范文.docx

范文.docx

《范文.docx》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《范文.docx（18页珍藏版）》请在冰豆网上搜索。

范文

专家提醒:

写好英语作文的关键是套用句型,背诵大量范文,达到熟悉这些地道的句子结构!

建议你背诵这篇英语作文英语四级作文范文，并提取其中的关键句型，活用到你的作文中去，就可以获得高分！

评判作文x5S

四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。

x5S

内容不跑题即可，注意：

1.不要妄图以情动人；2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。

x5S

结构上牢记总分总：

先写主题句（TopicSentence），再写分论点，最后写总结句（Conclusion）。

x5S

语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。

x5S

基本表达x5S

人们认为：

itisgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthatx5S

越来越：

beincreasingly+adj.,beontherise,thegrowingnumberofx5S

万能理（Omnipotence）x5S

1.方便：

convenient/conveniencex5S

2.效率：

efficient/efficiently/efficiencyx5S

3.节省和浪费：

savetime/money/space;economical,thriftx5S

                          wastetime/money/space;costly,lavishx5S

4.人的心理健康：

independent,cooperative,competitive,x5S

                             considerate,confident,creative,sociable,x5S

                             perseverance;selfish,isolated,conserativex5S

5.人的身体健康：

health,disease,strong,strength,energeticx5S

6.娱乐：

colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainmentm,relaxx5S

              tired,boring,lonelyx5S

7.环境：

environment,pollute,poisonous,dirtyx5S

8.安全和危险：

safe,danger,riskx5S

9.经验：

experience,socialexperience,enterthesocietyx5S

10.人际：

humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freelyx5S

写完之后修改注意：

（内容方面尽量不要修改）x5S

1、字母大小写x5S

2、怪符号x5S

3、单词拼写x5S

4、主谓一致x5S

5、动词时态x5S

6、名词单复数x5S

实例一x5S

题目：

Bicycles――AnImportantMeansofTransportinChina提纲：

（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及

（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途x5S

Score:

8      x5S

   BicycleisanimportantmeansoftransportinChina.TheimportantreasonofitistheeconomyofChinese.TheuseofbicycleinChinaiswidelybecausepeopleinChinahavenothighwage.Theycanonlyaffordabicycle,andtheyhavenomoneytobuyacarwhichistooexpensive.SoChineseusuallybuyabicycle,anduseittogotowork, or gototravelandsoon.TheotherreasonisthelargepopulationofChina.Allthesemadethebicyclebecometheimportantmeansoftransport.    x5S

   Thebicycle,comparedtothecar,isnottooexpensiveanditiseasytolearnandtouseanditcansavethesurfaceofputtingit.Itdoesn’tasktobuildthegaragelikecar.ThispointisveryimportanttoChina,becauseofthelackofland.Itisn’ttooexpensive,soChinesecanaffordit.Itdoesn’tneedanyoil,anditcan’tcausethepolusion.Allofthesearethegoodneedscomparedtothecar.x5S

   Inthefuture,bicyclewillbewidelyused.Anditwillbeingooddemand.Peoplewillproducemuchmoremodernbicycles.x5S

Score:

14x5S

BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwo or threebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople--manandwoman,oldandyoung--ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalled“thekingdomofbicycles”.x5S

注：

1.第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。

x5S

       2.Duringtherushhour分词结构开头。

x5S

       3.破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。

x5S

Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.x5S

注：

1.Comparedwithcars分词结构开头。

x5S

       2.besuperiorto/beinferiorto优于/低于x5S

       3.thirst,second,third英语语言有层次感，信号词x5S

       4.cheap便宜，最好用inexpensivex5S

       5.begoodforhealth对健康有好处（万能理）x5S

       6.Moreover表示递进x5S

Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.x5S

注：

promising有前途的apromisingyoungmanx5S

Score:

11x5S

  Theremillionsofbicyclesintoday’sChina.Bicyclesareveryimportantmeansoftransportinpeople’sdailylives.Becausetorideabicycleisverysimple,tobuyabicyclewillnotcostsomuchmoney,toparkabicycleneedsjustasmallroomandtorideabicycledoesnotneedoilbuttherider’sstrength,bicyclesarepopularallovertheworld,especiallyinChina.x5S

注：

第一句应该用therebe结构x5S

Comparedwithacar,abicycleismuchcheaper.ItismoresuitableforChinaasadevelopingcountry.Andabicyclehasalmostcausednopollutionbutacarhas.Onthecontrary,abicycleistooslow,itcostsmoretimesthanacar.x5S

IthinkthepopulationofChina’sbicyclewillbekeptforthelongrun.Becauseitwillbereplacedbyacar,abusandsooninsomedevelopedareasinChina,anditwillbemadeawideuseinthedevelopingareasinChina,thenumberofbicyclesinChinawillbethesameastodaybutIbelievethatit’squalitywillbeimproved.x5S

I、对比观点选择题：

1.有人认为……；2.另外一些人认为……； 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。

（最好写成4段）x5S

实例二99年6月真题x5S

ReadingSelectively or Extensively?

x5S

Outline:

1.有人认为读书要有选择2.  有人认为应当博览群书  3.我的想法x5S

Howshouldweread?

Shouldwereadselectively or extensively?

Everyonehashisownview.x5S

Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What’smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn’treadthem.Sincewecan’treadallthebooksandweshouldn’treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.x5S

Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.x5S

Who’sright?

Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.x5S

典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：

x5S

（启）Paragraph  I：

（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点； 

（2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。

x5S

Score:

14分x5S

Howshouldweread?

Shouldwereadselectively or extensively?

Everyonehashisownview.（启）x5S

注：

第一句提出问题，第二句提出两种见解x5S

典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：

x5S

（承）Paragraph II：

（1）提出一种观点或优点；

（2）本段的支持性分论点；（3）本段总结（可以省略）。

Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What’smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn’treadthem.Sincewecan’treadallthebooksandweshouldn’treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.（承）x5S

注：

1.本段总分总结构x5S

      2.theyarguethat=theythinkthatx5S

      3.withthedevelopmentof...随着……的发展x5S

      4.what'smore递进关系，moreoverx5S

      5.bad=pornographic色情的&violent暴力的x5S

典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：

（转）ParagraphIII：

（1）承上启下的过渡句；

（2）提出另一种观点或缺点；（3）本段的支持性分论点（4）本段总（可以省略）。

x5S

Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.（转）x5S

注：

1.But转折词（信号词）x5S

       2.theyemphasizethat=theythinkthatx5S

       3.today'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas现代社会今昔非比x5S

       4.许多知识awiderangeofknowledge/alargescopeofknowledge/muchknowledge；x5S

     获取知识acquire/getknowledgex5S

       5.knowsnothing→little；hemaybeuseless→hemaynotbeofgreatusetothesociety后者比前者更委婉x5S

典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：

（合）ParagraphIV：

（1）平衡两种看法；

（2）给出自己的观点。

Who’sright?

Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.（合）x5S

Score:

11分x5S

Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.x5S

注：

结构非常好，可以套用。

x5S

Thosepeople,whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,believethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadbooks.x5S

注：

1.“people,who...,”应去掉逗号，改为限制性定语从句。

x5S

       2.asmanyasbadbooks改为asmanyasbadonesx5S

       3.leadustothewrongway改为leadsb.astrayx5S

       4.theysuggestthat=theythinkthatx5S

       5.touch碰（闪光点词汇：

如教材P7：

shoulderingtheresponsibilityofdoingsth.肩负起责任）x5S

But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,theycaneasilycometotheconclusionthat“toknowmore,toreadmore”.Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.x5S

注：

1.hold认为同样表示“think”的词还有argue,emphasize,believe,suggest,claim,insist,maintain,agree,holdx5S

       2.thebestbook在西方国家是“圣经”的意思x5S

       3.toknowmore,toreadmore错误，中式英语x5S

Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.x5S

范文22.IsTelevisionaBlessing or aCurse?

x5S

Now,itisgenerallyacceptedthattelevisionplaysanimportantpartinpeople’slives.But,thereisanongoingheateddiscussionastowhethertelevisionisablessing or acurse.x5S

注：

itisgenerallyacceptedthat人们通常认为

Asisoftenpointedoutbysomepeople,televisionkeepsonebetterinformedaboutcurrentevents,allowsonetofollowthelatestdevelopmentsinpoliticsandscience,andoffersanendlessseriesofprogramswhicharebothin