高考短文改错快速突破冲刺篇二含答案.docx
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高考短文改错快速突破冲刺篇二含答案
高考短文改错快速突破--冲刺篇
(二)(含答案)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的作文。
文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:
在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:
把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:
在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处。
11.JennyisaGradeTwostudent.Shewasonceveryactiveandhappygirl,buteverythinghaschangedbeforeshestartedplayingcomputergames.Shedoesn'tplayvolleyballwithherfriendsanymuchmore.Whenshesitsintheclassroom,shehastroublespayingattentiontowhattheteacherssay.Shesleepsinclassandshespendslittletimestudy.Shebecomesacompletedifferentperson.Afterschoolsheusuallystayedatthecomputerhalluntilitisclosed.Sometimesherparentscandoeverythingtostopher.Everymorningshefeelsverytiringafteranight’s“busyworking”.Wefeelverysorrytoher.
12.Nowadaysitisveryeasilytofindastudentwhoisnearsighted.What'sworse,thenumberofnearsightedstudentsarestillincreasing.Frommypointofview,therearemanyreasonthatcancausenearsightedness.Firstofall,thewrongposturewillresultfromnearsightedness.Readinthedarkplacescanleadtonearsightednessaswellas.Moreover,toomuchreadingwithoutarestcanbeotherimportantreason.Mydearfriends,itishightimethatwepaidattentiontoprotectoureyes.Themostusefulmethodisdoeyeexercisesmoreoftenandrelaxforawhileafterreading.Watchinggreentreescouldalsodogoodtotheeyes.
13.Accordingtoasurvey,thenumberofroadaccidentshasincreasedoverthepastyear.Thisnoticeisaimedonincreasingpeople’sknowledgeoftheproblem.Belowissomeofthemajorcausesofroadaccidentsandthatdriversshoulddotopreventthem.
Somedriversareaggressive,thatisnotsafebecauseitcanresultincrashes.Whatismore,althoughthepersonwhohasbeendrinkingisyourfriend,butdonotallowhimtodrive.Lastly,speedkills.Drivingtoofastthroughcitystreetsisverydangerously.Sofar,alotofpeoplehavekilledduetotrafficaccidents.
Intheword,howIwishtherewillbenotrafficaccidentinthefuture.Theworldbuildingbyusisfullofsafetyandlove.
14.Apartfrommymother,I’vebeenveryluckytohavinghadtwoteacherswhohavebeenfundamentalinfluencesinmylife.Thefirstwasmyfirstpianoteacher.Shereallygotmeinterestinginthepianoandmadeahugeimpressioninmeataveryearlyage.Shehelpedmetolearnthebasictechniquesanddevelopunderstandingoftheinstrument.Then,whenIwas16,Istartstudyingwithmysecondinspirationalteachers.HemadememuchmoreconfidentandencouragedmetoenterforcompetitionsevenwhenIfeltcertainandunconfidentaboutdoingthis.Hehadenormousfaithinus,anditwasthis,morethananythingelse,whichinspiredmetomakemusicmycareer.
15.Mr.andMrs.Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheinternet.Whensummercame,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthevegetables!
16.Deareditor,
IamEvanfromCanada.Beingtheoldestchildinthefamilyhasitsdisadvantages.Firstofall,Ihavetoshareallmytoyswithmyyoungsisters.Ofcourse,theydon’tneedtoreturntothefavorbecauseI’mtotaluninterestedintheirthings.Besides,theyarealwayshangingaroundme.Ijustcan’tgetmoment’speace.Atmeals,Ihavetoeatwhicheverisontheplateregardlessofthetaste.Mysistersonlytryonebiteifit'snotourfavoritefood.Inaddition,whenitcomestopracticeourmusicalinstruments,Ihavetopracticemorethandoublethetime.Worstofall,Igotalargerquantityofhousework.Comparingtothem.I’mfeelingratherannoyed.Canyoupleasegivemesomeadvices?
Yourstruly,
EvanSmith
17.Oneday,whenIwasabout5or6yearsold,myparentswenttoatrip.Grandmaseemedsohappytotakecareofmewhichshemademeaspecialbreakfast.Therefore,Icomplainedaboutthefoodshecooked,Grandmaquietputdownthebowlandwentintothelivingroom.Ifollowedandsawtearinhereyes.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhaveeverseenmystronggrandmothertocry.AndIknewIwastheonewhohadcausedit.Iapologizedandaskedhertoforgiveme.ShesmiledandtoldmeIwasgoodboyevenifIdidn'tfeellikeonethen.Thatmemorywillstayinherheartforever,becauseIlearnthataskforforgivenesshelpsmetolearnandgrow.
18.Timeandtidewaitnoman.Mymotherisbecomingamiddle-agewomanquietly.Shehadbeenbusyrunningafterusalltheyears.Myfatherisverybusyeverydayoutside.Buttheheavyburdenfallsonmymother’sshoulder.Becausemyschoolisfarfrommyhome,Ihavetogotoschoolbythetrainandmymotherseesmeoffatthestationeverytime.Ioftenchooseaseatwhereisclosetothewindow,soIcanseeher.However,Ialwayscan’thelpruntearsfrommyeyes.Allthebuildingsandpeopleoutsidethewindowdisappear.IwavegentletomymotherandIlookathertilltheviewofherbackdisappears.Uptonow,evenifheisbusy,shestilldoesitasusual.Theviewofmymother’sbackwillneverchangeinmyheart.
19.Nowadays,mobilephonesarebecomemoreandmorepopularinthemiddleschoolstudents.Inmyopinion,wecanbringmobilephonestoschool.Asweknow,the21stcenturyisamodernageandfullofinformations.Amobilephoneisoneofthequickertoolsforustoexchangemessages.Themobilephoneisafashionableandusefulinvention,butweoughttomakethebestuseofit.Supposethere’ssuddenaccident,itismoreconvenientlyforustodialforhelpimmediately.There'realsosomegamesinthemobilephone.Wecanrelaxusbyplayingthemwhenwe’retiredofourstudies.Inmyopinion,it’snotwrongtofollowafterthefashion,butthemostimportantthingisthattousethemobilephoneinarightway.
20.Lastweekendourschoolholdasportsmeeting.Realizingitwasourlastschoolsportsmeeting,wedecidedtomakeitaunforgettableexperience.Wefirstattendedtheopeningceremony,forwhomourclasshadmadealotofpreparations.Forourexcitement,ourperformancewasasuccess.Myclassmatestookpartinvariousevent,suchasrunning,highjumpandlongjump.Duetothehardtrainingtheathleteshavedonebefore,theirperformancewasveryimpressively.
Myclassmatesapplaudedandcheeredfortheathletes,someraisingtheircamerastocapturetheexcitedmoments.Theresultwasannounced.Ourclasswonthesecondplaceandoureffortswerepaidoff!
Cupinhand,wetookapicturetogetherproudly.Thissportsmeetingwillbeapreciousmemoryforallofthemastimegoesby.
21.Recentlyasurveyhasbeendonetofindoutthereasonsofobesityamonghighschoolstudents.Inthesurvey,manystudentswereaskingtocompleteaquestionnaire.Thequestionnaireisaboutwhattheythinkleadtotheirbeingoverweight.Thirtypercentofthestudentsbelievethattheyaretoofatbecausetheyarelackinphysicalexercise.Anequalnumberofstudentssaythereasonisprobablythattheyaresuppliedwithtoomuchfatandrichdiet,whichmakesthemwhattheyhavenow.Twentyfivepercentofthestudentsinterviewclaimthatitisthefamilygenesthatareblame.However,thestudentswhodon'trealizethedangerousofobesityonlymakeupoffifteenpercent.
11.答案:
JennyisaGradeTwostudent.Shewasonce
veryactiveandhappygirl,buteverythinghaschanged
shestartedplayingcomputergames.Shedoesn'tplayvolleyballwithherfriendsanymuchmore.Whenshesitsintheclassroom,shehas
payingattentiontowhattheteacherssay.Shesleepsinclassandshespendslittletime
.Shebecomesa
differentperson.Afterschoolsheusually
atthecomputerhalluntilitisclosed.Sometimesherparentscando
tostopher.Everymorningshefeelsvery
afteranight’s“busyworking”.Wefeelverysorry
her.
解析:
1. girl是可数名词.根据语境,用单数,冠词置于其他修饰语之前,故在very前加a。
2.句意:
她曾经是一个活跃快乐的女孩,但是自从她开始玩电脑游戏以来一切都变了。
since“自从……以来”;before“在......之前”。
根据语境可知,应把before改为since。
3.not…anymore意为“不再 ”,是固定短语。
句意:
她不再与朋友一起打排球。
故删除more前的much。
4. havetroubledoingsth.“做某事有困难”,是常用搭配,词组中的trouble是不可数名词,意思是“困难"故把troubles改为trouble。
5.spend…(in)doingsth.“花费 做某事”,是固定搭配,故把study改为studying。
6. completely修饰形容词different作状语,作状语用副词形式。
故把complete改为completely。
7. 根据语境可知,文章主体时态是一般现在时,主语she是第三人称单数,谓语动词也用单数。
故把stayed改为stays。
8.句意:
有时候她的父母无法阻止她。
根据语境可知,父母对于她玩电脑游戏无能为力。
故把everything改为nothing。
9. -ing形容词表示被修饰语的特征,-ed形容词表示被修饰语的感受。
句意:
每天早晨她感觉很累。
此处说明主语的感受,故把tiring改为tired。
10. feelsorryforsb.“为某人感到遗憾”。
故把to改为for。
12.答案:
Nowadaysitisvery
tofindastudentwhoisnearsighted.What'sworse,thenumberofnearsightedstudents
stillincreasing.Frommypointofview,therearemany
thatcancausenearsightedness.Firstofall,thewrongposturewillresult
nearsightedness.
inthedarkplacescanleadtonearsightednessaswellas.Moreover,toomuchreadingwithoutarestcanbe
importantreason.Mydearfriends,itishightimethatwepaidattentionto
oureyes.Themostusefulmethodis
doeyeexercisesmoreoftenandrelaxforawhileafterreading.Watchinggreentrees
alsodogoodtotheeyes.
解析:
1. 第一句中使用的句型为“itis+形容词+todo”,it是形式主语,真正的主语是不定式,为避免头重脚轻,句首使用it替代真正的主语,is是谓语动词,后面接形容词表示性质状态。
故把easily改为easy。
2. 第二句中,number为句子真正的主语,所以谓语动词应为单数。
句意:
近视孩子的数量仍在逐步增加。
故把are改为is。
3. therebe句型中are为复数形式,所以后面所修饰的名词也该用复数形式,故把reason改为reasons。
4. 固定搭配resultinsth.表示“导致……”,多表示不好的结果,故把from改为in。
5. 第五句中,动名词作主语,read为动词原形,不能作句子主语,故把Read改为Re
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