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新东方老师写满分作文六级
考六级的同学注意了,新东方老师真出汗,教你作文得满分,六级突破6302010-03-2410:
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⏹ 1.审题
⏹ 2.构思
⏹ 段首句;举例。
⏹ 3.动笔
⏹ 4.检查
⏹ 1.三段论;
⏹ 2.文章开头尽量避免错误;
⏹ 3.写好第二段基本层次结构;
⏹ 4.多运用关联词语;
⏹ 5.不能说空话,要举例子。
⏹ 例文评分。
⏹ 1.六级作文不要乱喊口号
⏹ Wemustbehonestandfaithfultoourclassmates,party,countryandthewholeworld.
⏹ 2.文章内容要展开,注意举例子和分析原因。
⏹
(1)举例子
⏹
(2)分析原因
⏹ (3)万不得已凑字数
⏹ 1.Themethodologysuggestedmaynotguaranteetheultimatesuccess,buttheeventualpay-offcouldbeworththeeffort.
⏹ 2.Achievingevenpartialsuccesswillbenefitmankindandcontributetocreatingabetterworld.
⏹ 1.大量看范文。
⏹ 2.关注段首句的写法和举例子的写法。
⏹ 3.适当的练习。
⏹ 1.大量看范文。
⏹ 2.关注段首句的写法和举例子的写法。
⏹ 3.适当的练习。
⏹ 1.开头直接切入正题。
⏹ 2.议论文第二段的主题句要写好。
⏹ 3.第二段要分层次展开。
⏹ 4.用名言、举例、解释等手段充实第二段内容。
⏹ 5.结尾要干脆有力。
⏹ 第一段:
起始段。
⏹ 第二段:
展开段。
⏹ 第三段:
结论段。
⏹ 第一段:
引出现象或引出话题。
⏹ 引出现象——阐述题;
⏹ 引出话题——观点对立题。
⏹ 现象 phenomenon;
⏹ 话题 issue。
⏹ 模版句1:
⏹ Peopleingrowingnumbershavebecomeincreasinglyawareoftheseriousnessofthephenomenon.
⏹ 模版句2:
⏹ Thereisagrowingconcernovertheseriousnessofthephenomenon.
⏹ 举例(03.12):
thewasteoncampus
⏹ Thereisagrowingconcernovertheseriousnessofthewasteoncampus.
⏹ Peopleingrowingnumbershavebecomeincreasinglyawareoftheseriousnessofthewasteoncampus
⏹ 模版句:
⏹ Whethersomethingshouldorshouldnotbedoneisamuchdebatedprobleminthatitaffectsmanypeople(intheireverydaylife).
⏹ 举例(2000.6):
⏹ WhetherthetestofspeakingEnglishshouldorshouldnotbetakenisamuchdebatedprobleminthatitaffectsmanyuniversitystudents.
⏹ 举例(97.6):
⏹ Whetherjob-hoppingshouldorshouldnotbedoneisamuchdebatedprobleminthatitaffectsmanypeople.
⏹ 正方观点:
⏹ Somepeoplearguethat
⏹ 反方观点:
⏹ Others,onthecontrary,claimthat
⏹ 正方观点(97.6):
⏹ Somepeoplearguethatdoingonejobdoesgoodtoone’scareerdevelopment.
⏹ 反方观点:
Others,onthecontrary,claimthatjob-hoppinghelpsoneacquirewidescopeofknowledgeandaccumulatemoreworkexperience.
⏹ 我的观点:
⏹ Carefulconsiderationleadsmetobelievethat
⏹ Itendtothinkthat…
⏹ Itseemstomethat…
⏹ Iamoftheopinionthat…
⏹ Iwouldtakeviewthat…
⏹ 第二段主题句:
⏹ TheexplanationforthisphenomenonmayincludeseveralfactorsandIwillexpressonlyafewofthemostimportantones.
⏹ ThereasonwhyIcannotacceptthejobofferedmayincludeseveralfactorsandIwillexpressonlyafewofthemostimportantones.
⏹ 三个层次:
⏹ firstofall;
⏹ inaddition;
⏹ furthermore.
⏹ firstandforemost,
⏹ besides,
⏹ lastbutnotleast
⏹ Inthefirstplace
⏹ Inthesecondplace
⏹ Inthethirdplace
⏹ 个人层面
⏹ 1.个人的兴趣爱好
⏹ Doingsomethingisofgreatinterest,foritaddscolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.
⏹ (02.6)Agreatmanyuniversitystudentsarefondofsurfingonline.
⏹ Surfingonlineisofgreatinterest,foritaddscolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife.
⏹ Asaresult,agreatmanyuniversitystudentsindulgethemselvesintheinternet.
⏹ 2.丰富/提高生活质量
⏹ Somethinghelpstoimprovethequalityofpeople’slives.
⏹ 例:
Theuseofprivatecarshelpstoimprovethequalityofpeople’slives.
⏹ 3.运动健身
⏹ Regularexercisesbenefitboththebodyandmind.
⏹ 4.社会责任感
⏹ Doingsomethingwilldevelopone’sstrongsenseofduty.
⏹ 5.参加活动,培养团队合作精神
⏹ Participatinginactivitiescandevelopasenseofteamspiritandcooperation.
⏹ 6.人际关系
⏹ Doingsomethingwillenhancemutualunderstanding.
⏹ 例:
Talkingwithmyroommateswillenhancemutualunderstanding.
⏹ 7.个人能力和职业发展
⏹ Doingsomethingwilldevelopone’scapabilityandhelpsonetostartanewcareer.
⏹ 例:
Workinghardwilldevelopone’scapabilityandhelpsonetostartanewcareer.
⏹ Gettingpropertrainingwilldevelopone’scapabilityandhelpsonetostartanewcareer.
⏹ 例:
Workinghardwilldevelopone’scapabilityandhelpsonetostartanewcareer.
⏹ Gettingpropertrainingwilldevelopone’scapabilityandhelpsonetostartanewcareer.
⏹ 社会层面
⏹ 1.促进经济发展
⏹ Ithelpstoimprovetheeconomicstrength.。
⏹ 例:
Therecentpolicyhelpstoimprovetheeconomicstrength.
⏹ 2.自然和社会资源
⏹ Itwillleadtogreatextravaganceofnaturalresourcesandsocialresources.
⏹ 例:
Clearcuttingwillleadtogreatextravaganceofnaturalresources.
⏹ 3.科技发展
⏹ Itisasymbolofhumanprogressanditextendsthescopeofhumanthinking.
⏹ 例:
Thedevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyisasymbolofhumanprogressanditextendsthescopeofhumanthinking。
⏹ 4、交通
⏹ Toomanycarsrunningonthestreetsleadtoairpollutionandnoisepollution.
⏹ 5.教育
⏹ 好处之一:
Getoneselfacquaintedwiththelatestdevelopmentinscienceandtechnology.
⏹ 好处之二:
Broadenone’sscopeofknowledge.
⏹ 6.旅游
⏹ Thetouristindustryhasplayedanimportantroleinmeetingtheculturalneedsofthepublicandcarryingforwardnationalculture.
⏹ 7.综合状况
⏹ Theprogressofoursocietyisbasedonharmony.
基本思路:
主题句+解释+举例(进一步拓展延伸)
⏹ Topic:
⏹ Somepeoplesuggestthatthegovernmentshouldinvestasmallamountofmoney,othersthinkthemuseumisafinancialburden?
Whatdoyouthinkofit?
⏹ 主题句:
⏹ 一个东西给我们带来的好处,对我们产生的影响,或人们普遍的对这一事物的看法。
⏹ 主题句举例:
⏹ 博物馆可以记录国家的历史
⏹ 1.Museumsplayanessentialroleinrecordingacountry’shistory.
⏹ 1.Admittedly,museums,ofcourse,playanessentialroleinrecordingacountry’shistory.
⏹ 对主题句解释:
⏹ 博物馆有很多代表一个国家过去的艺术品。
⏹ 2.Museumsusuallyhavegreatcollectionsofartisticobjectswhicharethesymbolsofacountry’sgloriouspast.
⏹ 2.Asisknowntotheworld,museumsusuallyhavegreatcollectionsofartisticobjectswhicharethesymbolsofacountry’sgloriouspast.
⏹ 举例:
⏹ 故宫博物馆里有很多文物。
⏹ 3.Forexample,theForbiddenCityMuseumhasacollectionofantiques.
⏹ 3.Forexample,theForbiddenCityMuseumhasahugecollectionofdelicateantiquesofartisticandhistoricalvalue.
⏹ 进一步拓展:
Museum对人们的影响
⏹ 影响之一:
通过参观博物馆,人们可以学到关于历史和文化的东西。
⏹ 4.Byvisitingmuseums,wecanlearnalotaboutourhistoryandculture.
⏹ 4.Itiswidelyacknowledgedthatwecanlearnalotaboutourhistoryandculturebyvisitingmuseumsinourleisuretime.
⏹ Itisatruthuniversallyacknowledgedthatasinglemaninpossessionofagoodfortunemustbeinwantofawife.
⏹ Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat…
⏹ Itiswellacceptedthat…
⏹ Itiswidelybelievedthat
⏹ Itisgenerallymaintainedthat…
⏹ 继续引申:
⏹ 有很多好处,例如可以完善人格.
⏹ 5.Aclearunderstandingofourhistoryandculturedoesgoodtothedevelopmentofwell-roundedcharacter.
⏹ 5.Itisaclearunderstandingofourhistoryandculturethatdoesgoodtothedevelopmentofwell-roundedcharacter.
⏹ 2006.12首次英语新6级作文题——TheImportanceofReadingClassics(阅读经典的重要性)
⏹ 提纲:
1.阅读经典对人的成长至关重要;
⏹ 2.人们越来越少地阅读经典,原因是……
⏹ 3.作为大学生,你应该怎么做。
⏹ 主题句:
⏹ 1.Therearealotofreasonsforit.
⏹ 理由之一:
学生缺乏兴趣·内容过时
⏹ 2.Inthefirstplace,manycollegestudentstakenointerestinreadingclassics,fortheyfindclassicsoutdated.
⏹ 理由一的延伸:
⏹ 3.Inotherwords,classicsdonotmeetwiththeirrequirementofreading.
⏹ 理由二:
学生太忙,没时间阅读经典著作
⏹ 4.Inthesecondplace,nowadays,manyuniversitystudentsareoccupiedfrommorningtillnight.
⏹ 5.Asaresult,itisquitedifficultforthemtosqueezesometimetoreadclassics.
⏹ 理由二的延伸:
⏹ 6.Sincemanystudentsdedicatethemselvestostudyingthecoursework,theypaynoattentiontoreadingclassics.
⏹ 理由三:
经典著作比较深奥,让人疲惫厌倦
⏹ 7.Inthethirdplace,thecontentsofclassicsareusuallyfilledwithabstruseconceptsandideas.
⏹ 理由三的延伸:
⏹ 8.Therefore,collegestudentsinvariablyfeeltiredandboredintheprocessofreading.
⏹ 总结段落结构:
8句话构成整个第二段
⏹ ①主题句
⏹ ②理由一
⏹ ③理由一的延伸
⏹ ④理由二
⏹ ⑤理由二的延伸
⏹ ⑥理由二的进一步解释
⏹ ⑦理由三
⏹ ⑧理由三的延伸
⏹ ①improvepeople’slivingstandards
⏹ ②increasethegovernmentrevenue
⏹ ③improvetheimageofourcountry
⏹ ④increasereputationandupgradethestatusintheinternationalcommunity
⏹ ⑤enhancemutualunderstanding
⏹ ⑥playaneducationalrole
⏹ ⑦maintainworldpeace
一、~~~the+~est+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)~~~themost+形容词+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)
例句:
HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad.
张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、Nothingis+~~~erthanto+V
Nothingis+more+形容词+thanto+V
例句:
Nothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、~~~cannotemphasizetheimportanceof~~~toomuch.
(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。
)
例句:
Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoo
much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...(不可否认的……)
例句:
Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourli
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