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上海中考英语作文
上海中考英语作文学习资料
一.评分标准
上海中考英语作文总分为20分,其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。
以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准:
1.内容分8分。
内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚完整。
2.语言分8分。
学生需用语规范,表达准确,无或少见语法错误,词汇拼写正确,句型使用恰当。
首先是字数,少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
3.组织结构分4分,也就是我们常说的文采分。
根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。
二.注意点:
每少5个词扣0.5分,拼写错误每处扣0.5分,标点,大小写错误每2处扣0.5分3内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上,得2~3分内容和语言总分13~14分,如确有好句型或表达用语,可酌情给1~2分通篇句型,句式单一,词汇贫乏者,即使无语法错误,也不给分开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。
先划档次:
A档18~15分B档14.5~12分C档11.5~8分D档3.5~0分
然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。
三.学生常出现的问题:
1.内容空洞,没有清晰的思路,表达能力不强,总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达,所以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假,当然也就得不了高分。
2.议论过多,描写不足。
大多数情况下,我们把议论当成的作文的重点,所以常常会跑题。
应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像,不能只翻译了事。
3.总是使用同一个主语写句子,重复太多。
尽量使用不同的主语来表达,比如:
ImustlearnEnglishwell.就可以换成:
ItisimportantformetolearnEnglishwell.
4.结构散漫,想哪儿写哪儿,乱七八糟。
应该使用总分或总分总的结构。
5.都是简单句,缺少复合句。
多用状语从句,宾语从句,定语从句及一些重要的句型,也人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导
(一)初中二年级下un...初中二年级下Un...可以用用被动语态。
6.连词的使用较少,句子之间的连接很生硬。
可以加入一些:
比如:
tomysurprise(让我惊讶的是),what’smore(而且,还有)等,让上文与下文衔接更紧密。
意思也能更流畅地表达。
四.中考写作高频使用词组、句法
1.作文开头的有用句
Asweallknow,Asitisknowntoall,It’sknowntoallthat…It’scommonknowledgethat…It’scommonlyacceptedthat…Thereisnodenyingthat…Howtimeflies!
Inablinkofaneye,Timeflieslikeaspeedingarrow,Timegoesliketheflowingwater.
2、中间分层部分的有用结构:
分正反两面论述:
Ononehand,Ontheotherhand分两点:
Foronething,Foranother,分三点:
Firstly,Secondly,Lastbutnotleast
3、结尾部分
Allinall,Inaword,Inconclusion,Inbrief,Inshort,Toputeverythinginashell,概括的说,简单的说Lastbutnotleast
组织语言发表观点的Inmyopinion,Frommypointofview,Inmyeyes,AsfarasIamconcerned,Believeitornot,
表示递进的InadditionFurthermoreMoreimportantlyWhat’smoreMoreover其他与“我”有关的写作材料1、重点句型It`s+a.forsb.todosth.So+a./ad.Thatsucha+a.+n.thattoo…todoNot….untilThat’swhy+句子那是。
。
。
的原因It’ssaidthat+句子There’snodoubtthat+句子毫无疑问···Itgoeswithoutsayingthat+句子毫无疑问···There’snoneedtodo没必要做···There’snopointindoing做某事毫无意义2、提建议Hadbetterdo/notdoHow/whataboutdoingWhynotdo/whydon`t+句子IthinkyoushoulddoIsuggestthatyoushoulddoIfIwereyou,Iwoulddo我要是你的话,我会做```It’sbesttodo3、表示喜欢,感兴趣Like/love/enjoydoingBefondof/bekeenonsth.PrefertodoAratherthandoBBeinterestedindoing=show/takegreatinterestin4、努力做```Trytodo/strivetodoMakeeffortstodo=makeeveryefforttodoTryone’sbest/doone’sbesttodoDowhat/everythingsbcantodo5、打算做···/计划做···Intendtodo/plantodoBegoingtodoDecidetodoDeterminetodo=bedeterminetodoMakeupone’smindtodo6、表示想/希望Wanttodo=wouldliketodoHopetodoExpecttodoWishtodoConsiderdoing7、其他有用的短语Fromnowon/soonerorlater/inthenearfutureHavepositiveattitudetowards/enrichmyknowledge/learn…byheart/Meetwithvariouskindsofdifficulties/facedifficultiesbravely/overcomethedifficultiesPlayanimportantrole/partin….8、其他有用的句式Forthereasonabove,/Afterall/Asforme,/Franklyspeaking/Generallyspeaking/Believeitornot,/AsaGradeNinestudent,/Thereasonsareasfollows,People’sviewon…varyfrompersontoperson
4、增添亮点使用复合句和谚语谚语举例Ifirmlybelievethat“Aforeignlanguageisaweaponinthestruggleoflife”.Asafamoussayinggoes,“Amanbecomeslearnedbyaskingquestions.”It’scommonknowledgethattheroadtosuccessisnotalwaysfullofroses.Anoldsayinggoes,“Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.”
五.2002-2013上海中考英语作文题目集锦
2002Myfavoritething(s)我的心爱之物
2003TobealovelyShanghainese做一个可爱的上海人
2004LeaveSchool毕业时分
2005Growingpainsandgains成长的烦恼
2006Ihaveadream我有一个梦
2007AStoryaboutMyParent(s)一个关于我父/母的故事
2008LoveAroundMe爱在我身边
2009Iwanttodosomethingformyschool我想为我的学校做点什么
2010I'mproudofmyself我为我自己感到自豪
2011MyFavouriteThing(s)我的心爱之物
2012IfyouareJoe.yourfriendBettyisupsetbecauseshecarestoomuchabouttheresult.写给一个考试焦虑考生的一封信,并给予建议。
2013Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Howtoprotectmyself”.(以“如何保护自己”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文)
六.近5年上海中考英语真题范文分享
2009命题作文
Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”.(以“我想为学校做件事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格。
)
(注意:
短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。
)
Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下内容仅供参考)
l Whatdoyouwanttodoforyourschool?
2 Whydoyouwanttodoit?
3Howareyougoingtodoit?
例文1:
Iwanttomakeschoolclean.Youmaythinkitisverysimple.ButIdon'tthinkso.Ourteachersaid,"Schoolisyourhome,youshouldkeepitclean."ButIhaveneverdoneanythingtomakeschoolclean.Forexample,Ihavenevertoldmyclassmatetopickuprubbishafterhethrewitontheground.Ialsothrewtherubbishontheground.SoIwanttomakeschoolcleansothateveryonecanforgiveme.Duringthissummerholiday,Iwillgotoschooltomakeschoolclean.Ofcourse,Iwilldoitwithmyclassmates.Wewillmakeschoolcleaneveryweekendsnexttermaswell.Now,doyouthinkitissimple?
2Onepossibleversion
IwanttodosomethingformyschoolI'mleavingmyschool.Iwanttoplantatreeinmyschoolgarden.Ihavefoundtherearetoomanybuildingsandfewtreesinourschoolyard,soIwanttomakemyschoolmuchgreenerandmorebeautiful.IfIplantatreethere,maybemoreandmorestudentswilldoasme.Intheirsparetime,thestudentscanreadunderthetrees.
2010命题作文
上海中考英语作文题:
I'mproudofmyself
1、Whatkindofpersonareyou?
2、Whatmakesyouproudofyourself(Giveanexample/examples)
3、Whyareyouproudofyourself?
要求:
至少60字
范文:
1
Iamaboyoflessconfidence.Ialwayshaterunning.Butasweallknow,thestudentsofGradeninehavetotakepartinthesportsexam.Atthatmoment,Ijustwantedtogiveup.Butmyparentsencouragedme:
"impossibleisnothing,""youcouldchallengeyourself!
"sowiththeencouragementofthem,Itriedmybesttorunandinsistedonrunning.WhenIgottothefinishingline,Ifeltproudofmyself,thoughIdidn'tgetthegoodmark,Iknew,Iwon.IcreatedamiracleformyselfandIwassoproudofmyself!
2.Iamproudofmyself
Thewheeloflifehasrolledfastthroughthepastfifteenyears.Bylookingbackwards,I’msoproudofmyselfbecauseI’vegrownintoastrong-mindedperson.Itwasthefirsttimeformetoclimbahighmountainalone.Atfirst,Ifeltmybodywasfilledwithenergy.Astimewentby,tirednessmademystepslowdown.Formanytimes,theideaofgivingupthejourneyappearedinmymind.Butthesaying“Accumulatedwaterbecomesariver.”enabledmetomoveon.Thoughthepowerofonestepseemedsoweak,Iinsistedonclimbingtothetop.WhenIsucceeded,IfeltIhadreachedanewheightinmylife.HowproudI’mofbeingastrong-mindedperson.
3.Iamproudofmyself
Iusedtobeagirlwithfewwords.LastmonthIfailedintheexam.IfeltsodepressedthatIcouldn’thelpcrying.However,mymothertoldme,“Thelifeisatoughroadfullofupsanddowns.Everyonehastoexperiencethelowtimes.”Herencouragingwordsliftedmeup.Imadeupmymindtoprepareforthenextexam.Ialwayslistenedtotheteachercarefullyanddidmyhomeworkattentively.Tomysurprise,Iachievedthebestgradeintheexam.Atthattime,Iactuallyfeltproudofmyself.I’mproudbecauseIachievedsuccessaswellascourage.NowI’mmoreactivethanbefore,andIalwaysbelieveaslongasyoukeepyourheartfacingthesun,theworldwillalwaysbringyounewhopes.
2011话题补全式作文
Writing(作文)共18分
Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“I’mamemberof“
(以“我是……的一员”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格子”
提示:
你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的一员,或者作为家庭,班级,社区额的一员,写出你的经历,感受等。
Usethefollowingpointsasareference
Areyougladtobeamemberof……?
Whatdoyoudoinit?
Howdoyoufeelassuchamember?
例文:
1
I’maMemberoftheSingingandDancingClubHello,everyone!
I’mverygladtobeamemberoftheSingingandDancingClub.Ihavebeeninthisclubfor2years.I’manactorintheclub.Ilikesinginganddancingverymuch.Isinganddancewithmyclassmatesonweekends.ThoughIamverytired,Iliketosinganddanceeveryday.Itmakesmefeelveryhappy.
2
Inthisworld,everyfamilyhasamother,afather,adaughterorason.Forplentyofpeople,familiesareveryimportant.whenyouareverysaid,youcanfoundoneortwopersonstomakeyoufeelhappiness,thisisyoufamily.
Iamverygoldtobecomemyfamilymember,becauseIhaveaprettygoodparentandafairlyyoungerbrother.WhenIcomeback,Ialwaysfeelfreedomandrelaxed.Mymotherisakindcook;shehaslotsofexperienceincooking,somybrotherandIarehealthy.
Asadaughter,Ishouldn'tmakemyparentsworry.Asasister,lshouldlookaftermybrother.lwanttobeagreatmemberofmyfamily,lwouldtrymybesttodowhatlshoulddointhefamily
2012书信类作文
Writing(作文):
(共20分)
Writealetterinatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation(根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信)
SupposeyouareJoe.YourfriendBettyisupsetaboutacomingexamforshecarestoomuchabouttheresult.Whatdoyouthink?
Trytoofferhersomeadvice.(假设你是Joe,你的好朋友Betty因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。
请给他写一封信,谈谈你的看法,并给她一些建议。
)
例文:
1
Knowingthatyoucaretoomuchabouttheresult,Iamquiteworried.Actually,itisnousebeingupsetdespitetheimportanceoftheresult.Therearesomeeffectivewaystocalmdown.Aboveall,keepingremindingyourselftostayinpeaceisthemosthelpful.Besides,itwillhelpyoutorelaxifyousparesometimeforrecreationalactivitieslikesports.Finally,talktoyourparentsandfriends,whoarealwaysreadytocomfortyou.AsissaidbySteveJobs,“thejourneyisthereward.”Iamsureyouwillgetthroughthissituation.
2.
DearBetty,Howtimeflies!
Theexamisfinallynearathand.Importantasitistoyou,youreallyshouldn'tcaretoomuchabouttheresultandgetyourselfoverlyupset.Remember
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