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重要性写作的重要性

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写作的重要性6分最低限，只要结构不出错，得分应该为9分。

评判作文

四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。

内容不跑题即可，注意：

1.不要妄图以情动人；2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。

结构上牢记总分总：

先写主题句（TopicSentence），再写分论点，最后写总结句（Conclusion）。

语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。

基本表达

人们认为：

itisgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat

越来越：

beincreasingly+adj.,beontherise,thegrowingnumberof

万能理由（Omnipotence）

1.方便：

convenient/convenience

2.效率：

efficient/efficiently/efficiency

3.节省和浪费：

savetime/money/space;economical,thrift

wastetime/money/space;costly,lavish

4.人的心理健康：

independent,cooperative,competitive,

considerate,confident,creative,sociable,

perseverance;selfish,isolated,conserative

5.人的身体健康：

health,disease,strong,strength,energetic

6.娱乐：

colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainmentm,relax

tired,boring,lonely

7.环境：

environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty

8.安全和危险：

safe,danger,risk

9.经验：

experience,socialexperience,enterthesociety

10.人际：

humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely

写完之后修改注意：

（内容方面尽量不要修改）

1、字母大小写

2、怪符号

3、单词拼写

4、主谓一致

5、动词时态

6、名词单复数

实例一

题目：

Bicycles――AnImportantMeansofTransportinChina提纲：

（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及

（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途

Score:

8

BicycleisanimportantmeansoftransportinChina.TheimportantreasonofitistheeconomyofChinese.TheuseofbicycleinChinaiswidelybecausepeopleinChinahavenothighwage.Theycanonlyaffordabicycle,andtheyhavenomoneytobuyacarwhichistooexpensive.SoChineseusuallybuyabicycle,anduseittogotowork,orgototravelandsoon.TheotherreasonisthelargepopulationofChina.Allthesemadethebicyclebecometheimportantmeansoftransport.

Thebicycle,comparedtothecar,isnottooexpensiveanditiseasytolearnandtouseanditcansavethesurfaceofputtingit.Itdoesn’tasktobuildthegaragelikecar.ThispointisveryimportanttoChina,becauseofthelackofland.Itisn’ttooexpensive,soChinesecanaffordit.Itdoesn’tneedanyoil,anditcan’tcausethepolusion.Allofthesearethegoodneedscomparedtothecar.

Inthefuture,bicyclewillbewidelyused.Anditwillbeingooddemand.Peoplewillproducemuchmoremodernbicycles.

Score:

14

BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople--manandwoman,oldandyoung--ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalled“thekingdomofbicycles”.

注：

1.第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。

2.Duringtherushhour分词结构开头。

3.破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。

Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.

注：

1.Comparedwithcars分词结构开头。

2.besuperiorto/beinferiorto优于/低于

3.thirst,second,third英语语言有层次感，信号词

4.cheap便宜，最好用inexpensive

5.begoodforhealth对健康有好处（万能理由）

6.Moreover表示递进

Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.

注：

promising有前途的apromisingyoungman

Score:

11

Theremillionsofbicyclesintoday’sChina.Bicyclesareveryimportantmeansoftransportinpeople’sdailylives.Becausetorideabicycleisverysimple,tobuyabicyclewillnotcostsomuchmoney,toparkabicycleneedsjustasmallroomandtorideabicycledoesnotneedoilbuttherider’sstrength,bicyclesarepopularallovertheworld,especiallyinChina.

注：

第一句应该用therebe结构

Comparedwithacar,abicycleismuchcheaper.ItismoresuitableforChinaasadevelopingcountry.Andabicyclehasalmostcausednopollutionbutacarhas.Onthecontrary,abicycleistooslow,itcostsmoretimesthanacar.

IthinkthepopulationofChina’sbicyclewillbekeptforthelongrun.Becauseitwillbereplacedbyacar,abusandsooninsomedevelopedareasinChina,anditwillbemadeawideuseinthedevelopingareasinChina,thenumberofbicyclesinChinawillbethesameastodaybutIbelievethatit’squalitywillbeimproved.

I、对比观点选择题：

1.有人认为……；2.另外一些人认为……；3.谈谈你的观点和看法。

（最好写成4段）

实例二99年6月真题

ReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?

Outline:

1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书3.我的想法

Howshouldweread?

Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?

Everyonehashisownview.

Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What’smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn’treadthem.Sincewecan’treadallthebooksandweshouldn’treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.

Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.

Who’sright?

Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.

典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：

（启）ParagraphI：

（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点；

（2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。

Score:

14分

Howshouldweread?

Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?

Everyonehashisownview.（启）

注：

第一句提出问题，第二句提出两种见解

典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：

（承）ParagraphII：

（1）提出一种观点或优点；

（2）本段的支持性分论点；（3）本段总结（可以省略）。

Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What’smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn’treadthem.Sincewecan’treadallthebooksandweshouldn’treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.（承）

注：

1.本段总分总结构

2.theyarguethat=theythinkthat

3.withthedevelopmentof...随着……的发展

4.what'smore递进关系，moreover

5.bad=pornographic色情的&violent暴力的

典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：

（转）ParagraphIII：

（1）承上启下的过渡句；

（2）提出另一种观点或缺点；（3）本段的支持性分论点（4）本段总（可以省略）。

Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.（转）

注：

1.But转折词（信号词）

2.theyemphasizethat=theythinkthat

3.today'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas现代社会今昔非比

4.许多知识awiderangeofknowledge/alargescopeofknowledge/muchknowledge；

获取知识acquire/getknowledge

5.knowsnothing→little；hemaybeuseless→hemaynotbeofgreatusetothesociety后者比前者更委婉

典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：

（合）ParagraphIV：

（1）平衡两种看法；

（2）给出自己的观点。

Who’sright?

Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.（合）

Score:

11分

Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.

注：

结构非常好，可以套用。

Thosepeople,whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,believethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadbooks.

注：

1.“people,who...,”应去掉逗号，改为限制性定语从句。

2.asmanyasbadbooks改为asmanyasbadones

3.leadustothewrongway改为leadsb.astray

4.theysuggestthat=theythinkthat

5.touch碰（闪光点词汇：

如教材P7：

shoulderingtheresponsibilityofdoingsth.肩负起责任）

But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,theycaneasilycometotheconclusionthat“toknowmore,toreadmore”.Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.

注：

1.hold认为同样表示“think”的词还有argue,emphasize,believe,suggest,claim,insist,maintain,agree,hold

2.thebestbook在西方国家是“圣经”的意思

3.toknowmore,toreadmore错误，中式英语

Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.

范文22.IsTelevisionaBlessingoraCurse?

Now,itisgenerallyacceptedthattelevisionplaysanimportantpartinpeople’slives.But,thereisanongoingheateddiscussionastowhethertelevisionisablessingoracurse.

注：

itisgenerallyacceptedthat人们通常认为

Asisoftenpointedoutbysomepeople,televisionkeepsonebetterinformedaboutcurrentevents,allowsonetofollowthelatestdevelopmentsinpoliticsandscience,andoffersanendlessseriesofprogramswhicharebothinstructiveandstimulating.Themostdistantcountries,thestrangestcustomsandthemostattractivescenesofnaturearebroughtrightintoone’sroom.

注：

1.Asisoftenpointedoutbysomepeople=Somepeoplethinkthat

2.“使……”不用make，而用keep,allow,offer

However,otherpeopleinsistthattelevisionisacurseratherthanablessing.Theyarguethatithasbroughtaboutmanyseriousproblems.Themajoroneisitseffectsonyoungpeople.Theyarenowsousedtogettingtheirinformation,educationandentertainmentfromtelevisionthattheirliteracyaswellasphysicalabilityhasbeengrea