家庭作文之英语作文nike的家庭情况.docx
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家庭作文之英语作文nike的家庭情况
英语作文nike的家庭情况
【篇一:
英语作文大学生追求名牌】
universitystudents’pursuitoffamousbrand
brandplaysaveryimportantroleinourcollegelife,
“whatbrandareyourshoes?
nike”,“today,janeandiwentdowntowntobuyaerkebrandclothes,weareveryhappy”andsoon,thistopicisacommonphenomenoninthecampus.
thediscussionofbrandisaninterestingthinginoursparetime.hereareafewexamples,first,myfriendsoftenasksomequestionsaboutbrand,
second,ioftenheardsomeofthebrandtopicduringclassbreak.third,ioftenseesomestudentswearingfashionableoncampus,thisculturehasbecomeasceneryofthecampus/iteichesthecampuslife
asamatteroffact,infact,italsohassomenegativeeffects,somecollegestudentsfamilyconditionisnotverygood,theyspendalotofmoneybuyingexpensiveandfamousbrandinordertosatisfytheirvanity,inmyopinion,weshould(rationally)dealwith/treatthefamousbrandwithwisdom,ithinkthisattitudenotonlyisfilialpietytoparentsbutalsoistorespecttheparentsoflabor
【篇二:
英语大赛作文范文】
(3)
followpositivefashions,resistnegativefashions.
韩蕊蕊
临淄雪宫中学
fashionsrefertothethingsthatmostpeopletendtodo.somefashionsarepositiveandmeaningfulwhilesomearenegativeandharmful.sowecan’tsimplysayweshouldfollowfashionsorweshouldn’tfollowfashions.it’stheeffectfashionshaveonsocietythatcounts.
whenitcomestoclothes,fashionsshouldnotbefollowed.whatotherswearmaynotfityou.also,youdon’tneedtochangeyourlikesanddislikesinordertofollowfashions.it’sstupidtorunafterfashionswithoutconsideration.whatclothesweshouldbuydependsonourfinancialability,ourtastes,ouridentityandsoon.ifeveryonefollowsfashionswithoutthinking,peoplewilllosetheirownpersonalityandoursocietywilllackthemotivationtodevelop.inanutshell,weshouldn’tfollowwearingfashions.it’simportantthatwedresswhatwelikeandfeelcomfortableinit.
fashionsalsoincludedonatingmoneyanditems.it’sthefashionthatweshouldfollow.wenchuanandyushuearthquakedestroymanypeople’shomes.aschinese,wehavetheres-ponsbility[*1]togiveahandtothem.tohelpthemrebuildtheirhousesandpickuptheircourage,weshoulddowhatwecan.atonetime,manypeoplegiveoutalargenumberofmoneyanditemswithouthesitation.wearegladtoseethatthe
fashionhasbeenformed.onnoconditionshouldwegiveuphelpingothers.thatfashionrepresentschinesespirits.everyonefollowingthefashion,[12]wewillovercome[*3]anydifficultiesandheadtothebrightfuture.
shouldwefollowfashions?
atsometime,weshould;atsometime,weshouldn’t.ifthefashionhasapositiveeffectonoursociety,itshouldbeencouraged.ifthefashiondoesharmtooursociety,itmustbe
resisted.it’stheprincipleweshouldinsiston.onlyinthiswaycanourcountrydeveloprapidly.treatfashionscorrectly,andeveryonewillliveabetterlife.
专家点评:
从文章的字里行间能明显感觉到该同学对于英语语言本身的休养较高:
包括词的选择使用,难句的把握,整体的流畅性,都是值得赞扬和学习的,这是一篇很优秀的文章。
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[*1]responsibility
[12]句子缺东西,再者与后句缺乏逻辑关系。
[*3]overcome
(2)
followfashionswithoutlosingyourself
赖绮玫
广州市执信中学
whenitcomestofashion,whatwillyoucomeupwith?
gucci,prada,channelornike,puma,addidas?
iftheseareallthethingsyoucanthinkof,ihavetosayyourdefinitionoffashionistooshallow[11].asfarasiamconcerned,followingfashionsisnotjustaboutchasinglabels,itpertainswithchoosingalifestyle,adjustingyourvaluesaswell,whichcanbeofgreathelptousaslongaswedon’tloseourownstylewhenpursuingit.
theadvantage[*2]offollowingfashionscaneasilybeseenfromhowthefashionscomeabout.let’stake[*3]thepopularityofjapaneseclothesadoredbysuchenormousnumberofpeopleis[*4]thatthedressesandshirtsarebeautifullydecoratedwithbows,laces,makingyounggirlsunabletoresistthetemptationtobuythem.aswecanconcludefromtheexample,itisbecausesomethingischarmfu[*5]lenoughtoattractpeoplethatitturnsintofashion,whichmakesittotallyreasonableforpeopletofollowfashionsastheycanbenefitfromit.
besides,itisanobvioustruththathumansaresocialanimals.such[*6]ishumannaturethatweliketogettogetherandcommunicatewitheachiother[*7],andinvariably,fashionsbecomeahottopic.therefore,followingfashionscreatescommonpoints[*8]amongpeople,leadingtomorecommunicationandharmoniousrelationship.ifyoukeepupwithfashions,iguess,youwillneverbeisolatedandleftsilent[*9]inaparty.
lastbutnotleast,fashionsactuallycontainvarietiesofnewideasoflife.theycanbeanewhealthylifestyle,thelatestinventionstoimprovelifequalityorsomenobel[*10]thoughtsofabettercity,allofwhichmaybecreativeindeed.[111]onlywhenyoufollowthefashionsandabsorbthesenewideas,canyoukeeppacewithtimesandenjoyyourlifebetter.
nevertheless,tofollowfashionsneveramounts[*12]toloseyourselfinthetideoffashions.itwillbeabsolutelystupidifyouhavenofeatureofyourownandjustfollowthestepsofothers.inmyopinion,keepingyourownstyleissomethingfoundamental[113]andessentialinfollowingfashions.
tosumupfromthefactsmentionedabove,wecansafelyreachtheconclusionthataslongasyousticktoyourownstyle,followingfashionsisboundtopresentyouwithamoreenjoyablelife.solet’scatchupwithfashions!
专家点评:
文章思路清晰,结构紧凑,开头和结尾紧扣主题,精干又有力,容易使读者对文章主旨的把握。
中间部分的逻辑性强,思路也很清晰,唯一不足的是在一些长难句的表达上出现了一些错误,有些句子让人很难理解。
在以后的写作中可以多关注长句子的练习。
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[11]不符合英语习惯,改为narrow是否好一些?
[*2]advantages
[*3]删去
[*4]lies
[*5]charming
[*6]改为it
[*7]other
[*8]是否用trend刚好?
[*9]alone
[*10]删去
[111]句子缺主语?
[*12]means
[113]拼写有误foundmental
(1)
volunteerwork,harmoniasswould
韩叶
江苏省张家港市张家港外国语学校高三3班
haveyoueverguidedapassengerlosinghisorherway?
haveyoueverdonateyourpocketmonkeytostrangerssufferingdisasters?
haveyoueverkeptahomelessouimal?
ifyourousweris‘yes’,then
congratulations[*1]youhavedonevolunteerwork.
tomymindyoudoneedtoexactlyjoinacertainorganizationformisnotimportant.[*2]volunteerworkmeanstheworkwewanttodotohelpothersoutofourheartswithostconsideringwhether[*3]itisrenording.tosumup,sympathy,sacrificepassion[*4]andwarmheartsmakeupvolunteerwork.andvolunteerworkreallymakestheworldbetter.
firstly,asfarasindividualsareconcerned,volunteerworkmakesthemtakeresponsibilitiesforthe
society.nowadays,mostfamilieshaveonlyonechild.andthelate90sareconsideredtobeasettishuselessgeneration.[*5]however,oneofmyfriendssaysthatvolunteenworkmademe[*6]mature.hewasoneofthevolunteersofbeijingolympicganes[*7].hegainedpatience,stungwillandanopenmindthroughallthetoughwork.andnowheunderstandsthat:
‘oneshouldhevergainwithoutpayling.’
secondly,tothesocietyitisalsosignifigant.withvolunteerwork,peoplefacingdifficultiesarehelped,poorpeoplearefinancidlyasisted,sothatthefrinctionwillbereducedandtheinterpersonalrelationshipswillbeimproved.howaharmonioussocietywillitbe!
thereisacouplelivinginbeijing.theybeganthein
volunteerworkwhentheywereonlycollegestudents.theywenttoamedicalcentertotakecareofandplaywithchildrenthereonceaweek.neitherwindnorsnowstoppedthem.however,onesundayin2007theydidntappear.andthereasonnessthat,thegirlgotcancer!
thebaykeptongoingtothecenteronsundaywhiletakingcaneofhisgirlfriendandworkingformedicalexpenses.thedoctors■sesandthechildnesweretoucheddeeply.theirstorywaspublishedandthedouationcamesoon.atthesametime,morepeoplewenttohelpchildrenthere.inthisway,theirspirittransferred.theirvolursteerworkwaspaidbacktothemselves,whichwasheverinaginedbythem.theirsympathywakedupothers.
laste[*8]ifirmlybelievethatanationfullofhelpfulrespousiblepeopleissurelyastrongoneaworldfullofspiritofsymporthyanddevotionissurelyabeautifulone.icallonallpeopletodovolunteerwork,whateveritis,whatevertheformitisin,justdoitandwecanharvestaharmoniousworldtogether!
专家建议:
有一定英语语感,但不是很强,中式英语有时还会出现,建议多读些英文原著,或看一些优秀范文,抓住里面的经典句型,自己多多练习。
专家点评:
专家点评:
文章以及疑问句开头,步步引出主题,很吸引人。
文章结构清晰,语言表达比较准确,但句式变化不多,有些句子结构不紧凑。
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[*1]这里应该用动词,congratulate,所以改为congratulateyoufordoingvolunteerwork
[*2]这句话头重脚轻了,最好写成tomymind,itisnotimportantto….
[*3]这里要用whetherornot,所以在句尾要加上ornot.
[*4]这里用sacrifice就表达清楚了,删掉passion.
passion是激情的意思。
[*5]在selfish后面加and
[*6]你朋友说是让他成熟,而不是你,所以要改为him
[*7]句型变换,改为,whowasoneofthe…不是更好吗?
[*8]用lastbutnotleast更地道
【篇三:
英语作文20篇】
范文赏析
(一)1.myviewonfakecommodities1.假冒伪劣商品的危害。
2.怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品。
myviewonfakecommoditiesnowadaysfakecommoditieshavefloodedalmosteveryinchofthemarket.whereveryouare,whateveryoudo,itseemsthatyoucanhardlyhavefallenpreytothem.inotherwords,itishighlyprobablethatyouhaveboughtsomeofthosefakegoodsorproductsofinferiorquality。
needlesstosay,fakecommoditieshavealreadydonegreatharmtooursociety.ontheonehand,theywillruinthegoodreputationofgenuineproductsanddisturbthebalanceofthemarket.ontheotherhand,theprevalenceofsuchproductshashinderedinterpersonalrelationshipandresultedinthedeclineofpublicmorality.asaconsequence,theyhavewastedexhaus
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