短文改错精品汇编.docx
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短文改错精品汇编
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1.Ofallmyteachers,Mr.Mooreistheonewhoimpressmemost.Heis34,sohelooksyoungforhisage.Andhe’soneofthemostpopularteacherinourschool.Mr.Moorepaysmoreattentiontohiswayofteaching,comparingwithotherteachers.Hetriesdifferentwaystomakehisclassesactivelyandlively.Inhisopinion,weshouldnotonlyknow“what”,butunderstand“why”.So,insteadgivingusanswersimmediately,heencouragesustothinkbymyselfwheneverheputsforwardquestions.Withhishelp,we’velearnedfromhowtosettleproblems.Heleadsustosuchwonderfulworldof“why”aswealladmireandrespecthim
2.IthasbeenyearssincetheChinesegetplasticbagsfromsupermarketsforfree.Chinahasbannedfreeplasticbagsatshopsandsupermarkets,butpeoplehavetopaythem.TheChineseonceusedabout300millionplasticshoppingbagsaday,whichhascausedenvironmentalpollutionbecauseplasticbagsarenoteasilytobreakdown.SotheChineseisencouragedtotaketheirownbagsforshopping.Thenwhatkindofshoppingbagisthebesttocarry?
SomestudentinChongqinghaveaextraordinaryidea.Theyuseoldclothesmakeclothbag,andthentoasktheirparentsandfriendstousetheseclothbagsinsteadplasticones.Theydosobecausetheythinkitisourdutytohelp
3.We’llneverforgetthedaywhichmyclassmatesandIpaidavisittoachemicalfactorylastweek.Itwasalargeonewithnearly2,000workers.Itlookedagardenandwecouldseecolorfulflowers,grassandtreesanywhere.Wealsovisitedsomeworkshopsandsawworkersworkedveryhard.Wetalkedwiththemandlearnalot.Weunderstoodthemfurther.Onthewaytohomewefelttiring.Soweallthoughtthatwehadaverygoodday.Wereallyhopedthattheycangetmorechancestoleavetheschoolandlearnsocialexperiences.
4.MyfriendNicktoldmestoryabouthisexperiencebackintheUS,whichwasveryinterested.Onedayhewashavingayardsaleandtheoldmanlivingnextdoorcomebytohelp.Astheoldmanlookedoverthethingsontheyardthatweretobesold,hestoppedataboxofgoldenballforChristmastrees.Ontheboxwasacardsaying:
“25centseach.”“Youwillneverselltheseforthatmuch.”hetoldaboutNick.Persuading,Nickbroughtthepriceupto10centsapiece.Withoutamoment’sdelay,myneighborpickeduptheboxbutannounced:
“I’lltakethem.”
5LastSaturday,ourschoolhadorganizedanactivitytovisitthechildrenatalocalorphanage(孤儿院).Asoneofthevolunteer,Itookpartinit.Wetookmanybooksaswellmanykindsofschoolsuppliesandtoystothechildren.Theyweredelightedtoreceivethegifts.Onthemorning,weplayedsomegameswiththemwhenweusedtoplayinourchildhood.Thenwecookedandhadalunchthere.Intheafternoon,wegavethemsomeperformances.Beforeleavingtheorphanage,wehadphotostakewiththemandgavethemourcontactdetailssothattheycouldkeepintouchwithoneanother.Eachofushadahappilytime.Wegavethechildrenourcareandhelp,butinreturn,theygaveustheirsmilesandlove.
6.Iamaseniorhighschoolstudent.Tomyopinion,theclassroomisaplaceforstudentstogainknowledges.Soquietnessisbadlyneedforustolearnintheclassroom.Butrecentlysomestudentshasbroughttheirmobilephonestotheclassroomandweoftenhearoftheringofmobilephones.Someofthemevenwastedprecioustimeinclasstypeshortmessagesonthemobilephones.Tokeeptheclassroomquietlyandmakeusfocusmoreontheirstudies,Isuggestthatmobilephonesbeusedintheclassroom.Atleast,theyshouldn’tbeusedwherewearehavingclass.(12处错误)
7.WhenIwasinhighschool,mostofmyfriendhadbicycles.IhopedIcouldalsohaveit.OnedayIsawasecond-handbicycle,thatwasonlyonehundredYuan.Iaskedmyfatherthemoney.Andhesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfofthemoney.Heshouldfindtheotherhalfmyself.SoIwentsellnewspapersaftertheschool.MyfatherwaspleasedifIshowedhimthemoneyamonthafter.Hegivesmetheotherfifty.YoucanimaginehowmuchhappyIwaswhenIrodetoschoolonmyownbicycle.(12处错误)
8.WhenIfirstlearnedtowriteinEnglish,Irunintomanydifficulties.ThemainproblemwasIalwaysthoughtinChinesebuttriedtotranslateeverythingintoChinese.Myteacheradvisedmetokeepdiaries.Ifollowedafterheradvices.Happilyitworked.SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.OnedayIwroteashortstoryandshowedittomyteacher.Shelikeditverymuchthatshereadittotheclass.Everyonesaidthestorywasthegoodone,Iwasgreatencouragedbytheirwords.
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9.Jim,
IwaspleasingtohearfromyouandIamwritingtotellyoueverythingaboutthechangesinmyschool.
Youareright.Greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinyourschool.Itisnolongerwhatitusedtobethreeyearsbefore,whentherewasonlyoneteachingbuildingandplayground.Iamhappytotellyoutwonewbuildingshavebeenbuiltandareinuse.Oneofthemisanewclassroombuilding,inthatthereareroomsformusic,artsandcomputerteaching.Theotherisalibrary,wherethereareallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazines.However,myschoolisgoodequippedwithsportsfacilitiesandmusicalinstruments.Thenumberofstudenthasalsogrownfrom1,500to2,500.What'smore,wehadplantedalotoftreesandflowersinandaroundtheschool.
Ibelievemyschoolwillbecomemorebetterandbetter,andIhopeyouwillvisitmyschoolagain.(11处错误)
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10.Christinewasjustgirlinoneofmyclasses.Ineverknewmuchaboutherexceptforthatshewasstrange.Shedidn'ttalkmany.Herhairwasblackandpurple,andsheworeblacksportsshoesandablacksweater,althoughinthesummer.Shewas,infact,ratherattractively,andsheneverseemedcarewhattherestofusthoughtabouther.Liketherestofmyclassmate,Ididn'treallywanttogetclosetoher.ItwasonlywhenwedidtheirchemistryprojecttogetherwhichIbegantounderstandwhyChristinedressesthewayshedid.
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11.Myfavoritesportisfootball.Iwasamemberofourschoolfootballteam.WepractiseforthreetimeseveryweekandoftenwatchfootballmatchonTVtogether.Playfootballnotonlymakesusgrowuptallandstrongbutalsogiveusasenseoffairlyplayandteamspirit.Wemustkeepinmindwhichweplayfortheteaminsteadofourselves.Also,thesportteachesustheimportanceofobedience.Eachplayermustobeycaptain,whoistheleaderoftheteam.Andtheymustnotbreaktherulestoooftenunlesswewanttowinthegame.
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12.SirorMadam,
I’mwrittentomakethecomplaintaboutthepoorqualityofacomputerwhatIboughtfromyourcompany.
Franklyspoken,thisbrandhadalwaysbeenmyfavorite.InOctober1st,2009,IboughtthecomputerfromoneofyourchainstorelocatedinZhongguancun.Itoperatedwellfirst,sotendayslater,therewasafaultthatbotheredme---italwaysturnedoffautomatically.Itspoorqualityruinedalmostallmypreviousimpressiontowardsyourproducts.
TheproblemissoterriblethatIstrongrequestfullamountofrefund(全额退款)ornewcomputer.
Iwouldappreciateallyourassistanceinthismatter.Ifyouwillhaveanyquestions,pleasedon’thesitatetocontactme.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
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13.Ilikemusicverymuch,popsongsparticularly.EveryeveningthenIamdoinghomeworkandatweekendswhenIamhome,Ialwaysplaysomeofmyfavoritesongsonmytaperecorder.Thefamiliarpatternsofnotesattractsmeintothecolourfullyworldofmusic.NowandthenIstoppedtofollowingthesongs.Sometimes,mymothercomesin,askingmetofixmyattentiononmyhomework.Shedoesnotlikethepopmusic.Likemostgrown-ups,sheenjoysfolksongs,sothepeacefulmusicremindsheroftheirbeautifullifewhenshewasyoung.Itisatruthwhichpeopleofdifferentageunderstandmusicdifferentlyandenjoydifferentkindsofmusic.
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14.LastSundayafternoon,IwenttothezoowithLily.Therewaslotsofpeoplesthere.Ifoundagirlcryinginthezoo.Shewaslostandshecan’tfindhermother.Wedecidedtohelpher.Itriedmybestfindthebroadcastingstationinthezoo.AtthesametimeLilyplayedwithherandlookedafterhercarefulthere.AlittlegirlstoppedcryingandplayedwithLily.Atlasthismothercame,thatmademefeelveryhappy.IthoughtIreallydidagoodthing.Soeveryonehelpswitheachother,theworldwillbecomemorebeautiful.
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15.LastSundayIsawaworststorminyears.Itcamesuddenandwentonforoverthreehours.Afterlunch,Iwentintomyroomtohavearest.Theairwashot,butallwasquiet.Thenastrongwindstartedtoblowintomyroom.Piecesofpaperonmydeskflewhighintotheairandsomeflewouttheopenwindow.AsIranouttocatchit,bigdropofrainbegantofall.WhenIcomebackintothehouse,itwasrainingmoreharderandharder.ThenIheardaloudcrashingsoundfromthebackofthehouse.WhenIranoutto
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