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六级作文模板
主体段落扩展:
例据
Ø Forexample,…and…even…,also,…
Ø Forinstance
Ø Takesthforexample
Ø ,suchas/including+N/Ving
Ø Takingalookaround,wecanfindexamplestoonumeroustolist:
例:
出生之后,什么在人的个性和发展中发挥重要作用?
Tobeginwith,educationafterbirthplaysasignificantroleinone’sdevelopment.
扩展:
Forexample,ahigh-schoollevelpersoncommonlymaynotsucceedtotheextentofapersonwhohasreceivedauniversityeducation.Thisisnotonlybecauseofthegreaterbreadthoftheknowledgeacquired,butalsoduetoamorecriticalandfocusedwayofthinkingthatisimpartedandrefinedduringone’ssenioreducation.
n Examples:
Awolfchild,toofferanotherinstance,duetoadeficiencyofeducationbycontrastwithhumanbeings,couldhardlyliveinoursocietyorself-develop.
n Examples:
⏹ Thehistoryisfullofexamplesofmenandwomenwhoachievedgreatnessdespitefacinghurdlessosteepthateasilycouldhavecrashedtheirspiritandleftthemlyinginthedust.
n AbrahamLincolnovercomesadifficultchild-hood,depression,thedeathoftwosons,andconstantridiculeduringtheCivilWartobecomegreatestpresidentever.
n HelenKellermadeanimpactontheworlddespitebeingdeaf,dumb,andblindfromanearlyage.
n FranklinRoosevelthadpolio.
n …
n Thereareendlessexamples.
∙Edison:
studyfromfailure
∙Thewolfiscoming:
honesty
∙Albert Einstein:
ItisnotthatIamsosmart,itisjustthat I stay with problems longer.
∙WilliamBlake:
Toseeaworldinagrainofsand
Andaheaveninawildflower,
Holdinfinityinthepalmofyourhand,
Andeternityinanhour
n 记叙事件
n 1,必须要有深刻的中心内涵
户外运动:
登山——teamwork,conquered
n 2,必须要有恰当的副词使用:
unfortunately,leisurely,suddenly,…
n 3,必须要有六大要素:
5W1H
通常使用一般过去时,若插叙,会使用过去完成时;与中心主体相关则详写,无关则略写。
n 时间
v Therewasatimewhen…/thereisatimewhen..
v Therewasatimewhenweknewnothingabouttheworld.
v Mystery
v TherearetimeswhenIcantakeitforgrantedthateverythingwillcometotheend.
v Thepasthasturnedintoash.
v Neverhasthepastturnedintoash.
n 记叙中的点睛:
v Giveamanfish,heeatsforaday.Teachhimtofish,hewillnevergohungry.
v Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutacompass.--JohnRuskin
v Trynottobecomeamanofsuccessbutrathertrytobecomeamanofvalue.--A.Einstein
v Wemustacceptfinitedisappointment,butwemustneverloseinfinitehope.--MartinLutherKing
v Throughallthechangeslifeandlovehavebroughtus,onethingremainsthesame-youmeantheworldtome.
v The fox changes his skin but not his habits.
v If people would dare to speak to one another unreservedly, there would be a good deal less sorrow in the world ahundred years hence.
v Thepeoplewhogetoninthisworldarethepeoplewhogetupandlookforcircumstancestheywant,andiftheycannotfindthem,theymakethem.---GeorgeBernardShaw
v It is easy to perform a good action, but not easy to acquire a settled habit of performing such actions. --Aristotle
v Theworldisabookandthosewhodonottravelreadonlyapage.—St.Augustine
v ItistobooksthatIoweeverythingthatisgoodinme.--Gorki
WilliamShakespeare:
v Virtueisbold,andgoodnessneverfearful.
v Donot,foronerepulse,forgothepurposethatyouresolvedtoeffort.
v Thetimeoflifeisshort;tospendthatshortnessbasely,itwouldbetoolong.
v Takehonorfrommeandmylifeisundone.
v Doubtthouthestarsarefire,
Doubtthesundothmove,
Doubttruthtobealiar,
Butneverdoubtthylove.
……
主体段落扩展:
数据
n Motorizedflightisthegreatestinventioninthemodernworld.Nootherinventionhashadamoresignificantimpactonourlives.
n Inasense,theadventofmotorizedflighthasbroughtdramaticchangestopublicaswellascargotransportation.
n Foronething,itisbyfarthefastestmeansoftransportation.Whatusedtobeagoodten-hourridebycarcannowbeeasilycoveredinonehourandahalfbyair.Foranother,itissaferasitisfast.Thenumberofdeathfromairplanecrashismuchlessthanthatofanyothermeansofmasstransportation.
n Piratedproducts
n Takesoftwareforexample,scientificresearchshows/arecentsurveytells/thestatisticsreveals/indicatesthatapproximately70%softwareonpersonalcomputersarepiratedones.
n Data…
Ø 全国第五次人口普查资料显示,目前全国男女出生性别比为116.9:
100。
到2020年,中国处于婚龄的男性人数将比女性多出3000万到4000万,这意味着平均5个男性中将有一个找不到配偶。
Ø 网上购物用户在网民中的渗透率达到了42.5%。
Ø 调查数据显示,有57.5%的公众从未访问过政府网站,我国政府网站的普及率和影响度尚待提高。
Ø 调查结果显示,被访者对节能环保产品购买意愿很强烈,大部分的被访者表示在同等条件下,会优先购买节能环保产品,不会购买的只有0.7%。
Ø 在是否喜欢看电影的调查中,只有少数人的选择是一点也不喜欢电影,占所有人的0.75%,剩下99.25%的人对电影还是或多或少都喜欢的。
其中喜欢和非常喜欢的人占了93%。
主体段落扩展:
理据\
Sample:
Studentswhoarenoisyanddisobedientshouldbegrouptogetherandtaughtseparately.
Onesolutionistosegregatethesestudentsina“sinbin”wheretheyaretaughtontheirown.
However,althoughthismayseemalogicalsolution,takingthiseasywayoutmaycauseasmanyproblemsasitsolves.First,thesegregatedstudentswillinpracticereceivefewereducationalopportunitiesthanpeerswheninfacttheyneedmore.Second,theexperienceofbeingexcludedwithinthesocietyofschoolmayembitterthemagainstsocietyingeneralandtheymaygoontoacareerofcrimeandanti-societybehavior.
Sample:
Schoolsaretooacademicinorientationanditwouldbemoreusefulforchildrentolearnaboutpracticalmatters.
n Myfirstreasonisthatitisthedutyofparents,notteachers,topracticetheirchildrentodealwiththepracticalaffairsoflife.
⏹ Thehome,nottheclassroom,istheidealplacetolearnabouthomemanagementandinterpersonalskills.Asforworkabilitiesandattitudes,theyarethebestlearned“onthejob”andunderthesupervisionofanexperiencedolderworker.
¡ Mysecondreasonisthatacademicsubjectshavewithstoodthetestofthetime.
■ Theyrepresenttheaccumulatewisdomofourancestorsdownthroughtheages,and,farfrombeingimpractical,theyequipuswiththeknowledgeandconfidencetomakesoundjudgementsaboutanyproblemswhichmaycropup.Inaddition,academicsubjectsaregoodfortrainingusinmentaldiscipline,whilepracticalsubjectsareweakinthisregard.
n Mythirdreasonisbasedonthesaying“Mandoesnotlivebybreadalone”.
⏹ Schooldaysdevotedsolelytoinstructionindown-to-earthpracticalmatterswouldbedullindeed!
Lessonsinthebestliteratureofthepastenrichourlivesandmakeusfeelthatwearepartofthegreatfamilyofmankind.
n Reason?
For:
Ø Itmouldsstrongandrealcharacter.
Ø Ithelpstoreinforcetheauthorityofteachersandparents.
Ø Permissivenessresultsinundisciplinedchildren.
Ø Parentallaxityleadstothespreadofjuveniledelinquency.
n Corporalpunishment
Against:
Ø Itseriouslyviolatesthelegalrightsandinterestsforchildren.
Ø Itendangerschildren’sphysicalandmentaldevelopment.
Ø Itisakindofbrutalityandcrueltywhichmayleadtoinjuryorevendeathofthestudent.
Ø Researchesrevealthatstudentswhosufferfromcorporalpunishmenttendtoresorttoviolenceintheirfuturelife.
Ø Themissionofeducationcanbefulfilledinothermorecivilizedways.
n Schoolorparents'responsibility
Theschool:
Ø Asaninstitutionofeducation,theschoolhasthesoleresponsibilitytoeducatetheyoungergeneration.
Ø Mostofthechildren’swakingtimeisspentinschools,andtheirpurposeinattendingschoolistoreceiveaneducation.
Ø Theparentsofthechildrenpayfortheeducationoftheirchildren,sotheyshouldreceivecorrespondentservices.
Ø Therearewell-equippedfacilitiesandwell-trainedteachersinschools.
n Schoolorparents'responsibility
Theparents:
Ø Theparentsknowtheirchildrenbetterthantheschool,andtheyknowwhattoteachandinwhatwayitcanbeaccepted.
Ø Inschool,eachchildgetsinadequateindividualattention,andsometimeshisorherparticularneedsarepassedover.
Ø Theparentsfunctionasthefirstteachersoftheirchildrensothattheyshouldberesponsiblefortheeducationofthechildren.
n TheprosandconsoftheInternet
Advantages:
Ø Easyandquickaccesstothelatestworldwideinformation.
Ø Aconvenientandcheapsourceofentertainmentandinformation.
Ø Worldwidepersonalcommunicationisbothmoreconvenientandswifter/cheaper.
Ø TheInternetmakestheworldsmaller.YoucanmakefriendswithanybodythroughtheInternet.
Ø Playsaroleofeducationandhasbecomepowerfulacademicresources.
n TheprosandconsoftheInternet
Disadvantages:
Ø Lacksocialinteraction,fosterself-centerednessandinflexibility,unabletomakeacleardistinctionbetweenfantasyandreality.
Ø Over-indulgenceintheInternetwilldoharmtoone‘shealth:
myopia/near-sightedness.Leadasedentarylife.“OTAKU”
Ø Hackers'attacksmayunderminethenationalsecurity
Ø easyaccesstosubversiveorpornographicitems
Ø exposuretoexcessivesexandviolence;ourmoralitywilldefinitelyreceiveaheavyblow.
Ø Makecopyrightlawshardertoenforce,soitishardertokeepnewtechnologysecrets.
现象阐释类1:
3:
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首段:
1
第一句:
引出话题——赞扬/中立/批评的口吻
Nowadays/inthisdayandage/,_____hasproduceed/exerted+negative/adverse/baneful+effects/impacts/influenceson____.
Thereisnodenyingthateveryoneinthisworldwantstoembracehappiness.
Nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthat___hasbecomeagraveproblemwithwhichweareconfronted.
第二句:
切入考题
However,howtoachievehappiness/howdoesitcomeabout/whoshouldberesponsiblefor…(考题)hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople.
第三句:
亮明观点——承上启下
Frommyperspective,Iwouldliketogivethefollowingpossiblereasons.
具体问题:
femalesmokers
Nobodycouldhavefailedto
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