教案34雅思真题与范文解析一.docx
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教案34雅思真题与范文解析一
教案34-雅思真题与范文解析
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第34讲:
雅思真题与范文解析
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一、复习提问
经典句型造句练习
二、新课讲解
一雅思四分作文
流行运动,例如世纪杯等国际运动,在增加国家凝聚力和缓解国际紧张起到很大的作用,你是否同意此种观点?
Idisagree
Nowadays,footballisthemostpopulargameintheworld.Wecanfindtherearemanydifferentteamswhoplaysthisfootball.Therearedividinginto3division:
divisionone,divisiontwoanddivisionthree.Eachdivisionhavedifferentskills.Theskillsthattheyhavearedependonthemanager.Heistheonewhoteachestheplayerhowtoplay…..
Thereareothersportgamesliketennis.Tennisisalsopopular.Inplayingtennistherearealsohaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.Thisgamesshows
forillegalthingslikedeadorliveanimalsorsomesculpture.
TosumupIthinkinternationaltravelingisagoodthingbutpeoplemustrealisethatthereissomethingelsebesidesthem.Theyneedtoknowthatfloraandfaunaneedstobeprotected.Peoplehavetoenjoytheirholidaysbutalsowprotectenvironment.
本篇文章论点表达清楚,词语运用灵活,运用了例如“Secondly”and“Furthermore”等连词,但存在个别拼写错误,例如第二段“seilsmens”及句式简单的不足,几乎都是主谓结构的简单句,例如,Manytouristsarelivinggarbagejustanywhere.Someofthemwan’tanexoticsouvenirsotheypayforillegalthingslikedeadorliveanimalsorsomesculpture.
三雅思7分作文
Tourismisaverybigindustryinthemoderntimeandisgrowingquiterapidly.Thousandsofpeopletraveleverywheretovariousdestinationseveryyear.Argumentshavecomeupregardingthebenefitsandnegativeimpactsoftourisminplacesandonitslocalinhabitantsandenvironment;however,Ibelievetherearemoreadvantagesthandisadvantagesofinternationaltourism.
Peopletravelforvariousreasons;wetravelforbusinesspurposes,holidays,visitfriendsandrelativesetc.Travellingismostlyseenasarecreationalactivity.Tourismhasmanyadvantages.Tourismcanplayatremendouspartinacountryseconomy,themoretouristsvisitacountryandspendmoneythere,thebetteritisforthecountry;thatwaymoremoneyiscirculatedwithinthecountryandeventhestabilityoftheircurrencysrateofexchangepersistsifnotimprove.Vendorsandshopsgettosellmoregoodsandmakeanincome.Tourismalsohasitsnon-monetaryadvantages;itbringsculturesandpeoplecloser.Peoplefromallaroundtheworldgettosharetheirculturewitheachotherandevenlearnmore.Thisisagoodopportunityineducation.
Tourismseemstohavesomedisadvantagestoo;However,Ibelievetheproblemscausedbytourismarenotsomethingthatcannotbesolvedorprevented.Alotofpeoplebelievethattourismcandestroyordeviatecultureandcausesquiteanimpactonvisitedlocations,suchaspollutionandlittering.Peoplecanadheretotheirownbeliefsandwayoflifeiftheywantto;noonecanreallyforcefullyinfluencesomeonetochangefromtheirmoralsandethics.Pollutioncanbeavoidedbyincreasingusageofenvironmentalfriendlyvehiclesusedfortoursandrents,warningsandvisualeducationonlitteringandsmoking,specifictimescanbeallocatedfortourstocertainareas,suchaspeaktimeswherelocalinhabitantsfeeluncomfortableduetotoomanyforeigners.
Wherethereareproblemstherecanalwaysbesolutions.Tourismbringsgreatamountofadvantagesforanyplaceinmanywaysandisa“win-win”exchangeprocess.Theveryfewproblemscausedcanalwaysbeavoidedortakencareof.Ibelievetourismshouldbehighlypromoted,speciallyintraditionalandpoorcountrieswithnaturalbeautysuchasThailand.
本篇作文论点清晰明了,句式运用灵活,单词拼写或是语法都没有出现大的纰漏,所以得到雅思作文考试的较高分数,7分。
四雅思6分作文
贫穷国家在健康,教育和贸易的发展是非常关键的,而且富裕的国家应该担任着帮助穷国的责任,你是否同意此观点?
Inbalancingtheworldeconomicgrowth,theunderdevelopmentofthethirdWorldNationshavebeendrawntotheattentionofthedevelopedcountriesoftheWestern.Thusgovernmentalpoliciesandinterferenceintheagriculturalbusinessofthepoorernationsweremadetosecuretheirdominantsourceoftheeconomy.Manydiscussionsamongeconomistsandpoliticiansalsoputtheirfocusontheotheraspects.Thatis,toimprovethehealth,educationandtradeforthedevelopingcountries.Howevertheimprovementscannotbemadebythesecountries,butmoreexternalassistanceandaidsshouldbedone.
Becauseoftheshortageoffoodsupply,thepeopleinpoorernationsareesilypronetodisease,hungeranddeath…….
Iftherichercountriescanbemoreseriousabouttheessentialissuesofhowanationdevelops,andwellconsiderthespecialsituationsandcircumstancethosepoorernationsarefacing,theimprovementswillbemoreefficientlymade……
该篇文章表达了作者自己的观点,但论证不充分。
文章结构清晰,句子形式多样化,但存在语法和连接的不足,例如Manydiscussionsamongeconomistsandpoliticiansalsoputtheirfocusontheotheraspects.Thatis,toimprovethehealth,educationandtradeforthedevelopingcountries.
三、课后作业勤劳的蜜蜂有糖吃
背诵常用句子及造句
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