高三英语一轮复习写作专题吸引眼球的高级词汇与复杂句式及演讲致辞.docx
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高三英语一轮复习写作专题吸引眼球的高级词汇与复杂句式及演讲致辞
吸引眼球的高级词汇与复杂句式及演讲/致辞
写作运用探究
写作时,如果仅局限在把内容交代清楚这一层次,只选用一些普通的词,或一律使用简单句平铺直叙,那么习作就会显得呆板、单调,没有可读性。
要想写出高分作文,不仅要把要求表述清楚,而且还要尝试使用高级词汇与复杂句式。
如能运用恰当,哪怕只用上一、两处,也会为习作增添色彩,给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象。
一、运用高级词汇三原则
1.标新立异
恰当地使用一些蕴含感情色彩或其他考生不容易想到的高级词汇,会彰显自己的水平。
[高考佳句]
①I'llthankyouifyouthinkaboutmysuggestion.
→I'llappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionintoconsideration.(福建高考满分作文)
②Ireceivedyouremaillastweek,butIambusypreparingformyfinalexam,whichisimportantforme,soIdidn'treplytoyouwithoutdelay.
→Ireceivedyouremaillastweek,butIambusypreparingformyfinalexam,whichisvitalforme,soIdidn'treplytoyouwithoutdelay.(山东高考满分作文)
③Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.
→Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.(辽宁高考标准范文)
④We'lltryourbesttoimprovetheworkingconditions.
→We'llsparenoefforttopromotetheworkingconditions.(山东高考标准范文)
2.短语优先
写作中,要想写出“亮点”就要注意挖掘自己现存的词汇潜力,多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,会使短文内容丰富,表达更有力度,增添文采。
[高考佳句]
①Toachieveone'sdream,onemusttrytoequiponeselfwithrichknowledgeandsetagoaleasytoreach.
→Toachieveone'sdream,onemustmakegreateffortstoequiponeselfwithrichknowledgeandsetagoaleasytoreach.(北京高考满分作文)
②What'smore,wecanpouroutthetroublesweface,andreleaseourpressurefromdifferentaspects.
→What'smore,wecanpouroutthetroubleswearefacedwith,andreleaseourpressurefromdifferentaspects.(重庆高考满分作文)
③Totellyouthetruth,Idon'treallylikeyournewnovel.
→Totellyouthetruth,Ireallyshownointerestinyournewnovel.(湖南高考满分作文)
3.手法多样
在表达相同或相近的意思时,要尽量避免过多地使用同一个单词,用其他相应的词或短语来代替,这样能让阅卷老师感觉到你词汇量丰富。
实在找不到,可以变更说法,“曲径通幽”或许会有更好的效果。
[高考佳句]
①Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingfootballmatches.
→Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingfootballmatches.(江西高考满分作文)
②ItshowedmethatthewayofeducationinCanadaisquitedifferentfromthewayofeducationofChina.
→ItshowedmethatthewayofeducationinCanadaisquitedifferentfromthatofChina.(湖北高考满分作文)
【即时演练】
用较高级词汇代替黑体的单词或短语
1.Weallhavethesameopportunity.
2.Moreandmorevisitorshavebeenattractedtothisplace.
3.Theteacherdirectedthegiftedstudentstowardsthemoredifficultcourses.
4.We'lltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.
5.Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous.
6.Wouldyoupleasehelpmetoturndowntheradio?
『答案』 1.possess 2.Anincreasingnumberof 3.challenging 4.promote 5.putupwith 6.domeafavor
二、运用高级句式的七大策略
1.运用被动语态,重点更鲜明
[高考佳句]
①WewillhaveselectedaboutthirtyvolunteerstotheMarsthroughouttheworldby2015.
→AboutthirtyvolunteerswillhavebeenselectedtotheMarsthroughouttheworldby2015.(广东高考书面表达)
②I'mdelightedtoknowthattheShanghaiMuseumwillorganizeafamousartexhibitionandyouarecollectingopinionsofthepublicastoselectingthelocationfortheexhibition,whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas.
→I'mdelightedtoknowthatafamousartexhibitionwillbeorganizedbytheShanghaiMuseumandopinionsofthepublicarebeingcollectedastoselectingthelocationfortheexhibition,whichencouragedmetowritetoexpressmyideas.(上海高考满分作文)
2.运用强调句,重点更突出
[高考佳句]
①Hisgreateffortshelpedmeoutofthetrouble.
→Itwashisgreateffortsthathelpedmeoutofthetrouble.(安徽高考满分作文)
②Withouthesitation,Idecidedtofollowthemandwehadlotsoffunthatday.
→Withouthesitation,Idecidedtofollowthemandwedidhavelotsoffunthatday.(2015·浙江,标准范文)
③Ourparentshavedevotedtheirunconditionallovetous,whichindeeddeservesourappreciationandreward.
→It'sourparentswhohavedevotedtheirunconditionallovetous,whichindeeddeservesourappreciationandreward.(重庆高考满分作文)
3.运用倒装句,语言更活泼
[高考佳句]
①Booksarenotonlysharedbutitcanbuildupabridgeconnectingreadersfromdifferentpartsoftheworldaswell.
→Notonlyarebookssharedbutitcanbuildupabridgeconnectingreadersfromdifferentpartsoftheworldaswell.(2015·重庆,标准范文)
②IwassoexcitedthatIcouldn'twaittotrymyhandatridingit.
→SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn'twaittotrymyhandatridingit.(2014·福建,满分作文)
③Thechildrencangrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthyonlyinthisway.
→Onlyinthiswaycanthechildrengrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy.(福建高考满分作文)
4.运用省略句,行文更简洁
[高考佳句]
①Maybeitisabetterideatotakeoutdooractivitieswhenyoufeelbad.
→Maybeitisabetterideatotakeoutdooractivitieswhenfeelingbad.(2014·安徽,满分作文)
②Areyoulookingforwardtotheprize-givingceremony?
Sure!
It'llbeheldfrom15:
00to17:
00.
→Lookingforwardtotheprize-givingceremony?
Sure!
It'llbeheldfrom15:
00to17:
00.(2014·辽宁,满分作文)
③Asitisscheduled,EnglishTalentShowwillbeheldtoday.
→Asscheduled,EnglishTalentShowwillbeheldtoday.(2014·陕西,满分作文)
④Althoughtheywerefacedwithmanyproblems,theydidn'tloseheart.
→Althoughfacedwithmanyproblems,theydidn'tloseheart.(山东高考满分作文)
5.运用感叹句,感情更强烈
[高考佳句]
①Fromtheexpressionontheface,Iknewmymathteacherwassurprised.
→Whatasurprisedexpressionwasonmymathteacher'sface!
(2015·湖南,满分作文)
②Itisaverysplendidmoment.
→Howsplendidamomentitis!
(辽宁高考满分作文)
6.运用with复合结构、分词(短语)等,结构更简明
[高考佳句]
①Ourschoolliesatthefootofamountain,thereisariverflowinginfrontofit.
→Atthefootofamountainliesourschool,withariverflowinginfrontofit.(北京高考满分作文)
②Theteachercameintothelecturehall,manystudentsfollowedhim.
→Theteachercameintothelecturehall,followedbymanystudents.(广东高考满分作文)
③Ipickedupthecase.Ishoutedatthemanloudly.Buthedidn'thearmeandrodeaway.
→Afterpickingupthecase,Ishoutedatthemanloudly,butherodetoofasttohearme.(湖南高考满分作文)
7.运用虚拟语气,表达更传神
[高考佳句]
①Imissedbeinghitbythecarwithyourhelp.
→Withoutyourhelp,Iwouldhavebeenhitbythecar.(安徽高考满分作文)
②Itishightimeforbothlocalgovernmentandresidentstotakeeffectivemeasures.
→Itishightimethatbothlocalgovernmentandresidentstookeffectivemeasures.(福建高考满分作文)
8.运用复合句,句式更多变
[高考佳句]
①Tooursurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.
→Whatsurprisedusmostisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(重庆高考满分作文)
②Itwasquiteanexperienceforbothofus,andIwillneverforgetitfortherestofmylife.
→Itwasquiteanexperienceforbothofus,whichI'llneverforgetfortherestofmylife.(陕西高考满分作文)
9.运用it句式,表达更丰富
[高考佳句]
①Personally,drinkingplentyofboiledwatereverydayisnecessary.
→Ithinkitnecessarythatweshoulddrinkplentyofboiledwatereveryday.(陕西高考满分作文)
我认为我们每天喝大量的开水是必要的。
②What'sworse,somedrivers,cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkobeyingtrafficrulesisvital.
→What'sworse,somedrivers,cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.(2015·江苏,满分作文)
更糟糕的是,一些司机,骑自行车者和行人没有认识到交通规则的重要性。
③Youshouldprovidesomemoneytofundourprogram,aswellasofferussomepracticalsuggestions.That'sourdesire.
→It'sourdesirethatyoushouldprovidesomemoneytofundourprogram,aswellasofferussomepracticalsuggestions.(重庆高考满分作文)
我们渴望你能为我们的项目提供一些资金,还能提供一些实用的建议。
【即时演练】
按要求转换下列句子
7.Aboveall,wemustdosomethingtostoppollution.(用被动语态)
___________________________________________________________________
8.IrealizedtheimportanceofEnglishwhenIenteredseniorhighschool.(用强调句)
___________________________________________________________________
9.Wedon'tknowitsvalueuntilwelosehealth.(用倒装句)
___________________________________________________________________
10.Ifitisn'twellorganized,themeetingwillbeafailure.(用省略句)
___________________________________________________________________
11.Wehadaverygoodtimewiththepeasantsthatday.(用感叹句)
___________________________________________________________________
12.Becausetherewastoomuchnoise,Icouldn'tgoonstudying.(用with复合结构)
___________________________________________________________________
『答案』 7.Aboveall,somethingmustbedonetostoppollution.
8.ItwaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish.
9.Notuntilwelosehealthdoweknowitsvalue.
10.Ifnotwellorganized,themeetingwillbeafailure.
11.Whatagoodtimewehadwiththepeasantsthatday!
12.Withthenoisegoingon,Icouldn'tgoonstudying.
单句跟踪演练
Ⅰ.请用高级词汇替换下列句子中的画线部分
1.Hehasdecidedtobeateacherwhenhegrowsup.
2.Developingveryquickly,theInternetcausesthebreakdownofface-to-facecommunication.
3.Whenyouarebored__with__thepeoplesometimes,you'dbetterfindaquietplace,listeningtosomeclassicalmusic.
4.Hedidn't__listen__towhatIsaidintheclass.
5.SuddenlyI__thought__of__an__ideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.
6.As__soon__as__he__arrived,hebeganhisresearch.
『答案』 1.determined/madeuphismind 2.givesriseto3.fedupwith 4.turnedadeafearto 5.Icameupwithanidea/anideaoccurredtome 6.On/Uponhisarrival
Ⅱ.按要求转换下列句子
1.Ididn'ttakehisadvice,soIfailedintheexam.(用虚拟语气)
___________________________________________________________________
2.Ifitisso,Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime.(用省略句)
___________________________________________________________________
3.Wecanachieveourgoalinthisway.(用倒装句)
___________________________________________________________________
4.Muchtooursurprise,Maryfailedinthefinalexam.(用名词性从句)
___________________________________________________________________
5.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.(用短语代替从句)
___________________________________________________________________
6.Ifyougothroughthegate,you'llfindtheentrancetoBearCountry.(用并列句)
___________________________________________________________________
『答案』 1.IfIhadtakenhisadvice,Iwouldn'thavefailedintheexam.
2.Ifso,Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime.
3.Onlyinthiswayca
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