雅思8分和PTE词伙都标出来了带评论的.docx
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1.PopulareventslikethefootballWorldCupandotherinternationalsportingoccasionsareessentialineasinginternationaltensionsandreleasingpatrioticemotionsinasafeway.
Everyfouryears,thewholeworldstopstowatchinternationalsportingeventssuchastheOlympicsandtheFootballWorldCupinwhichathletesshowtheirbestperformancetomaketheircountryproudofthem.Thesesportingoccasionshaveprovedtobehelpfulineasinginternationaltensionsindifficulttimeswhenpowerfulleadersweretryingtocontroltheworld’seconomyandothergovernmentswerefightingoverland.
TheOlympicGamesareoneofthebestexampleswhichprovehowsportingeventscanbringnationstogether,atleasttemporarily.FromancientHistory,whenGreeksandRomanswouldinterruptbattlestoparticipateinthegames,tothemorerecentinternationaldisputes,whenathletesfromPalestineandIsraelwouldforgettheirdifferences,competepacificallyandevenembraceeachotherafteranevent.Moreover,thesepopulareventshavecalledtheworld’sattentiontotheterribleconsequencesofwars;thussomeleadershavetriedtoacceptagreementstoendtheirdisputeandlivepeacefully.
Similarly,internationalsportingeventsshowbenefitsinsomedevelopingcountrieswhichliveinadailyinternalcivilwar.Forexample,Brazilhasahighrateofunemployment,lackofeducation,hunger,crime,povertyandcorruptionwhichleadstoanimmenseembarrassmentofbeingBrazilianandalowself-esteem.However,whentheFootballWorldCupstarts,theBraziliansquad,whichisconsideredthebestteamintheworld,provokesanamazingfeelingofprideintheircountry.Mostpeopleseemtoforgetalltheirproblemsandeventhecriminalactivitydecreases.Theypaintroadswiththenationalcolors,useweartheBrazilianteamshirtandbuynationalflags.Moreover,thecompetitionbringsfamiliesandneighborstogetherandevenrivalgangswatchthegamesandcelebratepeacefully.
Inconclusion,popularsportingeventsplayanimportantroleindecreasinginternationaltensionsandliberatingpatrioticfeelingsasHistoryhasshown.
Thisisagreatessay,theideas,language,structureofparagraphsandsentences,grammarshowhighlevelofEnglish.InmyopinionitisBand8.Keepupthegoodwork.
2.Ascomputersarebeingusedmoreandmoreineducation,therewillbesoonnoroleforteachersintheclassroom.
Thereisnodoubtthateducationandthelearningprocesshaschangedsincetheintroductionofcomputers:
Thesearchforinformationhasbecomeeasierandamusing,andconnectivityhasexpeditedthedataavailability.Thoughexpertssystemshavemadecomputersmoreintelligent,theyhavenotyetbecomeasubstituteofthehumaninteractioninthelearningprocess.Inmyopinion;whatcanbeexpected,isachangeoftheteachers’rolebutnottheirdisappearancefromtheclassroom.
Nobodycanarguethattheacquisitionofknowledgeismorefunandeasierwithcomputers.Themereactivityoftouchingandexploringthisdeviceconstitutesanenjoyabletaskforakid.This,accompaniedwiththerelaxingattitudeandsoftwareinteractivity,usuallyconducetoabettergraspingofnewknowledge.Atahighereducationallevel;theavailabilityofdigitalbooks,simulatorandotheracademicmaterials,providethestudentwithaneveraccessiblesourceofinformation,thatotherwisewouldnotbeathand.
But,besidestheincreasingcomplexityandbehaviorofintelligentsoftware,whichisusuallyembeddedintheacademicdigitalmaterial,theneedofhumaninteractioninthelearningprocesswillalwaysbepresent,atleastintheforeseeablefuture.Thereisthenecessityforahumanbeingtobeabletodeterminewhatthespecificsneedsofeachindividualare.Theexpertiseofateacherinhowtoexplainandadaptcomplexconceptstodifferentindividualscanhardlybemimickedbyacomputer,nomatterhowsophisticateditssoftwareis.
Ascomputersarebecomingacommontoolforteaching,teachersshouldbemoreawareoftheirroleasguidesintheacquisitionofknowledgeratherthantransmittersoffacts.Theyhavetobeopen-mindedtothechangesthataretakingplaces,keepupdatedandserveasaproblemsolversinthelearningprocess,thusallowingstudentstodiscoverthefactforthemselves.
Tosummarize,inmypersonalview,teachersplayandwillplayanimportantroleintheclassroom,especiallyattheprimarylevel.Nomatterhowcomplexcomputersbecome,therewillbenoreplacementforthehumaninteraction,butinthewayhowthisinteractiontakesplace.
Excellentessay!
AreyouanativeEnglishspeaker?
Welldone.Theonlyproblem:
toolong,365wordsinsteadof250-265maximum.
3.Eventhoughglobalizationaffectstheworld’seconomiesinapositiveway,itsnegativesideshouldnotbeforgotten.Discuss.
Inthepresentage,globalizationisplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourlives.Butinthemeantimewhetheritisablessingoracursehassparkedaheateddebate.Somepeoplearguethatglobalizationhasafundamentallybeneficialinfluenceonourlives,whilemanyotherscontendthatithasadetrimentaleffectaswell.
Aconvincingargumentcanbemadeaboutglobalizationnotonlyplayingapivotalroleinthedevelopmentoftechnologyandeconomy,butalsopromotingtheculturalexchangebetweendifferentcountries.Tostartwith,itistheglobalizationthatimpelledmanycorporatetobecomeaninternationalgroup,therebymakingacontributiontothelocaltechnologyandemployment.Specifically,whenamultinationalgroupestablishafactoryinadevelopingcountry,thenewequipment,thenewmanagementskillsandthejobvacanciesareallinthebestinterestofthelocalsociety.Moreover,peopleworldwidecangettoknoweachotherbetterthroughglobalization.ItiseasytoseethatmoreandmoreHollywoodblockbustersshowculturesdifferentfromAmerican,somerecentexamplesare‘KungfuPanda’and‘TheMummy’.
Admittedly,profit-drivenglobalizationhasseverelyaffectedyoungpeople.Today,inthemetropolisesindifferentcountries,itisverycommontoseeteenagerswearingNIKET-shirtsandAdidasfootwear,playingHip-HopmusiconAppleiPodsandeatingatKFC.Theculturethattookathousandyearstoformjustseemssimilarinthesecities;itislookslikeyoucanonlydistinguishthembytheirlanguage.Meanwhile,insomedevelopingcountries,sweatworkshopsarealwaysaconcerningissue.Forinstance,reportsshowthatsometeenagersemployedbyNIKE’scontractorsworkinsmellyfactoriesover14hoursaday,butareonlypaidfiftycentsperhour.
Insummary,Iwouldconcedethatglobalizationdoescomewithsomeadverseeffects.Despitethatfact,benefitscreatedbyitfaroutweighthedisadvantages.Overall,Iamconvincedthatweshouldfurtherpromoteglobalizationandmeanwhilethelocalgovernmentshouldtakemeasurestocombatcultureassimilationandsweatworkshops.
Thisessayisextremelylong(338wordsinsteadoftheadvised250-265).Ithasasoundstructure,yourpositionisclearlyexpressed,theinformationiswell-organized,andstructure-wisethesentencesarefine.Thevocabularyisimpressiveandthereonlywereafewgrammaticalerrors(seecommentsunderlinedinblue).Overall,lookslikeaband7.5+essay.
4.Insomecountrieschildrenhaveverystrictrulesofbehavior,inothercountriestheyareallowedtodoalmostanythingtheywant.Towhatextentshouldchildrenhavetofollowrules?
Theextenttowhichchildrenhavetofollowrulesisinitselfaverycomplexissue,sincechildrenacrosstheworldgrowupinverydifferentcultures.InIndiaforexample,thelevelofmoralityisveryhighandchildrenaretobeverysubmissivetotheirparentsaswellasotheradultsaroundthem.This,however,isnotthecasefortheWesterncountriesoftheworldwherechildrenfollowthemotto“Thoushaltdowhatthouwilt”aspromotedbycelebritiesandrockstars.Ibelievethatfollowingstrictruleshasbothadvantagesaswellasseriousdrawbacksasdiscussedbelow.
Firstly,strictrulesofbehaviorcreateresponsibleandrespectfulchildrenwhointurnmatureintorespectfuladults.Thisformsastablesocietywhichisvirtuallyfreefromvicessuchasprostitutionanddrugabuse.Secondly,ifchildrendonotfollowstrictrulesofbehavior,theywillgetoutofhandandbecomework-shyandindolent.Thiswillthencreateaburdenonsocietysincethegovernmenthastofindwaystocaterforthesesocialills.
However,forcingchildrentofollowstrictrulesofbehaviordoesnotalwaysyieldpositiveresultsasdiscussedabove,mostofthetimeitbackfiresandworksagainstsociety.Forexample,teenagersaremorelikelytodotheoppositeofwhattheyaretoldtodosimplybecausetheywanttobeindependent.Childrenshouldalsohaverightstoexercisetheirfreewillanddeveloptheirownpatternofbehaviors.Strictrulessimplydestroytheindividualityofchildreniftheyareimposedonthem.
Attheendoftheday,itisclearthatchildrenshouldbeguidedbyrules,buttheserulesshouldnotbeimposedonthembecauseashumanbeings,theyneedtohaveroomtodeveloptheirowntraitsofcharacterandadoptabehavioralpatternoftheirown.
Thisessayistoolong(309wordsinsteadofadvised250-265).Otherwisethisworkisaverygoodone;itcoversthetask,yourpositionisclear,theideasarewell-organized,expressed,explainedandsupported.Thesentencesshowawiderangeoflanguagestructures,cohesivedevicesandthegrammarisfine.Overall,lookslikeaband7.5orhigheressay.
5.Eventhoughglobalizationaffectstheworld’seconomiesinaverypositiveway,itsnegativesideshouldnotbeforgotten.Discuss.
Globalizationissuchacommonlyusedter
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