四级英语作文技巧及范文.docx
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四级英语作文技巧及范文
四级英语作文技巧及范文
1.文章结构:
(tensentences,120words)
Para.1.S1Generaltalkofthetopic
S2Thesis:
thewriter’sattitudetowardsit
Para.2.S3Thewriter’sreasonstohavethisattitude
S4SupportI
S5DetailI
S6DetailII
S7SupportII
S8DetailI
S9DetailII
Para.3S10Conclusion:
restatethethesis
2.DevelopmentParagraphs:
段落特征:
统一,完整,连贯
常用的连接手段:
1.每段的内容要围绕主题句,保持内容的一致性,并从不同的角度来充分发展段落的主题思想。
2.使用代词来代前面提到的人,物或观点
3.重复段落中的关键词,短语或句子
4.使用同义词
5.使用转折词语和句型:
1.用于段落开始的词语:
ofall,tobeginwith,nowadays,withthedevelopment/invention/progressof…,generallyspeaking,recently,etc.
常用于段落开始的句型:
1.People’sviews/ideas/opinionson…varyfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplethinkthat…
2.Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewson…
3.Itisheldthat…
4.Justas/Astheproverb/oldsayinggoes…
5.Itiscommonlybelievedthat…
6.Is….?
Answertothisvarygreatly.Somepeoplethinkthat…
7.Whenaskedabout…,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.Somepeoplesaythat…
8.Nowadays,…play(s)animportantrolein…/…ispopulararoundus.Likeeverythingelse,…has/havebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.Generally,theadvantagescanbelistedasfollows.
9.…Manywayscancontributetosolvingthisseriousproblem,butthefollowingonesmaybemosteffective.
10.…Therearemanyreasons/causesfor…,butingeneral,theycomedowntotwo/threemajorones.
11.Therearemanyfactorsthatmayaccountfor…,butthefollowingarethemosttypicalones.
2.用于举例的词语:
forexample,suchas,forinstance,toillustrate,acaseinpoint,take…forexample,etc.
3.用于比较和对比的词语:
similarly,inthesameway,equallyimportant,in/bycontrast,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,unlike,however,yet,etc.
4.用于表示因果关系或分析原因的词语:
dueto,owingto,asaresult,therefore,so,thus,consequently,among…reasons,oneshouldbeemphasizedthat…,etc.
5.用于表示层次递进的词语:
first/firstly(second/secondly,etc.),tobeginwith…,moreover,finally,firstofall,sincethen,afterthat,further,etc.
6.用于表示让步的词语:
although,inspiteof,despite,etc.
7.用于表示结论的词语:
inconclusion,tosumup,toconclude,inshort,inaword,insummary,theconclusionisthat…,inbrief,etc.
常用于结尾的句型:
1.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat…
2.Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat…
3.Judgingfromallevidenceoffered,wemaysafelyarriveat/reachtheconclusionthat…
4.Alltheevidencesupportsasoundconclusionthat…
5.Alltheanalysisjustifiesanunshakableconclusionthat…
6.Fromwhatismentionedabove,wemaycometotheconclusionthat…
7.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewith…/Iamreallyinfavorof…/Iamoftheopinionthat…/Iholdthat…/Iclingtotheopinionthat…
8.Thereissometruthinbotharguments,butIthinkthedisadvantagesof…outweighitsadvantages.
9.Inmyopinion,/inmyview,/asforme,I…
10.Asfaras…isconcerned,Iprefer…to…
11.It’shightimethatwetriedeverypossiblemeanstoputanendto…/wetookmeasurestosolvetheproblemof…
12.There’sstillalongwaytogotowardssolvingtheproblem.Wehopethateffortsshouldbemadeto…
13.Manysolutionsarebeingofferedhere.Allofthemmakesomesense,butnoneisverysatisfactory/adequateenough.Theproblemshouldbeapproachedinanewway/awidercontext.
14.Thereisnoeasysolutiontotheproblemof…,but…mightbeuseful/helpful.
15.Thereisnodenyingthatimmediate/considerable/special/furtherattentionmustbepaidtotheproblemof…
16.Thereislittledoubtthatseriousattentionmustbecalledtotheshortageof…
17.Itisnecessarythateffective/proper/quickactions/steps/measuresbetakento..
18.It’ssuggestedthatgreateffortsbemadeto…
19.It’sapparent/clear/obviousthatthetaskof…requiresimmediate/greatattention/efforts/consideration.
20.Tocheck/controlthetendency/trendisnoeasytask,anditrequiresagood/deepawareness/understandingof…
3.段落的展开方法:
1.列举法
2.举例法
3.定义法
4.比较和对比法
5.因果法
6.分类法
7.叙述法
8.综合法
4.词汇的变化
1)用不同的词汇表达相同的意义,避免单调,枯燥的重复。
如:
好学生:
top/gifted/superior/excellent/outstandingstudents
损害:
haveanegativeeffecton;dogreatinjuryto;causegreatdamageto
妨碍:
standinthewayof..;beanobstacle/barrierto..
对…很重要:
beindispensable/important/vitalto
学习知识:
pursue/acquire/learnknowledge/skill
许多:
alargeportionof;manya;enormous;largenumbersof
重视:
assign/attachmuchimportance/significanceto..
强调:
place/putmuchemphasis/stress/valueon..
越来越:
beincreasingly+adj.;beontherise;thegrowingnumberof..
接触新思想:
beexposedtonewideas;havean/someacquaintancewith..
接触社会:
comeintofrequent/closecontactwiththesociety;
提出观点:
advance/putforward/comeupwithideas
作出努力:
maketremendous/persistentefforttodosth.;takegreatpainstodosth.
影响学习:
interferewithstudies;haveaninterferencewithstudies
产生影响:
have/exertaprofoundinfluenceon…;haveadramatic/undesirableeffecton..
取代:
substituteforsth.;taketheplaceofsth.;replacesth.
采取措施:
takeeffectivesteps/measuresto
满足要求:
meet/satisfy/accommodatethedemandof
补偿损失:
compensatefortheloss;makeupforthedamage
解释现象:
accountforthephenomenon;explainthesephenomena
培养信心:
developone’sinterestin..;fosterone’sconfidencein..
施加压力:
put/exertapressureon..
提供机会:
provide/offer/furnishanopportunity/chanceforsb.
抓住机会:
grab/seize/taketheopportunity/chance
献身于:
devote/dedicate/commitoneselftoacause/career
提高技术,能力:
sharpen/improve/enhance/boostone’sskill/ability
加快,促进发展:
accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boostthedevelopmentof…
开阔眼界:
broadenone’soutlook;expand/enlargeone’smentalhorizons
充满渴望:
haveaburningdesirefor..;haveagreatpassionfor..
2)使用同一个词的不同词性,在句中作不同的成分,带来新颖性,形成变化。
5.句型的变化
1)比较级句子
英语通过比较级来表达意思的句子远比汉语多.比如:
a)Ayoungman’sfirstcarislessameansoftransportationthanamonumenttohisdiscoveryofyouthfulfreedom.(Ayoungman’sfirstcarisnotameansoftransportation,butamonumenttohisdiscoveryofyouthfulfreedom.)
b)Successisasmuchaquestionoftimingasanythingelse.(Likeanythingelse,successisaquestionoftiming.)
c)Noissueisasbasictoindividualandnationalsurvivalasfood.(Foodisthemostbasicissuetoindividualandnationalsurvival.)
2)同位语句子
同位语有两种功能:
归纳和解释.例如:
a)Anotheringredientofcourtesyisempathy,aqualitythatenablesapersontoseeintothemindorheartofsomeoneelse.
b)Butwhateversadepisodesexistinourpast,wemustholdapositiveviewofourhistory,ahistorythathasbeenthestoryofhopesfulfilledanddreamsmadeintoreality.
3)平行排比句
恰当地使用句子的平行排比,能使文章显得更生动,更有力.
e.g.Ourstrengthmakeshimstrong;ourdeterminationmakeshimdetermined;ourcouragemakeshimahero.
4)后置修饰句
运用后置修饰语可以使文章的表达更简洁.
e.g.Thereisanalmostinfinitevarietyofmagazinesavailabletosatisfytherichvarietyofinterestsandtastes.
5)插入语
在正常的句子中插入某些成分,也会给句子带来变化.
e.g.Attheendofthenineteenthandthebeginningofthiscentury,amanhadtobeaggressiveandambitious--todayhehastosocialandtolerant--inordertobeattractive“package”.
6)被动句
在主动句占绝大多数的情况下,被动句能带来一些变化.
e.g.However,verylittlecontrolcanbeexercisedoverthemediausedtogenerateinformationthatcomestoyoufromtheoutside.
7)倒装句
倒装句不仅带来句型的丰富,而且在句子的连贯上,平衡上也有一定的作用.
e.g.Fromthatsciencewillcometherealizationthatdespitetechnology,mandosenotexercisedominionovernature.
8)名词化句子
正式文体中,名词化句子的运用显得语言表达更成熟.
e.g.HeavyexposuretoTVwillinterferewithone’sstudies.(WatchingtoomuchTVwillaffectyourstudies.)
9)运用破折号
运用破折号不仅对句子变化有帮助,而且有强调的作用.
6.作文中常见错误
1.时态方面的错误
写议论文一般用现在时态。
只有举例,提到过去的事才会用到过去时。
2.主谓,人称等违反一致性方面的错误
写一个句子,乃至一篇文章里人称始终要保持一致,不能一会儿用第三人称,一会儿又用第一人称。
3.修饰语的位置错误
a)Withouttelevision,peoplecan’tgetinformationwhichcomesfromotherpartsoftheworldimmediately.
Immediately既可以修饰comes:
“得到迅速从各方面传来的消息”,也可以修饰get:
“迅速得到从各方面传来的消息”,意思含糊不清,所以要把它放到can’t的后面。
b)Toparticipateinclassdiscussion,alotofbookshavetoberead.
不定式短语的逻辑主语决不是olotofbooks,为了把逻辑关系表达清楚,要么把不定式短语改成Ifonewantstoparticipateinclassdiscussion,要么把主句改成youhavetoreadalotofbooks。
4.语法结构平行方面的错误
a)Withthecomputer,onecandoshopping,banking,andreadathome.
用语法平行结构原则来衡量。
前面用ing形式,最后一个用动词原形read是不妥的,为了和doshopping,dobanking保持结构上平行,接下来的一个内容要用reading。
b)Participatinginclassdiscussionisnotonlygoodforthepursuitofknowledge,andthroughitwecanalsodevelopouranalyticalskills.
同样,在说同样的事时,相邻的句子在语法结构上尽可能要保持一致。
后半句宜改为:
Itisalsobeneficialtothedevelopmentofouranalyticalskills。
5.代词用法方面的错误
a)Sometimesteacherswillinformstudentsofthedifficultytheywillmeetwithinstudies.
They既可以指代teachers,也可以代students,明显的是指代不清。
其实只要把其中的一个名词变成单数,用he和they分别代不同的名词就清楚了。
如:
Sometimesateacherwillinformstudentsofthedifficultytheywillmeetwithinstudies.
b)PeoplehavebeenfightingagainsttheinfluenceofTVcommercials,butitoftenprovesuseless.
It指什么?
指influence,在oftenprovesuseless句子中显然不通。
作者知道it指人们的努力,但effort这个词前面没有出现过,就不能用it,所以要把it改成theeffort。
6.可数名词与不可数名词方面的错误
information,evidence,advice,knowledge等是不可数名词,不能用复数。
many,agreatnumberof,another,few等只能与可数名词配用。
而agreatamountof,agreatdealof,less,much等须与不可数名词配用。
7.冠词方面的错误
a)Bookknowledgeisimportant,butweshouldalsolearnsomethinginthesociety.
b)WhenIwasinthehighschool,Ialwayshadabeautifulpictureofthecollegelife.
在没有特指意义时,不能用表示特指的定冠词The。
这几句中的the都应去掉。
c)Thereisalotofdiscussionintheclass.
表示上课,用手,走路,上学,住院等都不用定冠词:
Inclass,byhand,onfoot,gotocollege,athospital。
8.句子完整方面的错误
a)TVnowplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.Becausewecannotlivewithoutit.
中文用“因为”引出的句子可以独立,而英文不行,用Because,since,as从句,只能附属主句:
becausewecannotlivewithoutit。
b)Therearemanywaystocontactwiths
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