辅导资料写作.docx
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辅导资料写作
第一部分段落结构-------主题句和结尾句
练习一
一、指出下列各段的主题句:
1.Iwaseagertogetadaptedtothelifehere.Aftertalkingwithmyadviser,registeringforclassesandopeningmybankaccounts,Iwalkedaroundthecampusandtothenearbygroceries.Verysoon,InotonlyknewmywayaroundbutalsometallmyfellowChinesestudentsinthedormbuilding.Althoughitwasauniversitydormforinternationalstudents,mostoftheinhabitantswereChineseandIndians,andtherewereabout20to30Chinese.(adviser导师;register注册;grocery食品杂货)
Topicsentence:
2.Allthesedifferentformsofenergycanbechanged,oneintoanother.Thinkoflightning.Alltheelectricalenergyinitisgoneinaflash---changedintobrilliantlightwhichyoucansee,intoheatwhichburnswhateverisstruckbythelightning,andintosoundwhichyoucanhearasthunder.
Topicsentence:
3.Itisfairlywellknownthatwildanimalssurviveyetfromyeartoyearbyeatingasmuchastheycanduringtimesofplenty,thesummerandfall,storingtheexcess,usuallyintheformoffat,andthenusingthesereservestosurviveduringhardtimesinwinterwhenfoodisscarce.Butitisprobablylesswellknownthatevenwiththeirstoredfat,wildanimalsspendlessenergytoliveinwinterthaninsummer.Thesefactsaccountforhowwildanimalssurvivefromyeartoyear.
(survive生存;reserve储备;accountfor说明,解释)
Topicsentence:
4.Ibegantheletterofapplicationbypointingoutmysecretarialskills.Specifically,InotedthatItypeninetywordsperminuteandtakedictationatonehundredandthirtywordsperminute.
Next,Iindicatedmypastworkexperienceonthreesimilarjobs.Finally,Igaveasummaryoftheevaluationsofmyimmediatesuperiorsonthethreepreviousjobs.Inshort,Istressedmysecretarialskills,myexperience,andmyevaluationsintheletterofapplication.
(letterofapplication申请信;evaluation评价)
Topicsentence:
5.Thepracticesofourstateuniversitypromotethemale'ssociallife.Forexample,intheStudentCenterthereisaloungeformenbutnoloungeforwomen.Furthermore,twentyofthetwenty-twosocialorganizationsthattheuniversityofficiallyrecognizesareexclusivelyformen.Andlastyeartheuniversitybuiltfivenewdormitorieswithlargerecreationalroomsformenandrenovatedtwooldmen'sdormitorieswithoutenoughspaceforsocialactivitiesfornewcoedhousing.Ourstateuniversityobviouslytreatswomenunfairlyintheareasofsociallifeandathletics.Itdiscriminatesblatantlyagainstwomen’ssports.Thewomen’sswimteam,forinstance,ispermittedtopracticeinthelargeOlympicpoolonlyoneeveningaweekwhilethemen’steampracticesfiveeveningsaweek.Inaddition,thewomen’sbasketballteamisdeniedaccesstothegymnasium.Womenplayershavetopracticeonanoutdoorcourtandplaytheirgamesinalocalhighschoolgym.
二、选择合适的主题句:
1.Thesenseofhumorismysteriouslyboundupcharacteristics.AFrenchman,forinstance,mightfindithardtolaughataRussianjoke.Inthesameway,aRussianmightfailtoseeanythingamusinginajokewhichwouldmakeanEnglishmanlaughtotears.
A.Therearealwaysdifferentjokes.
B.Mybrotheroftenmakesjokes.
C.Jokes,despitetheirdifferences,havethesamehumor.
D.Whetherwefindajokefunnyornotdependsonwherewehavebeenbroughtup.
2.Retirementgivesoneafeelingofuselessness.Suchapsychologicalproblemoftenbringsphysicalproblems.Itisthefeelingofemptinessthatgraduallykillstheretired.Withretirementtherewillbeadecreaseinincome.Unlesstheyplancarefully,theretiredwillgetintoeconomicproblems.
A.Theretiredareaproblemofoursociety.
B.Peopleshouldnotretireuntilunabletowork.
C.Retirementcanbringmanyproblemsfortheretired.
D.Weshoulddosomethingfortheretired.
3.Theynowcandomostofthethingspeoplecando,thoughmostscientistsagreethatcomputerscannottaketheplaceofhumans.WhoknowswhatthePeopletodaywillhavetodecidehowtousethecomputersoftomorrow.
A.Computersareagreathelper.
B.Computerscompetewithmanforjobs.
C.Recentlytherehavebeengreatchangesincomputers.
D.Weneedgreatereffortstodevelopcomputers.
4.Forexample,therearesomanyidiomsinEnglish.Anotherexampleisthespelling.Learnershavetospendalotoftimelearningthembyheart.Andtheymustputpracticeintothefirstplace.Themoretheypractice,themoretheywouldbenefit.SoEnglishlearnersarerequiredtospeakmoreandreadmore.Englishbecomeseasyonlyinpractice.
A.YouhavetomakegreatereffortstolearnEnglishwell.
B.TolearnEnglishwell,youshouldpracticemore.
C.English,asalanguage,hasitsdifficultpointstolearn.
D.Englishisaspeciallanguage.
5.Thehumanbrainisatleast10,000timesmorecomplexthanacomputer.What'smore,computerscannotmakedecisionsontheirown.Theyneeddetailedinstructionsfromhumanbeingsinordertooperate..
A.Socomputersaregreatinventions.
B.Soacomputerisacomputer.
C.Sotheyneedfurtherdevelopment.
D.Socomputerscanneverreplacehumanbrainsaltogether.
三、在下列主题句的主题思想(关键词)下划线:
1.I11healthneednothaveonlyphysiologicalcauses;itcanhavesocialandpsychologicalcausesaswell.
2.Expertssaythereareseveralexplanationsforillfeelinginthemarketplace.
3.ThisexcitingnewwayoftravelingtoBritainisEurope'smostambitiousconstructionprojectinthiscentury.
4.Sometimesinlifewedothingsthatwemightnotfeellikedoing.
5.ThatissurelythehardesttimeIhaveeverexperiencedinmylife.
6.Theideaofrainmaking(人工降雨)isalmostasoldasman.
7.However,humancloning(克隆)wastheverythingthatcaughttheworld'simagination.
8.SomegrowingChristianschoolsjustaren’tasstrictastheyusedtobe,however.
9.Since1981,therehavebeennearly20attemptstocircumnavigate(环球航行)theglobeinaballoon.
10.Whatastupidmistake!
11.Thecomputervirushasbeenaheadacheforcomputerusers.
12.Therearemanytypesoffamilies.
13.Sincenohumansocietyexistsincompleteisolation,differentsocietiesalsoexchangeandshareculture.
14.Culturalexchangecanprovidemanybenefitsforallsocieties.
15.Althoughmarriagecustomsvarygreatlyfromoneculturetoanother,theimportanceoftheinstitutionisuniversallyacknowledged.
16.Theprovisionofhousingisabasicfunctionofeveryhumansociety.
17.Businessesareconcernedwithcommunicationinseveralspecialways.
18.Telecommunicationmessages(电信)canbesentinavarietyofwaysandbyawiderangeofdevices.
19.Intellectualpropertydiffersfromotherformsofproperty.
20.Digitaldevicessuchascomputershaveelectroniccircuitsthatcanbeturnedonandoffextremelyrapidly.
四、改写下列句子,使它们成为适合的主题句:
l.Poor:
Iamgoingtotalkaboutadvertisements.
Improved:
2.Poor:
Wearedependentuponthesun.
Improved:
3.Poor:
Waterisnecessary.
Improved:
4.Poor:
Ilikesports.
Improved:
5.Poor:
Learningaforeignlanguageisdifficult.
Improved:
五、给下列各段加上主题句:
1.Onefactoristheamount
ofsunlightreceived.Altitudeortheheightabovesealevel,alsodeterminesclimate.Theoceanshaveaneffectontheclimateofadjacentland.Inaddition,climateisinfluencedbygeneralcirculationoftheatmosphere.
2.Youshouldplanyourtimecarefullyinordertohaveadequatetimeforbothworkandplay.Whenyoubegintowork,youshouldfindagoodplacetoconcentrateonyourstudy.Beforeyoubegintoreadmorecarefully,itisbettertoskimfirst.Youshouldtakenotesandgooverthemregularlytomakethereadingmaterialmoremeaningful.Youshoulddevelopagoodattitudeabouttests.Improvingyourstudyhabitswillimproveyourgrades.
3.Intownsandinvillages,onfarmsandinfactories,machineshavemadelifeeasierthanitusedtobe.Themachinesuseenergy,andenergyisneededforheating,lighting,communications,carryinggoods--everything.Factoriesandindustrialplantsuseagreatdealofenergytomakethethingsthatweuseandbuyandsell.
4.Foronething,thefoodisgenerallycheap.AhamburgeratMcDonald’s,forexample,costsaboutonehalfasmuchasasimilarmealataregular"sitdown"restaurant.Anotheradvantageofthechainsistheirconvenience.Forbusyworkingcoupleswhodon'twanttospendthetimeoreffortcooking,fast-foodrestaurantsofferanattractivealternative.And,judgingbythefactthatcustomersreturninincreasingnumbers,manyAmericanslikethetasteofthefood.
5.AlbertEinstein,oneoftheworld'sgeniuses,failedhisuniversityentranceexaminationsonhisfirstattempt.WilliamFaulkner,oneofAmerica'snotedwriters,neverfinishedcollegebecausehecouldnotpasshisEnglishcourses.SirWinstonChurchill,whoisconsideredoneofthemastersoftheEnglishlanguage,hadtohavespecialtutoringinEnglishduringelementaryschool.
练习二
一、指出下列各段的主题句和结尾句:
1.Dinnerthateveningwasnotasuccess;AgnesReskerrefusedtoeatanything,whileMavisPellingtonatehermealinsilence.EveryonewaswaitingforTobermory.Aplateoffishstoodreadyforhiminthediningroom,buthedidnotcomehome.Nobodytalkedmuch,andnobodylaughed.Itwasamostuncomfortablemeal.
Topicsentence:
Concludingsentence:
2.Nowadaystelephonehasbecomeanii,dispensablepartofourlife.Wesay"Hello"toourfriendandrelativeslivingfarawayoverthephone.Wemakephonecallstoaskforhelpandinformationfromsocialservices.Andwepurchasefastfood,vegetablesandevenfamilyappliancesthroughphonecalls.Forbusinessmentelephoneisthemostimportanttooltoconductbusinessactivities.Whattelephonebringsusisefficiencyandconvenience.
Topicsentenc
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