怎样提升雅思写作水平之语法篇.docx
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怎样提升雅思写作水平之语法篇
怎样提升雅思写作水平之语法篇
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写作老师经验长谈如何提升雅思写作水平之语法篇
1.Theenvironmenthasbeendamagedseverely,weneedtoprotectourenvironment.
2.Theairinruralareasismuchbetterthanurbanareas.
3.Therearetwopeoplesitthereandtalkwitheachotherhappily.
4.Itisbenefittopeopleiftheycouldpersistonexercise.
5.KnowingthatstudentsmaybetemptedfromTVprograms,itisimportantthatstudentsshouldbesupervisedbyparentsathome.
6.Governmentneedstoprotectourenvironment.
7.Teachersalariesrosefrom70%in1981to80%in2001.
8,ThenumberofmarriedAmericansreducedfrom100000in1922to50000in1930.
9.ThepriceofiPhonereachedapeakwhichis3400rmbin1990.
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1.Theenvironmenthasbeendamagedseverely,weneedtoprotectourenvironment.
缺少and/so连接词
2.Theairinruralareasismuchbetterthanurbanareas.
比较对象错误
应该是....betterthanthatinurbanareas.
3.Therearetwopeoplesitthereandtalkwitheachotherhappily.
动词数量问题(更深层次是非谓语错误)
sit和talk都加ing
4.Itisbenefittopeopleiftheycouldpersistonexercise.
最简单粗暴但是很多同学犯的错误
benefit改成beneficial
5.KnowingthatstudentsmaybetemptedfromTVprograms,itisimportantthatstudentsshouldbesupervisedbyparentsathome.
逻辑主语的问题,逗号的后面应该改成
.......,parentsneedtosupervisestudentsathome.
6.Governmentneedstoprotectourenvironment.
government是可数名词哦
7.Teachersalariesrosefrom40%in1981to50%in1991.
40%和50%后面各加一个ofthetotalschoolspending(****自剑8T2T1)
8,ThenumberofmarriedAmericansreducedfrom100000in1922to50000in1930.
reduce表示的并不是具体数字的下降,改成简单的decline/decrease/drop即可
9.ThepriceofiPhonereachedapeakwhichis3400rmbin1990.
不要使用定从去描述句子,你可以用with连接
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关于雅思写作的语法水平提升
脑袋里面暂时就想到了这九个小句子,如果你觉得可以轻松找到8个句子全部的语法错误所在,那么理论上来说,你应该是具备了6.5及6.5分以上分数的语法水平,请注意我的措词,仅仅是语法水平,但这个语法水平是必不可少的。
如果有4~5个句子你可以比较轻松的找到问题,那么6分的语法水平应该是差不多的,这些问题是找我批改的作文里面最容易出现的一些简单问题(除了句子5稍微有一点点难),避免这些可以帮助写作6.5分以下的同学提高0.5分左右,当然,还有单词的拼写、可数or不可数(这个其实对我来说也是烦死人==)以及主谓一致等小问题,都要尽可能的避免。
原来有个学生听了我的课,跑去跟助教说“Panda老师说了,语法错误是没关系的,错了也不减分!
”我听到助教的反馈之后表示很无奈,因为我的原话是“如果你在一篇大作文or一篇小作文里面犯的所有错误控制在3~4个,那么考官如果大发慈悲or眼神不太好,其实并不会减分”。
我也发现有一些同学是只会听到对他们有利的话,至于是不是有条件or前提,他们不管==那么如果是要求7or7以上的写作分数,请你尽量保证整篇*不要出现语法错误吧亲~
雅思备考:
大作文观点解析之禁烟问题
Shouldsmokingbeprohibited?
Arguments
1.Smokingshouldbeprohibited,fortheWorldHealthOrganizationpointsonthatdiseaseslinkedtosmokingkillatleast2500000peopleeachyear.
2.Scientificresearchhadshownthattheriskofvelopinglungcancerincreaseswiththenumberofcigarettessmokedperdayandthedurationofthesmokinghabit,anditdiminisheswiththecessationofsmoking.
3.Smokingnotonlyleadstolungcancer,butmanyotherdiseasessuchasheartattacks,sorethroat,headache,chronicbronchitis~,pulmonaryemphysema~,etc.
4.Smokingisnotonlyharmfultothesmokerhimself(herself),butalsoresultsinthedeathsofnonsmokers.Statisticsshowthatpassivesmokingiscausing3000to5000lungcancerdeathsayearamongAmericannon-smokers.
5.AnAmericanscientistestimatedthatsmokerswhoaverageapackageadayfor20yearswillloseabouteightyearsoftheirlives.
6.Smokingisanexpensivehabit,forasmokerwhoconsumes10cigarettesadaywillhavetospendatleast40yuanamonth.
7.Smokinghasabadimpactonthepsyche~ofthesmokers.Ontheonehand,smokersrealizethebadeffectsofsmokingandarepersuadedfromtimetotimetogiveupsmoking.Ontheotherhand,manyofthemcanhardlyresistthetemptationtosmoke.Hencetheyoftenloseconfidenceinthemselves.
8.Childrenexposedtoparentalcigarettesmokingareputatahigherriskofdevelopinglungdiseaseslaterintheirlives.
9.Smokingnotonlypollutestheairbutalsomakesthestreetsdirty,forsomesmokersflick~theashofftheircigarettesandthrowcigaretteendseverywhere.
10.Smokingspeedsuptheprocessofagingandhelpscausewrinklesonpeoplesfaces.
Counter-arguments
1.Smokingshouldnotbeprohibited,forcigarettesgiveavastnumberofpeopleagooddealofpleasurealotofthetime.
2.Nicotine~canproduceatranquillizing~effectduringhighemotionalandshocksituations,and,therefore,helpstocalmpeopledown.
3.Smokingcounteracts~thedecreaseinefficiencythattypicallyoccursinboring,monotonoussituations.
4.Smokerscanimprovetheirperformanceincomplexsituationswhilesmoking.
5.Smokershelpincreasetherevenue~ofacountry.
6.Smokingkillsnomorepeoplethanepidemics~ortrafficaccidents.
7.Mostnon-smokersspendalotofmoneyonsnacks~,ahabitc123ngasmuchassmokingifnotmore.
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