高中英语作文模拟训练题20题含例文解析.docx
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高中英语作文模拟训练题20题含例文解析
高中英语作文模拟训练题20题(含例文解析)
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一、读后续写1.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Myfatherisapracticalman.Hecan'texplaincalculus(微积分),buthecantellyouhowmuchpressureaboilerneeds.Hecan'tdrawanarchitect'splan,buthecantellyouifthepipesandwiringwillsustainthestructure.Heputhimselfthroughnightschooltobecomeanengineer,butthatwasonlyafterheworkedaslumber,anelectrician,andamechanic.
Onedaywcwalkedbyatoystorewindow.Sittinginthecomerwasthemostunusualdoll-houseI'deverseen.Itwasshapedlikedanupturnedlog(原木).Littleovalwindowsdecoratedwithnicecurtainsandframedbytinybalconieswerecutintoit.
“Oh,Daddy,"Isaid,"isn'titbeautiful?
DoyouthinkSantaClauswillbringittome?
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Dadlookedatthe$100pricetag,silent—that'saratherbigfigureinthosedays."IthinkevenSantacouldn'taffordthishouse/'hejoked,liftinguphisbeltasheoftendoeswhenhe'snervous."Maybeoneday,sweetheart.''
OnChristmasmorning,Iawokeearlyandraceddownstairs.Inthedimlight,1madeoutalotofwrappedboxesunderthetree—butnonelargeenoughtocontainmydollhouse.DadcouldseemydisappointmentHepulledmeontohislapandgentlytoldmehow,asaboy,hehadwantedaredwagon,buthisfathercouldn'taflbrdone.Hesaidhemadehisownfromwoodandoldwheelshefound."I'llmakeonefbryou,"Dadassuredme.
AndrightafterChristmas,despitealltheunfinishedprojectsathome,hestartedit.Inaively(幼稚地)thoughti(wasaneasytoytomake,buteverystepofthelongprocesswasconsiderablymorecomplexthanIhadanticipated.Nightafternight.Dadwouldcomehomefromhisjobdeadtired,yethe'dalwaysfindtimetoworkontheloghouse.Inthedarkyellowelectriclight.Dadwasalwaysbusycreatingmydollhouse.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;请按如卜.格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Ihesitated,wonderingifIshouldhelpmyfather.
【答案】Luckily,theInternetdiditsthing.It'sabitofamodem-daywonderthatwouldneverhavehappenedwithoutsocialmedia.Mara'sstorywasquicklyandcontinuouslyspreadviatheinternet.Severaldayslater,withanxietyandworry,Marafinallygotpositivefeedback.Marasaidshegotanemailfromsomeone.Thesendertoldherthebearwasonthewayback.OnTuesdaynight,Mara'sbearcamehome.
Theemailwasfromthewomanwhosentthebearback.ShetoldMarathatshewasdeeplytouchedbyMara'sstory.Shedidn'twantthereward,justhopingthatMaracouldliveahappylifeinthefuture.Maraisgettingmarriednextsummerandthebearisgoingtohaveaspecialseatattheceremony-theonehermotherwouldsitin.Fornow,she'skeepingMamaBearcloseandsendingthankstothosewhohelpedwiththehappyreunion.
【解析】【分析】
本文以事件为线索,讲述了Mara在搬家途中弄丢了母亲留给自己的玩具熊,这只熊对她来说意义非凡,因此她在网上求助找熊.
【详解】段落续写:
1由第一段首句内容"幸运的是,互联网发挥了作用。
"可知,第一段可描写Mara通过网络找回了MamaBear。
2由第二段首句内容"这封邮件是将熊邮寄回来的女人发来的。
"可知,第二段可描写女人的信件内容及Mama收到玩具熊后的做法。
1.续写线索:
收到玩具熊的线索——送熊女士表达祝愿——Mara的婚礼计划——Mara表示感谢词汇激活
行为类.回到家:
camehome/returnedhome
1.收到邮件:
gotanemail/receivedanemail.需要:
want/need
情绪类.感动:
betouchcd/bemoved
1.感谢:
thanks/apprcciation
【点睛】[高分句型1]It'sabitofamodeni-daywonderthatwouldneverhavehappenedwithoutsocialmedia.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]ShetoldMarathatshewasdeeplytouchedbyMara'sstory.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Fornearlyfourmonths,thelittledog,Indiana,fortunatelysurvivedinthewoodswithawoundedshoulder.She'dbeenmistakenforawolfandshotwhilerunningwildwithhermother,Dakota.Ananimalcontrolofficerssaidtheywerethemoststronglybondedpairhe'devenseenandthetwodogsrefusedtoleaveeachother'sside,evenwhiletryingtoescapebeingcaught.
Asaresultofthegunshot,Indianalostbothherlegandhermother,forthetwoweresenttodifferentadoptiongroups.WhileIndianawaslearningtowalkonthreelegsdownsouth,Dakotawas1.000milesnorthinNewEngland.Thefirstadoptionfamilyreturnedhertwodayslater.Theysaidthedogcouldn'tbondwithhumans,keptthemupallnightandwasn'tsuitabletoliveinahome.Eventually,DakotafoundherforeverhomewithmeonLongIsland.Ihaveexperiencewithsuchdogs,andDakota,ahusky(哈士奇犬),justneededattentionandsomeonewhounderstoodhowtoapproachher.Ialwayslethercomeuptome.Igaveherthetimeandspacetoexploreandfeelcomfortable.Shesoonletmeputabeltonherandwouldlieonthesofawithmequietly.
WhenI.accidentally,readthepostofDakotasfirstadopter,itmentionedthatthelittledogDakotahadbeenrunningwithwasshot,and,Ithought,killed.I'mabroadcastnewsjournalist,soIalwaysdidsomesurveyand,bychance,heardastoryfromaSouthCarolinaTVnewsoutletaboutadogthatrecentlyhadherfrontlegcutoffbecauseofanoldgunshotwound.AndanyonewhowantedtoadoptIndianawasrequired(ohaveasix-foolfencebecauseshekeptjumpingovertheoneatthecareshelterinSouthCarolina.Therewasnomistakingit—shelookedexactlylikeDakota.Indianawasn'tkilledbythegunshot,justbadlyinjured.
1.续写词数应为150左右;请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
WhileDakotalovedmeandhernewhome,shestillmissedherkid.
/decidedtobringthree-leggedIndianatomyhome.
【答案】Onepossibleversion:
WhileDakotalovedmeandhernewhome,shestillmissedherkid.ShewoulduttermournfulhowlswheneverItookheroutforwalksinthewoods.Itseemedasifshewascallingforherpuppytocomeback.Theexactscenemademeheart-broken,andItookactionallatonce,determinedtoreunitemotherandpup.IcalledtheTVstation,askingforconditionsaboutthelittledog,onlytobetoldthatIndianawasreceivingmedicaltreatmentforfallingonthegroundwhenjumpingoverthefence.
/decidedtobringthree-leggedIndianatomyhome.Instantlytheygotreunited,Dakotacouldn'tstoplickingherpuppy'sface.Happyandexcited,thetwodogswerewaggingtheir(ailswildly.Theheart-warmingscenemovedanyoneonthespot.DakotahassincestoppedhersorrowfulhowlswhileIndianahasnevertriedtojumpoverthefence.Theseonce-separateddogsplayedtogether,chasingeachotheraroundtheroomandslepttogetherwiththeirnosesrestingoneachother.Ifthereistobeanydevotion,itwillcomethroughanyspecies.
【解析】【分析】
本文以两只小狗为线索展开,讲述了作者收养母犬后想方设法采取行动寻找幼犬,并最终使母犬和幼犬团聚的感人故审。
【详解】1.段落续写:
1由第一段首句内容“虽然达科塔爱我和它的新家,但它仍然想念它的孩子。
"可知,第一段可描写作者采取一些行动,帮助母犬和它的幼犬团聚。
2由第二段首句内容“我决定把三条腿的印第安纳带回家。
”可知,第二段可描写母犬和幼犬团聚后的感人场面。
2.续写线索:
收养母犬一一帮助——带小犬回家——团聚——感动词汇激活:
行为类悲伤地嚎叫:
uttermournfulhowls/howlwithsorrow
1采取行动:
takeaction/takemcasues你追我赶:
chaseeachothcr/raceeachother
情绪类伤心的:
heart-broken/sad/grieved
1高兴的•:
happy/cheerful/glad【点睛】
[高分句型1】ShewoulduttermournfulhowlswheneverItookheroutforwalksinthewoods(运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2]IcalledtheTVstation,askingforconditionsaboutthelittledog,onlytobetoldthatIndianawasreceivingmedicaltreatmentforfallingonthegroundwhenjumpingoverthefence(运用了现在分词作状语和动词不定式作结果状语和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3]Happyandexcited,thetwodogswerewagging(heirtailswildly(运用了形容词作状语)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
JackgraduatedfromafamousuniversitythisJuly.Hewenttoapplyforajobinabigcompanyandhadtogothroughinterviewsbeforegettingthejob.
Hepassedthefirsttwointerviewseasily,andthenitwastheboss'sturntodothelastoneandmakethefinaldecisionwhetherJackwouldgetthejobornot.
ThebosslearnedthatJack'sacademicachievementswereverygoodalltheway,fromthemiddleschooluntiluniversity.Neverhadayearwhenhedidnotreceiveprizes.
Thebossasked,"Didyouhaveanypart-timejobsinschool?
"Jackshookhisheadandsaid,"No,Ididn'thavepart-timeiobs.^,Thebosswentonandasked,“Wasityourfatherwhopaidforyourschoolfbcs?
"Jackreplied,"MyfatherpassedawaywhenIwasoneyearold.Itwasmymotherwhoworkedandpaidfbrmyschoolfbes."
Thebosscontinued,"Wheredidyourmotherwork?
"Jacktoldhimthathismotherworkedasaclothescleaner.Everydayshewouldcarrybasketsofclotheshome.Afterwashingandironingtheclothes,shecarriedthebasketsbacktothestorewhereshegotpaid.
ThenthebosspolitelyrequestedJacktoshowhishandstohim.Jackwasconfusedandheshowedhishandsinfrontoftheboss,apairofhandsthatweresmoothandperfect.Thebossaskedagain,"Jack,haveyoueverhelpedyourmotherwashtheclothesbefore?
''Jackanswered,“Never.Mymotheralwayswantedmetostudyandreadmorebooks.Besides,mymothercanwashclothesfasterthanme."
Thebosssmiledandsaid,"Jack,Iamsatisfiedwithyourperformanceintheinterviews,butIhaveanotherrequest.Whenyoureturnhometonight,goandcleanyourmother'shands,andthencometoseemetomorrowmorning.''注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Jacklefttheoffice,feelingconfusedaboutthestrangerequest..
Thenextmorning,Jackwentbacktotheboss'soffice..
[答案]Onepossibleversion:
Jacklefttheoffice,feelingconfusedaboutthestrangerequest.Nosoonerhadheenteredhishousethanhetoldhismotherthestrangerequest.Feelinghappyhutembarrassed,sheshowedherhandstohim.Theyouthcleanedhismother'shandsslowly.Histearfellashedidthat.Itwasthefirsttimehenoticedthatherhandswerewrinkledwithmanybruisesandwounds.Someweresopainfi.ilthatherhandsshiveredinwater.Aftercleaninghismother'shands,hewashedalltheremainingclothesforhismother.Theyouthunderstoodtherealintentionbehindthestrangerequest.
Thenextmorning.Jackwentbacktotheboss'soffice.Beforeopeningthemouth,hethoughtofwhathesawlastnight,eyesstreamedwithtears.Thebossnoticedandasked,"Jack,can
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