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四级作文
一、出题方式
2011.6:
1.近年来,越来越多的人热衷于考各种证书;
2.其目的各不相同;
3.你的看法
2010.6:
1:
近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象;
2.出现这种现象的原因和后果;
3.我认为
2006.12:
1.阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要
2.现在阅读经典的人却越来越少原因是
3.我们大学生应该怎么做Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecausesofthis?
whatsolutionscanyousuggest?
11.11.26
Peopleinbothdevelopedcountriesanddevelopingcountriesarericherforeconomicgrowth.Studiesshowpeopleindevelopingcountriesarehappierthanbeforewhilepeopleindevelopedcountriesarenot.Analyzethereasonsandwhatcanwelearn?
二、文章结构与思路
第一段:
陈述现状段
(小虹语录:
文章的第1、2句;主要用来写当前的某个社会现状、趋势;共有3种开篇写法,没有固定的标准选哪种,选择一种容易下手的去写,我已经将相关话题都举出来了)
文章第一句话:
陈述现状,交待背景与对立观点作文相同
文章第二句话:
具体介绍社会现状、背景
○1举例:
Takingalookaround,wecanfindnumerousexampleswithease.
○2具体描述:
(第一句)Nowadays,thephenomenonofdrunkendrivinghasarousedwideconcernamongthepublic.(第二句)Especiallytheyounggenerationlivinginbigcities,tendtodriveafterdrinking,ignoringthefactthatthisbehaviormayposeunderlyingthreattotheirpreciouslifeandmayevenendangerothers.
第二段:
原因或危害陈述段(分析问题)
文章第三句话:
陈述现象产生的原因
○1Whatexactlycontributestosuchaphenomenon/problem?
Amplereasoncanbelistedasfollows:
○2Quiteafewreasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon,andthefollowingsmightbethemostcriticalones:
文章第四句话:
具体陈述问题产生的原因
Firstly,…secondly,….
文章第五句话:
此现象/问题可能会带来的危害、后果
○1Thephenomenon/problemmentionedabovewillgiverisetosevereconsequencesifweleavethesituationasitis.
○2Thephenomenon/problemmentionedabovewillgiverisetoundesirableconsequencesifwekeeponturningablindeyeanddeafeartoit.
文章第六句话:
问题产生的危害和后果
Ontheonehand,…ontheotherhand,…
第三段:
解决措施建议段(解决问题)
文章第七句话:
号召大家关注、采取措施
○1Inviewoftheseriousnessoftheproblem,wemustadopteffectivemeasuresbeforethedamagecausedbythistrendbecomesirreversible
○2Confrontedwithsuchathornyissue,peoplecomeupwithavarietyofconstructivecountermeasures.Personally,thefollowingareworthrecommendation
文章第八句话:
采取的具体措施
Firstandforemost,(措施).及
1)扬善去恶:
(两面性问题,比如手机,彩票等等)Whatwemustdoistoencouragethemeritsofsth.andavoiditsdemerits.
2)大家联合起来:
(一般用在解决学生的问题,心理健康啊,网瘾啊等等)Itishightimethatsb.shouldmakecombinedeffortstoputanendtothissituation.
3)个人意识:
(提高环境保护的意识等等)Thepublic/weourselvesshouldenhancetheconsciousnessof…
4)加强教育:
(一般用在涉及面比较广的社会问题)Alarge-scaleeducationcampaignshouldbelaunchedtoinformthepublicofthesignificanceof…
5)政府出台:
(一般用在比较大的,比较严重的社会问题,如节约问题,浪费问题等等)Theauthoritiesshouldworkoutandimplementrelevantlawsandregulationstoimposeaheavypenaltyonthosewho…
6)呼吁相关部门加强监管:
(一般用在比较大的,比较严重的社会问题。
如质量问题,假冒产品问题)Therelevantadministrationdepartmentsshouldstrengthenthesupervisionon…
文章第九句话:
对为题解决的美好愿景
1)只有采取措施,我们才能Onlywiththesemeasuresadoptedcanwe…
2)我坚信…Iamdeeplyconvincedthat…
以上就是四级写作万能框架:
问题解决类作文的全部内容,同学们看完之后一定要亲自进行练习,时间出真知,如果平时一篇作文都不练,在考场上是很难出口成章的。
(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)
Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat__作文题目_____.Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat_观点一________.Intheirviewsthereare2factorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows:
inthefirstplace,___原因一_______.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,___原因二_____.Soitgoeswithoutsayingthat___观点一_____.
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people holdtheideathat___观点二_______.Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand,___原因一_______.Ontheotherhand,____原因二_____.Therefore,there isno doubt that___观点二______.
AsfarasIamconcerned,I firmly support the view that__观点一或二______. It isnotonlybecause________,butalsobecause_________.Themore_______,themore________.
(2)利弊型的议论文
Nowadays,thereisawidespreadconcernover(theissuethat)___作文题目______.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesin__题目议题_____.Generallyspeaking,itiswidelybelievedthereareseveralpositiveaspectsasfollows.Firstly,___优点一______.Andsecondly___优点二_____.
JustAsapopularsayinggoes,"everycoinhastwosides",__讨论议题______isnoexception,andinanotherword,itstillhasnegativeaspects.Tobeginwith,___缺点一______.Inaddition,____缺点二______.
Tosumup,weshouldtrytobringtheadvantagesof__讨论议题____intofullplay,andreducethedisadvantagestotheminimumatthesametime.Inthatcase,wewilldefinitelymakeabetteruseofthe____讨论议题___.
(3)答题性议论文
Currently,thereisawidespreadconcernover(theissuethat)__作文题目_______.Itisreallyanimportantconcerntoeveryoneofus.Asaresult,wemustsparenoeffortstotakesomemeasurestosolvethisproblem.
Asweknowthattherearemanystepswhichcanbetakentoundothisproblem.Firstofall,__途径一______.Inaddition,anotherwaycontributingtosuccessofthesolvingproblemis___途径二_____.
Aboveall,tosolvetheproblemof___作文题目______,weshouldfindanumberofvariousways.ButasfarasIamconcerned,Iwouldprefertosolvetheprobleminthisway,thatistosay,____方法_____.
(4)谚语警句性议论文
Itiswellknowtousthattheproverb:
"___谚语_______"hasaprofoundsignificanceandvaluenotonlyinourjobbutalsoinourstudy.Itmeans____谚语的含义_______.Thesayingcanbeillustratedthroughaseriesofexamplesasfollows.(alsotheoretically)
Acaseinpointis___例子一______.Therefore,itisgoeswithoutsayingthatitisofgreatofimportancetopracticetheproverb____谚语_____.
WiththerapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyinChina,anincreasingnumberofpeoplecometorealizethatitisalsoofpracticalusetosticktothesaying:
____谚语_____.Themoreweareawareofthesignificanceofthisfamoussaying,themorebenefitswewillgetinourdailystudyandjob..
Shopping on the Net
网上购物
1. 近来在一些发达地区出现网上购物热。
2. 一些人喜欢网上购物。
3. 另一些人不喜欢网上购物。
考点分析:
本文属对比分析类议论文,也有人将其归类于对比比较类或匹配对比类作文。
此类作文要求对同种或两种事物进行比较,然后得出结论。
严格地说比较类的作文一般要求比较一件事物正反、优劣等,然后下结论,而对比类作文大多是对两个事物或两种观点从两方面进行比较,再提出自己的看法。
本文实际上是从客观公正的角度对比网上购物与传统购物。
文章首先指出如今网络时代我们在网上无所不能,网上购物悄然受到人们青睐。
随即围绕网上购物这一中心议题提出两种不同态度。
一些人喜欢网上购物,他们认为与传统购物方式相比,它快捷、方便、省时,选择面大。
实际上他们是拿网上购物的长处比传统购物的短处。
而另一些人对此不感兴趣,他们对假冒伪劣产品十分谨慎,很怕上当受骗。
这些人是拿传统购物长处比网上购物的短处,最后作者得出结论:
网上购物势必会发展成不可抗拒的新的购物趋势。
审题构思
“网上购物“属提纲式作文。
根据题中所给汉语提示句提示,本文可用三段式的谋篇形式。
开篇段照应提纲开门见山地指出目前不仅出现了“上网热”而且出现了“网上购物热”――
Nowadays many people tend to shop on the net。
随后在第二和第三段中阐明对网上购物的两
种不同观点,并就此展开讨论。
最后用一句话得出结论。
因此第二段的主题句应为:
Some people prefer this new way of shopping。
第三段主题句为:
Others dislike the new trend of shopping。
结论为:
I believe it is an irresistible trend of shopping in the 21st century。
全文和各段落具体框架结构如下:
全文构思
1. Nowadays many people tend to shop on the Net.
2. Some people prefer this new way of shopping.
3. Others dislike the new trend of shopping.
段落构思
第一段:
TopicSentence:
Nowadays many people tend to shop on the Net. Developing Sentence 1:
Internet is revolutionizing our world. Developing Sentence 2:
We can do many things online.
第二段:
Topic Sentence:
Some people prefer this new way of shopping.. Developing Sentence:
convenient and time-saving
第三段:
Topic Sentence:
Others dislike the new trend of shopping.
Developing Sentence:
Fear of buying fake commodities
范文:
Nowadays
Internet
is
revolutionizing
our
world
and
greatly
facilitating
our
modern
life.
As
a
matter of fact, we can do almost everything on the net. To illustrate, we can conduct E-business,
advertise our products, book an air ticket, buy and sell stocks, even hunt job on the web. Recently,
shopping
on
the
Net
is
gradually
becoming
popular
in
modern
cities.
However,
people
take
different attitudes towards the new way of shopping.
Some people who prefer shopping on the virtual shopping centers or the e-commerce portals,
hold
that
the
new
way
of
shopping
has
many
advantages.
First,
the
web-stores
can
keep
customers updated about the best selling products. Besides, they can provide customers with a
wider range of choices. Most important of all, it is very convenient and time-saving. People can
stay at home shopping whatever they want online.
However, others who stick to shopping in the real
–
life stores have their reasons. First, they argue
that though time-
saving, it’s a little bit complicated to pay on the Web. Besides, they think that
customers can never rest assured of the quality of the commodities unless they see them with
their own eyes. Finally, they believe the best way to be on guard against the fake and poor quality
commodities
is
to
shop
in
the
traditional
way.
Therefore,
they
don’t
show
any
interest
in
shopping
online.
However,
more
and
mor
e
people
will
prefer
shopping
on
the
Web.
And
it’s
believed that it will eventually be an irresistible trend of shopping in the 21st century.
新词拾贝
online
网上,在线
on the Web/ Net
网上
website
网站
web page
网页
e-commerce
电子商务
e-business
电子商务
virtual shopping center
网上虚构的购物中心
绝妙衔接
Nowadays, … As a matter of fact, … To illustrate, … However, …
Some … First, … besides, … Most important of all, …
However, others … First, … Besides, … Finally, … However, …
良好开端
Nowadays Internet is revolutionizing our world and greatly facilitating our modern life, so that we
can do many things on the Net.
Nowadays, with the arrival of knowledge economy age, we can do many things on the Web, such
as conducting e-business, buying and selling stocks and even shopping at home via the Internet.
Nowadays, we can do many things via Internet.
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