至雅思写作大作文真题解析.docx
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至雅思写作大作文真题解析
2015年10月24日雅思写作〔一〕
题目类别
教育与科技
提问方式
利弊判断
考试题目
Somepeoplesaythatplayingcomputergamesisbadforchildrenineveryaspect.Otherssaythatplayingcomputergamescanhavepositiveeffectsonthewaychildrendevelop.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.
分析:
教育与科技、教育与媒体可谓是雅思考试的热点,而且这些话题跟广阔考生们息息相关。
平时对生活多一些思考,备考期间针对话题词汇和句型多写多练,这些都是理想分数的保障。
文章结构:
4段
首段:
导入话题,表达立场。
主题段1:
玩电脑游戏对孩子的各方面有害。
主题段2:
玩电脑游戏对孩子的成长有利。
结尾段:
总结上文,重申立场。
Inrecentyears,theprevalenceofcomputergameshasexertedasignificanteffectonchildren’slife.Astowhethertheyaffectchildrennegatively,thereisanendlessdebate.
Despitethefactthatplayingcomputergamesisaneffectivewaytorelievepressure,theproblemsassociatedwithstudyandhealthcannotbeneglected.
Clearly,playingcomputergamesisregardedasamainfactorleadingtopooracademicperformance.Withtheentertainingnature,computergameswilleasilydistractchildrenfromtheirstudiouspursuits.Withthepassageoftime,childrenwillprobablyfallbehindtheirpeersinacademicdevelopment.Inaddition,whenchildrenspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergames,theyarelesslikelytoparticipateinphysicalactivities,whichisonereasonwhymanychildrensufferfromobesity.Asaresult,theseoverweightchildren’sconfidencemaybeunderminedandtheirhealthmaybenegativelyinfluenceaswell.
Despitethesedisadvantages,theadvantagescanstillnotbeignored.Firstofall,thelatestresearchshowsthatgame-playinghelpschildrentohometheircommunicationandinterpersonalskills.Inmanycases,playersworktogetherinteamstoachievegoals,competingagainstotherplayers.Therefore,theirsocialskillsandteamworkspiritareputtothetest.Also,computergamescanhavepositiveandtherapeuticeffectsonplayers.Gamesprovideanopportunityforchildrentodecompressandtuneoutofstrainsandstressesofeverydaylife.Givingtheirtimetorestiscriticalforemotionalandmentalwell-being.
Inconclusion,itisnotadvisableforchildrentoplaycomputergames,forthereasonsthatitnotonlyhasanegativeimpactontheirstudy,butalsomakesthemloseconfidence,althoughcomputergamesprovideaformofrelaxation.
2015年10月10日雅思写作〔二〕
题目类别
政府
提问方式
A/D
考试题目
Somepeoplethinkgovernmentsshouldfocusonreducingenvironmentalpollutionandhousingproblemstohelppeoplepreventillnessanddisease.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
分析:
题目的类型属于单一观点的讨论。
话题类型属于政府投资类。
这道题题干中提出了影响疾病的两个方面:
住房和环境。
这两个方面在正文中都要提到是如何影响人们健康的。
范文主体思路分析:
主体段一:
环境问题和住房条件确实会影响人们健康,需要政府关注和投资
主体段二:
政府充当的只是组织协调者,人们自己也需要对自己的健康负责,养成良好的生活方式。
Thereisnodoubtthatpeople’shealthwillbeinfluenceddirectlyorindirectlybytheenvironmentandhousingcondition.Whethergovernmentsshouldfocusmoreontheenvironmentandestatehastriggeredacontroversy.Ifeelthatindividualsshouldtakemoreresponsibilityfortheirwell-beingotherthangovernments’increasingattention.
Indeed,theenvironmentalproblemsandhousingconditionsaretwomainsourcesforillnessanddiseases.InmanylargecitiesinnorthernChina,hazeweatherhasbecomeadailykiller,especiallycausingrespiratorydiseasesinwinter.Also,populacewilleasilyaccesstovirusesandbacteriaiftheyliveinapoorhousingconditionwithoutanyadvancedsanitation.Therefore,governmentsshouldgivemoreattentionandhigherinvestmentinthesetwoareas.
Comparedtoindividuals,governmentshavemorepowertoarrangeawiderangeofsocialresourcestoaddresssevereissues;however,itdoesnotmeanthataddressingthisproblemtotallydependsongovernments.Thestateisanorganizeroracoordinatorinoursocietyinsteadofaresponsibilitytaker.Althoughgovernmentscanclaimpeopletoenhancetheawarenessofenvironmentprotection,makepolicytostrengthentheenvironmentmanagementandinvestestatewheretheyneed,publichealthconditionisstillapersonalproblemtosomedegree.Peoplehavetheobligationtoformandkeepahealthyandpositivelifestyle,ortheywillstillfacethethreatofillnessanddiseaseseventheenvironmentandhousingconditiongettingbetter.
Inconclusion,peoplealsoneedtotakeresponsibilityoftheirwell-beingasgovernmentsonlyholdapositionasorganizerandcoordinator.Themostfeasiblesolutionmaybethatgovernmentsprovideafinesettingononehandandpublicshouldpursueahealthylifestyleforthemselvesontheotherhand.
2015年10月8日雅思写作〔三〕
题目类别
教育类
提问方式
观点类
考试题目
Insomecountries,secondaryschoolsaimtoprovideageneraeducationacrossarangeofsubjects.Inothers,childrenfocusonanarrowrangeofsubjectsrelatedtoaparticularcareer.Whichdoyouthinkisappropriateintoday’sworld?
分析:
这次考试的题目还是老题,在历史上多次出现。
作文的审题也不是很难,非常贴近学生的学习。
文章属于典型的观点类文章,需要考生给出自己的观点,例文中作者同意一个观点,认为中学应该提供更加广泛的学科。
然后从学生的潜力开发和全面发展两个角度进行分析,然后在通过反方段进行补充,最后进行了非常简单的一个总结。
Whatrangeofsubjectsthehighschoolofferscanhaveastarkandprofoundinfluenceonstudents’futuredevelopment.I,tobehonest,holdtheviewthatthegeneraleducationwithawiderangeofsubjectsisbeneficialtostudentsthemselvesinthelongrun.
Ifstudentshaveaccesstomorecourses,theyarelikelytohavemoreopportunitiestochoosethesubjecttheypreferorarebetterat.Inthisway,thestudentscanlearnwithmoreenthusiasmandpassionandwillfeellessboredwiththeirclasses.Withmoremotivationderivedfromtheirinnerhearts,studentscangivefullplaytotheirpotentialsandachievebetteracademicperformance.
Besides,themorediversesubjectsystemcanalsocultivatemorewell-roundedstudents.Theknowledgebaseofdifferentsubjectsisdistinctfromeachother,whichcanhelptofosterthestudentsincertainperspective.Mathematicsandphysicsarehelpfultostudents’logicandabstractthinking;somehumanitysubjectssuchasliteratureandaestheticscanenhancestudents’capabilitiesofappreciationandjudgment.Thereisnodoubtthatstudentswillbecomemoreversatileiftheyhavegraspedknowledgeofdifferentsubjects.
Itisalsotruethatfocusingonthenarrowerrangeofsubjectscanbringsomebenefittosomeextent.Studentscanconcentratemoreonlimitedsubjectsandaremorelikelytobecomespecialistsincertainfields.YouyouTu,theNobelPrizewinnerinmedicine,receivesspecializededucationinTCMandchemistryanddevotesallherlifetotheresearchoftheanti-malariamedicines,makingherbecomeaworld-renownedscientist.
Tosumup,ageneraleducationwithwiderrangeofsubjectsshouldbeaccessibletostudentsbecauseofitsbenefittoasounderdevelopmentofstudents.
2015年9月26日雅思写作〔四〕
题目类别
环保类
提问方式
报告
考试题目
Insomecountries,secondaryschoolsaimtoprovideageneraeducationacrossarangeofsubjects.Inothers,childrenfocusonanarrowrangeofsubjectsrelatedtoaparticularcareer.Whichdoyouthinkisappropriateintoday’sworld?
分析:
该题属于环保题型。
虽然近年来环保已经不再是雅思写作考试话题的热点,但是在今年的1月29日,3月12日,5月9日和8月1日的雅思考试中均出现了环境相关的题目,所以还是希望广阔考生对雅思写作的十个话题逐一准备,才能在考场上做到万无一失。
文章结构:
5段
首段:
导入话题,简述主体
主体段1:
缺少回收意识是没有走狗的回收利用愿意之一。
主体段2:
没有足够的回收利用这个问题的措施。
主体段3:
总结上文。
Thelastyearshaswitnessedtheincreaseintheawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.However,therearestillalotofwastematerialsthathavenotbeenrecycled.Thisessaywillmainlyanalysethereasonsofthisproblemandsuggestsomesolutions.
Onemainreasonofthisproblemmaybethatthepublichaven'trealizedtheimportanceofrecyclingwastes.Aseconomydevelops,peoplehavehighincomesandcanaffordalargenumberofitems.Atthesametime,theydon'tknowhowtodealwithwhattheyhaveusedandhaven'trealizedthattheirbuyinghabitswillcausetheconsumptionofenergy,creasewasteandincreasepollution.
Thisproblemcanalsobeattributedtothelackofrecyclingsitesinthepublicplaces.Insomecountries,thegovernmentisnotbeabletopurchaseenoughrecyclingsitesduetopoorfinancialconditions.Asaresult,peoplearelikelytofinditdifficulttoplacetheirrubbishintothedustbins.
Inordertoaddressthisproblem,thegovernmentandcitizensshouldmakejointefforts.Firstofall,thegovernmentoughttoprovidefreeeducationofrecyclinglecturesforthepublic.Thisisbecausemanycitizenshaven'treceiveddecenteducationandarenotwellinformedofhowtorecycleandreusewasteitems.What'smore,therecyclingindustryneedstobefinanciallysupported.Ifthegovernmentdoesnotpayattentiontotheestablishmentanddevelopmentofthisindustry,theproblemwillcontinuetoexistinoursociety.
Asmentionedabove,theneglectofrecyclingandtheshortageofrecyclingsitesarethemainfactorsleadingtotheincreaseofwastematerials.Tosolvethisproblem,boththegovernmentandthepublicshouldcollaborate.
2015年9月19日雅思写作〔五〕
题目类别
生活方式,饮食
提问方式
A/D
考试题目
Somepeoplethinkeveryoneshouldbeavegetarian,becausewedonotneedtoeatmeattohaveahealthydiet.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
分析:
题目的类型属于单一观点的讨论。
话题类型属于生活方式与健康。
这道题虽然是一个观点,但是包含了两方面:
1、人人应该成为素食主义者2、我们不需要吃肉去保持健康。
根据雅思论文相对化vs绝对化的选择,这道题在论述上选择不同意会更容易一些。
范文主体思路分析:
主体部分反驳理由一:
并不是每个人都要成为素食者,有些特殊人群必定不能只吃素食,比方生长发育期的孩子,对蔬菜过敏的人以及孕妇
主体部分反驳理由二:
肉类中的营养不是蔬菜能够代替的,平衡膳食最重要。
Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutwhetherbeingvegetariansorvegansismorebeneficialforhumanbeings.Somepeoplebelievethatbeingavegetarianisbettersincemeatishelplessforpeopletostayhealthy.Idoubtthisstatementaspeoplehaverighttochoosewhethertobeavegetarianornotandmeatisaregularpartofourdiet.
Althoughleadingalowcarbonlifeandbeingavegetarianisquitepopularinoursociety,itdoesnotmeaneveryoneshouldonlyeatvegetablesintheirdailydiet.Actually,tosomegroupsofpeople,asingledietarystructurewil
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