专题19 读后续写05趣事类解析版高考英语三轮冲刺过关.docx
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专题19读后续写05趣事类解析版高考英语三轮冲刺过关
专题19读后续写05:
趣事型(解析版)
一、题型解析
思维导图
核心技巧1:
矛盾塑造(尴尬+紧张)
1.Sonervouswashethat(他太紧张了)hedroppedtheelectriccarvingknife.(台州高三调考)
2.Igotintoapanic(陷入惊慌之中)asIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.(2021年1月浙江高考)
3.Sweatingandnearlytearing(汗流浃背,眼泪差点流下来),IcouldimaginehowsillyandstrangeIwasatthatmomentbasedonthecontinuinglaughterfrommyparentsandJason.(2021年1月浙江高考)
3.她立刻涨红了脸,感到尴尬几乎把她整个包围起来。
Blushingscarletinstantly,shefeltembarrassmentalmostwreathedherentirely.
核心技巧2:
快乐结局塑造(感激+开心)
1.他们耸了耸肩,咧着嘴笑,这就驱散了她的一切烦恼,给了她安慰。
Theyshruggedandgrinned,whichdissipatedallherdistressandconsoledher.
1.谢谢。
她紧紧抓住打开的袋子,充满了感激和温暖。
‘Thanks.’Clingingherhandstothebagopening,shewasoverwhelmedbyasurgeofgratitudeandwarmth.
2.这两个强壮的陌生人点亮了她的一天。
Thetwostrongstrangersundoubtedlylitherdayup.
3.Wealljumpedtoourfeet,dancingandscreamingwithjoy(开心得欢呼雀跃).(2021.04台州高三调考)
4.ThoughIwasdissatisfiedwithmyuglygestureandstupidimage,IwassatisfiedwiththehappinessandfunthatIbroughttoothers(对我带给别人的快乐和乐趣感到满意).(2021年1月浙江高考)
5.她停了下来,心中洋溢着欢快的心情,拿出一把硬币,扭头把它们攥在他们的手里,尽管两个男人的表情都很惊讶。
(2021嘉兴二模)
Brimmingoverwithbrightfeelingandjoy,shestopped,fishedoutahandfulcoinsandtunedaroundtosqueezethemintheirfistsdespitetwomen'sastonishedexpression.
二、真题演练
【真题1】2021年1月浙江卷:
万圣节南瓜卡头
:
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Pumpkin(南瓜)carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage—Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.
Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I’munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.
Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(软木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.
Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.“I’mgoingtosetitdown,now,”Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican’tgetitout!
”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
优秀范文1
Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger. Theairinsidethehollowvegetablewasfullofmyanxiousbreath.Icouldhearmysister’slaughterand Jason’smuffledvoicetalkingaboutcuttingthegiantthingopen.“No!
Notmyprecious pumpkin!
”Iprotested.Eventually, Dad helpedmeadjustmybodytoamorerelaxedposition,and pulled thepumpkingentlyoffmy head.Hairinknots, nose andchaincoveredinpumpkinflesh,Iletoutasighofrelief.That’swhenIrealizedthecamerahadbeenrollingthewholetime!
ThevideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween.Ilookedjustlikeapumpkinheadinit.Embarrassedandalittleannoyed,Ifledtomyroom,but Mom stoppedme.“Youhaven’treadthecommentsyet.”IscrolleddownthescreenandmarveledatthestoriestheviewerssharedaboutHalloween.Onegirlrecalledcelebratingitwithherbrothersandsisters,andthankedusfor“bringingherhome”.Thewordsbroughtwarmthtomyheartandtearstomyeyes.Ifeltluckytobeapartofthismischievousyetlovingfamily.(171words)
出彩表达积累(出自原文及范文)
1.hollow adj. 中空的;空心的
2.muffled adj.沉闷的;模糊不清的
3.sigh n.叹气;叹息
4.marvel v.感到惊奇;大为赞叹
5.mischievous adj.顽皮的;捣蛋的
6.scrolldown 向下滚动
7.Eventually,Dadhelpedmeadjustmybodytoamorerelaxedposition,andpulledthepumpkingentlyoffmyhead.
最后,爸爸帮我把身体调整到一个比较放松的姿势,轻轻地把南瓜从我头上扯下来。
(对动作的生动描写)
8.Thewordsbroughtwarmthtomyheartandtearstomyeyes.
这些话温暖了我的心,使我热泪盈眶。
(对神态的生动描写)
优秀范文2
Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Jason suggestedusingaknifetocutthe pumpkin open.Iwavedmyhandswildlyinprotestattheplan.“Thenyouneedtofindawayof pulling yourselfout.”My dad saidinacalm,coolvoice.Hisvoicesettledmynerves.Iwasconsciousthatmy nose wasactingasanimpedimenttomyescape.Withstretchingoutmyfaceandbitingintothepumpkin,Isurmountedthelargeobstacleand managed topullmy head out.ArippleofexcitementranthroughusbutthefirstthingIsawwasthecamera.
ThevideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween. Inthespaceofaweek,ithadbeenviewedoveramilliontimes.Itfilled Mom withgreaterastonishment.Rarelyhadapumpkin’svideohadsomanyhitsasthisone.Dangerousasitis,someviewers’curiositywastoostrongtoresist.Theyleftmessagesdescribingthefeelingstheyhadwhilewatchingit.Somelaughedatme,whileotherspraisedmyparents,whoremainedcalmthroughout.Lookingthroughthesereviews,thesunlightpeekingthroughour,Dad’scalmsmilereflectedhismotto“All’swellwithus,neverfear”.(186words)
出彩表达积累(出自原文及范文)
1. nerve n.神经质;神经紧张
2. conscious adj.意识到;注意到
3. impediment n.妨碍;阻碍;障碍
4. surmount v.克服;解决
5. obstacle n.障碍;阻碍;绊脚石
6. ripple n.波纹;细浪;涟漪
7. Hisvoicesettledmynerves. 他的声音使我安定下来。
(无灵主语)
8. ItfilledMomwithgreaterastonishment.这使母亲尤为惊讶。
(对情绪的生动描写)
【真题2】2017年浙江卷:
健忘而可爱的妈妈
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
A vacationwithmymother
Ihadaninterestingchildhood:
Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother-loving,sweet,andyet absent-minded and forgetful.Onestrangefamily trip wetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.
MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached, David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?
Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games, camping equipment,anda tent intothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecks Mom hadforgotten.
DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhile Dadslept:
”YoustandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:
“Honey,wherearethekids?
”“What?
!
Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.
Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehad trouble findingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:
Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?
DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections.Ifastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldasas nice assheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.
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Paragraph2
Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.
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优秀范文
Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Butthenwewerehalfanhourawayfromthehotel,wherethetentwasleftbehind.Dadrecommendedbuyinganewone,whileMominsistedonourgoingbacktofetchit,saying"Forgetfulpeoplelikememaylosethingsrepeatedly,soit'sunwisetogiveupthetent."Finally,wegotbackthetent
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