雅思英语作文 父亲在养育孩子的过程中也应受到重视 Fatherhoodmotherhood.docx
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雅思英语作文父亲在养育孩子的过程中也应受到重视Fatherhoodmotherhood
Fatherhoodoughttobeemphasizedasmuchasmotherhood.Theideathatwomenaresolelyresponsiblefordecidingwhetherornottohavebabiesleadsontotheideathattheyarealsoresponsibleforbringingthechildrenup.
Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?
Youshoulduseyourownideas,knowledgeandexperienceandsupportyouranswerwithexamplesandrelevantevidence.
ModelAnswer1:
(NeutralNotion)
Forninetotenmonths,awomanenduresthedrasticphysiologicalandemotionalchangesthatpregnancybringsabout.Becauseofthis,awomanhasthegreatestrighttodecideonwhethershewillhaveachildornot.Anideologyexiststhatbecausewomentakefullresponsibilityfordecisionsaboutchildbearing,shealsoisresponsibleforrearingthechild.Ibelievethatthisideaisabsolutelyfaulty.Firstly,decisionsonchildbearingmaybegreatlyaffectedbythewoman'schoice.However,otherfactorsarealsoconsideredsuchasacouple'sfinancialabilitytosupportachild'sgrowth.Asidefromthat,parenthoodisasharedresponsibility.Afather'sroleisnotlimitedtospermdonationbutalsoincludeschangingdiapersinthemiddleofthenight.Also,afathershouldalwaysbeinvolvedinchildrearingbecausethereareactivitiesthatarebestsuitedtobedonebyafatherfigure,suchasbringingthechildtoasportsevent.Consequently,achildwhorarelyseesone'sfathercreatesanegativeperceptionofhimandmaypossiblycreateastrongerrelationshipwiththemotheralone.Inaddition,womenaredifferentinthemodernera.Morewomenarebreakingthetraditionalviewthattheyareconfinedtothefourwallofthehomeasahousewife.Therefore,thereshouldbeajointagreementbetweenbothparentstodividethetasks.Tociteanexample,amotherwouldsendthechildtoschoolwhileafatherwillbeinchargeofpickingupthechildafterclass.Inconclusion,Ifirmlybelievethatitistimetoabolishtheideaofputtingtheentirechildrearingworkonwomen.Theideaofsharedparenthoodmustbeimplementedtokeepupwiththechangeinfamilydynamicsthatoccurredovertheyears.WordCount298
ModelAnswer2:
(NeutralNotion)
Ibelievethatchild-rearingshouldbetheresponsibilityofbothparentsandthat,whilsttheroleswithinthatpartnershipmaybedifferent,theyareneverthelessequalinimportance.Insomesocieties,ithasbeenmadeeasierovertheyearsforsingleparentstoraisechildrenontheirown.However,thisdoesnotmeanthatthetraditionalfamily,withbothparentsprovidingemotionalsupportandrole-modelsfortheirchildren,isnotthemostsatisfactorywayofbringingupchildren.Ofcrucialimportance,inmyopinion,ishowwedefine'responsibleforbringingthechildrenup'.Atitssimplest,itcouldmeangivingthefinancialsupportnecessarytoprovideahome,foodandclothesandmakingsurethechildissafeandreceivesanadequateeducation.Thiswouldbethebasicdefinition.Thereis,however,anotherpossiblewayofdefiningthatpartofthequotation.Thatwouldsayitisnotjustafather'sresponsibilitytoprovidethebasicsforhischildren,whilehiswifeinvolvesherselfintheeverydayactivityofbringingthemup.Rather,heshouldsharethosedailyduties,spendasmuchtimeashisjoballowswithhischildren,playwiththem,readtothem,helpdirectlywiththeireducation,participateveryfullyintheirlivesandencouragethemtosharehis.Itisthissecond,fuller,conceptof'fatherhood'thatIaminfavourof,althoughIalsorealisehowdifficultitistoachievesometimes.Theeconomicandemploymentsituationinmanycountriesmeansthatjobsaregettingmore,notless,stressful,requiringlonghoursandperhapslongjourneystoworkaswell.Thereforeitmayremainformanyadesirableidealratherthananachievablereality.
Answer3:
Traditionally,genderroleissuehasalwaysdiscriminatedwomenanditisconsideredawomantoberesponsiblefortheupbringingofchildren.Nowadays,thesetraditionsarechanginggradually.Itisagreedthatbothparentsshouldsharetheseresponsibilitiesandatthesametimeshouldsupporteachother.Thiscanbeprovedbylookingathowfatherswhospendthewholedaywiththeirchildrencanbeagoodmotivatorforthemandmothersarebecomingthebread-earnersforthefamily.Also,itisagreedthatfathersmotivatetheirchildrenmorethanmothersdo.Forexample,malesaremoreinterestedtowardssportsactivities.Firstly,somepeoplearguethatmothershouldtakecareoftheFamily,especiallythekids;howeverthesethoughtshavechangedoverthetimeandnowadaysfathershavestartedsharingparentalanddomesticresponsibilities.So,bytakingtheirchildrentosportseventssuchasfootballmatches,swimming,etc.willdevelopaninterestforsportsinthem.Thisshowsthatfatherscanmotivateachildtobecomeasportsperson.Secondly,thetraditionofwomenistostayathomeandbringingupchildrenhavechangedandwomenhavestartedtakingworkfromallfields,alongwiththistheyalsotakecareoftheirchildren.Forinstance,ithasbeenseenthatmanyworkingwomentakematernityleaveduringandaftertheirpregnancyperiodandcontinuetoworkaftertheseleaves.Somewomenprefertodoworkfromhomeifprovidedbytheiremployer.Insomecases,womenmayhavebettercareerprospectsthantheirhusbands.So,thefatherhadtotakepaternityleaveandbecomeahousehusband,whichisbecomingmorecommonnowadays.Thus,itisclearfromtheabovediscussionwomencanbeabread-earningpersonforafamily.Followingthislookathowbothparentsshareresponsibilityforcaringtheirchildren.Thus,ithasbeenproventhatfathersareequallyresponsiblefortheupbringingoftheirchildren.
Answer4:
Inthepast,itwasacommoncustomthattheonewhowasresponsiblefortheupbringingofchildren-wasthemotheronly;thefathers'responsibilitywastoearnthelivingsandprovideagoodlife.However,achangeinthebelieftookplaceinthepreviousfewyears;nowadays,somepeopleclaimthatfatherhoodshouldbeemphasisedmuchmore.Althoughsomepeopleseethatfathersmustcontributeinthebringingupofchildrenandit'snotonlymother'sresponsibility,otherpeoplestillseethatit'sonlymother'sresponsibility."Ofcoursemeandmyhusband,George!
"saidMissKarmenwhenshewasaskedwhowasinchargeofbringingupherchild,sheadded,"Oh,Ireallycannotdothisalone;mychildneedsbothofus".Ifachildinteractsandplayswithhismotheronly,thatwillleadtoimproperdealingwithotherpeopleincludinghisdad.Thefactthatfatherformoneyandmotherforupbringingisabsolutelyoutdated.Akidneedsboththefatherandmother'scarebutfatherwouldbemostlybusyatworkssoultimatelythemotherwouldhavetospendmoretimewiththekind.Butthefathershouldspendasmuchtimeaspossiblewithhiskidsaftergettingbackfromthework.Actually,somepeoplestilladheretotheirpointofviewregardlessthepriorinformationclaimingthatparentsmustcontribute,yetintheirway;eachoneisresponsibleforonlyonething.Wehaveanexample,RobertFrans,ateacherinahighschoolinAustralia;hesaid:
"WhyIhavetotiremyselfmore,it'smywife'sownbusiness".FormeIactuallythinkthatfatherhoodoughttobeemphasised,butnotasmuchasmotherhood.Ithinkmothers'shareinupbringingshouldbemorethanthatoffathers.
Answer5:
Intoday'ssociety,bothparentsplay'sanequalroleinthefamilylifetobringupthechildren.Itisimportanttosharetheirresponsibilitiesequallytomaketheirchildasagoodcitizenoftomorrow.Hence,Istronglyagreewiththestatementthatlookingafterthechildrenisthesharedresponsibilityofthepartners.Firstly,inthisadvancedworld,womenarealsoeducatedasmenareandinsomecases,womenarerathermoretalentedthanthemen.Itpavesthewayforthemtoworkaswellandbethebreadwinnersofthefamily.Moreover,nowadays,becauseofthehighlivingexpenseandalsoinordertomeetthebasicneedsofthechildrensuchasfood,clothes,housing,adequateeducationandsoin,itbecamemandatoryforbothmembersofthefamilytowork.Secondly,itisessentialforachildtoexperienceloveandcarefrombothfatherandmothertoattainagoodcharacter.Theideaisthatthefatherneedstofindleisuretimetospendwiththechildandmakehim/herenergeticbyteachingoutsidesportsinsteadofcomputergames.Likewise,themotherneedstotakecareofthebehaviourandshouldteachgoodmoralsoflife.Asaresult,thechildwillbecomehealthyphysicallyandemotionally.Ontheotherhand,therearemanychildreninthisworldlivingwithasingleparent.Althoughtheyseemtobehappierinfrontofthesociety,therewouldbesomethingtheylackintheirpersonallife.Iftheyweregivenanopportunitytosharetheirfeelings,definitelytheywillpointoutthevaluesoffamilyrelationships.Forinstance,theymustbesurethattheywouldhavedonebetterintheirlifeiftheywerebroughtupinalovingfamilywithbothmotherandfather.Toconclude,thereisasayingthat"Parentsarethebestrolemodelsfortheirchildren".Therefore,itisworthsharingtheirresponsibilitiesamongthemtoprovidebrighterfuturefortheirchildren.
ModelAnswer6:
(NeutralNotion)
EssayTopic:
Fatherhoodoughttobeemphasizedasmuchasmotherhood.Theideathatwomenaresolelyresponsiblefordecidingwhetherornottohavebabiesleadsontotheideathattheyarealsoresponsibleforbringingthechildrenup.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?
SampleAnswer:
Inmodernsocieties,womenhaveactivelyenteredintothelabourm
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