创新英语作文大赛复赛范文.docx
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创新英语作文大赛复赛范文
第一档
99—90
1.对作文题目有独到见解,并有很强的创新能力;2.思路清晰,观点明确,论证充分;
3.语言流畅,词汇丰富,句式多样;4.有效地使用语句、段落间的连接成分,内容连贯,结构紧凑;5.词汇和语法使用恰当,错误较少。
第二档
89—80
1.对作文题目有恰当理解,并有较强的创新能力;2.思路较清晰,观点较明确,论证较充分;3.语言通顺,词汇和句式有变换;4.能使用语句间的连接成分;内容较连贯;
5.词汇和语法使用较恰当,错误较少。
第三档
79—70
1.对作文题目有一定理解,创新能力一般;2.有自己的观点,并加以论证;
3.词汇和句式基本满足需要;4.语句较通顺;5.有常见词汇和语法使用错误。
第四档
69—60
1.对作文题目理解尚可,创新能力比较一般;2.内容不太连贯;
3.句式词汇有限;4.词汇和语法错误较多。
第五档
59以下
1.对作文题目理解不当;2.字数不够,内容不连贯;
3.语言混乱,思路不清晰;4.词汇和语法错误很多。
复赛作文题目及范文
第九届复赛作文Topic:
ShouldWeFollowFashions?
Directions:
Somepeoplesaythatfashionisjustforsellingclothes,soweshouldnotfollowitandweshoulddresswhatwelikeandfeelcomfortableinit.Howfardoyouagreewiththem?
Writeanessayonthefollowingtopic:
shouldwefollowfashions?
Requirements:
Illustrateyourviewonthetopicwithnolessthan250wordsandwritedownyouropinionsandreasonssolongastheyarereasonable.
第八届复赛作文:
Directions:
Readthefollowingparagraphandwriteacompositionasstatedatabout300wordsin60minutes.Yourcompositionwillbegradedaccordingtoclarity,accuracyandmeaningfulness.
InaccordancewithCRInews,thespiritofChinesevolunteers,fromrespondingtotheMay12earthquaketothe2008BeijingOlympicGames,notonlytouchedtheChinesepeople,butalsogeneratedworldwideattention.Officialstatisticsshowthatchinahasaccumulatedabout8billionhoursofvolunteerworkfrom380millionvolunteerssince1993andisgoingtohavemoreandmorevolunteers,especiallytheyouth.
Howdoyouunderstandvolunteerwork?
Inwhatway(s)isitimportanttopromotethewell-beingofindividuals,families,communitiesandtheworldatlarge?
Yourwritingoughttocontainthreeparts,yourviewpoint,thesupportingideas,andtheconclusion.
第七届复赛试题:
Directions:
Withthedevelopmentofcomputers,moreandmorepeopleareworkingwithcomputers.But,weknowthatcomputersareharmfulaswellasusefulandhelpful.Here,youareaskedtowriteanessayonthetopic“TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofComputers”.Youcangivesomeexamplesandfactstosupportyouropinion.YouressayshouldbewritteninEnglishwithnolessthan300wordswithin60minutes.
第六届复赛试题:
Directions:
Somepeoplemaintainthatuniversitiesarethebestplaceforyoungpeopletoreceivehighereducation;otherpeoplebelievethatyoungpeoplecanbeequallyeducatedbytakingcorrespondencecoursesorgoingtoeveningclassesandopenuniversitiesintheirsparetime.
Writeanarticleofabout300wordsinwhichyoucompareandcontrasttheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofformaluniversityeducationandinformalhighereducation.Whichdoyouthinkismoreeffectiveanddesirable?
Supportyourargumentwithappropriateexamplesorillustrations.
命题思路:
本试题要求学生对比高等教育的两种主要形式:
正规的大学课堂教育与函授、夜大学、电视大学等业余的非正规高等教育。
学生必须在对比权衡两种不同模式的利弊后,阐述自己的观点,并有适当的例证。
就题目所涉及的内容而言,考生比较熟悉,因为高等教育是与他们最贴近的现实。
这样可以在一定程度上保证本次写作考试的信度,确保学生不至于因为思路障碍,无话可说而影响英语写作。
从组织结构而言,本试题是典型的“对比型”作文,能够比较有效地考察学生的逻辑思维能力、观点表达能力以及运用适当的语言形式来实现转折、衔接、连贯等语言能力。
本题作文的评分可参照如下标准:
1.内容:
(30%)
主要观测点:
■内容是否充实、完整;是否有一定的支撑细节;■观点是否鲜明;■论证是否有力;
■逻辑是否合理;
2.组织结构:
(20%)
主要观测点:
■总体结构是否合理; ■能否确定有意义的比照点,逐点分层次阐述; ■能否分段落陈述,各段落有合适的主题句(TopicSentence)和辅助句(SupportingSentences); ■段落之间是否连贯;
3.语言表达:
(50%)主要观测点:
■用词是否贴切; ■句子结构是否符合语法; ■能否运用不同的语言形式,灵活表达;
■能否运用对比、递进、转折等语言衔接手段,实现文章的连贯; ■语言是否得体,语气是否得当。
第五届复赛试题:
WritingTopicforSemifinals
Directions:
Wecanbesurethatmostpeoplehaveexperiencedfailureandsuccess.Mostoften,whenwearesuccessfulwearehappy.Ifwefail,wearesad.Now,youareaskedtowriteanessayonthetopicofFailureandSuccess.Youcangivesomeexampleandfactstosupportyouropinion.Youcangivesomeexamplesandfactstosupportyouropinion.YouressayshouldbewritteninEnglishwithonlessthan300wordswithin60minutes.
第八届复赛作文范文
1、Deargrandfather:
Howareyou?
Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinus,inthenextyear,tobeavolunteerinthegreatevent,whichistoholdinShanghai.We,agenerationborninthe90sinourcity,havemadeateamtodothevolunteerwork.AndyouarewelcomedbyallourteammembersowingtoyourgreatamountofknowledgeaboutChinesetraditionsandculture.Pleasedon'ttellmeyouaretoooldtodothisjob.Ibelieveyouaresuretoacceptmyinvitationafterreadingmyfollowingexplanationoftheimportanceofthevolunteerwork.
Nowadays,volunteerwork,whichhasraisedpublicinterestandconcern,isbecomingmoreandmorepopularthroughouttheworld.Asisknowntoall,volunteerworkisnotonlymeaningfulbutalsonecessary.Onemypersonalwete,what'smore,it'sinterestingandpleasant!
Ithelpsusdevelopourselves.
Firstly,forindividuals,especiallythoseyoungpeople,todovolunteerworkisanavailablewaytogainsocialexperience.Bydoingvolunteerwork,theycanmeetvariouspeopleandtheymayrunacross(comethrough)allkindsoftroubles.Theyhowever,canbecomematurityanddeterminedbysolvingtheseproblems.Youknow,nopains,nogains.Also,individualswillrealizethattheydomakeadifferenceinsomeoneelse'slife,eventhewholeevent,andtheworld!
Theirconfidencecanberovised(builded)andconfidenceiswhatisneededindoinganyjobwell.
Forfamilies,ifyou'retheonewhoreceivedthehelpofthevolunteers,ofcauseyourissuewillbemoreeasilydealtwith.Ifyou'retheonewhogiveothersyourhand,youwillrealizethereexistsnobetterwaytoeducateyourchildrenbecauseyou'llgetthebestpresent-smiledeeplyfromone'sheart,inthewholeworld.
Itisagreatchanceforallmembersgettingclosertoeachotherincommunitiesbytakingpartinvolunteerwork.Theirteamspirits,theirco-operationwillbegreatimproved.So,whydon’tyoujoinus?
Themostimportantthingisthat,forthewholeworld,fortheentirehumanrace,volunteerworkwillmakeearthabetterplacetolivein。
Itisthroughvolunteerworkthatweknowtherearesomanypeoplearewillingtohelpothersalthoughtheycan'tgetmoneyfromit.Itisthroughvolunteerworkthatweknowweareallbrothersandsisters,thatweareallfamilies.
Cameonmydeargrandfather!
JoinusandhelpintroduceourgreatChineseculturetotheworld.21thcenturyisanopencentury.Youcantrustyourselfandpleasetrustus,too!
We'llhelpyouandweneedyourhelp!
Let'smaketheworldabetterplacebybeingavolunteer!
It'sasmallstepforusbutitisalargeoneforthewholeworld!
Loveyou.
Yourgranddaughter.(482)
专家建议:
句子之间的衔接做的还不是很到位,建议多练练关联词的用法。
词汇不够丰富,句型变化不多,建议多看些范文,多练一些经典句型。
专家点评:
文章立意很好,整体结构清晰,语言大体流畅,还能够引经据典,显示出有一定的文化底蕴。
2、Tobeavolunteer,Bringarayofsunshine山东省济南市山东省齐钢高级中学高三
DearTom:
Itisagreatpleasureformetohavethewonderfulchancetoputpentopaperandsendmygreetingstoyou.Yousaidthatyouwantedtobeavolunteeranddidn'tknowwhetheryoushouldornot.Iwanttohelpyouanalyzeit.
Inmyopinion.Ithinkitisnotonlyagoodchancetohelpothersbutalsoagoodopportunitytomakeself-improvement.You'dbetterparticipateinthevolunteerwork.Ifwecompareyouthtoflowers,asisoftenthecase,thentheyoungvolunteersarethemostbeautifulflowers.Byjoininginthevolunteerwork,youwilllearnhowtohelpothersandhowtoloveothers.What'smoreyoucanalsofindoutthattherearemanypeoplesufferingfromdisasterandthenyouwillvalueyourcomfortablelife.Althoughyoumayfeelverytiredasavolunteeranditmaycostyoumuchtimetohelpothers,Istillinsistthatyoushouldbeavolunteerbecausetheadvantagesbrightaboutbyvolunteerworkoverweighthedisadvantages.
Ifallthepeoplerefusedtobevolunteers,thepeoplesufferedfromthe5·12earthquakecouldloseheart(丧失勇气)andmostofthemwouldn'thavethechancetosurvivefromthatdisaster.Ifnoneofthepeoplewantedtobeavolunteer,theBeijingOlympicGameswouldbeafailure.Ifeverypeopledidn'tfeellikebeingavolunteer,therewouldbenopeoplecleaningtheenvironmentandprotectingthebeautifulsceneryautomatically(自发地).Itwasterrible!
Fromallmentionedabove,volunteersplayaveryimportantpartinourdailylife.TobeavolunteerwillgaingloryforChina.Asisknowntoall,Chinesechildrenarealwayslaughedatforlackingofpractice,sotobeavolunteerisagoodchancetochangeit.
Frommypointofview,it'shightimethatyoubecameavolunteerandlearnedtohelpothers.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontohelpingothers,theworldwillbemuchmorebeautiful!
Atlast,wishyouallthebest!
SincerelyYours.
Lily.
专家建议:
一篇文章的结构是评判该文章优劣的重要参考标准,但结构显然不够简洁清晰,所以建议作者能在平时多阅读英文报纸上的文章,有意识地观察规范的英语文章是怎样设计结构的。
专家点评:
文章二三段的结构很混乱,建议这样的文章段落都应写成总、分、总的形式更能突出文章的逻辑性,并在“分”的部分也一条一条分开写,而不是都堆在一段内,让人分不清哪句是观点哪句是论证,很混乱。
另外注意同义词的替换已是文章表达更丰富,比如文章中多次出现的帮助他人就都是使用:
helpothers就显得过于单一了
3、Theimportanceofvolunteerwork辽宁省鞍山市鞍山市第一中学高三
Inmyopinion,volunteerworkisquiteanimportantpartofthemodernsociety.Thereasonsareasfollows.
Inthemoderntime,thankstothedevelopmentofeconomyandtechnology,materialenjoymentearnedbothinhigherqualityandlargerquantity.Atapriceofthis,individualsaretakingtheriskoflosingtheirownvaluesandevensparingnoefforttomaketheirfartaneevenatthepriceoftheinterestofthesociety.Sothevolunteerworkhasbeenplayinganimportantpartasaspiritualcomfortnotonlytothereceiversbutalsotothevolunteers,promotingthewell-beingofthelove-givers,makingextravalueforothersandkeepingaperfectbalanceofthewholesociety.
Infamilies,volunteerworkwillhelptoemphasizetheimportanceofmorality,meetemotionalneedsandevenbecomeavivideducationallesson.Parents,whoarewidelyregardedasthefirstandmostimportantteachersoftheirchildren,areteachingtheirchildrenthroughtheac
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