英语命题作文写作技巧.docx
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英语命题作文写作技巧
假设你是李华,星期天你要和你的同班同学李明一起去敬老院参加义务劳动,你去找他,但他没有在家,你给他留言说明要求,内容如下:
(1)9:
30在学校门口集合;
(2)带劳动工具(洗衣粉、理发工具、除草工具等);
(3)自带午饭,骑自行车前往。
【构思点拨】本题属于提纲式要点作文,要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条,是学生比较熟悉的题材,体现了英语学习应该注意实用性,生活化的原则。
应注意下面几点:
(1)注意人称,应该用第一人称的形式给同学李明(第二人称)写便条:
(2)注意时态的正确使用:
从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点上应用将来时;(3)注意恰当使用逻辑词语,是各个要点间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。
提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要仔细组织语言,合理安排结构。
在语言方面,要特别注意简洁明了,开门见山。
【参考范文】
DearLiMing,
ThisSundaywe'llgotothenursinghomeanddosomevoluntarylabor.Youwereout,whenIdroppedinonyou.Therefore,Ihadtoleaveamessagetoyou.Accordingtowhatmonitorsaid,we'llmeetatthegateofourschoolat9:
30tomorrowmorningandstartouttogetherbybike.Soyoushouldtakeyourbikeanddon'tforgettotakesomewashingpowder,barbertoolsandweedingtoolssothatwecanhelpthemwithwashingclothes,cuttingtheirhairandgetridofsomeweedinthegarden.Atlast,youshouldremembertotakesomefoodforlunchbecausewe'llstaythereforchattingwiththematnoon.Ifyoucomeback,you'llphonemeatonce.
面对失败的态度
Failureisthemotherofsuccess
Wemiddleschoolstudentshavehadmanytestsorexams.Wehavebothachievedsuccessandsufferedfromfailure.Differentstudentstakedifferentattitudestofailure.
Somefallinlowspiritswhentheydon'tdowellintheexams.Theyusuallyloseheartandnolongerstudyhardasbefore.Butmoststudentstakeanactiveattitudetowardsfailure.Theyencouragethemselvestobeself-confident.Theyfoundoutandanalyzethecausessothattheywillnolongermakesimilarmistakes.
Iagreewiththosewithactiveattitudes.Asweallknow,failureisthemotherofsuccess.Evengreatmenhavefailedmanytimesbeforetheysucceeded.Sowemustdealwithourfailurecorrectly.
自去年年底起,我国西南地区的旱灾持续了几个月。
许多土地因干旱而颗粒无收,人们面对着缺水断粮的困境。
在天灾面前,我们人类在寻找办法降低损失的同时,也应反省自己。
请根据下表,写一篇文章分析出现旱灾的原因以及我们该如何从自身做起。
WhatLessonsShouldBeLearnedFromtheDrought
Thedroughtinthesouth-westChinahaslastsforseveralmonths,whichmakespeoplefacewaterandfoodscarcity.Weshouldlearnlessonsfromit.
Thedroughtcanbecausebyseveralfactors.Firstly,about63percentofcitiesinChinaarefacingwaterscarcity.Thesituationisworsenedbypollutionandindustrialization.Inaddition,toomanytreeshavebeencutdown,soforestcoveragehasbeendecreasingrapidly.What'smore,somewaterconservationprojectshaven'tbeenfunctioningproperly,thuspeopletherehavehadtorelymoreheavilyonrainfallfortheirwatersupply.MostofChina'sirrigationsystemsareveryold.
Inordertopreventthiscasecomingaboutagain,weshouldimproveourawarenessofsavingwater,makingproperuseofwaterandrecyclingwater.Meanwhile,weoughttoplantmoretreesandprotectenvironmenttopreventlossofwaterandsoilerosion.Ofcourse,thegovernmentsshouldincreaseinvestmentandrepairwaterconservationprojectsastimelyaspossible.
俗语写作
根据下面中文提示写一篇150词左右的短文。
俗话说:
早起的鸟儿有虫吃。
请根据你生活中亲身经历的一件事,说明一切成功源于干凡事早做规划,不断追求,辛勤劳作。
Theearlybirdwillcatchworms
Anoldsaying"Theearlybirdwillcatchworms"remindsusthatifpeoplewanttobesuccessfulandoutstanding,theymustplanaheadoftimeandmaketheireffortstoovercomeallthepossibledifficulties.
Forexample,theChineseathletes'excellentperformancein2010OlympicWinterGamesinVancouverisdefinitelytheresultoftheirearlyplanningandhardtraining.Iftheydon'tsettheaimandwordwork,eventhoughtheyhavethebesttalents,theycan'tcompetewithothersandgetmoremedals.
Anothercaseinpointismylearningexperience.IwasgoodatEnglish,butIcouldn'tpasstheexam,forIwasn'tpreparedwellbeforetheexamination.Ihadmanythingstosolveatthattime.AsImetthecomplexthings,Iwasataloss.ThereasonwasthatIhadnoplanandinvolvedinmanythingsanddidn'tstudymorehard,soIfailed.
Inshort,thesayingshowsustheimportantofplanning,workinghardandconstantlytrying.
假设你是李华,在互联网上看到英国高中生David登的一则启事:
希望结识一位中国朋友,以便学校中国的语言、文化。
请你以李华的名义用英文给David发一封电子邮件,主要内容包括:
(1)你怎样得知David的愿望;
(2)你愿意成为他的朋友;
(3)你打算如何帮助他;
(4)你盼望他的回复。
DearDavid,
I'velearneditfromtheInternetthatyouwanttomakeaChinesefriendsoastolearntheChineselanguageandculture.I'mgladthatyoushowsuchgreatinterestinChinaandIworldliketobeyourfriend.
IwilltrymybesttowritetoyouasoftenaspossibletointroduceyoutheChineseculture.WhenyouhaveanopportunitytocometoChina,I'llteachyouhowtospeakChineseandshowyouaroundsomefamoushistoricalplacesofinterest.Anyway,IamgoingtohelpyouasmuchasIcan.Howdoyouthink?
I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
假定你是李华,你的一位美国朋友Jane在中国学习中文两年,即将回国。
现在由你给她发E-mail,邀请她参加为她举办的欢送会,要点如下:
(1)祝贺她顺利通过考试,她的学习进步很大,为她骄傲;
(2)感谢她帮助你们学习英语;
(3)时间:
星期六晚六点;
(4)地点:
阳关俱乐部(TheSunClub)302房间;
(5)路线:
在你所住并馆门口乘坐332路公共汽车可直达。
DearJane,
Congratulationsonyourpassingalltheexams.IamdelightedyouhavereallymadegreatprogressinyourtwoyearsofstudyinginChina.Allyouhavegainedistheresultofyourhardwork.WeareproudofyouandweallappreciateyourhelpwithourEnglishWe'llalwaysrememberthewonderfultimewespenttogether.
It'spitythatyouhavetogobacksoon!
SoafarewellpartyforyouwillbeheldinRoom302intheSunClubthisSaturdayevening.Couldyoucomeby6:
00p.m.?
We'llhavedinnertogether.Bytheway.youmaytakeBusNo.332infrontofyourhotelanditwilltakeyoudirectlytotheclub.
Iwishyousuccessandfulfillmentintheyearsahead!
Yoursfaithfully,
LiHua
环境保护
假如你是李华,现任你们学校的学生会主席。
你将代表学生会起草一份倡议书,号召全校同学行动起来,为环保运动做出自己的努力。
同时下周六学校将组织同学在全市进行环保宣传活动,征召志愿者到校学生会报名。
15May,2010
Dearbrothersandsisters,
OhbehalfoftheUniversityStudents'Union,I,theChairmanoftheUnion,amearnestlycallingforyouractiveparticipationinourenvironmentalprotectioncampaign.Itisthedutyofeveryglobalvillager;manjustcannotsustainhisgloriouscivilizationwithoutarewardingenvironment,whichwillbepossibleonlyifmanmakesconsiderableeffortstoprotecttheenvironment.
Doyoucherishpreciousopportunitiestovolunteerinourjointeffortsinenvironmentalprotection?
Hereisagreatonenottobemissedbyanyenthusiasticyouth;RightnextSaturday,ouruniversityistorunapublicitycampaigntoadvocateenvironmentalprotectionacrossthecity.TheUniversityStudents'Unionwillbeinchargeofrecruitmentofvolunteers.Let'sjoinourhandsandtakeactionimmediately.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
Univers
2011高考英语作文必背的88个词组
1.经济的快速发展therapiddevelopmentofeconomy
2.人民生活水平的显著提高/稳步增长theremarkableimprovement/steadygrowthofpeople’slivingstandard
3.先进的科学技术advancedscienceandtechnology
4.面临新的机遇和挑战befacedwithnewopportunitiesandchallenges
5.人们普遍认为Itiscommonlybelieved/recognizedthat…
6.社会发展的必然结果theinevitableresultofsocialdevelopment
7.引起了广泛的公众关注arousewidepublicconcern/drawpublicattention
8.不可否认Itisundeniablethat…/Thereisnodenyingthat…
9.热烈的讨论/争论aheateddiscussion/debate
10.有争议性的问题acontroversialissue
11.完全不同的观点atotallydifferentargument
12.一些人…而另外一些人…Somepeople…whileothers…
13.就我而言/就个人而言AsfarasIamconcerned,/Personally,
14.就…达到绝对的一致reachanabsoluteconsensuson…
15.有充分的理由支持besupportedbysoundreasons
16.双方的论点argumentonbothsides
17.发挥着日益重要的作用playanincreasinglyimportantrolein…
18.对…必不可少beindispensableto…
19.正如谚语所说Astheproverbgoes:
20.…也不例外…benoexception
21.对…产生有利/不利的影响exertpositive/negativeeffectson…
22.利远远大于弊theadvantagesfaroutweighthedisadvantages。
23.导致,引起leadto/giveriseto/contributeto/resultin
24.复杂的社会现象acomplicatedsocialphenomenon
25.责任感/成就感senseofresponsibility/senseofachievement
26.竞争与合作精神senseofcompetitionandcooperation
27.开阔眼界widenone’shorizon/broadenone’svision
28.学习知识和技能acquireknowledgeandskills
29.经济/心理负担financialburden/psychologicalburden
30.考虑到诸多因素takemanyfactorsintoaccount/consideration
31.从另一个角度fromanotherperspective
32.做出共同努力makejointefforts
33.对…有益bebeneficial/conduciveto…
34.为社会做贡献makecontributionstothesociety
35.打下坚实的基础layasolidfoundationfor…
36.综合素质comprehensivequality
37.无可非议blameless/beyondreproach
39.致力于/投身于becommitted/devotedto…
40.应当承认Admittedly,
41.不可推卸的义务unshakableduty
42.满足需求satisfy/meettheneedsof…
43.可靠的信息源areliablesourceofinformation
44.宝贵的自然资源valuablenaturalresources
45.因特网theInternet(一定要由冠词,字母I大写)
46.方便快捷convenientandefficient
47.在人类生活的方方面面inallaspectsofhumanlife
48.环保(的)environmentalprotection/environmentallyfriendly
49.社会进步的体现asymbolofsocietyprogress
50.科技的飞速更新theever-acceleratedupdatingofscienceandtechnology
51.对这一问题持有不同态度holddifferentattitudestowardsthisissue
52.支持前/后种观点的人people/thoseinfovoroftheformer/latteropinion
53.有/提供如下理由/证据have/providethefollowingreasons/evidence
54.在一定程度上tosomeextent/degree/insomeway
55.理论和实践相结合integratetheorywithpractice
56.…必然趋势anirresistibletrendof…
57.日益激烈的社会竞争theincreasinglyfiercesocialcompetition
58.眼前利益immediateinterest/short-terminterest
59.长远利益.interestinthelongrun
60.…有其自身的优缺点…hasitsmeritsanddemerits/advantagesanddisadvantages
61.扬长避短Exploittothefullone’sfavorableconditionsandavoidunfavorableones
62.取其精髓,取其糟粕Taketheessenceanddiscardthedregs。
63.对…有害doharmto/beharmfulto/bedetrimentalto
64.交流思想/情感/信息exchangeideas/emotions/information
65.跟上…的最新发展keeppacewith/ca
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