新增改错23篇.docx
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passage1
WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we’lllivetoregretit.
passage2
Oneday,1ittleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetoseeyouagain!
DadandIwereterribleworried.’’Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.
passage3
Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.
Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.’’
Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!
passage4
Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.
Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfrom
thebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthe
morning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.
passage5
Hi,Janice,
It’sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeof
theproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.
AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We’vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It’sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime-wastingactivity!
Infact,Idon’tliketogoanymore,soI’mafraidI’lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddoIfyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim
Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.
Grace
passage6
Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen—foralltheseyear—wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butJuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!
passage7
Mydreamschoolstartsat8:
30.andendsat3:
30.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn’tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.
Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.
passage8
MyfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttimewhenIwasseven.Hewantedteachmeaboutanimals,insectsandtrees.Myunclesallcomealongwithbowsandarrowsforhunting.
Oneeveningatsunset,wesatbythefire,haveourbarbecue.Justthenabirdwasflyingoverus.Myunclesimmediatejumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird.Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget.Suddenlythearrowswasflyingdownatusfromthesky—theywerelookedlikerain!
Werantoescapebutfortunatelynoonewasinjured.
ThatdayIdidn’tlearnmuchaboutanimals,insectsortrees,butIlearntaimpressivelessonaboutgravity!
passage9
DearJeremyandAlice,
Althoughwe’vebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors,we’rehopingtosettlesomethingthatbotherstous.Inaword,yourdog—Cleo
We’vecalledseveraltimeaboutCleo’searlymorningbarking.Itisdifficulttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe’soutside.Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.Beside,Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsixhoursaday.Thismorningshestartsharkingevenbefore5o’clock.Thatistoomuchforus,consideringhowcloselythehousesare.
Weappreciateourapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigureagoodwayofsettlingthematter.
Sincerely,
JackandRose
passage10
IwastakingatraintoLondon’sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.
Beforelongatraininspectorcomestocheekourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn’tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.
Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticket-ownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.
passage11
Beijinghaslotsoffamoustouristattractions.Everyyearmanytouristcomeheretoenjoyitsbeautifulsceneryandrichculture.Butseveralyearsagovisitorsbehavebadly.Sometalkedloudlyinpublicandthrewlittereverywhere.Somepickedflowers,cuttingtheirnamesdownonthetreesandhurtanimals.Andevenbetter,somepaintedonthewallsandsmokedinthewoods.
Luckilythingshaschanged.Rubbishisalwaysputintodustbins.Peoplearefriendlyatanimals.Everybodysmokesinthewoods.Allthesechangesmakeushappily.AsstudentIthinkweshouldknowit'sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.Let’stopayattentiontoourbehaviorswhenwetravel.
passage12
WhenallEnglishtraveler,whospentafewweekinSweden,wasabouttoreturntohome,hefoundhehadonlyenoughmoneylefttogetatickettoEngland.Sinceitwasonlythree-dayvoyage,hebelievedhecangethomewithouteatinganything.Hefinalboughtaticketwiththatlittlemoneyandwenttoboardtheship.Heclosedhisearstothesoundofthelunchbellorrefusedtogototheplacewherepeoplehadhisdinnerwhendinnertimecame.Therefore,atthethirdday,hecouldn’tstandthisanylongerandwenttothedininghall,enjoyedthelastmealontheship.Hethensaid,“Waiter,bringsmethebill.”“Oh,mealsareincludedintheticket,”saidthewaiter.
passage13
DearJanet,
Itisverynicetohearfromyouforsuchalongtime.ItisarelieftoknowthatyouhavebeensettleddowninLondonandadaptedtothenewenvironment.
Asforme,Iwasstillburiedinbookseveryday.Sometimeitcanbeveryboring.Butitwillcometoendsoonbecausetheexamisjustatthecomer.Myfellowstudentallfeelexcitedaboutitandplantogoforatripafterit.Bytheway,Ihavedecidedonmymajor----engineering.Youknowthatoncedetermining,Iwilltrymybesttoachievemygoal.WhenIknowit’snoteasyformetodoit,Iwillfacethegreatchallengeinourlife.
WillyoucomebackthissummerHopetoseeyousoon!
Yours,
LiMing
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WewereassignedacompositionandIwasinnomoodforituntilthismorning.ItisSundaytoday,soIhadthegoodsleep.WhenIgetup,Ihadastrongdesiredosomething.SoIsetaboutdoingthetoughthing----writingthecomposition.Ihadanextremequickheadandagoodideauponotherrushedintomymind.BeforelongItypedabout500words.Iskimmedthroughmyworkandwasquitesatisfying.Itshouldbeanothermodelcomposition.Istretchedmyself,intendtopolishitafterarest,butsomethingunexpectedhadhappened:
thepowerfailedsuddenly.AndIforgottosavethefile!
passage15
Mostofusacceptthefactwhichourparentsareourfirstteachers.Someofourearliestmemoriesarefromfamiliesofferingguidanceandsupport.Aswegrowinbothageorintelligence,ourparentsteachusmoreaboutsociety.Therehasatimewhenweyoungpeoplebelievethattheirparentsshouldstopofferingtheiradviceandstopactingasteachers.Wemaystarttothinkthatweknowmuchabouttheworldthanourparent.Perhapswebelievetheiropinionsandideaswereoutofdate.Wearenowstandingatthetopofagreatpyramid,waittotaketurnstoleadsocietyinthiscentury.Besides,weshouldrememberourparentsrepresentthefoundationofthatgreatpyramid.Withoutstrongfoundation,nothingcanbebuilt.
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DearSir,
I’mastudentofSenior3.Iwaswritingtotellyouaboutthedis
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