专四写作讲座之 作文闪光点.docx
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专四写作讲座之作文闪光点
高分作文标志
1是否长短句交叉;
2是否会使用插入语;
3用词是否多样,准确,形象;
4关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
5句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
1.适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾:
Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Bydoingso,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.
2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说:
Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…
3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。
(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等)比如上面例子applicable替换proper,approaches替换ways,implement替换carryout,sharpenone’scompetitiveedge替换enhanceone’scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
以下是30个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下。
1.individuals,characters,folks替换(people,persons)
2:
positive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good
3:
dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill(有害的)替换bad如果bad做表语,可以有belessimpressive替换
eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.
4.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,many。
。
。
ifnotmost)替换many.
注:
用many,ifnotmost一定要小心,many后一定要有词。
Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,替换most.
5.asliceof,quietafew,several替换some
6.harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替think (因为是书面语,所以要加that)
7.affair,business,matter替换thing
8:
shared代common
9.reaphugefruits替换getmanybenefits
10.formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion
11.Increasing(ly),growing替换moreandmore(注意没有growingly这种形式。
所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.
Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.
Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.
12.littleifanything,或littleornothing替换hardly
13..beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely,intensely替换very
16.hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable
17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin
18.captureone'sattention替换attractone'sattention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear
21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.
22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换..reasonsforsth
23.desire替换want.
24.pourattentioninto替换payattentionto
25.bearinmindthat替换remember
26.enjoy,possess替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
27.interaction替换communication
28.frownonsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth
29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance
30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,替换nearly/almostimpossible
常用连接词
ToAdd:
and,again,andthen,besides,equallyimportant,finally,further,furthermore,nor,too,next,lastly,what'smore,moreover,inaddition,first(second,etc.),
ToCompare:
whereas,but,yet,ontheotherhand,however,nevertheless,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,bycomparison,where,comparedto,upagainst,balancedagainst,but,although,
conversely,meanwhile,afterall,incontrast,althoughthismaybetrue
ToProve:
because,for,since,forthesamereason,obviously,evidently,furthermore,moreover,besides,indeed,infact,inaddition,inanycase,thatis
ToShowException:
yet,still,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,despite,ofcourse,onceinawhile,sometimes
ToShowTime:
immediately,thereafter,soon,afterafewhours,finally,then,later,previously,formerly,first(second,etc.),next,andthen
ToRepeat inbrief,asIhavesaid,asIhavenoted,ashasbeennoted,
ToEmphasize:
definitely,extremely,obviously,infact,indeed,inanycase,absolutely,positively,naturally,surprisingly,always,forever,perennially,eternally,never,emphatically,unquestionably,withoutadoubt,certainly,undeniably,withoutreservation
ToShowSequence:
first,second,third,andsoforth.A,B,C,andsoforth.next,then,followingthis,atthistime,now,atthispoint,after,afterward,subsequently,finally,consequently,previously,beforethis,simultaneously,concurrently,thus,therefore,hence,next,andthen,soon
ToGiveanExample:
forexample,forinstance,inthiscase,inanothercase,onthisoccasion,inthissituation,takethecaseof,todemonstrate,toillustrate,asanillustration,
ToSummarizeorConclude:
inbrief,onthewhole,summingup,toconclude,inconclusion,asIhaveshown,asIhavesaid,hence,therefore,accordingly,thus,asaresult,consequently,onthewhole
一、常用句型及单词
A.开头
1、Thereisaninterestingandinstructivepicturewhichgoeslikethis:
______________.
2、______________hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople,especiallyamongtheyoung,andheateddebatesarerightontheirway.
3、Recently,_________hasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthat_________
(e.g.Recently,theproblemofglobalwarminghasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthatgovernmentsatalllevelsplaceitonthetopoftheagenda.).
4、Oneofourancientphilosopherssaid,______________.Chinesepeoplehavealwaysbeenholdingthisideatobeoneoftheirstandardsofmorality.
5.Noone,regardlessofrace,religionornationality,woulddenythat...或:
Everyonewouldagreethat...
B结尾
1)Onlyinthisway/Onlywhen……/Onlythrough……,will/canwe……或:
Itisonlyif/when……thatwewill……
Itisonlyifallsidesofsocietytaketheirrolesfullythatwewillachievethesocietywewant.
2)Aslongas……wewillbeableto……/theproblemisboundto……
Aslongaswepersistinspreadingscientificknowledgeamongthemasses,allthesuperstitionsareboundtogooutofourlife.
3)Withaconstant/steadyimprovementin……(或Withthegradualworseningof……)sth.will……
Withasteadyimprovementinourlegalsystem,thisproblemwillsurebesolvedearlierorlater.
4)Inawordthereisevery/littlechance/probability/possibilitythat.……intimetocome.
C.中间
1.建议和解决方法
1).Agreatnumberofsolutionsarebeingoffered.Somepeoplesuggestthat______________.Othersarguethat______________.
2).ButIdon’tthinkitisaverygoodwaytosolve______________.Forinstance,______________.Worstofall,______________.
3).Mysuggestiontodealwith/solve/relievetheproblemareasfollows.Inthefirstplace,….Secondly,….Finally
4).Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,….Bythattime,….如果让这种情况继续发展下去,那么到那个时候,……。
5)If……,willtherebeanythingthatcanmakemeevenhappier?
如果(我们怎么怎么做),那将没有比这令我更高兴的了。
2.It结构
1)Itisadvisabletoexercise(拥有)patienceindealingwithsuchcomplicatedsituations.
2)Itisnecessarythatyoungandoldpeopleshouldcommunicatemorewitheachother.
3)Itiscertainthatfreshairandexercisesaremoreenjoyableandbeneficialthanmedicine.
4)Itiswellknownthatmanyofourproblemsarecausedatleastinpartbyfailuretocommunicate.
5)Itseemedtomethattheonlythingthatmattersistolearnthroughfailure.
6)Itpaysinthelongrun(从长远的角度看……)tointroducenewtechnique.
3.动名词或分词结构
1)Drinking,eating,andsmokingexcessivelycandosevereharmtoevenayoungperson'shealth.
2)Theartofcommunicationrequireslearningthelanguageandcultureoftheaudience.
4.递进式结构
1)Freshvegetablesarenutritious(有营养的);furthermore,theyrecheaperthanfrozenones.
2)Helpingotherswillnotonlybringjoyintootherpeople'slives,butalsoaddedhappinessintoourown.
5.表示重要性或必要性
1)It'simportanttosetasidetimeforrelaxation,hobbies,andentertainmentaswell.
2)Aharmoniousatmosphereisessential(necessary/critical/indispensable)toachievesuccess.
3)Globalwarmingcanendangerourlivessomuchthatweareobligedtomakeacarefulstudyoftheproblemandtrytofindoutalastingsolutiontoit.
6.表示目的
1)Thepurposeofatestistoshowwhatyouhaveleanedaboutasubject.
2)Theintentisnottocatcheveryonebutrathertocatchenoughtospreadtheword.
3)Competitivesportsarerecommendedtoyoungadultstopreparethemforthecompetitiveworldofcollegeandbusiness.
7.表示结果
1)Toomuchworkandtoolittlerestmayleadtolossofhealth.
2)Ifyoutrytolearntoomanythingsatatime,youmaygetconfused.
3)Byconsistenthardworkwewillbeabletoachievedourobjectives(目标).
8.表示对比和比较
1)Jobsandworkdomuchmorethanmostofusrealizetoprovidehappinessandcontentment.
2)Workismorethananecessityformosthumanbeings;itisthefocusoftheirlives,thesourceoftheiridentityandcreativity.
3)Ratherthanapunishmentoraburden,workistheopportunitytorealizeone'spotential.
4)Themorescientistsfindout,themorequestionstheyareunabletoanswer.
9.表示条件或假设的结构
1)WithoutthedistractionofTV,theymightsitaroundtogetherafterdinner.
2)Aslongasthebrainisgivenplentyofexerciseitkeepsitspower.
3)Wereitlefttometodecidewhetherweshould_______,Ishouldnothesitateamomenttopreferthelatter.
4)Withoutadegreeandwithnovocationalexperiencetheirchancesofgettinggoodjobsareslim.
10.表示举例
1)Take______forexample,
2)Anillustration(例证)maymakethepointclear.
11.表示采取措施
1)Thegovernmentshouldbetakingeffective(有效的)measurestoovercomecurrentdifficulties.
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