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六级写作新题型精讲
写作部分
(三)作文评分实例
2010年12月真题
Directions:
Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledMyViewonUniversityRanking.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.
1.目前高校排名相当盛行
2.对这种做法人们看法不一
3.我认为……
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ThepopularityofuniversityRankingisrising,whichhasdrawngreatattentionsanddebates.Manyfamouswebsites,suchasSina,havetheuniversityRanking,especiallyduringthetimeofUniversityEntranceTest.What'smore,thehighschoolsandfamilymembersalwaysemphasizetheRanking,whichbringagreatpressuretostudents.
TheviewstotheuniversityRankingarevaried.Someapproveit.Theyholdtheopinionthatwecanchoosetheuniversitywhichfitsusbest.TheRankingisvalueableinformationaboutuniversities.However,othersareintheopposite.Theirreasonsareasfollows.Firstly,wecan'tmakesurethetruthoftheRanking.Ifit'snottrue,itwillmisleadstudents.Secondly,theRankingmayencouragesomeuniversitiesdosomethingtoenhancetherank,suchasgivebenefittotheRankingmakers,whichiscalled"BuyRanking".So,inthisway,howcanauniversityfocusitsattentiononTeaching,andhowcantheyfosterstudentswell?
Lastbutnotleast,therearesomanyRankingsnow.Howweknowwhichistrue.
Inmyopinion,bothsideshavemeritsanddrawbacks.WeshouldjudgeauniversitybymorethanauniversityRanking.
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Nowadays,universityrankingisverypopularinChina.Everytimeaneweditionofuniversityrankingisreleased,itwillattractconsiderablepublicattention,andaheateddebatewillariseonwhethertherankingfairlyreflectsthestrengthofeachcollege.
Proponentsoftherankingclaimthatithaslotsofpositiveeffects.First,itisakindofstimulusforuniversitiestoimprovetheirresearchandteachingquality.Goodresearchandteachingwillleadtohigherranking,meaningthattheycanattractmoreexcellentstudentsandprofessors.Inaddition,universityrankinghelpshigh-schoolstudentstochoosewhichuniversitytoattendsincetheylackrelatedinformation.
Opponentsarguethatuniversityrankingbringsfarmorenegativethanpositiveeffects.Itisreportedthatsomeuniversitiesbribetherankingorganizationtoimprovetheirranking,insteadofenhancingtheirownstrengthinteachingandresearch.Besides,manypeoplequestionthemethodofevaluationandtheaccuracyoftheinformationtherankingisbasedon.
Frommyprospective,whileuniversityrankingmayhaveitsdefects,itdoesservegoodpurposes.Whatweneedtodoistomakeitfairerandmoretransparent.Onlyinthisway,couldthispracticeprovideincentivestouniversitiesandwintrustfromthepublic.
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Inthelatestfewyears,peoplemayfindkindsofuniversityrankingreadingnewspaper,sufferingtheinternetandevenwatchingthenewsreports.Asweallknow,onethingmaybeevaluatedquietdifferentbygroupswithdistinctopinions.Thingsgothesameinsuchaphonomenion.Supportersmaythinkthatuniversityrankingcanhelpseniorhighschoolstudentstomakeanapropreitchoiceofwhichuniversitytogo,whilesomeinstitutionsareinneedofgraduatescanranktheapplicantsbycheckingtheirschools.However,peoplewiththeoppositeviewmaysay:
"Evaluatingauniversityasksformanyelementssuchasculture,faculties,avarangelevelofstudentsandsoon.Thenwecanhardlycometoaquantresult."
Inmyopinion,viewsmentionedabovecanbecomplementstoeachother.Generalspeaking,weshouldtrytodevelopabettermethodwhichcoversasmanyaspossiblefacetsofacertainuniversity.Theresultmaybehigh-dimention,soitdoesn'thavetobeordered.Asaresult,peoplecanjudgeauniversityinpersonalizedview.Itmaybebetter.
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Asthelevelofpeople'slifeproving,peopletakemoreattentiononeducation.Nowdays,universityrankingispoupleinChina.Andtherearedifferetcompaniesproducesomanydifferetrankings.
It'snodenyingthatuniversityrankinghelppeopletochoice.Butsomepeopledonotagreeso.Becausedifferetranksoftenbelinkedwithsuchasmoney,powerandsoon.Someuniversiteshadagoodpoisioninrankingsmaybegivemoneytothecompanyproducedtherank.
Onmyopinions,universityrankingisuseful.Byuniversityranking,andbycompairdifferetrankings,wecannowhichuniversitymaybebetter.Besidestheleavlofdifferetmayer,moreimportantaboutuniversityistheculture.Agooduniversityconcludealotofgreatstudentsandteachers.There'sabetterenvirementforstudentstostudy.Universityrankingtellusgooduniversitytogo.
Apartfromablove,Ithinkthatwecouldn'tonlytakeattentiononuniversityranking.Wealsoshouldthinkaboutthemayer.Agoodmayerismoreimportantforus.Weshouldchoiceagoodmayerwhichwelike.
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Nowadayspeoplepaymoreattentiontoeducation,whichmakesuniversityrankingmoreandmorepopular.Therearemanyheateddiscussionsonwhetherthatisnecessary.
Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.Ononehand,somepeopleholdtheopinionthatuniversityrankinghasmoreadvantagesthandisadvantages.Forthemeasuresoftherankingdependonmanydifferentfactsandfigures,itcanmakeafaircommentontheuniversities,Ontheotherhand,somepeoplethinkthattherankingmaymisleadstudents.Influencedbytheuniversityranking,manystudentsmayhaveawrongviewoftheuniversitiestheyarelongingforortheyarealreadyin.
AsfarasIcansee,everythinghasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Iftherankingisusedinagoodway,itcanstimulateoureducationsystem.Theuniversitiesrankedhighcanattractmoreexcellentstudents,andtheuniversitiesrankedcomparativelylowcanpaymoreattentiontoimprovethemselves.Butifitisnotusedinagoodway,therankingmaydoharmtotheuniversitiesaswellasstudents.
“作文常见语言错误”答案
一、语法错误:
(一)句子结构错误
1.一主两谓
1)TherearemoreandmorestudentswholiketochatontheInternet./Moreandmore
studentsliketochatontheInternet.
2)Therearestillmanyproblemsthatshouldbenotedandresolved./Manyproblems
stillshouldbenotedandresolved.
2.简单句叠置
Ilikedancingverymuch,so/andIgototheballroomalmosteveryweekend./Ilikedancingverymuch.Igototheballroomalmosteveryweekend.
3.从句叠置
Asisknowntoall,computersplayanimportantroleinmanyfieldsofourlife./Itisknowntoallthatcomputersplayanimportantroleinmanyfieldsofourlife.
4.句子成分缺失
Ifweworkhard,wewillsurelybesuccessful./Workinghard,wewillsurelybesuccessful.
5.语序错误
1)Whydocollegestudentsspendmoreandmoretimeonthecomputer?
2)Ioftenwonderwheretheyhavegottheirmoney.
(二)名词单复数错误
Awisemanseeksopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem./Wisemenseekopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem.
(三)动词错误
1.谓语动词时态错误
ManypeoplethinkthattheInternetwillbemoreusefulinthefuture.
2.谓语动词单复数错误
Awisemanseeksopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem./Wisemenseekopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem.
3.谓语动词连用错误
1)Somepeoplelikeplayingonlinegamesverymuch.
2)Otherpeopledisagreewiththisview.
4.谓语动词语态错误
1)Ihavebeenexcitedforseveraldaysatthenewsthatyouwillcomehere.
2)Mostofthestudentsaresatisfiedwiththeserviceinthedininghall.
5.非谓语动词错误
1)Letmesay“hello”toyouonbehalfofeveryone.
2)Doingexerciseinthemorningisgoodforone’shealth.
3)Havingstudiedinthiscollegefor3years,Ifindthecampushaschangedalot./Ihavestudiedinthiscollegefor3years,duringwhichcampushaschangedalot.
(四)代词错误
1)Wecandoeverythingwelikeoncomputer.
2)Acollegestudentshouldbeabletodohiswashingonhisown.
3)Somepeopleareafraidthatcomputersmaycontrolmeninthefuture.
4)Otherpeoplethinkdifferently.
(五)冠词错误
1)The/Ahorseisausefulanimal./Horsesareusefulanimals.
2)TheexamwillbeheldinDecember,2004.
(六)词性错误
1)Iwishyoucanconsidermysuggestions.
2)Ifapersonwantstosucceed,hemustlearntoenduresufferingsandsetbacks.
二、用词错误
1)Studentsmustknowhowtouse/operate/workonacomputer.
2)Peoplecanlearn/beexposedtomanynewthingsonthecomputer.
3)Thepurposeofthisletteristocomplainabouttheserviceinthedininghall.
三、表达习惯错误:
1)Whatgeneratedsolargeachange?
Whyistheresolargeachange?
2)Now6000YuanisenoughtobuyaP4computer.NowyoucanbuyaP4computerat6000Yuan.
3)Aroomoftenaccommodates6-8students./6-8studentsoftenliveinoneroom.
4)Ithinktherearethreereasonsforthisgreatchange.
5)Thepricesofthefoodaretoohigh./Thefoodistooexpensive.
6)Thereasonforthisisthatsomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard./Thisisbecausesomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard.
四、标点符号以及大小写错误
1)However,everycoinhastwosides.Ithinkthesurroundingsinourcanteenarethebestamongalluniversities.
2)Themanwasracingdownthestreetbecausehewaslatefortheclass.
3)AtlastIwanttoletyouknowthatIloveouruniversityverymuch.
4)Myfavoritesportsareswimming,jogging,mountaineeringandplayingtabletennis.
5)ThebestEnglishfilminmyeyesisForrestGump/“ForrestGump”.
三、六级英语作文模拟题
(一)对立观点型
1)Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan150wordsaccordingtothefollowinginformation:
Currently,anumberofschoolsallowstudentstogradetheirteachersandevendecideiftheteacherscanteachonornot.Thishasgivenrisetoaheateddebate,withsomeapprovingofthepraticeandothersstronglyopposedtoit.Nowdiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
2)Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minut
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