museum and opinions of the public are being collected as to selecting the location for the exhibition，which encouraged me to write to express my ideas.（上海高考满分作文）2运用强
9、调句，重点更突出His great efforts helped me out of the trouble.It was his great efforts that helped me out of the trouble.（安徽高考满分作文）Without hesitation，I decided to follow them and we had lots of fun that day.Without hesitation，I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day.（2015浙江，标准范文）Our pa
10、rents have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.Its our parents who have devoted their unconditional love to us，which indeed deserves our appreciation and reward.（重庆高考满分作文）3运用倒装句，语言更活泼Books are not only shared but it can build up a bridge connectin
11、g readers from different parts of the world as well.Not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.（2015重庆，标准范文）I was so excited that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at
12、 riding it.（2014福建，满分作文）The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in this way.Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy.（福建高考满分作文）4运用省略句，行文更简洁Maybe it is a better idea to take outdoor activities when you feel bad.Maybe it is a better idea to take o
13、utdoor activities when feeling bad.（2014安徽，满分作文）Are you looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony? Sure! Itll be held from 15：00 to 17：00.Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony?00.（2014辽宁，满分作文）As it is scheduled，English Talent Show will be held today.As scheduled，English Talent Show will be
14、 held today.（2014陕西，满分作文）Although they were faced with many problems，they didnt lose heart.Although faced with many problems，they didnt lose heart.（山东高考满分作文）5运用感叹句，感情更强烈From the expression on the face，I knew my math teacher was surprised.What a surprised expression was on my math teachers face！（2015
15、湖南，满分作文）It is a very splendid moment.How splendid a moment it is！（辽宁高考满分作文）6运用with复合结构、分词（短语）等，结构更简明Our school lies at the foot of a mountain，there is a river flowing in front of it.At the foot of a mountain lies our school，with a river flowing in front of it.（北京高考满分作文）The teacher came into the lect
16、ure hall，many students followed him.The teacher came into the lecture hall，followed by many students.（广东高考满分作文）I picked up the case.I shouted at the man loudly.But he didnt hear me and rode away.After picking up the case，I shouted at the man loudly，but he rode too fast to hear me.（湖南高考满分作文）7运用虚拟语气，表
17、达更传神I missed being hit by the car with your help.Without your help，I would have been hit by the car.（安徽高考满分作文）It is high time for both local government and residents to take effective measures.It is high time that both local government and residents took effective measures.（福建高考满分作文）8运用复合句，句式更多变To o
18、ur surprise，the little girl knows so many things.What surprised us most is that the little girl knows so many things.（重庆高考满分作文）It was quite an experience for both of us，and I will never forget it for the rest of my life.It was quite an experience for both of us，which Ill never forget for the rest of
19、 my life.（陕西高考满分作文）9运用it句式，表达更丰富Personally，drinking plenty of boiled water every day is necessary.I think it necessary that we should drink plenty of boiled water every day.（陕西高考满分作文）我认为我们每天喝大量的开水是必要的。s worse，some drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think obeying traffic rules is vital.s worse，s
20、ome drivers，cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.（2015江苏，满分作文）更糟糕的是，一些司机，骑自行车者和行人没有认识到交通规则的重要性。You should provide some money to fund our program，as well as offer us some practical suggestions.Thats our desire.s our desire that you should provide some money to fund our
21、 program，as well as offer us some practical suggestions.（重庆高考满分作文）我们渴望你能为我们的项目提供一些资金，还能提供一些实用的建议。按要求转换下列句子7Above all，we must do something to stop pollution.（用被动语态）_8I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.（用强调句）9We dont know its value until we lose health.（用倒装句）10If it
22、 isnt well organized，the meeting will be a failure.（用省略句）11We had a very good time with the peasants that day.（用感叹句）12Because there was too much noise，I couldnt go on studying.（用with复合结构）答案7.Above all，something must be done to stop pollution.8It was when I entered senior high school that I realized
23、the importance of English.9Not until we lose health do we know its value.10If not well organized，the meeting will be a failure.11What a good time we had with the peasants that day!12With the noise going on，I couldnt go on studying.单句跟踪演练.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的画线部分1He has decided to be a teacher when he grow
24、s up.2Developing very quickly，the Internet causes the breakdown of face-to-face communication.3When you are bored_with_the people sometimes，youd better find a quiet place，listening to some classical music.4He didnt_listen_to what I said in the class.5Suddenly I_thought_of_an_idea that someone had br
25、oken into my house.6As_soon_as_he_arrived，he began his research.答案1.determined/made up his mind2.gives rise to 3fed up with4.turned a deaf ear to5.I came up with an idea/an idea occurred to me6.On/Upon his arrival.按要求转换下列句子1I didnt take his advice，so I failed in the exam.（用虚拟语气）2If it is so，I hope y
26、ou will have a wonderful time.（用省略句）3We can achieve our goal in this way.（用倒装句）4Much to our surprise，Mary failed in the final exam.（用名词性从句）5Because the weather was good，our journey was comfortable.（用短语代替从句）6If you go through the gate，youll find the entrance to Bear Country.（用并列句）答案1.If I had taken his advice，I wouldnt have failed in the exam.2If so，I hope you will have a wonderful time.3Only in this way ca
