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上海高考作文及范文
2015年上海高考英语作文解析及作文范文
II.GuidedWriting(25分)
Directions:
WriteanEnglishcompositionin120–150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.
学校即将举办“读书节”,目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。
假设你是该校学生潘阳,你已找到以下三幅图片,决定给读书节组委会写一封信,推荐其中一幅,你的信须包括以下内容:
1.简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片;
2.阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。
作文解析:
今年的英语作文题目同样重点考察了主观理由型作文的写作手法,这篇文章要求学生在三幅学校读书节宣传图片当中选出自己最喜欢的一幅,对图片进行描述并说明原因。
这也是继2013年和2014年连续两年考察书信体与主观理由型文章的结合体之后出现的第三篇主观理由型文章。
整体来看,今年的作文题目似乎与往年没有什么区别,但细细分析,我们会发现今年英语作文的难度,不管是在文章内容、还是在形式上面,都有了大幅提升。
因为考生需要同时兼顾三个难点:
1、书信体正确的的书写格式;2、对图片内容进行细节的描述;3、找出恰当的理由(2-3点)进行论证,说理充分,同时注意论点和论据相结合,以及文章语句之间的逻辑严密性。
可以说,近三年来英语作文虽然都在考察主观理由这个大的方向,但是考察的难度确实是在逐年递增。
对于考生来说,要想在短短的20分钟之内写好这篇作文,首先需要拿捏好这篇文章的结构。
一般来说,文章第一段用来引出话题,第二段可以对所选择的图片进行描写,描写时要格外注意的地方是对细节的详细描述,基本内容讲清楚就可以开始第三段的理由阐述了。
写好重头戏理由之后,在尾段我们无需过多笔墨,基本上通过三句话就可以收尾了。
也就是总结加升华,由于这是一篇征集建议的书信体文章,所以需要最后有一句客套话,考生可以通过Lookingforwardtoyourreply或者Iwillappreciateitverymuchifyoucantakemysuggestionsintoconsideration进行文章自然收尾。
这样整篇文章便达到了内容统一,结构完整,说理充分了
作文范文:
DearSir/Madam,
SincetheReadingFestivalisaroundthecorner,I’mwritingtorecommendapicturewhichcanbeusedinthebrochuretoremindthestudentsofthepleasureofreading.
Inthepicture,threestudentsaresittingatthetable,discussingheatedlywhattheyhavejustread.Itseemsthattheyhavehadalotoffunthroughthediscussion.Thoughitisadmittedthatreadingismostlyapersonalactivitywhichneedsquietnessandconcentration,asfarasI’mconcerned,itcanalsobeasharingexperiencewhenthesamebookisbeingappreciated.Justimaginethatyouhavereadaterrificdetectivestorywithfascinatingandintricateplots.Youaresoamazedbythegeniusofthewriterandyoucan’thelpsharingitwithyourclassmatesorbestfriends,whoturnouttohavebeendeeplyimpressedaswell.Themomentyoumentionthebook,thepassionandenthusiamaboutthestorywillexplodewhichcanneverbegainedonyourown.Myidealatmosphereofreadingisjustlikethat,throughwhichyoucannotonlyappreciatethecontentbyyourself,butalsohavethepleasureofsharingtheplotsoropinionswithyourpeers,whichwillultimatelyenhanceyourunderstandingofthebook.Tosumup,thereasonofmyrecommendationisquitesimpleandapparentthatreading,insteadofbeingdullandisolating,canbefullofparticiationandcommoninterest.
IsincerelyhopethatyouwilltakemysuggestionintoconsiderationandI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yours,
PanYang
2014年上海高考英语作文题目
学校英语报正在改版,拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化)中去除一个,并从三个备选栏目(时尚、职业规划、读者反馈)中挑选一个纳入该报。
假设你是该校学生程飞,给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点。
邮件须包括以下内容:
1.你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由;
2.你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。
DearEditor,
WhenitcomestotheselectionofthecolumnsfortheschoolEnglishnewspaper,opinionsvaryfromonetoanother.AsfarasIamconcerned,thecolumnspreservedwilldefinitelymakeafeatureofstudents'interestandexertpositiveeffectsontheirstudyandlife.
Comparativelyspeaking,Imaintainthatthevalueofthecolumnsconcerninghealthandculturefaroutweighsthatoftheentertainment.Theimmediatefactorisnothingismorevaluablethankeepinghealthyinthatlossofhealthsignifieskissinggoodbyetolife.That'swhymoreknowledgeofhowtokeepfit,moreeffectivelyonecanimprovehisqualityoflife.Thesecondpointtobementionedisthatprogressintheacquisitionofculturescontributestobroadeningone'shorizons,whichinturnfacilitatesone'sstudyandtheestablishmentofphilosophyoflife.
Asfortheaddition,thecareerplanningconstitutesatoppriority.Foronething,itconcernsone'scareerdevelopmentagreatdealwhileforanother,itmakesagreatdifferencetoone'scareersuccessinthefuture.
Iamprettyconvincedthatawisechoicemakesperfect.Iamwritingthee-mailinthehopethatmyadvicewilladdabrillianttouchtotheimprovedversionofourschoolEnglishnewspaper.
Yourssincerely,
ChengFei
2013年上海高考英语作文题目
上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展,现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见,假设你是王敏,给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。
你的信必须满足以下要求:
1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;
2.说明你的理由(从便利性,专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)
Sample1
DearSir/Madam,
I’vejustlearnedthatShanghaiMuseumwillholdafamouspaintingexhibitionandyou’reresponsibleforcollectingpublicsuggestionsaboutthebestlocationtoholdit.I’mwritingthislettertosharewithyoumyopinions.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itismorereasonabletoholdthepaintingexhibitioninShanghaiMuseumthanincommunitylibraries.Myreasonsareasfollows.
Ontheonehand,itismoreconvenientforpeopletoreachShanghaiMuseum,locatedinthecenterofthecity.Visitorscangotherebysubway,bybusandsoon.What’smore,ShanghaiMuseumismuchmoreextensivethancommunitylibraries,providingvisitorswithamorecomfortableenvironmenttoappreciatethefamouspaintings.
Ontheotherhand,ShanghaiMuseum,awell-knownanddistinguishedmuseumbothathomeandabroad,ismoreprofessionalinholdingpaintingexhibitions.What’sofgreatsignificanceisthatnotonlydoesitprovideadvancedfacilitiesandhigh-techmonitorsbutalsooffersprofessionalsecurityguardstoprotectthosefamouspaintingsfrombeingdamagedorstolenintheprocessofexhibition.
Consequently,IstronglyproposethatthepaintingexhibitionistobeheldintheShanghaiMuseum.
Yours,
WangMin
Sample2
Towhomitmayconcern:
I’velearnedthatanartexhibitionistobeheldandthatyou’recollectingsuggestionsonitslocation.I’mwritingthislettertosharewithyoumyopinions.
Inmyopinion,itismoreadvisabletoholdtheartexhibitioninShanghaiMuseumthanincommunitylibraries.Myreasonsareasfollows.
Ononehand,itismoreconvenientforpeopletogettoShanghaiMuseumwhichislocatedinthecenterofthecity.Andthemuseumismuchmorespaciousthancommunitylibraries,whichprovidesvisitorswithamorecomfortableenvironmentforappreciatingart.
Ontheotherhand,asawell-knownmuseum,ShanghaiMuseumismoreprofessionalandexperiencedinholdingartexhibitions.Itsprofessionalsecurityguardsandadvancedfacilitiescanbetterprotectthosefamouspaintingsfrombeingdamagedorstolen.
Therefore,Isuggesttheexhibitionbeheldinthemuseum.
WangMin
2012年上海高考英语作文
上周一,你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课(如图所示),回家后你用英语写了一篇日记,内容包括:
● 对两堂绘画课的具体描述; ● 你从中获得的启发。
Sample1
TodayIhadanunusualexperience,whichrefreshedmymind.WithpupilsIspenttwoperiodsoftimeinaprimaryschool,watchingthemlearnhowtopaint.AlittlegirlnamedAmy,onestudentoftheclass,leftmeadeepimpressionwithheruniquepainting.
Inthefirstlessontheteacherrequiredthepupilstopaintfreely.Namely,inanywaytheycoulddrawwhateverthey’dliketo.Amywasthefirstonetohaveatry.Isawherthinkforalittlewhile,takeoffhershoes,thendipherfeetslightlyintothepaint/ink.Muchtomysurprise,inaflashshemanagedtomakeanicedesignonabroadpieceofwhitepaper/blanketwithbothofherfeet.Whathappenednext,variousoftypesofworkspaintedbyotherchildrenappearingbeforemyeyesonebyone,keptmelaughingwithjoyandamusement.
Followingabreak,thesecondclassbegan.Withasmile,theteachermadeabriefcomment,whichwasfullofpraiseaswellasappreciation.Afterthat,shegavethestudentssomeguidanceaboutthetraditionalwayofpainting.Withherteachers’wordsinmind,Amypracticedagain.Painting-brushinhand,shesatadeskproperly/straight,payingfullattentiontoherwork.Thistime,witheaseandexcitementshedrewsomebirdsflyinghighinthesky/sun.
Simpleandamusingasitseemed,thetwowaysofpaintingarethought-provoking.Asisgenerallyaccepted,students,especially,childrenhavegreatpotentialintheirgrowthanddevelopment.Asamatteroffact,whethertheirtalentscanbedevelopedtothefull,toagreatdegree,dependsonhowchildrenareeducated.Whilesomevaluabletraditionsarewellworthcherishing,thinkinginanoriginalwayshouldbeencouragedandemphasizedamongchildrenwhenitcomestoteachingoreducation,whoaresupposedtobecharacterizedby“innovationandcreation”.Onlyinthisway,cantheykeepinpacewiththefast-developingmodernworld.
Sample2
Lastweek,Isatinontwopaintingclassesataprimaryschool.Inoneclassastudentdippedherfeetininkandmadeapaintingoutoffootprints.Bycontrast,thesamestudentusedabrushtomakeabreath-takinglandscapepainting—sovividthatonecouldalmostsmelltherefreshingriversandhearthechirpingbirds.
Thoughstandinginstarkcontrast,thetwopaintingsbothintriguedme.Infact,theyremindedmeofwhatFacebookfounderMarkZuckerbergsaid,“Keepyoureyesonthestarsandyourfeetontheground.”It’sthismaximonsuccessthatlendsinsightintothetwopaintings.Thefirstpaintingrepresentsthatweshouldremaingroundedandbecautiousofbeingcarriedawaywithtemporarysuccess.Akitestaysafloatbecauseit’sattachedtoareel;otherwiseitwillinstantlyloseitsbalancebeforeeventuallycrashingintotheground.Soitiswithus.
However,successrequiresmorethanbeingsimplydown-to-earth,withaloftyidealbeinganothercrucialfactor.Sograndwasthesceneryportrayedinthesecondpaintingthatitembodiedthereachofourdreams.Insteadofignoringthegleamoflight,thesparkofwisdomthatflashesacrossourmindandworshippingthelusteroftheskyofgeniuses,we’dbebetterofftrustingthatthegleamandthesparkwillonedayshineasbrightlyasasearchlightifwehavefaithinourselves.
Thepaintingstaughtmetodreambigandactsmall.AndIbelieve,bydoingso,thewarmlightofsuccesswillcascadeintomylife.
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