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2011年考研英语冲刺阶段

一．冲刺作文部分

1．历年考试主要涉及一些generaltopics,如爱心（2001）、成长（2003）、代沟（1992）、友谊（1994）、家庭（2005）、承诺（1998）、崇拜（2006）、健康（1996）、资源利用（2000）、文化交流（2002）等话题。

考生要以小见大，从图片细节中提炼升华出大型宏观主题加以议论，分析原因、利弊并得出建议。

命题中的图片和图表往往是单个或局部情况，但只追逐个别现象，分析就没有了深度，往往要追溯到总体情况。

即使2006年考题图画中有英国球星Beckham的发型，也要升华到对普遍的偶像崇拜（idolworship）现象的评价，而非仅仅针对Beckham个人。

命题从来不在个别事件、具体环节或细枝末节上做文章，决不会细到介绍北京经济适用房建设情况或点评《满城尽带黄金价》。

2． 命题中的“和谐社会”倾向：

在以上分析的基础上，我们重新审视历年考题的命题，发现以中老年教授组成的命题团队普遍趋向常规主流观点。

那么考题围绕着时代背景和主流思想，已经逐渐形成了以“和谐社会”为核心的命题思路。

只不过总体以和谐作为公式的话题可以分成和谐的三个不同层次：

个体和谐发展：

自信的重要性、节俭与浪费、如何看待成功、梦想与现实、抄袭（plagiarism）与诚信、高分低能现象、职业选择和规划、

个人、他人与社会的和谐共处：

个性与团队合作、如何看待竞争、网络的利弊、伪劣商品问题（fakecommodities-商家为牟利而危害社会）、乱收费问题、如何看待中国传统节日和洋节

人类与自然环境的和谐：

私家车的利弊（噪音空气污染、交通阻塞）、环境污染话题（空气、水、噪音、土壤、人类食品）、乱砍滥伐问题、人类对历史古迹的破坏及保护

另外，不论何种命题，都要从简洁的图画中寻找线索并推理解决。

针对很少练习图画作文构思的考生，建议近期可上网查寻一下中国新闻漫画网，寻找一些幽默讽刺图画，练习快速推理，查找问题所在，同时进行相关词联想，熟能生巧。

稍加练习，便会发现一些惯性推理技巧，考试时就会大大减轻紧张感，从容不迫地进行构思和创作。

评分标准：

本题以总体评分法，通篇分档计分，计分标准如下：

20一17分内容切题，包括题中所列的各项要求：

清楚表达其内涵，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。

文章长度符合要求。

16—13分内容切题，包括题中所列的各项要求；比较清楚地表达其内涵，文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词错误较少。

文章长度符合要求。

12—9分内容切题，基本包括题中所列的各项要求；基本清楚地表达其内涵：

句子结构和用词有一些错误。

文章长度符合要求。

8—5分内容基本切题，基本包含题中所列的各项要求，语句可以理解，但有较多的句子结构和用词错误。

文章长度基本符合要求。

4—1分基本按要求写作，但只有少数句子可理解。

0分文不切题，语句混乱，无法理解。

经典图画作文句子

一.说明现象

1．Recentlythephenomenonof……….hasarousedgreatconcernandshouldbegivenenoughconsideration.

2．Recentlytheproblemofhasbeenbroughtintofocus/broughttopublicattention.

3．Avirtualepidemicofthe….isnowunderinthesociety

4．…….isanotherofthenewandbittertruthswehavetofacenow.

5．Manisnowfacingwithabigproblem….,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.

6．Withthedevelopmentofmodernindustry,moreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheproblemof

7．Inthepastfewyears,atendof…..hasbeenbecomingmoreandmoreclear.

二.发表现点与看法

1.     Ifullyagreewiththestatementthat………Thereasonsarechieflyasfollows.

2.     Althoughmanypeoplebelievethat……Idoubtwhethertheargumentbearsmuchanalysis.

3.     Althoughthepopularbeliefis…….astudyindicates……..

4.     somepeoplesuggest……Butwhatthesepeoplefailtounderstandis……..

5.     fromapersonalperspective,Ipreferto

6.     Itistruethat…………………..butapointisbeingleftoutofourconsideration.

7.     Inordertoanswerthequestionof……………apersonmustweightwosides.

三..对立观点

1.Differentpeoplehave（hold）differentviews（opinions/pointsofview）onthisissue（problem/matter/question）

2.Somebelieve...Othersthink,Stillothersclaim（assume,have,hold,claim,believe,maintain,takeastandon）

3.Theyarequitedifferentfromeachotherininterpretingtheissue.

4.AsfarasIamconcerned（AsfarasIknow）

5.IhavetotakeotherfactorsintoconsiderationifIamconfrontedwithsuchadifficultchoice.

四.主题句常用句型

1.Itisimportant（necessary,urgent,difficult,easy,convenient,comfortable,expensive,desirable,advisable）forsb.todosth.（that）

Eg.

Itisinevitablethatthenaturalresourcesthroughouttheworldarediminishingasthedemandforthemisontheincrease

Itisobviousthatthestrengthofacountry'seconomyisdirectlyboundupwiththeefficiencyofitsindustryandagriculture.

Itisurgentforthegovernmenttotakemeasurestocontrolthebirthrateinourcountry.

Itisdesirabletobuildmorehospitals,shoppingcenters,recreationcenters,cinemas,andotherpublicfacilitiestomeettheincreasingneedsofthepeople.

2．Nothingintheworldcandelightmesomuchas………..

3．Intheageofinformationandcommunication,thecomputerplaysasignificantrole.

4．Nothingismoreimportantthan…..

5．onecannotemphasizetheimportanceof…….somuch

6..Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...

Itgoeswithoutsayingthatexercisesareagoodwaytokeephealthy.

五.原因解释

1.Itmaybeattributedtothefollowingthreepoints.

2.Thedeteriorationofecologicalsystemmaybeattributedtothefollowingleadingfactors.Firstofall,...

Secondly,......Lastbutnotleast...

3.Acarefulanalysisofthechartsabovemayexplainwhythenumberofspeciesofwildlifeisonthedeclineandtherateofwildlifeextinctionisaccelerating.

4.Itisnoeasyjobtofindthereasonforthistendencywhichinvolvesseveralcomplicatedfactors.

5.Therearemanyreasonsresponsibleforthisinstance,andthefollowingarethetypicalones.Foronething,………Inaddition,…….Themainreasonisthat……

6.Oneofthereasonsthatisgivenfor…..isthat……

7.AfurtherreasonwhyIadvocateanattitudeof…..isthat….

8．.Anincreaseindemandcauses（resultsin/leadsto/produces）higherprices,whichaggravatespeople'sfinancialburden.

六.列举、举例表达方式

1.Forexample,womenareholdinghigherpositionsinpoliticalandeconomicpower.

2.Forinstance,theeconomicstatusofthepeoplehasbeengreatlyimproved.

3.Take...forexample,...

4.Acaseinpointis....

5.Thefollowingexamplemaywellillustratethepoint.（show,demonstrate）

6....isagoodcaseinpoint.

7.Thischartshows（diagram,table,graph,form,picture,cartoon,bars）

七.结论性

1.     Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelyarriveattheconclusion………..

2.     Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthat

3.     Tosumuptheaboveargument,Ithinkaproperattitudetowards………isthat…………

4.     AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwillchooseto…………becausethechoicefitsmypersonalityandmylife-longbelief.

5.     judgingfromalltheevidenceavailable,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat…….

6.     Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoutweighthenegativeones.

Therefore,Iwouldlike………….

八.后果性

1．Nodoubt,ifweignoretheproblem,thereiseverychancethat……………willbeputindanger.

2．wemustsearchforaquickaction,becausethepresentsituationof……..,ifallowedtoproceed,willcertainlyleadto…………..

3．Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsomeundesirableresultsmaycomeoutunexpectedly,sowhatweshoulddois…………

4．Inordertocrackthenuts,youneedconfidence,perseveranceandalsocourage.Whatismoreimportant,carefulconsiderationshouldbegivenbeforeyoucarryoutmeasures.

九.建议性

1.     Itishightimethat………Herearesomeofthemeasuresthatmightbetakenimmediately.

2.     Althoughitisaffectedbymanyfactors,stilltherearecertainwaysthatcanmakethesituationbetter.Themostimportantis……………Anotherwayis……………stillanotherwayis………….

3.     Noeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemof………Butthecommonrecognitionoftheimportanceof………..mightbethefirststepontherightway.

4.     Manysolutionsareofferedhere,allofthemmakesomesense,butnonisadequateenough.Theproblemsshouldbestudiedindepth.

5.     However,itiseasiersaidthandone.Practiceisthemostimportantfactor.Onlywhenyoupayattentiontoitcanyouholditsoonerorlater.

6.     Butthisproblemisverycomplicated.Perhapspeoplecanhardlyrelyononlyonewaytosolvetheproblemcompletely.

最新研发的超级模板

（一）消极问题的批判

第一段

（1）Whatsetsmeponderingexceedinglyinthefirstpictureisthat,whichseemstobehumorousandridiculousbutilluminatingonsecondthoughts.

（2）Franklyspeaking,themostunforgettableimagearisinginmyeyesinthesecondpictureisthat.

（3）Apparently,thissillybutthought-provokingpicturemirrorsaphenomenonthatnothingismoredestructivetooursocialharmonyanddevelopmentthanA

第二段

（1）Asfortheissueof（A）,itssituationhasbeenbecomingincreasinglyunsatisfactoryinspiteofthefactthatmostpeoplearestillignorantoftheproblemsitbringsabout.

（2）ItisnodifficultjobtocomeupwithsomepossibleharmfuleffectsresultingfromtheexistenceofA.

（3）Tobeginwith,withitsseeminglydestructivepower,Acannotonlyhamperindividuals’development,butalsoserveasanevilinstrumenttohurtsb’sphysicalandmentalhealth.

（5）ThoseequippedwithAarealwayslookeddownuponbyothers,becauseAmayendowthemwithmoreselfishnessandhypocrisy.

（6）Inaddition,Ainourlifeshouldberegardedassocialmalignanttumorandthegrimstatuscontradictswithoureffortstobuildupaharmonioussociety..

（7）Andmostoften,thepeoplewhoarefrequentlymistreatedwith

Awilldevelopdeephatredforoursocietybecauseithinderstheprogressofoursocietyandinterruptsourpersonallife.

（8）AccidentsofvariouskindsresultingfromAhappenmorefrequentlythaneverbefore.

（9）BandCarethecasesinpoint,whicharedefinitelyconvincingtomakeusgainabetterinsightaboutwhathashappened.

第三段　

（1）Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,whatreallyaccountsisnotthedangerofA,buthowwecanpreventitfromgettingworse.

（2）Ontheonehand,itisurgentforustostrengthentheenforcementoflawsandregulationstoeliminateA.

（3）Ontheotherhand,apublicizingeducationalcampaignshouldbecarriedouttoenhancepeople’sawarenessabouttheharmfulnessofA.

（4）However,itiseasiersaidthandone.

（5）Inoneword,theAmustberemovedbecauseithinderstheprogressofoursociety.

一．公德的问题,比如说脏话,乱扔垃圾,乱脱鞋问题

第一段

（1）Whatsetsmeponderingexceedinglyinthefirstpictureisthat,whichseemstobehumorousandridiculousbutilluminatingonsecondthoughts.

（2）Franklyspeaking,themostunforgettableimagearisinginmyeyesinthesecondpictureisthat.

（3）Apparently,thissillybutthought-provokingpicturemirrorsaphenomenonthatnothingismoredestructivetooursocialharmonyanddevelopmentthanbadmanners

第二段

（1）Asfortheissueof（badmanners）,itssituationhasbeenbecomingincreasinglyunsatisfactoryinspiteofthefactthatmostpeoplearestillignor