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托福写作chapter3
独立写作行文篇
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HotkeysforHeading
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好的开始是成功的一切
★分类—task
☆判断类:
agreeordisagree
✓Doyouagreeordisagree?
Itisonlyworthwatchingmoviesthatcanteachussomethingaboutreallife.
✓improvingschoolsisthemostimportantfactorinthesuccessfuldevelopmentofacountry.
✓Agreeordisagree:
Themostimportantcharacteristicsofagoodpoliticalorbusinessleaderisanabilitytoaccepttheresponsibilityofthemistakes.
✓workingathomewithacomputerandaphoneisbetterthanworkingatacompany'soffice
Telecommuter
✓ Doyouagreeordisagree,一个聪明的朋友比一个幽默的朋友重要
✓Agreeordisagree做富有挑战性的工作比作简单工作更让人觉得快乐。
✓Doyouagreeordisagree,itisbetterforstudentsatuniversityorincollegetochoosedifficultclasseseveniftheycannotgettopgrades.
✓Doyouagreeordisagree?
Itisimportantforfamiliestoregularlyeattheirmealstogether.
✓Doyouagreeordisagree?
Gradesencouragestudentstolearn
✓Doyouagreeordisagree,technologymakepeople'slivessimplerinturntomakepeople'slivesmorecomplicated.
✓Renewableresourcesofenergy(Sun,wind,water)willsoonreplacefossilsfuelssuchasgases,oil,andcoal.Doyouagreeordisagree?
Tosolvetheproblemspresentandfuture,isitnecessarytounderstandthepast?
✓Agreeordisagree:
thebestwaytotravelisinagroupledbyatourguide.
✓Doyouagreeordisagree:
peoplespendmoretimeonpersonalenjoymentrather
thanwhattheyshoulddo
✓Doyouagreewiththefollowingstatement:
nowadayspeoplespendtoomuchtime
onpersonalenjoyment--thingstheyliketodo--ratherthanthethingstheyshould
do.
✓因为环境问题是复杂的,所以个人没有什么可以做。
✓Agreeordisagree:
itismoreimportanttohavetherulesaboutthetypesof
clothingthatpeopleareallowedtoworkandschool.
✓你是否同意:
如果每年上课11个月以上,学生会得到更有效的教育。
✓Agreeordisagree,Technologycausechildrenshowlesscreativethantheywere
inpast.
✓是应该放更多的钱在accessinternet上,而不是publictransportation同意还是不
要?
✓Doyouagreeordisagree:
Governmentsshouldspendmoremoneyinsupportofarts
thaninsupportofathleticssuchasstate-sponsoredOlympicteams
✓Doyouthinkchildrenshouldplaycomputergames?
Heading
精确方案
@凸显主题
@引述观点
@我的立场
@凸显主题
Currently,/Incontemporarysociety,
Today,/Nowadays,
/
Asisoftenthecase,
Undermanycircumstances,
Inmanycases,
!
Asisknowntoall,
Thereisnodenyingthefactthat…
Itisbeyonddoubtthat…
+
X/theissueofX
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@islargely/widely/greatlyconcerned.
@iswidelydiscussed.
@issomuchconcernedthatithasarousedawidediscussion.
/受关注而引发讨论
@ismuchconcernedtoapointwhereawidediscussionhasbeenaroused/sparked.
@ismuchconcernedatsuchadegreethatawidediscussionhasbeenaroused.
/讨论多而引发思考
@ismuch/widelydiscussedtoapointwhereadeepcontemplationhasbeenaroused.
Tip:
写作高分素材
*so…that…
Theeconomiccrisiswassodestructivethatover90%ofthecompanieswereattheedgeofbankruptcy.
=subj.+v.+adj./ved.+toa/thepointwhere
Theeconomiccrisiswasdestructivetoapointwhereover90%ofthecompanieswereattheedgeofbankruptcy.
=subj.+v.+adj./ved.+atsuchadegreethat…
Theeconomiccrisiswasdestructiveatsuchadegreethat…
@引述观点
against
Somepeoplemaintain/holdthatitis…that…
Someonearguesthat…
Afewpeopleholdtheopinionthat…
Onepointisthat…
Oneperspectiveisthat…
Oneconventionalidea/acceptance/view/notionisthat…
for
Acommonbeliefisthat…
Aprevailingnotion/acceptanceisthat…
Awidelyacceptedviewisthat…
Tip:
题目观点引述2不动原则
1.题目核心名词不动
PCgameschildren
Videogameskids/teenagers
2.题目中观点的方向不动
@我的立场
!
Asacoin,everythinghas2sides—thegoodone,andthebadone.
!
程度+态度
程度
*tolargeextent,…
*atlargedegree,…
*onlargescale,
态度
*Iagreewiththisopinion.
Iamonthesideofthisclaim/assumption/assertion
Istandwiththisclaim.
Iwouldnodinagreementwiththisclaim.
Ileantowardthisclaim.
Iaminfavorofthisclaim.
*Idisagreewiththisopinion.
Iamontheoppositesideofthisclaim.
Istandagainstthisclaim.
Iwouldcastdoubtonthisclaim.
Iwouldfrownonthisclaim.
!
Tolargeextent,Iamonthesideofthisclaim.
!
Tolargeextent,Iamontheoppositesideofthisclaim.
!
全局
Currently,theissueofXismuchconcernedtoapointwhereawidediscussionhasbeenaroused.Somepeoplemaintainthat….Tolargeextent,however,Iamontheoppositesideofthisclaim.
方案2
一分钟快捷法:
Somepeoplemaintain/holdthat…
Ireckon/deemthat…
against
Somepeoplemaintainthat….Tolargeextent,however,Iamontheoppositesideofthisclaimandreckonthatitisadistortedandnarrowview.
@...andreckonthatitfailstoberepresentative.
@…andreckonthatitwouldbecounterproductive.
@…andreckonthatitistrappedinadogma.
for
Acommonbeliefisthat….Tolargeextent,Iamonthesideofthisclaimandreckonthatitissensibleandrational./thatitbears/shinessensibilityandrationality.
还有其他的写法,如:
@…是焦点
@题目中的观点是…
@我的立场
#Incontemporarysociety,theissueconcerningXis(right)infocus.Oneconventionalacceptanceisthat….Tolargeextent,however,I…
更多风格,comingsoon…
✓同意或不同意:
老师应该每天给学生留作文。
X—1.thevalueofdailywritingwork
2.Thenegativeandpositiveinfluenceofdailywritingassignmentsonthegrowthofstudent
3.Whetherornotarewritingtaskssupposedtobeassignedeveryday
*4.theissueofeducation
方案1
Currently,theissueofeducationismuchconcernedtoapointwhereawidediscussionhasbeenaroused.Somepeoplemaintainthatitiswritingassignmentsthataresupposedtobeofferedeachday/itiswritingtasksthataresupposedtobeassignedeachday.Intakingvariousfactorsintoconsideration/account,tolargeextent,however,Iamontheoppositesideofthisclaimandreckonthatitassumesadistortedandnarrowview.
/
Currently,theissueconcerningeducationisrightinfocus.Onepointisthatitisthewritingassignmentsthataresupposedtobeoffereddaybyday.Atlargedegree,however,Iamontheoppositesideofthisclaimandreckonthatitassumesadistortedandnarrowview.
简化方案
Onepointisthatitisdailywritingtasksthataresupposedtobeassignedtostudents.Intakingvariousfactorsintoconsideration,tolargeextent,Iamontheoppositesideofthisclaimandreckonthatitassumesadistortedandnarrowview.
*深思熟虑
#Intakingvariousfactorsintoconsideration/account,
#Afteracloserexaminationoverallthematters,…
#Afteracloserscrutinyintoallthefactorsthatmatter,…
#Inweighingupboththeprospective/foreseeablebenefitsandpotentialrisks,
*should
--besupposedto
--beexpectedto
--itisessentialto
agreeordisagree:
聪明的朋友比幽默的朋友更重要
方案1
Incontemporarysociety,theissueoffriendship/thechoicesoffriendsismuchdiscussedatsuchadegreethatadeepcontemplationhasbeenaroused.Somepeoplemaintainthatitisthefriendswhoaresmartthataremoresignificantthan/outweighthosewhoarehumorous.Intakingvariousfactorsintoconsideration,tolargeextent,however,Iwouldcastdoubtonthisclaimandreckonthatitassumesadistortedandnarrowview.
方案2
Onepointisthatitisthesmartfriendsthataremoresignificantthanthosethehumorousfriends.Tolargeextent,Iamontheoppositesideofthisclaimandreckonthatitassumesadistortedandnarrowview.
☆选择性话题
✓是telephone还是television对人类的有moreeffects?
✓国内旅游好还是国外旅游好?
✓Whichhasmoreinfluenceonchildren,teachersorfriends?
✓Inyouropinion,whichoneisbetter?
Tospendmoneyonsomethinglastforalongtimesuchasvaluablejewelryorspendyourmoneyonshorttermpleasuresuchasvacation?
✓Whichdoyouprefer:
similarfriendsordifferentfriends.
✓Whichdoyouprefer:
spendingleisuretimeathomeoroutside.
Better/more…prefer
BB
1.A—good1.A—good
2.B—better12.A--flaw
3.B—better23.B—better1
4.B—better2
Heading:
方案1
@凸显主题
@争论交锋
@我的立场
@凸显主题
Currently,theissueofXismuchconcernedtoapointwhereawidediscussionhasbeenaroused.
@争论交锋
!
Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionstowarddifferentthings.
*People—personalities+values
Backgrounds
Shesteppedintotheclassroom,carryingamachinegun.
ThestudentwhoisstudyingatNKismybrother.
=ThestudentstudyingatNKismybrother.
Theworkerwhowasfiredbybossismyuncle.
=Theworkerfiredbybossismyuncle.
Peoplewhovaryin…
Vary—various—variety
Peoplevaryinginpersonalitiesaswellasvaluestendtolookat/observethesamething/matter/phenomenonfromdiversifiedperspectives.
+
SomepeoplemaintainthatAis(more)optimum,whileothersholdthatBis(more)sagacious.
Theformer/thelatter
@我的立场
Ireckonthatitistheformerclaim/thelatterclaimthatmakesmoresense.
IreckonthatitisA/Bthatismorerational/bearsmorerationality.
全局:
Currently,theissueofXismuchdiscussedtoapointwhereadeepcontemplationhasbeenaroused.Peoplevaryinginpersonalitiesaswellasvaluestendtoobservethesamephenomenonfromdiversifiedperspectives.SomepeoplemaintainthatAismoreoptimum,whileothersholdthatBismoresagacious.Ireckonthatitistheformerclaimthatmakesmoresense/bearsmoresensibility/rationality.
方案2.
@人们纠结于A和B之间
@我的选择
!
纠结—dilemma
*beina/thedilemmabetweenAandB
*beina/thedilemmaastowhetherornotto…
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