开放写作立意练习.docx

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开放写作立意练习

高三开放写作指导（学案）

2009

正确立意：

不盲目模仿他人。

（2009）

Whataninterestingpicture!

AWesternyoungman,sittingatatable,isreadytoeatabowlofnoodles.HeisholdingtwoforksthesamewayasweChineseholdchopsticks.Heistryingsohardtopickupthenoodlesthatheissweatingalot.Atfirstglance,Ithinkit'sabitfunny,forweChinesetakeforgrantedthatchopsticksarethetoolsforeatingnoodles.Themaninthepictureistryingtocopyus.Obviouslyheisdoingitthehardway.Maybeusingoneforkwilldoabetterjob.Inmyopinion,wedon'tneedtocopyother'swaysofthinking.Sometimesasimplerwayofdoingthingsmaybeabetterway.

2010

正确立意：

面对困难不放弃、自信。

Onepossibleversion:

（2010）

Inthepicture,betweentwoclosely-locatedbuildingsgrowsabigtree.Unlikemosttrees,thisonebendsinthemiddle,strugglingallthewayuptogetmoresunshine.Thepictureremindsmeofthosewhosucceedinunfavorableconditions.Facedwithdifficulties,theynevergiveupbuttrytheirbesttofindawayout.Lifecanbehard.Butifwehavethecourageanddetermination,wewillfinallygetthesunshinewewantasthetreeinthepicture.

2011

正确立意：

实现目标不只一种方法。

学生作文：

Fromthevividpicture,wecanseethattheretwosidesofamountainwhicharivermovesthrough.Ontheleftsideofthemountain,anappletreestands,whileontherightsideofthetree,aman,holdinganetwithlongstick,triestogetapplesfromthetree.Obviously,heignoresalittlebridgenotfarfromhim.

Thisthought-provokingpictureconveysamessagethatweshouldstriveforgoalsinaproperway.Nowadays,peoplejustpursuetheirgoalswithoutthinkingorpaynoattentiontothecircumstance,it’sverylikelythattheirearningarenotinproportiontotheireffort,evenworse,endingupafailure.

Iadvocatethatweshouldfindefficientwaystoreachourgoals.Everyonewantstoharvestsuccesswithease,onlywhenweputaspecialemphasisonourmethods,regardingthepropermethodasahighpriority,canweuselesstimebuthaveabigsuccess.

2012

正确立意：

自信、宽容、取长补短、尊老、

生命的价值等。

Onepossibleversion:

（2012）

Ithinkthewhitepencil,lookingproudanddelighted,islaughingattheblackpencilbysaying"You'renearingtheend!

"Theblackpencil,ontheotherhand,remainscalm.Thewhitepencil'swordslethimfallintodeepthoughts.Heclearlyremembershehasbeenusedinwritinganddrawing.It'struethathe'sapproachingtheendbuthehasbeenlivingamemorablelifeandtherehasrarelybeenadullmoment.

Inreality,weshouldlearnfromtheblackpencil:

nottomindwhatotherssaysolongasweareconfidentinwhatwehavedone.

whateverwedo,weshouldn’tonlyfocusonwhatwearedoingatpresent.Ifweneglect

ourfuture,we’llendupinfailure。

Ifwepaynoattentiontotheenvironmentjustinordertoearnmoremoneynow,how

canweliveahappylifeinthedirtysurroundings?

Sotrytothinkaboutourfuturewhen

doingthings.（不能杀鸡取卵，要放眼未来）

Onepossibleversion:

（2011）

Inthepicture,therestandsatreefulloffruitononesideofthestream.Acrossthestream,amanistryingtoreachoutontheedgeofthebandforthefruitwithanetattachedtoapole.Notfarawaythereisabridgethatcanleadhimtothetreeformorefruit.

Themessageconveyedinthepictureisclear.Inpursuingadream,wemightfocusononlyonewayofmakingitcometrueforgettingthattheremaybealternatives.Asindicatedinthepicture,ifthemaniswilltolookforotherpossibility,hecanfindabetterandmorerewardingwaytoachievehisgoal.Allhehastodoistoturnaround,crossthebridgeandwalktothetree.

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InyourEnglishclass,youareaskedtodescribethefollowingpictureandexplain

toyourclassmateshowyouunderstandit.

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