翻译硕士作文评分标准.docx

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翻译硕士作文评分标准

翻译硕士作文评分标准

大家复习到今天，作文也写了不少，那么我针对历年的考试真题来谈下翻译硕士大小作文评分标准吧。

大作文

第五档范文19分

Asillustratedinthecartoon,eachpersonsitsintheirownworkroom.Infrontofthemisacomputer.Everyonelooksatthescreencarefully,andcommunicatewiththeircolleaguesthroughthenetinsteadoftalkingfacetoface.Theirworkplacesareplacedlikeanet.Andbelowthecartoon,thereisatopicwhichsays:

thenearandfaramongtheInternet.

Fromthecartoon,wecanconcludethatthecartoonistwantstoconveysuchamessage:

withthepopularityofcomputers,peoplefromallovertheworldbecomenearerbyusingtheinternettocommunicatewitheachother.Meanwhile,peoplealsobecomefarawayfromtheirfriends.Allofusacceptthefactthatthedevelopmentoftheinternetbringslotsofconveniencestoourdailylife,forinstance,wecanbuyabookonthenetinsteadofgoingtoabookstore.Besides,wecancommunicatewithourfriendsonthenetwithoutgoingoutofhome.Butwecan'tignoretheothersideofthese:

thetimewespendwithfriendsorfamilybecomesless.Andwehardlyseethemonceinaweek.Itwillmakeusfeellonelyifwecontinuetousethetoolonthenettotalkwithfriendsinsteadoftalkingwiththemonthephoneorgoingoutwiththem.

Tomybestunderstanding,weshouldusethenettocommunicatewitheachotherinaproperway.Itisjustatoolwhenwereallyneedittoserveus.Ifwewanttokeepourfriendshipmoreeffectively,weshouldspendmoretimewiththeminourreallife.Onlyinthiswaycanwenotonlymakefulluseofthecommunicationtoolonthenetbutalsomakeourfriendshipstronger.

评语：

该文很好地完成了试题规定的任务，内容完整，既清楚描述了漫画内容又指出了其隐含的意思。

语言流畅，措辞准确，句型结构有变化，有效使用了连接手段，内容连贯，层次分明，文章易于理解，仅有个别语言错误，字数符合要求。

第四档范文15分

Asisvividlydepictedinthedrawingabove,wecanseeclearlythatsomepeopleareverynearbythecomputerwhilesomepeoplearemuchlongwitheachotherinthenetworld.

Whatisconveyedinthepictureismostthought-provokingandworthdiscussingamongpeople,especiallytheyoungpeople.Itisamirror,reflectingtherelationshipsbetweenthepeoplearealteringbytheInternet.People'sopinionsdiffergreatlyonthismatter.SomepeoplebelievethattheInternetisveryconvenientforpeoplewhoarelivinginalongerdistancetokeepconnectionwitheachother.OthersarguethattheInternetmakethepeoplelivinginnearareasmeetverylittle.Stillothersholdthatpeople'sfacingtofacetocommunicateisreducingtoalowlevel.

Itstruckmethatifnothingisdonetosolvethesocialphenomenon,itseffectwillbesoonshown,whichinevitablyaffectsthedevelopmentoftheharmonioussociety.Soweshouldregardthetrendrightly.Wealsoshouldtakeitintoouraccountsstrictly.WeshouldusetheNetmorereasonably.Onnoaccountshouldwemakethepeoplelongerbythecomputer.Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveagoodgenerationforeseen.Andamoreharmonioussocietycanbebuiltup.

评语：

文章较好地完成了试题规定的任务，内容比较完整，既描述了漫画又揭示了隐含的意思，使用了比较丰富的句型结构和词语，使用了一定的连接手段，语言基本通顺，文章结构完整，层次清晰，易于理解，但是有一定数量的语言错误。

第三档范文11分

Asthepicturevividlydepictthatinternetlikeanetconnectdifferentpeopleintheworld.Youcancommunicatewithyourfriends.Nomatterwheretheylivein,thedistancenolongeranobstacleinourcommunication.

Thepicturereflectathought-provokingsocialphenomenonthatpeopleinamountingnumbersuseinternetshopping,work,studyandchattingwithfriendsinordertomeeteachotherfaceandface.Therearesomewhatreasonable,butyouweighinginmind,youcanfindthatdistancebetweenourspiritlongerthanbefore.OntheInternetwecannotknoweachotherverywell,becausesomepeopledon'tusetheirrealname,eventellliesoninternet.Ontheconterary,ifwemeeteachotherfaceandface,it'sbetterforcommunication.

Internetmaketheobstacleofdistancevanished,benefitusalot,wecanchatingwithourfriendswholiveinacitythatfarfromus.However,weshouldtakethatseriousinternetmakethedistanceofourspiritlongerthanbefore,internetisadouble-edgesword.

评语：

该文包含多数内容要点;语法结构与词汇基本能够满足任务要求;有一些严重语法与用词错误，但不影响理解;内容较连贯，层次较清晰。

但是第三部分主要是对第二部分的总结，评论简单。

第二档范文7分

Ascanbeseenfromthepicture,manypeoplearesittinginthefrontofacomputers,whoarebasingintypingonthekeyboard,buttheydon'timmediatecommunicatewitheachotherthoughtheylivenear.Itlookslikeabitpot,everyonehasitsspace,andthecomputerisnecessaryforthem.

Itgoeswithoutsayingthatthispictureaimsatreavlingacommonphenomenoninourdailylife,thatisinternetbringsconviencestous,alsobringsthedistanceforeachother.Nowadays,wemustbelievethatourdevelopmentcannotleavetheusingofinternet.Wedoanythingsthroughthecomputerinsteadofsaying"hello"toourfamiliesorcolleaguesfacetoface.

Inmyopinion,wemustrealizetheimportanceoftheinternetandalsopaymoreattentionstocommunicatewitheachotherfacetoface.Donotmakethecomputermakeadistantbetweenus.

评语：

该文遗漏题目要点，评论不够恰当，语言错误多，有些句子内容表达不清晰，字数不够。

第一档范文3分

Largelythroughtheinfluenceofmanypeoplefromdifferentpointsoftheworld.Theold,theyoungandthestudent,theyusethecomputerstoconstantwithanotherbody.

Somepeopleusecomputertolearenewknowledge,suchasthestudents.Somepeopleusethecomputertohelpthemtocompletetheirwork.Suchasthetankworkers.Whilesomepeopleusethecomputertoplaygames.Forexample,someoldpersonliketoplaygameoncomputer.

ManypeopleoncomputerisonMondaytoFriday.Buttheplayerpeopleiseverydaymoreorless.Sotheworldislikeafamily.Sincethecomputerwithusistoenableourtoshareinacommonlifewecannothelpconsideringwhetherornotweareformingthepowersofthelife’shappy.

评语：

该文明显遗漏主要内容，不能反映需要表达的观点;语法与用词错误很多，妨碍理解，作者的语言运用能力差;字数不够。

小作文

五档，9分

Deareditor,

I'masincerereaderofyournewspaperandIlikeyourdiscussionofthesocialproblems.NowIwanttogivesomeopinionsofmyselfaboutthe"WhitePollution"

Asweknow,regulationwasmadetosolvetheprobleminJune1stof2008.Theuseofplasticbagswasrestrictedinthesupermarketandmanyothershopsfreely.Atthebeginning,itwascarriedonwell,butnowIfoundplasticbagswereusedinsomesmallshopsforfreeorwithnopay.

Iamwritingtotellyouthatweshouldsolvethisproblemsoonwiththehelpofyournewspaper.Youcouldmakesomeinvestigatorsaboutitandwritesomereportsofit,soastoappealtoallthepeople’sattentionsofoursociety.

Sincerely,

LiMing

本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务，与目标读者完全产生了预期的效果：

1.内容包含了所有的内容要点，该文第一段的内容更吻合题目的要求。

2.所使用的语法结构和词汇比较丰富。

3.语言比较自然流畅，尽管存在个别的语法（例如，时态）和用词错误。

4.有效使用了各种衔接手段，层次清晰，组织也比较严密。

5.格式与语域恰当贴切。

四档，7-8分

DearEditorWang,

IamaseniorstudentlivinginBeijing.Beingacitizeninourcapital,Icarealotaboutourenvironment.But,althoughthelawofnotusingplasticbagshadbeenenforcedsinceJune,theeffectisnotverygood.Iamafraid'WhitePollution"willstillexistforalongtime.

Ibelievetherearewaystoimprovethesituation.Ourcommunitiescouldofferbagsfree,whichwillsubstituteplasticbags.Meanwhile,someeducationonenvironmentandWhitepollutionshouldbeheldtolocalpeople.Besidestheabovetwo,muchmorecanbedone.Ihopeyouwouldconsideritcarefully.

Yourstruly

LiMing

较好地完成了试题规定的任务，基本能够对目标读者产生预期的效果：

1.包含了所有的内容要点，既简要介绍了自己的观点，又提出了具体的建议。

2.所使用的句子结构和词汇相对比较丰富，例如：

Beingacitizenin……,Icare……等。

3.语言基本正确，当然也存在着一些语法错误和用词的错误，但是并不会严重影响意义的表达。

4.采用了适当的衔接手段，例如,but,meanwhile,besides等，层次也比较清晰。

5.格式和语域比较恰当。

三档，5-6分

Towhomitmayconcern:

Asastudentofauniversity,Iwanttotakethisopportunitytoexpresssomepointsabout"WhitePollution".

Thereisnodenyingthatplasticisdestroyourenvironmentisweuseitexcessively.Sothegovernmenttakesomemeanstodealwithit.Restricttousetheplasticbagsinwholecountry.Butitdidn'tgetsuccessfulaswepredict.The"WhitePollution"isstillaroundourenvironmentinsomeregions.

Takesmeasuresisneeded.Iwanttotakesomerecommends.Firstandformost,morestrengthrestrictionisneededbypollutioneducation.Second,mediashouldspreadmoreinformationconcern.Onlyinthiswaycanwecurbthestatement.I'mlookingforwardyourreply.

Sincerelyyours

Liming

基本完成了试题规定的任务，对目标读者基本产生了预期的效果：

1.内容包含试题所要求的两个要点，没有跑题。

2.具有较多的用词与语法错误，但是读者仍然能够大致领会作者想要表达的意思。

3.采用了一些简单的衔接手段，内容还算连贯，层次也算清楚。

4.格式和语域基本合理。

二档，3-4分

Iamverysorrytotroublewithyou.Butthisisaproblemannoyingwithme.ItisWhitePollution.Withtheeconomicgrowthwidely,whitepollutionbecomemoreandmoreserious.Itisharmoniousbetweenthemenandnature.Whitepollutiondestroysomespecial.Moreandmoresimilarissuecanbereadtodayinnewspaperaswellasinmagazine.

Theproblemcanbesolvedinsomeways.First,attitudeiseverything.Wemustmakepeopleawareofthisissue.Second,wemustchangewithourself.It'sessentialthatweaddressourproblembeforelookingtootherschange.Finally,theactsofpollutionmustbepunishment.

I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply!

Yourssincerely

LiMing

未能按照要求完成试题规定的任务，不能清楚地将信息传达给读者。

1.第一段落的内容离题太远，未能很好地表达题目的第一个内容要点。

2.语法和用词错误太多，表明作者缺乏基本的英语语法知识或者使用语法知识的能力。

3.虽然也使用了一些衔接手段，但是内容上缺乏连贯性。

4.格式和语域不恰当。

例如，此信没有抬头。

一档，1-2分

Deartheeditor

I'mpleasuretowritethelettertoyou.Withthedevelopmentofthesocity,whitepollutionismoreandmorebad.Ourskyisnotblue,ourearthisnotcleanandourriverisnotfish.

Tosolvethisquestion,Ihavesomesuggestions.First,everyonedrivetheircarlessadayinaweekthanbefore.Second,whenweareshopping,weuseenvironmentplasticbags.Third,ourgovernmentdosomerules.Doyouthingmyopinion?

Lookforwardyourreply.

Yoursfaithfully,

LiMing

未完成试题规定的任务，不能把