外研社杯全国英语写作大赛江西师范大学初赛评分标准及样题.docx
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外研社杯全国英语写作大赛江西师范大学初赛评分标准及样题
“外研社杯”全国英语写作大赛江西师范大学初赛
评分标准及样题
议论文:
比赛内容:
选手完成1篇议论文写作(字数为400-500)。
考查选手的判断分析、逻辑思辨、评价论述等能力,展示选手的知识广度、视野维度、思想深度等综合素质。
议论文1:
Giventheimportanceofhumancreativity,onewouldthinkitshouldhaveahighpriorityamongourconcerns.Butifwelookatthereality,weseeadifferentpicture.Basicscientificresearchisminimizedinfavorofimmediatepracticalapplications.Theartsareincreasinglyseenasdispensableluxuries.Yetascompetitionheatsuparoundtheglobe,exactlytheoppositestrategyisneeded.
AdaptedfromMihalyCsikszentmihalyi,Creativity:
FlowandthePsychologyofDiscoveryandInvention
Assignment:
Iscreativityneededmorethaneverintheworldtoday?
Planandwriteanessayinwhichyoudevelopyourpointofviewonthisissue.Supportyourpositionwithreasoningandexamplestakenfromyourreading,studies,experience,orobservations.
范文
Inaworldwhereeconomicprosperityand“gettingahead”inworkandtechnologyarehighlyvalued,creativityandtheartsareoftenshuntedinfavorofmore“practical”pursuits.Studentsabandondreamsofactingorpaintinginordertomajorinmedicine,computertechnology,orengineering:
highlyprofitableandscientificfields.Evenwiththeadvancesinthesefields,however,thereisstillaneedforcreativityinourworld,becauseseeingthingsinanewwaycanmakeallthedifference.
Today,moreandmorepublicschoolsareforcedtoabandontheirartsprogramstomaketimeforsubjectslikescienceandmath:
subjectsinwhichallstudentsmusthaveabasicknowledgeinordertosucceedinhighereducation.However,byleavingtheseprogramsbehind,childrenaredeprivedofthecreativestimulationthattheartsprovide,andaretaughttoviewtheworldin“blackandwhite”terms:
onerightanswertoeveryproblem.Withaviewsuchasthis,howwillchildrenperforminthefuture?
Itmaybeassumedthatallpeoplewillseethingsthesameway,andproposeonlyonesolutiontoaproblem,failingtoseethebiggerpicture.
Creativityhasobviouslyinfluencedearliergenerationsinapositiveway,sothereisnoneedtoeliminatecreativityfromourworld.WhatwouldhavehappenedifFranklinRoosevelthadneverproposedhisNewDeal?
TheGreatDepressionmighthavepersistedforsometime,robbingevenmorefamiliesoftheirchanceatprosperityandhappiness.However,byproposinganew,creativesolutionfortheproblemoftheU.S.’sdepression,FDRpulledthenationoutofitsslump.Anotherexampleofhowcreativityhaspositivelyinfluencedtheworldhappenedjustrecently,withtheintroductionofhybridcars.Thesenewcarsdonotrelyonasmuchoilasothercarsdoinordertooperate,usingalternativeenergysourcesinstead.Withoutthecreativemindsbehindtheinventionofthesecars,theworldwouldrelysomuchonitslimitedoilreservesthatfuelwouldeventuallyrunout.Becauseofcreativity,theworldhasachancetofindotherenergysources.
Thoughthesepracticalapplicationsforcreativityareconducivetoeveryone,thecommonmanbenefitsevenmorefromthestimulationthattheartsprovide.Inaworlddominatedbypoliticalpowersandtornapartbywar,entertainersintheartscaninspirehopeandchangeineveryone.AchildwatchingaCharlieChaplinfilmmightdecidetojointhegymnasticsteam,orawomanobservingaMonetpaintinginamuseummightbecomeanelementaryschoolartteacher:
whoknows?
Theartscantransportpeopletootherplaces,intodifferentwaysofthinking.
Theimportanceofcreativityintheworldtodayisenormous,forithasbothpragmaticand“important”applications.Creativityisbothasourceforinspirationandaproblem-solvingmethod,andwithoutit,ourworldwouldgreatlysuffer.
范文满分点评
Thisessayeffectivelyandinsightfullydevelopsthepointofviewthatcreativity"isbothasourceforinspirationandaproblem-solvingmethod,andwithoutit,ourworldwouldgreatlysuffer."Thewriterusesoutstandingcriticalthinkingandclearlyappropriateevidencetoshowthatcreativity'sbenefitsarebothpractical(theNewDeal,hybridcars)andintangible(studentsinspiredbythearts).Wellorganizedandfocused,theessayshowsclearcoherenceandsmoothprogressionofideas("Withoutthecreativemindsbehindtheinventionofthesecars,theworldwouldrelysomuchonitslimitedoilreservesthatfuelwouldeventuallyrunout.Becauseofcreativity,theworldhasachancetofindotherenergysources.Thoughthesepracticalapplicationsforcreativityareconducivetoeveryone,thecommonmanbenefitsevenmorefromthestimulationthattheartsprovide").Italsoconsistentlydisplaysskillfuluseoflanguageandmeaningfulvarietyinsentencestructure("However,byleavingtheseprogramsbehind,childrenaredeprivedofthecreativestimulationthattheartsprovide,andaretaughttoviewtheworldin"blackandwhite"terms:
onerightanswertoeveryproblem.Withaviewsuchasthis,howwillchildrenperforminthefuture?
").
议论文2.
Thinkcarefullyabouttheissuepresentedinthefollowingexcerptandtheassignmentbelow
"Toughchallengesrevealourstrengthsandweaknesses."Thisstatementiscertainlytrue;adversityhelpsusdiscoverwhoweare.Hardshipscanoftenleadustoexaminewhoweareandtoquestionwhatisimportantinlife,Infact,peoplewhohaveexperiencedseriouslyadverseeventsfrequentlyreportthattheywerepositivelychangedbytheirnegativeexperiences.
Assignment:
Doyouthinkthateasedoesnotchallengeusandthatweneedadversitytohelpusdiscoverwhoweare?
Planandwriteanessayinwhichyoudevelopyourpointofviewonthisissue.Supportyourpositionwithreasoningandexamplestakenfromyourreading,studies,experience,orobservations.
范文
Everyonegoesthroughtheirlivesseeingandexperiencingdifferentthings.Attimes,thesedifferentsituationsmaycauseonetoactdifferentlythananotherwouldinthesamesituation.Itcanbereadilystatedthat“Easedoesnotchallengeus;adversityhelpsusdiscoverwhoweare.”Throughliterature,onecanseehowthisstatementprovestobetrue.
Intheplay,“TheEnemyofthePeople”,byHenrikIbsen,theprotagonist,Dr.Stockholm,facedadversity,andthroughthat,wasabletodiscoverhistruebeliefsandwhohewas.BeforeDr.Stockholmwasputinasituationwherehehadtofaceadversity,hehadlivedhislifewithmildeaseandregularity.Heactedjustlikeeveryoneelseinthetownhelivedin.Yearslater,hediscoveredthatthepopularbathhouseswereinfectedwithbacteria.Determinedtospreadhisfindings,Dr.Stockholmwenttothenewspaperandthelocalgoverningofficetotryandmakehisdiscoveryknown.However,boththepaperandthegovernmentweren’tasinspiredtoreallyletthepublicknowaboutthisseriousproblemduetothepopularityofthebathhouses.Asaresult,Dr.Stockholmwasforcedtofaceadversityandfindawaytoachievehispreviouslysetgoal.Throughadversity,Stockholmwasabletotrulyseehowhispersonalitywas.Hewasabletounderstandhisseverediscontentwiththegovernmentandsocietyasawhole.Inessence,Stockholmwasabletodiscoverhisactualself.This,however,onlyhappenedwhenhewasfacedwithachallenge.
Thebook,“WheretheHeartis”byBillieLettsalsousedadversitytoportrayitscharacter’struebeing.Theprotagonist,NovaleeNation,wasplacedinasituationwhereshehadtorealizeandconqueradversity.Novaleewasayounggirlof17,whowaspregnant.Shehadexperiencedextremehardshipherwholelifeinthetrailerparkenvironmentthatshehadpreviouslyresidedin.Shealsoreceivedlotsofabusefromherboyfriendwhoimpregnatedher.Inthestory,hehadleftherstrandedinaK-Martallbyherself,whileshewaspregnant.Allalone,Novallehadtofindawaytokeepherselfandherbabyalive.Alongtheway,throughadversity,Novallefoundhertrue,kindself.Shealsomadecountlessdiscoveriesthroughmeetingdifferentpeople.Amongthosethingswashertrueloveforphotographyandliterature,andmostofallheryearningforloveinherlife.
Inthefaceofadversity,weallactdifferently.Weeachhavedifferentideasandmethodsthatweareaccustomedtousefordifferentsituations.Byactingandmakingdecisionsonourown,asweareoftentimesforcedtodowhengivenachallenge;weareabletofindoutwhowetrulyareandwhatwetrulybelievein.ThecharactersDr.StockholmandNovaleeNationareexamplesofthatkindofpeopleinliterature.However,inliteratureandlife,itisallthesame.Easedoesnotchallengeus;adversityhelpsusdiscoverwhoweare.
得分点详解
1effectivelyandinsightfullydevelopsapointofviewontheissueanddemonstratesoutstandingcriticalthinking,usingclearlyappropriateexamples,reasons,andotherevidencetosupportitsposition
围绕论题有效、深刻地发展一个论点,运用贴切的事例、因果分析和其他证据支持论点,从而展示出色的思辨能力。
针对命题“你是否认为安逸不会考验我们,我们需要逆境来帮助我们发现自我?
”,本文表示同意“安逸不会考验我们,逆境才能帮助我们发现自我”(Aheroisonewhoiswillingtogiveuphispositioninsocietyinordertotellpeoplewhathebelievesisright.)。
为了支持论点,作者以两位文学作品的主人公——《人民公敌》(“TheEnemyofthePeople”)中的斯多克芒医生(Dr.Stockholm)和《甜心伊人》(“WheretheHeartis”)中的诺瓦利·内辛(NovaleeNation)为例,展示了他们是如何在逆境中发现自我的。
在分析事例时,作者对“发现自我”的抽象概念赋予了具体含义:
对于斯多克芒医生,“发现自我”是指“看清了自己对政府和社会的严重不满”(Hewasabletounderstandhisseverediscontentwiththegovernmentandsocietyasawhole.),而对于诺瓦利,“发现自我”则是指发现她“对摄影和文学的真正爱好”,以及更重要的,她“对于爱的渴望”(Amongthosethingswashertrueloveforphotographyandliterature,andmostofallheryearningforloveinherlife.)。
这种化抽象为具体的写作方法使事例显得更丰满,更深刻,更有说服力。
此外,作者在斯多克芒医生的例子中写到:
“在斯多克芒医生不得不面对逆境之前,他过着轻松安逸有规律的生活,行为举止正如镇上的其他人一样。
”(BeforeDr.Stockholmwasputinasituationwherehehadtofaceadversity,hehadlivedhislifewithmildeaseandregularity.Heacted
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