英语六级写作技巧与套用句型.docx
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英语六级写作技巧与套用句型
英语六级写作套用句型
高分作文标志
1:
四级120-150字;六级150—180字;
2、是否长短句交叉;
3、用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:
Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.
2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说:
Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…
3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。
(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,
people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper,approaches代替ways,implement代替carryout,sharpenone’scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone’scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。
这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
ComputerandIBySimmy
Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.
exceedingly替换very
thrilling替换exciting
sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
google替换search
anarmyof替换alotof
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;
Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular
Coincidentwith…非常地道的词汇,表达“与…一致”的意思,替换With…
Advancement替换development
Pourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替换enterinto
Current(currently)替换now
Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeople
Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的
Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.
Forastart替换Tobeginwith
Wecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法
ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally替换Inaddition/Besides
Deliver替换send
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,***,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型,还有however作为插入语,functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmto
Emerging代替appearing(fading代替disappearing)
Netcitizen网民,属于精彩用词
Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.
Nogardenhasnoweeds替换Everycoinhastwosides
Computersdoplay,do强调
Positive替换important/good等
Asliceof替换apartof
Unfavorable替换bad
Impacts替换effects/influences
Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入语
Fruits(而且fruits用的非常形象,merits/virtues)替换advantage(defects替换disadvantage)
Facet替换aspect
各位同学,上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点,作文怎么会不得高分呢!
以下是30个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下。
1.individuals,characters,folks代替(people,persons)
2:
positive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising
(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding代替good
3:
dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse(有害的)代替bad
如果bad做表语,可以有belessimpressive代替
eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.
4.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,many,ifnotmost)代替many.
注:
用many,ifnotmost一定要小心,many后一定要有词。
Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,代替most.
5:
asliceof,quiteafew,several代替some
6:
harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,
holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,
itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替think
(因为是书面语,所以要加that)
7:
affair,business,matter代替thing
8:
shared代common
9.reaphugefruits代替getmuchbenefit)
10:
formypart,frommyownperspective代替inmyopinion
11:
Increasing(ly),growing代替moreandmore(注意没有growingly这种形式。
所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.
Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.
Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.
12.littleifanything,或littleornothing代替hardly
13..benefitialrewarding代替helpfulbebeneficialof
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer
15.exceedingly,extremely代替very
16.hardlyunnecessary,hardlyinevitable...代替necessary,
inevitable
17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb代替sbtakeinterestin
18.captureone'sattention代替attractone'sattention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.beindicativeof,besuggesteiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear
21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger代替cause.
22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth代替..reasonsforsth
23.desire代替want.
24.pourattentioninto代替payattentionto
25.bearinmindthat代替remember
26.enjoy,possess代替have(注意process是过程的意思)
27.interaction代替communication
28.frownonsth代替beagainst,disagreewithsth
29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample代替forexample
30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,代替nearlyimpossible
用于文章主题句
1.不用说¸…
Itgoeswithoutsayingthat子句
=(Itis)needlesstosay(that)子句
=Itisobviousthat子句
=Obviously,S.+V.
例︰不用说早睡早起是值得的。
Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.
2.…是不可能的;无法…
ThereisnoVing
=ThereisnowayofVing.
=ThereisnopossibilityofVing.
=ItisimpossibletoV.
=ItisoutofthequestiontoV.
=NoonecanV.
=WecannotV.
例︰不可否认的¸成功的事业关键在于健康的身心。
Thereisnodenyingthatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind.
3.我深信…
Iamgreatlyconvinced(that)子句
=Iamgreatlyassured(that)子句
例︰我深信预防是于治疗。
Iamgreatlyconvincedthatpreventionisbetterthancure.
4.在各种…之中¸…
Amongvariouskindsof…,…
=Ofallthe…,…
例︰在各种运动中¸我尤其喜欢慢跑。
Amongvariouskindsofsports,Ilikejogginginparticular.
5.…是很容易证明的。
Itcanbeeasilyproved(that)子句
例︰时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。
Itcanbeeasilyprovedthatnothingismorepreciousthantime.
6.…无论如何强调都不为过
…cannotbeoveremphasized
例︰交通安全的重要性无论如何强调都不为过。
Theimportanceoftrafficsafetycannotbeoveremphasized.
7.就我的看法¸…;我认为…
Inmyopinion,…
=Tomymind,….
=AsfarasIamconcerned,…
=Iamoftheopinionthat子句
例︰就我的看法¸打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。
Inmyopinion,playingvideogamesnotonlytakesmuchtimebutisalsoharmfultohealth.
8.(A)每个人都知道…
Everyoneknows(that)子句
(B)就我所知¸…
Asfarasmyknowledgeisconcerned,…
例︰就我所知¸下列方法对我帮助很大。
Asfarasmyknowledgeisconcerned,thefollowingwaysareofgreathelptome.
9.毫无疑问地¸…
Thereisnodoubt(that)子句
例︰毫无疑问地¸近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的问题。
Thereisnodoubtthatnear-sightednessisaseriousproblemamongtheyouthofourcountry.
10.根据我个人经验¸…
Accordingtomypersonalexperience,…
=Basedonmypersonalexperience,…
例︰根据我个人经验¸微笑已带给我许多好处。
Accordingtomypersonalexperience,smilehasdonemealotofgood.
11.在我认识的人当中¸也许没有一个人比…更值得我尊敬。
OfallthepeopleIknow,perhapsnondeservesmyrespectmorethan…
例︰在我认识的人当中¸也许没有一个人比我的英文老师张老师更值得我尊敬。
OfallthepeopleIknow,perhapsnondeservesmyrespectmorethanMissChang,myEnglishteacher.
12.在我的求学过程中¸我忘不了…
Inthecourseofmyschooling.Iwillneverforget…
例︰在我的求学过程中¸我忘不了学习英文所遭到的大困难。
Inthecourseofmyschooling.IwillneverforgetthegreatdifficultyIencounteredinlearningEnglish
14.(A)在这信息的年代¸…扮演重要的角色。
Intheageofinformationandcommunication,…playsanimportantrole.
(B)在今日工业社会中¸…是生命不可或缺的。
Intoday'sindustrialsociety,…isindispensabletolife.
例︰在这信息的年代¸计算机扮演非常重要的角色。
Inthisageofinformationandcommunication,thecomputerplaysanextremelyimportantrole.
15.在讨论…¸一个人不得不承认…。
Indealingwith…,onecannotbutadmit(that)子句
例︰在讨论未来的职业¸一个人不得不承认尽早决定未来的职业很重要。
Indealingwithone'sfuturecareer,onecannotbutadmitthatitisveryimportanttodecideone'sfuturecareerasearlyaspossible.
16.世上没有什么比…更令我高兴。
Nothingintheworldcandelightmesomuchas…
例︰世上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡更令我高兴。
Nothingintheworldcandelightmesomuchashavinghamburgersinfast-foodrestaurants.
17.…是必要的ItisnecessarythatS(should)V
…是重要的Itisimportant/essentialthatS(should)V
…是适当的ItisproperthatS(should)V
…是紧急的ItisurgentthatS(should)V
例︰我们当保持公共场所清洁是应当的。
Itisproperthatwe(should)keepthepublicplacesclean.
18.每当我听到…¸我就忍不住感到兴奋。
WheneverIhear…,Icannotbutfeelexcited.
每当我做…¸我就忍不住感到悲伤。
WheneverIdo…,Icannotbutfeelsad.
每当我想到…¸我就忍不住感到紧张。
WheneverIthinkof…,Icannotbutfeelnervous.
每当我遭遇…¸我就忍不住感到害怕。
WheneverImeetwith…,Icannotbutfeelfrightened.
每当我看到…我就忍不住感到惊讶。
WheneverIsee…,Icannotbutfeelsurprised.
例︰每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪¸我就忍不住感到悲伤。
WheneverIthinkofthecleanbrooknea
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