雅思写作国外老师的雅思作文范文赏析.docx

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雅思写作国外老师的雅思作文范文赏析

1.题目：

　　Childrenwhogrowupinfamilieswhichareshortofmoneyarebetterpreparedtodealwiththeproblemsofadultlifethanchildrenwhoarebroughtupbywhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

　　参考范文：

　　Somefeelthatthechildrenoflowincomefamiliesarebetterequippedtodealwithdifficultiesposedbythe“realworld”whentheygrowupandtheyalsobelievetheprivilegedchildrenofwealthyfamiliesarelessfittodealwiththeseimplicationsandveracityofthisargumentseemself-evident,butinfactrequirecloserexamination.

　　Thepopularwisdomisthatchildrenofpoorerfamilieslearnearlyonthevalueofabuck,andarethusnaturallybettersuitedtostretchingmoneywhentimesgettoughinadulthood.Inversely,thechildrenofwealthyfamilies,thosebornwithasilverspoonintheirmouths,arebelievedtobecompletelyignorantofthetentimeserroneouslyexpectingthesamesituationinarebelievedtobepronetooverspendingandfinancialirresponsibility.Thisbelief,thoughlogical,overlooksonekeypointwhichis,ofcourse,education.

　　Thebasisofthisargumentis,ofcourse,knowingthevalueofmoney,andtheideathatchildrenofthepoorknowthis,andthoseofthewealthydothough,isinabetterpositiontoteachtheirchildrenthevalueofmoney,someoneskilledinearningandkeepingit,thewealthyparent,orsomeonewhocannotseemtoacquireit,thepoorparent?

Bothwealthyandpoorchildrenareequallylikelytoacquireaneducationinmoney,whetheritisformal,orintheschoolofhardknocks.Conversely,bothchildrenareaslikelytoignorethiseducation.

　　Apoorchildmaybelievethatonecangetalong,ifnotaseasily,withoutwealthychildmaybewelltrainedbyaparentsteepedintheknowledgeofmoneymanagement,thekeytodevelopingthisskilliseducation.

complainsabouttaxes,yetthinkaboutwhatwouldhappeniftherewerenolongeranincometax.Ina250-wordessay,discussthepositiveeffectsofanincometax,thenegativeeffects,orboth.

　　Ithurtstolookatapaycheckandseehowmuchofitwastakenoutforincometax.Thatmoneycouldhavepaidsomeimportantbills.Itiseasytodreamofdoingawaywiththeincometaxandkeepingallthatmoneyforourselves.

　　Iftherewerenoincometax,however,thegovernmentwouldhavealotlesstospend.ThemoneywesendtoWashingtonseemstofallintoablackholeanddisappear.Actually,though,manypeopledependonit.Themoneypaysthesalariesofgovernmentemployees,whoprovideservicesfromdrugcontroltohighwaybuilding.Itsupportsourmilitarydefense.Also,muchofthemoneyisreturnedtopeopleintheform.ofstudentloans,veterans'benefits,andpaymentstofarmers,forexample.Thegovernmenthasbeenworkingtocutitsbudgetlately.Witheverycut,someonecomplainsloudly.

　　Soiftheincometaxwereeliminated,othertaxeswouldhavetomakeupforit.Payingthoseothertaxeswouldalsohurt.Salestaxesfallmostheavilyonpoorpeople.Taxesonmanufacturersonlyresultinhigherpricestoconsumers.

Incometaxesarenotfuntopay.Butdoingwithoutthemwouldbeworse.Inmyopinion,incometaxesshouldbemadeasfairaspossible.Thenweeachmust"bitethebullet"anddoourshare.

3.NowadaysthereismoreandmoreTVadvertisement,andthereisalotofmisinformationinsomeoftheseadvertisements.Somepeoplethinkthatconsumershavetherighttoknowthecorrectinformationandthatgovernmentshouldrestrictthecontentsoftheseadvertisements.Whatisyouropinion?

　　Noonecanavoidbeinginfluencedbyadvertisementsandadvertisingexertsatremendousinfluenceonus.Recently,therearepeoplewhoareoftheopinionthatpublichastherighttoknowthecorrectinformationoftheadvertisementsandgovernmentalsoshouldrestrictthecontentsoftheseadvertisements.PersonallyIagreewiththisopinionforthefollowingreasons.

　　Inthefirstinstance,consumershavetherighttoknowthecorrectinformationbeforedecidingonwhethertobuythem.Advertisementsarehighlyinformationthathelpspeopletomakechoicebeforetheygotobuywhattheyneed.Iftheadvertisementexaggeratestheproductsitalsowillpersuadepeopleintobuyingthings,whichtheydon’treallywant.

　　Secondly,anymisleadingadvertisementswillleadtothemarketingtricks,causingchaosinthemarket.Toomanymisleadingadvertisementsarebarriotodistinguishingbetweendecentproductsorproductsofbadquality.Hisbreadintruthismadewithsoyflour,whileheadvertisesitaswhitebread.Thesemisleadinginformationcausesillegalcompetition.

　　Lastbutnotleast,governmentshouldstipulatelawsinconsumers’interests.Accordingtothelaws,advertisementsmustbetruthful.Iftheadvertisementsmisleadconsumers,governmentcanimposegreatfineonthemtosetalesson.

　　Ingeneral,theroleofadvertisementsisinevitableandundeniable.Agoodadvertisementcanbeabridgebetweenbusinessandconsumersandhelpskeepbusinessmoving.Soweneedcorrectinformationandgovernmentalsoneedstorestrictthecontentsofadvertisements.Letmisinformationofadvertisementsbefarawayfromus.

4. Mostpeoplehavedreamsofonedaybecomingrich.Butdoestheaveragepersonhavetheabilitytomakealotofmoney?

Thinkaboutthisquestion.Thenwriteabout250wordsdescribingyourthoughts.

　　Whenlackofmoneypreventsusfromhavingsomethingwewantverymuch,itistemptingtodreamofbeingrich.ItishardtokeepinmindthatAmericansarealreadywealthycomparedwithpeopleinmanyotherpartsoftheworld.Ourmodernconvenienceswouldhavebeentheenvyofkingsintimespast.Justthesame,mostpeoplewouldlikealarger.Whethermostpeoplearecapableofmakingalotofmoneyisanotherquestion.

　　Peopleinaveragecircumstancescanoftengetaheadthrougheducation,hardwork,andcarefulmoneymanagement.Butgettingaheadisnotthesameasactuallybecomingrich.

　　OnlyasmallpercentageofAmericanscouldbecalledtrulywealthy.Somepeoplejoinedthisgroupfromordinarybeginnings.Usuallytheyhavedoneitbycarefullyridingsomemajordevelopmentintheeconomyonitswayup.Inthepast,greatfortuneshavebeenmadeinoil,steel,andrailroads.Recently,somepeoplehavemademillionsincomputersandrealestate.

　　Usually,though,ittakesmoneytomakemoney.Biginvestorsoftenstartrichandthengetricher.Mostofuscannotstrikeoilorstartthenextnewtechnicalbreakthrough.Mostpeoplearenotbornintowealthyfamilies,either.InAmericaitcertainlyispossibletobecomemoreprosperous.Butunlesssomeonewinsthelottery,realwealthisnotverylikelytocomealong.

5.Surveysshowthatmorepeoplegetthenewsbywatchingtelevisionthanbyreadingthenewspaper.ThinkaboutwhetherTVnewsshowsareadequateasaperson'sonlysourceofnews.Writeanessayofabout250wordsthatdetailsyourthoughts.

　　Televisionnewsshowsaredramaticandinteresting.Watchingthemispleasantanddoesnotrequiretheeffortofreading.Iftelevisiondidnotcoverthenews,somepeoplewouldknownothingaboutwhatisgoingonintheworld.

　　However,televisionnewscasterscoveronlytheeventsthattheyhavetimefor,andtheypreferstoriesthatincludesomedramaticpictures.Viewersarequicklyboredwithreporterswhositandtalkintothecamera.Asaresult,acomplicatedstoryisoftencutshort.

　　Newspapersandmagazinesdoabetterjobofexplainingcomplexevents.Theycanincludedetails,andapersonwithaspecialinterestcantakethetimetoreadthem.Otherscansticktotheheadlines.

　　Readingallowsmorefreedomofchoicethantelevision.TheTVaudiencecannotdecidewhichstoriestowatch.Inbroadcasting,"onesizefitsall".However,apersonwhoreadsnewspapersandmagazinescanchoosetospendtimeonbusiness,sports,health,ortheschoolboardelection,dependingonspecialinterests.

　　Televisionprovidesausefulglanceatwhat'shappening.However,apersonwhohasindividualinterestsandwhowantsthewholestoryneedsnewspapersandmagazinesaswell.

6.Formanyyearsthenuclearfamily,consistingoffather,mother,andchildren,wasconsideredtobethenormalfamilypatterninChina'ssociety.Yetinmanyotherculturesandinourowninthepast,threegenerations--grandparents,parents,andchildren--oftenhavelivedtogether.Whataretheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthreegenerationslivingtogether?

Givespecificexamplesina250-wordessay.

　　Threegenerationslivingtogethercanhavebothfinancialandpersonaladvantages.Ontheotherhand,itcanalsohavepersonaldisadvantages.

　　Inyearspastandtoday,threegenerationshaveprobablylivedtogethermostlyoutofeconomicnecessityoradvantage.Sometimesayoungfamilymovesinwiththeoldergenerationbecausethehusbandandwifecan'taffordaplaceoftheirown.Sometimesgrandparentsmoveinbecausetheyaren'twellenoughorcan'taffordtolivealoneanymore.Occasionally,grandparentscometotakecareofthechildrensobothparentscanwork.Intimespast,andsometimestoday,threegenerationshavelivedtogetherbecausetheyalldependedonthesamefarmorbusiness.

　　Usuallythesearrangementsdohelpsolvefinancialandpracticalproblems.Everyonehasaroofoverhisorherhead.Childrenandoldpeopleinneedofcarearelikelytogetit.Oftenafamilycangetaheadfinanciallybysharingtheworkandthebills.Inaddition,astrongsenseoffamilyandofbelongingcandevelopineveryone.

　　Whatmaybehardertoworkoutarequestionsofwho'sincharge.Ifgrandparentsdon'tletgoofsomeauthority,themiddlegenerationislikelytoresentit.Ontheotherhand,ailinggrandparentsmayforcetheirchildrentobeparentstothemandtotheirow