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写作
新CET-4写作讲义
北京新东方学校:
王江涛
欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材
第一节
一、考试题型
1、应用文(7考):
口头作文(2考)、书信作文(5考)
2、论说文(25考):
提纲作文(23考)、图表作文(2考)
3、段首句作文:
4考
4、课程安排:
1)考试题型、考试要求、评卷实例
2)口头作文、书信总论
3)书信详解
4)论说文、翻译
5、学习方法:
实力(高分策略)+技巧(万能框架)
二、考试要求
《大学英语考试大纲》中明确规定:
四级大学英语写作考试时间为30分钟。
要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的短文;写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识,不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。
其命题方式有:
给出题目、或规定情景、或给出段首句续写、或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。
要求内容切题,文理通顺,表达正确,语义连贯,无重大语言错误。
6、时间要求:
30分钟
1)审题(3分钟):
2)写作(25分钟):
3)检查(2分钟):
语法(时态、冠词、主谓一致)、拼写、标点
【2005.06】Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay[INhonourofteachersontheoccasionofTeacher'sDay].Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
1.向老师表达节日祝贺2.从一件小事来回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献3.我如何回报老师的关爱
7、字数要求:
120-150词
8、写作主题:
大学校园生活(学习、生活、工作)
9、命题方式:
段首句、提纲、命题、关键词、情景、图表作文
10、具体要求:
1)语言第一位:
表达通顺、无重大语言错误
(1)基础一般:
简单原则、安全第一
(2)基础较好:
句子结构词多变
2)结构第二位:
(1)逻辑性:
A.并列:
and/or/but
B.因果:
because/inthat,since/as,for
C.转折:
but/however
(2)关联词:
3)内容第三位:
Lastnight,Iwaskickedbymygirlfriend.Sheranawaywithasmallwhiteface.Sheismygreenplumandbamboohorse.NowIknowthatloveisblind.Beautyisbutskin-deep.Moneyistherootofevil.However,IonlyregretthatIhavebutonelifetoloseformycountry.Couldyoupleasetellmywhytheinjuredisalwaysme.Itishightimethatyouteachersdevotedyourlovetome.Ifyoudonotgivemefullmark,Iwillcommitsuicideimmediately.
三、评卷实例
11、教材第5页第1篇:
中英思维差异
1)中式思维:
情感分段、读者领会、迂回模式、归纳式思维
2)英式思维:
逻辑分段、作者交代、直线模式、演绎式思维
Mostpeoplethoughtthatreadbooksshouldhavebeenselectived.Butothersbelivedreadingextentivelywascorrection.
Selectivebooksorreadingextensively?
Sure,youcanchoiceonefrompreviousideas,
ononehand,Therearetoobooktoreadforus.Weshouldchoosethosewhichweintrested,anditwouldbehelpfulforus.
onanotherhand.Someone'sintrestingwaswide.Eachbookcouldbringyouspecificcontainwecouldn'treadingatonlyonelevel.
Iconfirmedalloftheseideasweregoodbutweren'twise.
Asareader,themaintaskistodiscovermoreandmorebooksthesecondtaskistoheldsomewhichwonderfulandhelpfulforus.Don'ttreatthesebookswithracklessabandon.
Thebesttechnologyofreadingisconnect.
12、教材第4页第2篇:
Ithinkreadingnotonlyselectivelybutalsoextensively.Becausethetwosidesarenotcontradict.Ourtimeislimited.Sowecannotreadeverybookintheworld.However,wewillnotbeinterestedineverybook.Weshouldreadthosebooksmaybeusefultoours,readthosebookswhichwelike.Butthosebookswhichwechoosemustbeextensivelysoitcangiveoursallkindsofknowledge,newsandsoon,italsomakeoursbecomeawiseman.Ontheonehandreadingselectivelyletoursnotwasteourtimewhichitislimitted.Moreoveritcanemphasisamongallbooksthatwecanread.Ontheotherhandreadingextensivelycandealwithallkindsofneedinourlife.Theyareallusefultoours.
13、教材第5页第3篇:
Somepeoplethinkreadingshallbechoosed.Becausesomebooksaregoodtohummenbeingsandsomebooksareharmfultopeople.
Somepeoplethinkthatmenshoudreadbookswidely.Becausewidereadingcanhelpmangetmuchknowledge.Andmancanuseittochangetheworld.
Itismypointthatreadingmustbeselectively.Becausereadingisimportanttoman.Somebookscanhelpmanbutsomebookscanleadsomepeopletocrime.ItcanbeseeninthenewspapersandwatchedonTV.Wecanmakefulluseofsomegoodbooksandgainmoreusefulknowledge.Itcanmakeourlifemorebeautiful.wemustgiveupthoseunhelpfulbooks.Theyarenotgoodtous.Readingthemiswastingtimeandmoney.Soreadingselectivelyisanimportantpartinreading.
14、教材第5页第2篇:
Howshouldweread?
Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?
Everyonehashisownview.
Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What'smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn'treadthem.Sincewecan'treadallthebooksandweshouldn'treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.
Butothersmaynotagree.Theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledgehe'llhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.
Who'sright?
Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.
15、教材第4页第1篇:
Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.
Thosepeople,whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,believethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadbooks.
But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,theycaneasilycometotheconclusionthat"toknowmore,toreadmore".Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.
Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.
题目:
BicyclesAnImportantMeansofTransportinChina.
提纲:
(1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及
(2)和汽车的比较
(3)自行车在中国的前途
Score:
14
BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople-manandwoman,oldandyoung-ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalled"thekingdomofbicycles."
Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.
Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.
Score:
11
Theremillionsofbicyclesintoday'sChina.Bicyclesareveryimportantmeansoftransportinpeople'sdailylives.Becausetorideabicycleisverysimple,tobuyabicyclewillnotcostsomuchmoney,toparkabicycleneedsjustasmallroomandtorideabicycledoesnotneedoilbuttherider'sstrength,biyclesarepopularallovertheworld,especiallyinChina.
Comparedwithacar,abicycleismuchcheaper.ItismoresuitableforChinaasadevelopingcountry.Andabicyclehasalmostcausednopollutionbutacarhas.Onthecountary,abicycleistooslow,itcostsmoretimesthanacar.
IthinkthepopulationofChina'sbicyclewillbekeptforthelongrun.Becuseitwillbereplacedbyacar,abusandsooninsomedevelopedareasinChina,anditwillbemadeawideuseinthedevelopingareasinChina,thenumberofbicyclesinChinawillbethesameastodaybutIbelievethatit'squalitywillbeimproved.
Score:
8
BicycleisanimportantmeansoftransportinChina.TheimportantreasonofitistheeconomyofChinese.TheuseofbicycleinChinaiswidelybecausepeopleinChinahavenothighwage.Theycanonlyaffordabicycle,andtheyhavenomoneytobuyacarwhichistooexpensive.SoChineseusuallybuyabicycle,anduseittogotowork,orgototravelandsoon.TheotherreasonisthelargepopulationofChina.Allthesemadethebicyclebecometheimportantmeansoftransport.
Thebicycle,comparedtothecar,isnottooexpensiveanditiseasytolearnandtouseanditcansavethesurfaceofputtingit.Itdoesn'tasktobuildthegaragelikecar.ThispointisveryimportanttoChina,becauseofthelackofland.Itisn'ttooexpensive,soChinesecanaffordit.Itdoesn'tneedanyoil,anditcan'tcausethepolusion.Allofthesearethegoodneedscomparedtothecar.
Inthefuture,bicyclewillbewidelyused.Anditwillbeingooddemand.Peoplewillproducemuchmoremodernbicycles.
Score:
5
PerhapstheamountofbicycleinChinaisthelargestintheworld.WhywasitsowidelyusedinChina?
Ithoughttheanswerwas:
thepopulationinChinaistoolargeandthepriceofbicycleismuchcheaper.Thethirdansweristhatthebicycleiseasierinusingthanothertransportations.
Comparingwiththecar,thebicycleischeaperanditiseasierinusingthanthecar,butitsspeedislowerthanthatofthecar.
ThebicyclewillberemainedforalongtimeinChinabutintheenditwillbedisappearedwiththeimprovalofpeople'slivinglevel.
Score:
2
Aseverybodyknow,Chinaabigdevelopingcountry.So,thelivingstandardofpeoplenotveryhighatpresentpeople'sincomeisnotenoughfortheytobuycarsmotorcycles.Andbikeiseasytoride.Bicycleischeaperbemade.AndIthinkbicycletheusefultooloftransportinChinanow.So,itisquiteporpularandwildlyusedinChina'scitiesandcountrysidesthanthepersonaltransportation—tool.
Bikeisakindofcleantoolsoftransport.Itnotusegasandotherenergers.Forthisreasonisnotcreatpolution.Butinfactina
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