六级作文闪光点设置.docx
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六级作文闪光点设置
作文是各类英语考试中得分较低的一种题型,究其原因,除了平时缺少练习之外,同学们还缺乏作文抓分技巧。
同学们需要掌握一定的作文模板,除此之外,如果能在作文中设置一些词汇和句型的闪光点,必定使你的作文如虎添翼。
高分作文标志:
1、是否长短句交叉;
2、是否会使用插入语;
3、用词是否多样、准确、形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
1.适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观地反映事实。
句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾的例子,如2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:
Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Bydoingso,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.
2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作为插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词、助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
举例如下:
Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…
3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。
(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等)比如第一条的例子中,applicable替换proper;approaches替换ways;implement替换carryout;sharpenone’scompetitiveedge替换enhanceone’scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)。
下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。
这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法,精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatIindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.
exceedingly替换very;(个人认为替换成overwhelmingly更出彩)
thrilling替换exciting;
sth.exertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth;
google替换search;
anarmyof替换alotof。
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;
Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular;
Coincidentwith…非常地道的句型,表达“与…一致”的意思,替换With…;
Advancement替换development;
Pourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替换enterinto;
Current(currently)替换now;
Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.;
Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeople;
Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的。
(itgoeswithoutexaggerationthat更好)
Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.
Forastart替换Tobeginwith;
Wecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法;
ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动;
Additionally替换Inaddition/Besides;
Deliver替换send。
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,***,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型;其次however作为插入语;再次,functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmto。
Emerging替换appearing(fading替换disappearing);
Netcitizen网民,属于精彩用词。
(直接用netizen更好)
Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.
Nogardenhasnoweeds替换Everycoinhastwosides;
Computersdoplay,使用do表示强调;
Positive替换important/good等;
Asliceof替换apartof;
Unfavorable替换bad;
Impacts替换effects/influences;
Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入语;
Fruits(而且fruits用的非常形象,merits/virtues)替换advantage(defects替换disadvantage) ;
Facet替换aspect。
以下是45个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下:
1.individuals,characters,folks替换people,persons.
2.positive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good.
3.dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill(有害的)替换bad(如果bad做表语,可以有belessimpressive替换。
)
eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.
4.anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,many,ifnotmost替换many.
注:
用many,ifnotmost一定要小心,many后一定要有词。
Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,替换most.
5.asliceof,quietafew替换some.
6.harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat替换think(因为是书面语,所以要加that)。
7.affair,business,matter替换thing.
8.shared代common.
9.reaphugefruits替换getmanybenefits.
10.formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion.
11.Increasing(ly),growing替换moreandmore(注意没有growingly这种形式。
所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.)
Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.
12.littleifanything或littleornothing替换hardly.
13.beneficial,rewarding替换helpful.
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser替换customer.
15.overwhelmingly,exceedingly,extremely,intensely替换very.
16.hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable.
17.indispensable替换necessary
18.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin.
19.captureone'sattention替换attractone'sattention.
20.facet,demension,sphere代aspect.
21.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear.
22.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.
23.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换..reasonsforsth.
24.desire替换want.
25.pourattentioninto替换payattentionto.
26.bearinmindthat替换remember.
27.enjoy,possess替换have(注意process是过程的意思)。
28.interaction替换communication.
29.frownonsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth.
30.tonameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance.
31.nextto/virtuallyimpossible替换nearly/almostimpossible.
32.regarding/concerning替换about.
33.crucial/paramount替换important.
34.第一(inthefirstplace/thefirstandforemost);第二(thereisonemorepoint,Ishouldtouchon,that….);第三(thelastbutnottheleast).
35.assiduous替换hard-working
36.arduous替换difficult
37.underdeveloped/financially-challenged替换poor(因为poor通常含有贬义)
38.demonstrate/manifest替换show
39.invariably替换always
40.perilous/hazardous替换dangerous(写社会类作文时常用,说什么社会现象是不好的,有害的)
41.formidable替换difficult
42.quintessential替换typical(举例时常用,例如:
aquintessentialexampleshouldbecitedthat=forexample;forinstance)
43.distinguished替换famous
44.feasible替换possible
45.consequently,accordingly替换so
希望大家能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点!
常用连接词
ToAdd:
and,again,andthen,besides,equallyimportant,finally,further,furthermore,nor,too,next,lastly,what'smore,moreover,inaddition,first(second,etc.),
ToCompare:
whereas,but,yet,ontheotherhand,however,nevertheless,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,bycomparison,where,comparedto,upagainst,balancedagainst,but,although,
conversely,meanwhile,afterall,incontrast,althoughthismaybetrue
ToProve:
because,for,since,forthesamereason,obviously,evidently,furthermore,moreover,besides,indeed,infact,inaddition,inanycase,thatis
ToShowException:
yet,still,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,despite,ofcourse,onceinawhile,sometimes
ToShowTime:
immediately,thereafter,soon,afterafewhours,finally,then,later,previously,formerly,first(second,etc.),next,andthen
ToRepeat inbrief,asIhavesaid,asIhavenoted,ashasbeennoted,
ToEmphasize:
definitely,extremely,obviously,infact,indeed,inanycase,absolutely,positively,naturally,surprisingly,always,forever,perennially,eternally,never,emphatically,unquestionably,withoutadoubt,certainly,undeniably,withoutreservation
ToShowSequence:
first,second,third,andsoforth.A,B,C,andsoforth.next,then,followingthis,atthistime,now,atthispoint,after,afterward,subsequently,finally,consequently,previously,beforethis,simultaneously,concurrently,thus,therefore,hence,next,andthen,soon
ToGiveanExample:
forexample,forinstance,inthiscase,inanothercase,onthisoccasion,inthissituation,takethecaseof,todemonstrate,toillustrate,asanillustration,
ToSummarizeorConclude:
inbrief,onthewhole,summingup,toconclude,inconclusion,asIhaveshown,asIhavesaid,hence,therefore,accordingly,thus,asaresult,consequently,onthewhole
一、常用句型及单词
A.开头
1、Thereisaninterestingandinstructivepicturewhichgoeslikethis:
______________.
2、______________hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople,especiallyamongtheyoung,andheateddebatesarerightontheirway.
3、Recently,_________hasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthat_________
(e.g.Recently,theproblemofglobalwarminghasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthatgovernmentsatalllevelsplaceitonthetopoftheagenda.).
4、Oneofourancientphilosopherssaid,______________.Chinesepeoplehavealwaysbeenholdingthisideatobeoneoftheirstandardsofmorality.
5.Noone,regardlessofrace,religionornationality,woulddenythat...或:
Everyonewouldagreethat...
B结尾
1)Onlyinthisway/Onlywhen……/Onlythrough……,will/canwe……或:
Itisonlyif/when……thatwewill……
Itisonlyifallsidesofsocietytaketheirrolesfullythatwewillachievethesocietywewant.
2)Aslongas……wewillbeableto……/theproblemisboundto……
Aslong
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