四级作文写作模式.docx
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四级作文写作模式
ParagraphWriting
1.写作模式(各抒己见)
1)Whenitcomestosth.,people’sideasarenotcutfromthesamecloth.2)Somepeoplehold/arguethat…(观点一)3)Theybasetheirargumentonthegroundthat…(理由)4)Butothersreacttotheproblemtheotherwayaroundandcontendthattheoppositeisjustreasonableorright.(观点二)5)Fromtheirangleofview,…(理由)6)Iamoftheopinionthat…(我的看法)7)…(理由)8)…(结论句).
2.DoingSth.—MyMostRewardingExperience(理由陈述)
写作模式
TopicSentence
1)Asoneofmymostrewarding
experiences,doingsomethinghas
broughtalotofbenefitstomylife.
Detail1
2)Forone
thing,…
(理由I)
3)Unlike…,
itoffersme
much
freedomto
Detail2
4)For
another…
(理由II)
5)Through
…,Ihave
more
chancesto
…理由
Detail3
6)Andthe
most
amazing
resultof
doingso
isthat…
(理由III)
7)NowI
tendto…
Conclusion
8)Insum,
thereisnot
anythingin
…(mylife)
thatis
more
beneficial
thandoing
sth.
3.写作模式(影响分析)TheEffectofSth.uponOurSociety
1)Theeffects/influences/impacts/markofsth.onourlife/societyare(is)positive/negative/profound/far-reaching/amixedone.(主题句).2)Ontheonehand,……(分析I).3)……(进一步阐述).4)Ontheother,(分析II).5)……(进一步阐述).6)Onthewhole,_______(分析III).7)……(进一步阐述).8)Therefore,_________(结尾句).
4.TheImportanceofSth.toSb./Sth.Else
TopicSentence:
1)Theimportanceofsth.isnowdraw-
ingmoreofourconcernthanever
before.
Detail1
2)Tobegin
with,ithas
astrong
holdon…
3)…(进一
步阐述)
Detail2
4)Besides,
itservesas
alitmus
testfor…
5)…(进一
步阐述)
Detail3
6)Andmost
ofall,ithas
thepowerto
determine
whetheror
not…
7)…(进一
步阐述)
Conclusion
8)Inshort,
wherethere
isabetter
employment
ofsth.,
therewillbe
morehope
of…
5.HowtoBreakwithSomethingUnwanted(建议类)
1)TopicSentence:
Ifyoufindithardtogetridofsth.,youarenotalone,formanypeoplehavetriedtobreakwithsth.butwithoutanysuccess.
Problem:
2)Likeother
things,sth.,once
youhavebecome
addictedtoit,is
hardtobreak.
3)For
instance,...
Solution:
4)Ifthereis
everyreason
foryoutorid
yourselfofit,
hereishow:
5)…(方法I)
6)…(方法II)
7)…(方法III)
Evluation
8)Aslongas
youclingto
thesteps,you
willbeamazed
athow
effectivethey
are.
6.ContributorstoChanges/Success/FailureinSth.(changes:
decline/rise/improvement,etc)(原因分析)
写作技巧(原因分析)
1)Justaswhathashappenedtoanythingintheworld,manyfactorsleadtothechangesinsth.2)Inthefirstplace,…(原因I).3)…(进一步阐述).4)Inthesecond,…(原因II)5)…(进一步阐述)6)Andaboveall,…(原因III)7)…(进一步阐述)8)Ourlistofcontributorscouldgoon,buttheforegoingonesarealreadyenoughtogiveusadeepinsightintothechanges.
7.写作模式(图表作文)
1)Ascanbeseenfromthegraph,therehavebeensharpchangesintheagedistributionofdrugaddictsoverthepast20years.2)Tobeconcrete,theteenageaddictsonlymadeup10percentofallthedrugstersin1982whilethisratioroseupto65in2002.3)Thesechangesaredisturbing/distressing,butthecausesforthemarenothardtofind.4)Firstofall,…(原因I)5)Second,…(原因II).6)Andaboveall,…(原因III)7)…(进一步阐述)8)Tosumup,…(结论句).
8.WhyISee/ChooseSth.overSth.Else(要求:
从选出
两种进行对比分析,并阐明你的选择倾向和理由)
TopicSentence:
⑴Ifmychoicewererestrictedbetween(doing)sth.and(doing)sth.else,theformer
/latterwouldholdmoreattractionforme.
Comparison1
2)Forone
thing,…
By
contrast,…
Comparison2
4)For
another,…
5)Incontrast
tothat,…
Comparison3
6)Andthe
moststriking
difference
betweenboth
liesin…
7)…(进一步
阐述)
Conclusion
8)Fromthe
comparisons
andcontrasts
above,anyone
canconclude
thatmypre-
ferencefor
sth.ismore
reasonable.
.
9.写作模式(批驳分析)
1)Doingsth./Sth.issopopularinoursocietythatmanypeopleregarditasanaturalthingwehavetolivewith.(错误观点)2)Underlyingtheirviewisthegroundthat…(理由I)3)Furthermore,theyarguethat…(理由II)4)Adeeperinsightintotheproblem,however,canfindthat…(批驳分析I)5)Ifallowedtorunitscourse,itwould…(进一步阐述)6)Ontheotherhand,…(批驳分析II)7)Itmustbekeptinmindthat…(进一步阐述)8)Thus,noroomistobeleftfor(doing)sth.inoursociety.
10.写作模式(建议类)
1)Intheface/event/caseof…,whatshouldwedo?
2)Inmyopinion,thefirstthingofthefirstisto…(建议I)3)…(进一步说明)4)Whatalsocountsmuchtothismatteris…(建议II)5)…(进一步说明)6)Andthemostimportantforoneis…(建议III)7)…(进一步说明)8)Insum,…willdeterminewhetherornotonewillprepareoneselfbestfor…(结论句).
Usefulexpressionstointroduceexamples
¯forexample/forinstance
¯…isoftencited/quoted/takenasanexample.
¯Agoodcaseinpointis….
¯Thisoffersatypical/concrete/dramatic/striking
example….
¯Toillustratethis,wemaytake…asanexample.
¯History/Oursocietyisfilledwiththeexamples…
¯…shows/exemplifies/illustratesthis.
¯Thisisshown/exemplified/illustratedbythestory
of…
¯Asforas…beconcerned,thehistoryof…show
manyinstances(inwhich)…
¯…canserveasanexample.
Usefulexpressionstoshowdifferences:
¯IncontrasttoA,Bis….
¯Inspiteoftheirsimilarities/differences….
¯Aisnotexactly/entirely/quite/thesameasBin
that….
¯AistotallydifferentfromB.
¯AandBaredifferent/dissimilarinevery
respect/inmayways.
¯Ontheonehand,A…,whileontheother,B….
¯A…,whereasB….
¯A…,butthesamecannotbeappliedtoB.
Usefulexpressionstoshowsimilarities:
¯AandBaresimilarin….
¯AandBhavestrikingsimilarities.
¯AandBseemtohavemuchincommon/some
commonfeatures.
¯AcomparisonbetweenAandB
suggests/shows/provesthat….
¯A…,andthesameistrueofB.
¯AbearssomeresemblancestoB.
Commonlyusedwordsandexpressionsforeffect:
Theeffectisevident/obvious…
Itwillexertaprofoundinfluence…
Itmaycauseasweepingchange…
Itleavessomeseriousconsequences…
Itmaygiverisetoahostofproblems…
Theimmediateresultitproducesis...
1.WhatAttitudeShouldWeTaketoSth(批驳分析类)
1.社会上对某事物的错误观念
2.分析批驳其错误所在
3.给出如何看待该事物的建议
写作模式(批驳分析类)
1)Withthearrival/birthof…,sth.isbecomingmoreandmore…inourlife.2)Hit/Affectedwiththistrend,some/manypeoplecometobelieve/contendthat...(错误观念)3)Buttheirviewpoint/beliefcouldnotarouseanyechoinmymind.(作者的立场)
4)Itistruethatsth.isakeyingredientinone’s…(让步法分析)5)Onanyscaleof…,infact,thereisalmostnothingheavierthansth..6)Ifweseesth.initstruecolors,however,itisnothingbut…(批驳分析I)7)...(进一步阐述)8)Andmoreover,layinganyunduestressonsth.mayleadoneto…,ascanbeeasilyseeninthecasesof…(批驳分析II)
9)Therefore,itisnecessarytotakeacorrectattitudetowardssth.10)Ontheonehand,…
(正确看法I)11)Ontheother,...(正确看法II)12)Insum,sth.means…butnot…toourlife.(结论句)
2.EffectsofSth.OnSb./Sth.Else(分析建议
1.分析某事物的正面效应
2.分析某事物的负面效应
3.给出怎样对待该事物的建议
写作模式(分析建议类)
1)Asisknowntoall,sth.doesbringalotofbenefitstosb./sth.else.2)First,itcangreatlystrengthen…,therebychanging…forthebetter.(正面分析I)3)Besides,itcanmake/rendersb./sth.elsebetterableto…(正面分析II)4)Andbestofall,itcanhelpsb.…(正面分析III)
5)Butalltheabovedoesnotmean/followthofscientificstudiesreveals/implies/suggests,therearemorechancesthat…(负面分析I)7)Inaddition,themore...,theworse...(负面分析II)8)Andworstofall,…(负面分析III)
9)Therefore,ascientificapproachmustbeadoptedtotheproblemofsth.10)Ontheonehand,…(建议I)11)Ontheother,...(建议II)12)Insum,sth.candosb./sth.elsegoodorharm,alldependingon…(结论句
atwecanturnablindeyetothenegativeeffectssth.bringsabout.6)If…,asasuccession
3.ALettertotheCollegePresident(分析建议类)
1.就学校的某些变化给校长写封信
2.分析变化主要表现在哪些方面
3.提出(进一步)改进的意见
1)Iamdelighted(distressed)tofindtherehavebeenfavorable(unfavorable)changesin…(议论的主题)sinceIcamehere.2)Frommyangleofview,thesechangesindicatethatwhatyouhavedoneisin(outof)linewith...(作者的态度)3)Inthelongrun,theywillproducemorepositive(negative)effecton...
4)Suchdesirable(undesirable)changescanbefoundintheaspectsasfollows.5)First,…(分析I)6)Second,...(分析II)7)Andbest(worst)ofall,…(分析III)8)...(进一步阐述)
9)Butalltheforegoingdoesnotmeanthatthereislittleroomforfurtherimprovementin…(thatthereislittleyoucandoabout…)10)Instead,toenrich(reverse)…,arichervariety(abetterhealth)canbeaddedto…(建议I)11)Andmeanwhile,...(建议II)12)Itshouldbeborninmindthat…(结论句)
4.HowtoDoSomething(分析建议类)
1.某一事物的现状
2.分析该事物的重要性(或危害性/社会意义等)
3.怎样对待该事物
1)Muchtoourdistress/delight/surprise,theseyearshaveseenthepopularity/worsening/muchimprovement/awidespreadneglectofsth.(议论的主题)insociety.2)Accordingtoarecent/officialreport/survey/opinionpoll,...(佐证陈述)3)Ifthiscurrentisallowedtorunitscourse,thingsareboundtoturnforthebetter/worse.(Para.1)
4)Theimportance/harmfulness/significanceofsth.tosb./sth.else,(however),canbeseenfromtheperspectivesasfollows.5)Inthefirstplace,…(分析I)6)Inthesecond,...(分析II)7)Andaboveall,…(分析III)8)Tosumup,...(归纳总结)(Para.2)
9)Sothemostpressingforus/basicproblemnowishowto…10)Inmyopinion,thefirststepshouldbefocusedupon…(建议I)11)Then,greatereffortsmustbemadeto...(建议II)12)Inoneword,wherethereis…,thereis…(结论句)(Para.3)
5.MyWayofSeeingSomething(理由陈述类)
1.人们从不同的角度看待人生
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