英语四级作文对句子的要求.docx
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英语四级作文对句子的要求
写作中对句子的要求
在英语写作中,除了词汇的运用要求,句子处理也起着决定性作用。
句子可长可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表达。
如果句子清一色是简单句,文章必定很单调乏味。
如果全篇充满了冗长的复杂句,读起来也很费力。
最好的方法是以简单句为基础,配合适当的并列句和复杂句。
简单句可长可短,通常要加些附属成分,如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词短语,以及节缩成分。
总之,可根据情况,使句子多样化,使文章灵活多姿。
例如下列五个句子的基本概念一样,但是句式不同,内容重点也有些差别:
1)Thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarmandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(并列分句)
2)Grazingpeacefully,thegoatsinthefarmwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(现在分语短语+简单句)
3)Inthefarm,thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(副词短语+并列分句)
4)Thereweregoatsgrazingpeacefullyinthefarm,unawareoftheapproachinghunter.(简单句+形容语短语)
5)Asthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarm,theywereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(原因副词从句+主句)
“Words”inWriting
一、善用高级词汇。
(汉语是意合语,英语是形合语。
写作源于生活,高于生活所以,在写作中,看到一个单词,一定要能看到一个世界,选择最美妙的词,以体现我们的水平与层次…)。
如:
“认为”:
think,assume,suppose,believe,imagine,reckon,feel,consider,sense,reflect,deem…
“好”:
good,fine,excellent,superior,outstanding,tremendous,marvelous,…
“美好的前程”:
beautifulfuture→promisingfuture,…
“重要”:
important,significant,vital,crucial,imperative,essential,…
“必要”:
necessary,basic,indispensable,compulsory\voluntory,fundamental,crucial,…
“很多”:
many,alotof,numerous,abundant,agoodnumberof,hordesof,…
“越来多”:
moreandmore,agrowingnumberof,anincreasingnumberof,…
“深思”:
thinking,thought-provoking
“处理”:
dealwith,copewith,handle,tackle,…
其实我们熟悉的“许多、大量”有很多的表达法:
thetremendousamountofpractice,agreatdealofwisdom,amultitudeofthings,thevaststoreofknowledge,theoverwhelmingmajorityofthepublic,alargenumberofpeople,thebulkofthelanguageacquisition,anincreasingnumberof,agrowingnumberof,agoodmany,plentyof,“喜欢”:
like,befondof,bedevotedto,bekeenon,bepartialto,beattachedto,adore,…
只能与复数可数名词搭配的很多:
a(great)numberof,a\increasing\growingnumberof,amultitudeof,scoresof,the(overwhelming巨大的)majorityof,agood\greatmany
只能与不可数名词搭配的很多:
Alargeamountof,agreatdealof,
能与两者搭配的很多:
Lotsof,alotof,plentyof,thevaststoreof,thebulk大块of=most大部分注意:
manya\morethanone+单数可数名词,
也是很多的意思,但是用单数谓语。
AWholecomposition120字
Beginning(30%36字)
Body(45%54字)方面1方面2(要求已写好)
Ending(25%30字)
2010年12月英语四级作文题目
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?
Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该……
HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?
Howtowritethebeginningofanessay.
①描述现状——Present/backgroundsituation
②解释性的段落——Explanation/Definition
③描述图表——describethepictures/thescene
④引述名人名言——Quotations
⑤罗列数据——Figures/statistics
⑥修辞疑问——photonicQuestions
⑦类比——Analogy
⑧轶闻趣事——Incident/Anecdote
我们今天就以电脑来写开头段落
1)ByBackgroundInformation描述现状
In1940s,inordertorestoreandprocessallthedatainmilitaryservice.AmericanArmy/navyadoptedalarge/room-sidedcalculationmachine.Fromthenoncomputersciencedevelopsquickly,Nowitisafactthatcomputerplays…
2)ByDefinition解释性的段落
Peopleintheworldnowcansharealltheinformationandkeepintouchwitheachotheratalmostnocostthroughanetworklinkedbycable,phonelineonradiowaveswhichiscalledInternet.Itisa…
3)ByDescription描述图表
InFebruary20.2005whenIwasapplyingforanewjobinalargecompanyIwastoldtostayathometowaitformyinterviewthroughinternet.Itisafact…
4)ByQuotations引述名人名言
Oneofthegreatmenoncesaidthat“computertechnologyandhandlingskillshouldbetaughttochildrenthroughouttheirwholelives.Itisafactthatcomputerplaysanevergrowingimportantroleinourlife”5)Bystatistics罗列数据
Nowadays\Atpresent\Recently,itisestimatedthatthereare90millioncomputerusersinchina.Andeachyeartherearemuchmorepeoplejoiningthispopulation.ItisafactthatInternetplaysanevergrowingimportantroleinoursociety…
6)ByAskingQuestions修辞疑问
Haveyoueverbeensendingorreceivinganemail?
Haveyouevenbeentoachartroomtotalkwithanonymousstranger?
DoyouoftensurfonInternettosearchforinformationyouneed?
Itisafact…
7)ByAnalogy类比
Thecyberspaceisjustlikealargecommunity.Youcanshopthere,makefriendsthereandentertainthere.Itisafactthat…
8)Byanincident/anAnecdote轶闻趣事
Ihaveapetdogwhoseemsunhappyandlonelyrecently.SoItrytofindamateforhim.AfewdaysagoIputamessageonBBS(电子布告栏系统)andsoonIgotagoodnewsthatsomeonehasanappropriateshe—dogwhoalsoneedsamate.Itisafactthat…
HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?
开头段
Itisestimatedthattherearealargenumberofchildrenlackofindependencebytheoverprotectiveparents.Andeachyeartherearemuchmore\moreandmorepeoplejoiningthispopulation\group.Itisafactthathowtobeindependentplaysanevergrowingimportantroleinoursociety.
1、PatternsforBeginningParagraphWriting
1)Facedwith…,quiteafewpeoplearguethat…;Butotherpeopleconceivedifferently.
2)Thereisageneraldiscussiontodayabouttheissueof…Thosewhoobjectto…arguethat…;Theybelievethat…;Butpeoplewhofavor…ontheotherhand,arguethat…
3)Inrecentyears,thephenomenon/issues/problemsof…hasbeenbroughttopublicattention/inthelimelight.
4)Currentlythereisawidespreadconcernthat…
5)Nowpeopleingrowingnumberarecomingtorealizethat
6)Nowitiscommonlyheldthat…;theythink…;butIdoubtwhether…
7)Recentlytheissueof…hasbeenbroughttopublicattention
8)Oneofthegreatmanoncesaidthat…Nowmoreandmorepeoplesharethisbelief
9)AnEnglishproverbsays…
10)Nearlyeverycivilizationhasitsownequivalenttobeproverb
11Untilrecently,…hasbeenregardedas…Butpeoplearetakingafreshlookatit.
12Untilrecently,…hasbeenregardedas…Butpeople
13)Somebodyargues/maintains/holds/insists/believethat…
14)Anincreasingnumberofpeoplearerealizing/havecometorealize15)Thereisnodenying/doubtthat…
Whentheheated\fierce\ongoing\populardispute\discussion\debatephenomenon/issue/problemover\on\concerning\involving\aboutindependencecomesintothespotlightofthepublic,somepeoplewhoobjecttoitpointout\deem\maintain\assert\believe\think\claim\argue\supposethatifthechildrenlackincontrolling,itiseasyforthemtogoastray.While\Meanwhileothersinsist\hold\assumethatindependenceplaysanevergrowingimportantroleinoursociety.Asforme\Inmyopinion\Asmypointofview,weighinguptheprosandcons,thelatter/formercanholdwaterundermostcircumstances.
2、WaysofEndingParagraphWriting
1)重申主题:
Restatement
2)总结概括:
summarize
3)建议措施:
Suggestions
4)预测未来:
Tendency
5)呼应:
AnswertheQuestion
3、PatternsforEndingParagraphWriting
1)Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove/Takingintoamountallthesefactors,wemaysafelyarriveat/draw/cometo/reachtheconclusionthat…
2)Itishightimethatweputconsiderable/great/specialemphasison…
3)Wemustlookforanimmediatemethod,becausethepresentsituationof…,ifpermittedtocontinue,willsurelyleadto/resultin…
4)Manysolutions/methodsarebeingofferedhere,allofthemmakesomesense,butnoneisquitesatisfactory.Theproblemshouldbeexaminedinanewway.
5)Thereisnoimmediatesolutiontotheproblemof…,but…mightbehelpful/beneficial.
6)Noeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemof…butthegeneralawarenessofthenecessity/importanceof…mightbethefirststepontherightway.
7)Thereislittledoubt/denyingthat…
8)Itis,therefore,obvious/evidentthatthetackof…,requireimmediateattention.
9)Asfaras…beconcerned,Iagreewiththeopinionthat
10)Inconclusion…
11)Inmyopinion,Iaminfavorof…
12)Personally,Ipreferto…
13)Inshort,…shouldlearnto;onlyinthiswaycanthemostdifficultproblembesolvedproperly.
14)AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththeopinionthat…
2010.12CET4作文结尾
Noeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemofindependencebutthegeneralawarenessofthenecessity/importanceofindependencemightbethefirststepontherightway.
作文总结段落活用词汇
1)consequently=therefore:
Consequently,wecandrawaconclusionthat…
2)view/opinion:
Inmyview,…
3)situation:
Facedwithsuchagrimsituationof...,
4)measure:
Thesubstantialmeasuresmustbetakento…
5)awareness:
toawarepeople’sawarenessof…
6)cope:
Tocopewiththiscomplicatedproblems,…
7)only:
Onlyinthiswaycanwe…
写作绝招二:
(写作的七项基本原则)
一、”一二三“原则
1)first,second,third,last(不推荐,原因:
2)firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally(俗)
3)thefirst…,thelast(俗)
4)inthefirstplace…second…third…lastly(俗)
5)tobeginwith,next,inaddition,finally
6)tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally
7)firstandforemost,besides\more,lastbutnot
8)mostimportantofall,moreover,finally
9)ontheonehand,ontheotherhand(适用于两点的情况)
10)foronething,another
2010.12CET4中间段
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该……
atpresent;atthemoment;now现在
thepresentsituation;theexistingsituation;thecurrentsituation目前形势
uptillthepresentmoment;uptillnow;sofar;todate到目前为止
asmattersstand;asthingsareatthemoment就目前情况看
Firstandforemost,duetoplentyofparentskeepingeverythingintheirownhands,thereareincreasinglysevereshortageofindependenceamongtheyouth.Asaresult,thekidscannotdoanythingbutdependontheirparents.
Furthermore,withoutindependence,wecannotsurviveinthiscompetitivesociety,whichisfullofchallengesandopportunities.Lastbutnotleast,toimprovethewayofchildindependence,itisofgreatusefortheparentstogivetheyounggenerationlibertytoovercomedifficultiesbythemselves.
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