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历年六级作文范文
MilitaryTraining
ThereisnodenyingthefactthatithasbeenahotlydebatedtopicwhetherstudentsshouldattendmilitarytraininginChinainthepastyears.Opinionsonthisissuediffersharply.Someholdthepositiveview.Theysaythatthetrainingcannotonlybuildupstudents’bodiesbutalsotempertheirwillpower.Besides,throughthetraining,studentscandeveloptheirteam-spiritandsenseofdiscipline.
Others,however,holdtheoppositeview.Theysaythatashortperiodoftrainingasstudentsarehavingnowcannotworkwellinbuildinguptheirbodiesorstrengthentheirwill.Instead,weshouldlayemphasisontheirdailyexerciseandactivitiesforsuchpurpose.What’smore,asuddenincreaseofintensephysicalexercise,especiallyduringsummer,doesharmtostudents’healthandmayevencausedeaths.Whathappenedinthepastyearshasprovedthis.
Weighingtheprosandconsofthesearguments,Iaminclinedtoagreewiththeformerpointofview.Militarytrainingisnotonlyameanstostrengthenstudent’sphysique(体格)andwillpower,butalsoaneffectivewaytoenhancetheirsenseofnationaldefenseandfostertheirpatriotism.Thoughsomedeathshappenedduringthetraining,weshouldnotgiveupeatingforfearofchoking.Besides,thedeathsareperfectevidencethatstudentsneedmoresuchtraining.Ofcourse,measuresshouldbetakentoensurethattheleastharmisdonetothetrainees.
2011年6月英语六级真题作文
TheCertificateCraze
Thereisnodenyingthefactthatithasbecomeaprevailing(流行的)trendforpeopletotakepartinvariousexamswiththepurposeofobtainingcertificatesofmanykinds:
thatforCET-4orCET-6,thatforcomputerlevel,thedriver’slicense,etc。
Ofcoursepeoplepursuecertificatesforvariouspurposes.Someclaimthatowningthesecertificatescangivethemmoreedgeincompetition.Onemorecertificatemeansabitmorechanceofwinninginthejobmarket.Others,however,merelytakethispracticeasastimulusforthemtostudyorstudyharder.Theyassert(断言)that,byworkingforthosecertificates,theycanbroadentheirhorizonandenrichtheirknowledge。
Personally,Ibelievethatoneshouldchoosetolearnwhatheorshetrulylikesorreallyneeds,insteadofmerelyworkingforsomecertificates.Asforme,Ishallfocusmyenergyonafewfields,forIbelieveconcentrationofattentionandenergyisthekeytosuccess.Besides,keeninterestisthestrongestmotivationforstudy.Tobespecific,IwouldliketolearnKungfuandBeijingOperainmysparetime.Imayattendsomerelevanttestsandbeawardedcertaincertificates,buttheyarejustanaturalresultofmystudy,insteadofmymotivation。
Myopiniononcertificatecraze
Thegrowingtendencyamongcollegestudentstogetallkindsofcertificateshasnowevolvedintoacraze.Justrandomlyaskastudentwhatheorsheisbusilyengagedindoing,quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswerthatheorsheispreparingforacertificateofsomekind.So,why’sthecraze?
Thereasonbehindthisphenomenoniscommon—theenormouspressureoffindingajob.Facedwithaharshjobmarket,moststudentshavenochoicebuttoseekmorecertificatestoparlay(充分利用)theirqualifications.Anotherfactoristhatdiplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavilyintermsofsignifyingone’sability.Forthesakeofincreasingtheirodds(可能性)oflandingabetterjob,thestudentsarecompelledtorunfromoneexamtoanother.
ThoughIhaveanopenmindtowardthecrazeoncertificates,Isuggestthatstudentsshouldbemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates,sincetheydonotnecessarilytelltheirability.Instead,theyshouldbemoreinvolvedinlearningandcapabilityboosting,thus,opportunitieswouldcomequitenaturally.
文章点评:
这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。
本文先对学生的考证热进行简介,引出全篇;接着分析这一现象背后的原因;整体看思路清晰,逻辑严密,行文流畅,句式多变,用语较为地道。
本篇亮点表达:
Thegrowingtendency…hasnowevolvedinto…
bebusilyengagedindoing
Thereasonbehind…
harshjobmarket
havenochoicebutto…
parlaytheirqualifications
sth.weighsheavilyintermsof…
increasingone’soddsof…
beinvolvedindoing…
becompelledtodo…
haveanopenmindtoward…
capabilityboosting
本文有待提高之处:
1.文章结构上,能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”(提出问题、分析问题、解决问题)。
逻辑严谨,论证严密;句式表达灵活,用语较为地道。
2.微观语言点方面,有个主谓一致的方面的错误(diplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavily);有些语句稍显啰嗦,比quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswerthat…大可简化成you’dmostlikelybetoldthat…更好,意思没有丝毫减损,表达力反而增强许多;另外某些用语多重复,比如job多次出现;为了避免此类现象,文中的theenormouspressureoffindingajob不妨改为theenormouspressureofgettingemployed。
从整体看,本篇文章不错,值得参考借鉴,不过用语方面还有待提高。
PartIWriting
Thejobmarkettodayisincreasinglysophisticated,requiringworkerstohavespecializedknowledgeintheirfields.Asaresult,becomingcertifiedisatrendamongtoday’sjobseekingyouth.Moreandmorepeople,studentsespecially,lookatobtainingcertificationasameanstogettingabetterjoband,therefore,enjoyingbrighterfuture.
Thereareasmanycertificatesastherearefieldsofstudy.LawyerswilltaketheLSAT,businessmajorswilltaketheGMATtofurthertheirstudyintheUS,andthosewhostudyaforeignlanguage,likeEnglish,mighttaketheTOEFL,TOEIC,oranynumberofEnglishcertificationexams.
Isthisnecessary?
Or,isthe“certificationcraze”justatrendthatwilleventuallypass?
Imyselfhaveobtainedtwodifferentcertifications:
oneinJapanese(N2)andanotherinteachingEnglishasaforeignlanguage(TEFL).Bothofthesecertificationshavebeenbeneficialingettinggoodjobs.Therefore,itismyopinionthat,trendornot,theresultsofbecomingcertifiedarerealandcanbeinvaluableinopeningupfutureopportunities.
作文点评:
1.逻辑结构上,本文大体也是按照“提出问题(考证热的现象)”“分析问题(背后的动力)”和“解决问题(个人的观点)”的结构展开。
2.本文的亮点非常多
2010年12月英语六级真题作文
【作文真题】
1、当今社会,高校排名很流行
2、个人看法不同
3、我自己的观点
【作文范文】 Nowadays,universityandcollegerankinghasbecomeincreasinglypopularthoughoutthenation.AccordingtothesurvryconductedbyChinaDaily,anestimated85$universitiesarecloselyconcernedabouttheranking.Inotherwords,wecannotfailtonoticetheobvioustrendthatuniversityrankinghasbecomeasocialfocus,triggering(引起)awideconcernsacrossthenation,especiallyfromschoolcampuses.
Ahostofindividualsaredividedoverthisissueaboutuniversityranking.anarmyoffolksdeemthatwearesupposedtobeconcernedabouttherankingbecausetherankingisthesolestandardofmeasuringtheschool’scomprehensivelevel.Plus,whenchoosingtheuniversityfortheirkids,agrowingnumberofparentstaketherankingintoaccount.However,othersmaintainthatit’snotawiseandrationalideatoviewtheuniversityrankingastheonlystandard,putinanotherway,weshouldnotover-valuetheranking.Therankingistheoutwardstyleoftheuniversity.
Onmypersonallevel,however,rankingmattersmuchtoauniversity,butenhancingtheteachingandcomprehensivequalityisonthetopofuniversity’spriority,rangingfromthefacultytoteachingmethodstoteachinginstrumentsandsoforth.Onlyinthesewayscanwebulidupfast-pacedandflagshipuniversitysmoothly.
2010年6月英语六级真题作文
六级作文题:
DueAttentionShouldBeGivenTotheStudyofChinese
1.近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象;
2.出现这种现象的原因和后果;
3.我认为…。
范文:
Alongwiththestepofglobalization,moststudents’attentionhasshiftedfromChinesetoforeigncultures.SuchashiftbroughtongreatworriesamongpeoplebecauseitisnotgoodforthedevelopmentofChineseculture。
Theremaybeseveralreasonsaccountforwhythisphenomenoncouldhappen.Firstandforemost,theglobalizationgreatlystimulatedthespreadofforeigncultures,whichinturnstirredgreatinterestamongChinesestudents;second,collegestudentsare,tosomeextent,forcedtostudycertainforeignlanguagessoastopassexamsorfindgoodjobssothattheycouldnotspareanytimetostudyChinese;lastbutnotleast,schoolshavenostrictdemandonstudents’Chinesestandard.Nodoubt,neglectingthestudyofChinesewillultimatelyholdbackthedevelopmentofChineseculture,andChinesepeoplemaylosetheirculturalidentityinsuchacompetitiveworld。
Inordertochangethissituationandsaveouridentity,dueattentionshouldbegiventothestudyofChinese.Tobeginwith,governmentshouldputgreateffortsonthedevelopmentofChineseculturetomakemorepeopleproudofit;besides,collegesanduniversitiesshouldmakeexamsmorebalanced,notsimplyemphasizingtheimportanceofforeignlanguages;finally,schoolsshouldalsoattachgreatimportancetothestudyofChinese,makingitacompulsorycurriculum.Throughtheseefforts,Ithink,chancesofchangingthisphenomenonareprosperous。
2009年12月英语六级真题作文
Shouldparentssendtheirkidstoartclasses?
现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班;
1、对这种做法有人表示支持,2、有人并不赞成;3、我认为…
ShouldParentsSendTheirKidstoArtClasses
Childrenarethefutureofthenation,thepearlintheirparents’eyes.Hopingthattheirkidscanbecomethecreamofthecropamongothers,moreandmoreparentssendtheirkidstovariousartclassestoletthemlearnmore.However,peopleholddifferentopinionstowardthisphenomenon。
Somepeopleholdafirmpositionthatitisabeneficialthingforkidstoattendartclasses.There,kidscannotonlylearnsomeartskillsthatmayhelpfulforthemsomeday,theycanalsogetachancetoexpandtheirintereststoagreatextent,andtheirmindscanalsobebroadened.Besides,kidscanalsomakealotoffriendsthere,thustheircommunicationskillsmayalsobesharpened.Whilefortheothers,theyholdanoppositeopinion.Theythinkparentsshouldnotsendtheirkidstoartclassesblindlyagainstkids’will,becausethiswillgetadefinitelynegativeimpa
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