高二英语读后续写训练.docx
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高二英语读后续写训练
高二英语读后续写训练
读后续写训练
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内容
PartA
读后续写模考经典原文
PartB
读后续写思路引导
PartC
写作优秀句式翻译
PartD
篇章写作润色
PartE
课后练笔巩固提升
PartA读后续写模考经典原文
Mybestfriend'smotherwasasocialworkerinDetroit,Michigan.Becauseofthat,myfriendVictoriaandIwereintroducedearlytotheworldofvolunteering.
Wedidplentyofcharity(慈善)work.Wealwayshadagoodtime,andcontinuedtovolunteerwheneverwehadtime,oftenevenwhenwedidn't.Itbecamesecondnature.Hairstylescameandwent,butVictoriaandIfoundplacestodonateourtimebecausethat'showwewereraised.
Oneparticularmorningwesignedupfor"PainttheTown",anorganizationinDetroittohelplowincomehomeownerscleantheirhouses.Wewereassigned(分配)adilapidated(破烂的)houseinoneoftheworstcommunitiesofthecity.Iwasafraidaswegotneartothefrontdoor,notknowingwhowewouldfindontheotherside.Weknockedthreetimesquicklyandsteppedback,waitingtobeletin.
Whenthedooropened,mymouthdid,too.Standingtherewasalittleoldladywithwisps(一束)ofwhitehairandapurpleapron(围裙)tiedaroundherwaist.
"Hello"shesaid,"I'mAmelia.PleasecomeinandIwillshowyouwheretostart."Hersmileshonebrightly.“Iamjustbakingsomecookiesforyougirlstoeat.”
Assheledustothepartsofherhousethatneededpainting,myheartsoftened.Herewasoneofthescariestlookinghousesinthecity,butbehinditsdoorswasasweetoldladywithacaneandabigsmile.
Herewewerecomingtohelpher,andinsteadshewasdoingsomethingforus—bakinghomemadecookiesandservingustea!
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
TherewasnoagebarrierthatdayasweworkedonAmelia'shouse.
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“Nonsense!
”shecriticized(批评).
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PartB读后续写思路引导
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了我和我的朋友维多利亚在她的母亲的影响下接触了志愿服务的世界。
我们做了大量的慈善工作。
我们报名参加了“粉刷城镇”,这是底特律一个帮助低收入房主清洁房屋的组织。
我们被分配一个在城市的最糟糕的一个社区。
但主人却是一个和蔼的老太太,我们在帮她的时候,她也在为我们做些事情,自制了曲奇饼,并端茶给我们喝。
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“那天我们为阿米莉亚的房子工作,没有年龄障碍。
”可知,第一段可描写作者和她的朋友和老奶奶相处的很好,交流了很多话题。
②由第二段首句内容“胡说!
”她批评道。
可知,第二段可描写老奶奶的见解和看法,以及对作者的影响。
2.续写线索:
帮刷墙——款待——交流——可怜——被嘲笑——见解
3.词汇激活
行为类
①一起走路:
getnear/accompanyhim/keephercompany
②.回家:
gobackhome/returnhome
③.拒绝:
shakehishead/decline/refusepolitely/laughat
情绪类
①.感谢:
showinghisappreciation/showhisgratitude/begrateful
②.积极:
positiveattitude/actpositively/keepitup
PartC写作优秀句式翻译
1.那天我们在阿米莉亚家工作时,没有年龄障碍。
2.阿米莉亚呆在附近,在我们画画时和我们交谈,告诉我们她的祖国爱尔兰,以及她是如何来到底特律的。
3.我为她住在附近这么可怜的地方感到很难过。
4.当我这样告诉她的时候,她嘲笑我。
5.胡话!
她批评道(批评)。
6.“这是我的房子,即使它在我周围倒塌了。
7.我感到很高兴你们这些女孩来帮我解决这个问题。
8.我在这里很高兴。
我看到了社区的变化,看到了人们来来又去,但我总是留下来。
9.我们可能在外部都有所不同,但在内部上,我们都在追求同一件事——社区。
10.没有什么比帮助别人更让你高兴的了。
11.当我在城里的不同地方做志愿者时,她对我说的话重回我脑海了。
参考答案:
1)TherewasnoagebarrierthatdayasweworkedonAmelia'shouse.
2)Ameliastayedcloseby,talkingtousaswepainted,tellingusabouthernativeIrelandandhowshecametoDetroit.
3)Ifeltsosadforherlivinginsuchapoorpartoftheneighborhoodwithnoonetokeephercompany.
4)WhenItoldherso,shelaughedatme.
5)“Nonsense!
”shecriticized(批评).
6)“Thisismyhouseevenifitisfallingdownaroundme.
7)Ifeelblessedthatyougirlscametohelpfixitup.
8)I'mhappyhere.I'vewatchedtheneighborhoodchange,andseenpeoplecomeandgo,butIalwaysstay.
9)Wemayallbedifferentontheoutside,butontheinside,wearealljustafterthesamething—community.
10)Keepitup.Nothingwillmakeyouhappierthanhelpingotherpeople.”
11)WhatshesaidtomereplayeditselfasIvolunteeredindifferentpartsofthetown.
PartD篇章写作润色
TherewasnoagebarrierthatdayasweworkedonAmelia'shouse.Ameliastayedcloseby,talkingtousaswepainted,tellingusabouthernativeIrelandandhowshecametoDetroit.Ifeltsosadforherlivinginsuchapoorpartoftheneighborhoodwithnoonetokeephercompany.WhenItoldherso,shelaughedatme.
“Nonsense!
”shecriticized(批评).“Thisismyhouseevenifitisfallingdownaroundme.Ifeelblessedthatyougirlscametohelpfixitup.I'mhappyhere.I'vewatchedtheneighborhoodchange,andseenpeoplecomeandgo,butIalwaysstay.Wemayallbedifferentontheoutside,butontheinside,wearealljustafterthesamething—community.Keepitup.Nothingwillmakeyouhappierthanhelpingotherpeople.”WhatshesaidtomereplayeditselfasIvolunteeredindifferentpartsofthetown.
PartE课后练笔巩固提升.
Severalyearsago,IwaslivinginNewYorkandworkingforanairline,soInevergotbackhomeforChristmas.MyChristmaswashappytoowithsomeothercolleaguesaround.ButinmyheartIwassadbecauseIcouldn’tstaywithmyfamily.SometimesmycolleagueswouldsayourChristmaswasfilledwithtears.ButthisChristmaswasdifferent.Iwaslucky.Ihadthewholedayoff,whichmeantIcouldstaywithmyfamilyonChristmasEve.
WhenChristmasmorningcame,Iawoketoasmallhandrubbingmyface.“Dad,MerryChristmas!
”wasallmyyoungersonhadtimetosay.Heseemedtoberacingagainsttime.Iknewhewashuntingforgiftswithhisbrothereagerly.Igotdownstairsjusttoseethetwolittleboys’facesastheylookedatthepocketrocketsSantaClaushadleftthem.IrealizedthattherealChristmaswasforthechildrenwhohaddeepbeliefintheamazingpowerofSantaClaus.Atfirst,theirfingerswentalmostshylyovertheirtoys.Whentheirinspection(检查)hadbeencompleted,thetwoboysensuredthatthegiftswerereallydeliveredbySantaClausandtheydraggedeverythingintothecenterofthelivingroom.
Delightfloodedtheroom.Astheirmotherbegangivingoutgifts,Ismiledtomyself,wonderinghowmyunexpectedgiftsthisyearwouldbereceived.WithsomanyChristmasspentoutside,IhadpreparedsomanygiftsformychildrenandtogetherwithmywifeIhidtheminseveralsecretplaces.Butthechildrenwereexcellentdetectivesandtheyfoundallofthem.TheywerehappilyopeningpackagesconstantlythankingconsiderateSantaClausforhiskindnessandabilitytoknowtheirdesires.ButIhadnotreceivedasingleone.IknewtheyhadforgottenmyexistencewithmyabsencefromtheirChristmastheseyears.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
Paragraph1:
Ihadtoadmitthatmydisappointmentwasgrowingsteadily.
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Suddenlymywifewalkeduptome.
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参考答案:
Paragraphl:
Ihadtoadmitthatmydisappointmentwasgrowingsteadily.IwaswonderingwhetherIcouldgetagiftwhenmyyoungersonrantome,whowasreallykindenoughtosavemyface.HeaskedmetoadmirehisgiftwhichhedeeplybelievedwascarefullychosenbySantaClaus.Hesaidhappilythathewouldsharesomeofthegiftsofhisandallowmetochooseonefromthem.Ithankedhimfromthebottomofmyheart,stillfeelingdisappointed.
Paragraph2:
Suddenlymywifewalkeduptome.ItseemedthatshehadguessedhowIfelt.SheaskedmetolookattheChristmastreewhichwasdecoratedwithsomanyboxes.Ithinkshewasshowingoffhereffortsonthedecorationbutshetookoffasmallboxandpassedittomesmilingandsayingitwasforme.IopeneditandsawaletterwhichreadWewillneverforgetyou.MerryChristmas!
Undertheletterwasawatchwhichwasclickingwithdelight.Iwasmovedtotears.
读后续写
(二)
内容
PartA
读后续写模考经典原文
PartB
读后续写思路引导
PartC
写作优秀句式翻译
PartD
篇章写作润色
PartE
课后练笔巩固提升
PartA读后续写模考经典原文
Mostyoungkidsareveryself-centeredmostofthetime.It’sliketheirbrainmetersarestuckon“selfish.”Thiscertainlydescribedme,untilImetmydeargrandmother.
MyfatherhadbeenborninJapan,andhehadmanyold,oldphotographsofthepalatial(宫殿般的)estatethathadbelongedtohisfamilythroughmanygenerations.Hetoldmestoriesofgorgeousroomsfullofgoldenfurnitureandsilkwallpapers.Healsodescribedmag
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