作文范文之雅思作文一边倒.docx
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作文范文之雅思作文一边倒
雅思作文一边倒
【篇一:
雅思作文高分写作模板-现象分析型和一边倒作文_雅思写作】
智课网ielts备考资料
雅思作文高分写作模板:
现象分析型和一边倒作文_雅思
写作
重点单词查看全部解释
awareness[?
w?
?
nis]想一想再看n.认识,意识,了解联想记忆x单词awareness联想记忆:
a+ware注视+ness→意识,知觉
feasible[fi:
z?
bl]想一想再看adj.可行的,可能的联想记忆x单词feasible联想记忆:
feas做+ible形容词“能…的”…可做的→可行的,合理的
unfold[?
nf?
uld]想一想再看v.展开,开放,显露
diverse[daiv?
:
s]想一想再看adj.不同的,多种多样的联想记忆x单词diverse联想记忆:
di分开+vers转+e→转开了→不同的
relevant[reliv?
nt]想一想再看adj.相关的,切题的,中肯的联想记忆x单词relevant联想记忆:
re再→lev提高,举起,变轻+ant→再举起→有关的;中肯的
prone[pr?
un]想一想再看adj.俯卧的,易于...的,有...倾向的联想记忆x单词prone联想记忆:
pro前,ne:
向前顷的
identify[aidentifai]想一想再看vt.识别,认明,鉴定
vi.认同,感同身
issue[i?
ju:
]想一想再看n.发行物,期刊号,争论点
vi.vt
indisputable[.indispju:
t?
bl]想一想再看adj.无可争辩的,无可置疑的
【篇二:
雅思写作动物类题目详解--一边倒写作方法】
雅思写作动物类题目详解--一边倒写作方法
野生动物是否应该被保护的题目最近又一次被雅思写作提及,对于这类表达同意或者反对的题目,一边倒的写法应该怎样写,完全反对该怎么写?
下面小编带大家梳理雅思写作中动物类一边倒文章的写法。
wildanimalshavenoplaceinthe21stcentury,soprotectingthemisawasteofresources.towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
第一个步骤是决定同不同意,还是部分同意。
我的建议是完全不同意。
我不认为这个题目我们可以选部分同意。
接下来,让我们组织一下四段的内容:
1.开头段:
题目复述(保护动物正确的),然后回答问题(完全不同意)
2.第一段理由:
为什么不同意。
比如说保护动物是我们的责任,动物有生活在地球上的权利
3.第二段理由:
为什么不同意。
比如说我们用很多资源去保护动物,但这并不算浪费资源
4.总结段:
重复观点/总结我们的答案
ok.接下来是最重要的了:
论点。
你能想想第二段第三段我们能列举哪些论据吗?
给你一个开头段的范例:
开头段(话题+一般性答案)
somepeoplearguethatitispointlesstospendmoneyontheprotectionofwildanimalsbecausewehumanshavenoneedforthem.icompletelydisagreewiththispointofview.总结段(重申我们的答案)
inconclusion,wehavenorighttodecidewhetherornotwildanimalsshouldexist,andibelievethatweshoulddoeverythingwecantoprotectthem.
请注意:
开头段和总结段要短小精悍,直截了当。
如果你要得高分,要在主体段两段下功夫。
下面是9分范文:
wildanimalshavenoplaceinthe21stcentury,soprotectingthemisawasteofresources.towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
somepeoplearguethatitispointlesstospendmoneyontheprotectionofwildanimalsbecausewehumanshavenoneedforthem.icompletelydisagreewiththispointofview.inmyopinion,itisabsurdtoarguethatwildanimalshavenoplaceinthe21stcentury.idonotbelievethatplanetearthexistsonlyforthebenefitofhumans,andthereisnothingspecialaboutthisparticularcenturythatmeansthatwesuddenlyhavetherighttoalloworencouragetheextinctionofanyspecies.furthermore,thereisnocompellingreasonwhyweshouldletanimalsdieout.wedonotneedtoexploitordestroyeverylastsquaremetreoflandinordertofeedoraccommodatetheworld`spopulation.thereisplentyofroomforustoexistsidebysidewithwildanimals,andthisshouldbeouraim.ialsodisagreewiththeideathatprotectinganimalsisawasteofresources.itisusuallytheprotectionofnaturalhabitatsthatensuresthesurvivalofwildanimals,andmost
scientistsagreethatthesehabitatsarealsocrucialforhumansurvival.forexample,rainforestsproduceoxygen,absorbcarbondioxideandstabilisetheearth’sclimate.ifwedestroyedtheseareas,thecostsofmanagingtheresultingchangestoourplanetwouldfaroutweighthecostsofconservation.byprotectingwildanimalsandtheirhabitats,wemaintainthenaturalbalanceofalllifeonearth.
inconclusion,wehavenorighttodecidewhetherornotwildanimalsshouldexist,andibelievethatweshoulddoeverythingwecantoprotectthem.
【篇三:
雅思作文】
雅思作文
一.辩论型题目
结构一边倒结构
topic:
somepeopleproposethatsmokingshouldbebanned.doyouagreeordisagree?
开头+理由一+理由二+(理由三)+结尾=5or4段
开头段3-5句(两种写法)
1.1句背景+对方观点及其一到两点理由+说出自己的观点
smokingisoneofthepressingproblemsthatwearetryingtosolve.somepeopleholdtheopinionthatthegovernmentshouldbansmokingcompletely.indeed,smokingisdetrimentaltopeople’shealthanditviolatestherightsandfreedomofnonsmokers.however,smoking,inmyopinion,shouldnotbebanned.
2.3句左右背景+说出自己的观点
smokingisoneofthepressingproblemsthatwearetryingtosolve.wecanoftenseealotofadultsandevenyoungpeoplesmokinginpublicplaces.medicalresearchesrevealthatthereisadefinitelinkbetweensmokingandsomeseriousdiseasessuchasheartproblemsandlungcancer.however,iamconvincedthatsmokingshouldnotbebanned.
理由段2-3段12句左右
1-2个理由段:
主题句(1句)+支持句(3句左右)
最后一个理由段:
写法一:
直接说出理由
写法二:
反驳对方对自己的攻击(两句左右对方对自己的攻击+3句左右反驳)
firstofall,tobaccoindustrycontributesmuchtothegovernment’srevenue.forexample,thegovernmentofbritishcollectsalargesumofmoneyfromsmokerstopayforitseducationalfacilities.ifsmokingisbanned,therewillbeagreatdropinthegovernment’sincome.inaddition,moreserioussocialproblemswillarise,suchasunemployment,becausetobaccoindustryemploysalotofworkers.
anotherreasonisthatsmokingbringssmokersalotofpsychologicalbenefits.itisastressrelieverandcanbringgreatpleasuretosmokers.furthermore,itcanstimulatetheircreativityandimaginationandhelpthemtocommunicatewithothers.onthecontrary,forsmokers,nothingseemsmoredifficultandpainfulthangivingupthehabit.inotherwords,thosewhostronglyapproveofthebanlaytoomuchemphasisontherightsofnonsmokers.theyignoresmokers’rights.
somepeoplemayarguethatsmokingisharmfultopeople’shealth.itissaidthatthereisacertainlinkbetweensmokingandsomeseriousdiseasessuchasheartproblemsandlungcancer.however,theharmthatsmokingbringstopeople’shealthisexaggerated.aslongaswesmokeinmoderation,itwillnotcausegreatharmtoourbody.inhistory,manyfamouspeoplebothsmokedandenjoyedalongerlifesuchasmaozedong,dengxiaopingandmr.churchill.
结尾段1-5句
重申观点(+重申理由)(+写点别的)
tosumup,idonotthinkthatsmokingshouldbebanned.thetobaccoindustry
makesalargecontributiontothegovernment’seconomy.smokingisbeneficialtosmokers’mentalhealth.moreover,thereisnoevidenceshowingthedefinitelinkbetweensmokingandfataldiseases.
结构二对称式结构4段
topic:
somepeopleholdthatcriminalsshouldbesenttoprison.someothersthinktheyshoulddosomethingelseoutsideprisonasthepunishment.discussbothsidesandgiveyouropinion.
开头段2-4句
1.1-2句背景+双方观点
2.3句左右背景
inrecentyears,therecordofcrimeratehasbeenconstantlyrenewed.aproblemtroublingthegovernmentsisthatthereareanincreasingnumberofcriminals.somepeoplebelievethatthemalefactorsshouldbeimprisoned.however,someothersarguethatthelawoffendersshouldbepunishedbydoingsomethingoutsidethejail.
中间段二、三段14句左右
1句概述+3*2
thereareseveralreasonswhyweshouldletcriminalsdosomethingelseaspunishment.inthefirstplace,theyarebetterrehabilitatedinthisway.doingsomethingforsocietyisagoodmeasure,whichnotonlypunishesthecriminalsbutalsoencouragesthemtobeginanewlifeaswell.anotherreasonisthatthelimitedjailspace.lettingcriminalsdosomethingoutsidejailsdecreasesthecosttothegovernment.finally,theimprisonmentofcriminalsdoesnotscareoffothercriminals.uptonow,thereisnoevidenceshowingthedirectlinkbetweentheimplementationofimprisoningcriminalsandthedeclineofthecrimerate.
however,furtheranalysiswouldmakeitclearthatcriminalsshouldbesenttoprison.firstofall,itcanensureasafelivingenvironmentforthelaw-abidingcitizens.forcriminalslikethieves,robbers,rapists,andmurderers,itisimproperandevendangeroustoletthemoutofjailsbecausetheystillposethreattooursociety.second,itisthebestdeterrenttothosepotentialcriminals.itwillmakewould-becriminalsthinktwicebeforetheycommitacrime.lastbutnotleast,itisagreatspiritualconsolationtobevictims.thosewhoareagainsttheimprisonmentlaytoomuchemphasisontherightsofmalefactors(罪人,坏人).theyignoretherightsofvictims.
结尾段3-5句
先旗帜鲜明地说出自己的观点,和第三段中的观点一致,然后必须各用一句话改写第三段中的每个理由。
然后还可以说点别的。
aftersomecarefulconsideration,iaminfavoroftheideathatweshouldretainthepracticeofsendingcriminalstoprison.itcanguaranteethesafetyofcitizens.itcanreducethecrimerate.furthermore,itservesasapunishmentforthemercilessoffenderswhileacomforttotheinnocentvictims.
辩论型题目“一边倒结构”与“对称式结构”比较:
有些辩论型题目只能使用“对称式结构”,不能使用“一边倒结构”(如discussbothsidesandgiveyouropinion)。
“对称式结构”比“一边倒”结构好写,“一边倒”结构起评分高。
二.解释型题目
结构一基本同一边倒结构5or4段
开头+reason1+reason2(+reason3)+solutions
topic:
itisgenerallyacknowledgedthatfamiliesarenownotascloseastheyusedtobe.givepossiblereasonsandyourrecommendation.
第一段
1.3句左右背景+1句引起下文
2.0-2句过去+1-4句现在(其中有一句现在可以改写题目)
inthepast,familywasaveryimportantconceptinpeople’sminds,anditwasthecenterofmanypeople’slives.nowadays,however,therelationshipbetweenfamilymembersisnotascloseasbefore.therecordofdivorcerate,accordingtoasurvey,hasbeenconstantlyrenewed.asfarasiamconcerned,thefollowingreasonsshouldbetakenintoconsideration.
原因段2-3段
1个主题句+3句左右支持句
thefirstreasonisthatpeoplespendmoretimeontheirstudiesandwork.nowadays,peoplefacefiercecompetitionandsufferfromgreatpressure.asaconsequence,theyhavetodevotemoretimeandenergytotheircareers.somepeoplearetoobusytosparetimefortheirfamily.whatismore,manyjobsrequirepeopletoworkinothercitiesandmanychildrenhavetoleavetheirparentsatanearlyagetostudyorworkelsewhere.astimepasses,thesepeoplebecomeemotionallyestrangedfromtheirparents.
anotherreasonisthatthereareanincreasingnumberofentertainmentsavailable.hightechnologybringsmodernpeoplemoreinterestingthings,whichcaneasilyattracttheirattention,suchaswatchingtv,surfingtheinternetandplayingvideogames.consequently,peopleareaddictedtotheseactivities,totallyneglectingthefeelingoftheir
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