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MBA英语作文
MBA作文讲义
考试流程
SectionⅠ
UseofEnglish
(20题)10points
20mins
SectionⅡ
ReadingComprehension
(20题)40points
(5题)10points
80mins
SectionⅢ
Translation
15points
30mins
SectionⅣ
Writing
10+15=25points
15+35mins
2010—2014年作文回顾
写作25%分数
小作文2010—2014年99%信件10分/15mins
2010感谢信[邀请]中美文化项目刚回国①感谢②邀请来中国玩
2011恭喜信[建议]表弟考上大学①恭喜②给些建议
2012投诉信[解决方案]电子词典坏了①投诉②给出解决方案
2013邀请信我们班举行一个慈善义卖①邀请
2014询问信出国与室友居住①你的生活习惯②给出建议
大作文议论文15分/35mins(★数据图表连续5年硬币原理看图说话/坏现象)
提出问题/分析问题/总结
作文注意:
一个中心,两个基本点(以阅卷老师为中心;风险最小化,得分最大化)
卷面:
字数+20(恰当字数)小100+20大150+20
段落3段式(4段式)
格式空行,空格
字句,行距
杂项改错不改好(FudanUniversityisanoldschool;itisveryfamous.)
书写规范cannotcan’t
基本要求:
涂改拼写语法
高分作文标志:
1、是否长短句交叉;习惯使用被动weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.
2、是否会使用插入语;如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说:
Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…
3、用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
Theapartmentisveryclosetoyourschool.=Theapartmentiswithinastone’sthrowofyourschool.
4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
Internet=cyber-space/theWeb/world/community
people=individuals/citizens/netizens/residents/working-ageadults
moreandmore=growing/increasing…
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
A:
HiJohn!
You’reupearly!
B:
Yes,theearlybirdcatchestheworm!
A:
HiJohn!
You’reupearly!
B:
Well,youknowwhattheysayabouttheearlybird!
有关当局要采取更好的措施
Therelevantauthoritieshavetomakebetterrulesandregulations.
Theauthoritiesconcerned
小作文
一.六种头:
1.Iamwritingthislettertotellyouthat_____________
Iamhappytolearn/hearthat____________
Iamsorrytosay/tellyouthat____________
2.Itisbelieved/said/hoped/known/assumed/acknowledged(bymanypeople)that____________
3.众所周知Asweallknow,___________/Asisknowntoall,____________
4.我认为:
We/Icometorealize/believethat____________
Iamfirmlyconvincedthat____________
AsfarasIamconcerned,____________
Intheeyesofmostpeople,____________
Istronglyfeel/dosuggestthat____________
Ihavereasonstobelievethat____________
5.Everyone(inbusiness/intheworld)hasbeentoldthat__________
6.Ihopethislettercanfindyouinagoodmood./Thisletterisexpectedtofindyouinagoodmood.
二.3→30
长句=头+身体+尾巴+垃圾
以复旦很有名为例:
FudanUniversityisfamous.如何变长句
头:
Asisknowntoall,___________________________________
身体:
FudanUniversityenjoysgreatreputationandpopularity–主句
垃圾:
allovertheworld–介词结构
尾巴so,Iamproudthatyoubecomeapartofit.---从句
推荐使用从句:
When/if----假设逻辑关系
because/so—因果
but,转折
,which_____________
,who_____________
三.静态----动态语言(be动词的转化问题)
bepopular/famous:
enjoygreatreputationandpopularityallovertheworld
becheap:
enjoyalowandcompetitivepriceinthemarket.
beimportant:
playacrucialroleindoingsomething
eg.Qualityplaysacrucialroleinboostingacompany’spopularityandreputationinthemodernmarket.
四:
主体部分万能句(2句话)
1.因果关系
2.Thetoppriorityshouldbegiventodosth,whichmakesiteasierforsb.todosth.
因果关系几种表达法:
(1)Adepend(s)[inlargemeasure]onB.
Successdepends[inlargemeasure]onone’shardworkanddedication/diligence/greatefforts.
(2)Agive(s)risetoB.
Lackofcommunicationislikelytogiverisetosocialconflictsanddisputes.
can→beableto
may→belikelyto
should→besupposedto
(3)AisasignificantcauseofB.
Thelowprice,goodqualityandsuperiorservicearesignificantcausesofthepopularityofdomesticcarsinthemodernmarket.
(4)AissupposedtocontributetoB.
Lackofenvironmentalconservationawarenessissupposedtocontributetoglobalwarming.
2010年
第一步:
定位-----感谢信
第二步:
归纳要求----1.感谢2.邀请
第三步:
模具对号入座1.开门见山就说事-----感谢
2.过渡---夸项目,为彼此骄傲/或回顾很开心
3.主体(2个万能句)--沟通促成交流
4.结束语------------------邀请来中国玩
DearTom,
Iamwritingtoexpressmysincerethanksforyourwarmreception,whenIjoinedtheSino-Americanculturalexchangeprogram./whenIwasthememberoftheSino-Americanculturalexchangeprogram./whichmademyjourney/travel/stayintheUSimpressiveandpleasant/interestingandmeaningful/colorful.
Asisknowntoall,thisprogramenjoysgreatpopularityandreputationallovertheworld,soIamproudthatwecouldbecomeapartofit./IamfirmlyconvincedthatwhenIwasthememberoftheSino-Americanexchangeprogram,IhadawonderfultimewithyouguysintheUS.
主体万能句:
沟通促成交流
ItisbelievedbymanypeoplethatcommunicationbetweenChinaandAmericaisasignificantcauseofculturaldevelopment.IstronglyfeelthatwhenIreturnhome,thetoppriorityshouldbegiventobringthebestpartofyourculturetoourland,whichmakesiteasierforChinesepeopletounderstandthewesternworld.
IholdanexpectationthatyouwillpayavisittoChinasoon.Iamlookingforwardtohearingformyou/yourreply/seeingyou.
YoursSincerely,
ZhangWei
2011年
第一步:
定位-----恭喜信
第二步:
归纳要求----1.恭喜2.建议和指导
第三步:
模具对号入座1.开门见山就说事-----恭喜
2.过渡---------------------夸复旦,为你骄傲40-50字
3.主体(2个万能句)--建议指导:
好好学习50-60字
4.结束语------------------祝福前程似锦10-20字
DearLiMing,
IamhappytohearthatyouwillgotoFudanUniversity.Asweallknow,FudanUniversityenjoysgreatreputationandpopularityallovertheworld,soIamproudthatyoubecomeapartofit.
Itisbelievedthatone’ssuccessdepends[inlargemeasure]onhishardworkanddedication.Idosuggestthatyourtoppriorityshouldbegiventolearnusefulandhelpfulknowledgeincollege,whichmakesiteasierforyoutobecomeanexcellentcandidateaftergraduation.
Iholdanexpectationthatyouwillhaveabrightfuture.=Youwillhaveagreatprospectinthefuture.
Yourssincerely,
ZhangWei
求职信:
复旦MBA院校刚刚毕业,求biz-manager工作---无经验类型
第一步:
定位-----求职信
第二步:
归纳要求----1.求工作2.原因3.面试机会
第三步:
模具对号入座1.开门见山就说事-----求工作
2.过渡---------------------过度句
3.主体(2个万能句)----录用原因
4.结束语------------------给面试
DearSirorMadam,
Iamwritingtoapplyforthepositionofbusinessmanager(thatisadvertisedonthenewspaper)inyourcompany./IamwritingtotellyouthatIaminterestedinthepositionofbusinessmanager…Iamprettysurethatwhenitcomestomanagementwork,Iamyourbestcandidate.
Whenitcomesto…=whenpeopletalkaboutthe…
Asfor…
Whenthereissuchapositionopen/availableinyourcompany
Asyoucanseefrommyresume/personalinformationduringthepast3years,mytoppriorityhasbeengiventolearnusefulandhelpful/systematicandscientificmanagementknowledge/theories,whichmakesiteasierformetostepintotheworkplace/becomeanexcellentbusinessmanager/copewithmajorchallengesinworkasateamleader/workefficiently.ThereforeIhave(alotof)confidence/Iamfirmlyconvincedthatsuchoverallandsystematic/useful/practicallearningislikelytocontributetomygoodperformanceinmanagementposition.
Iholdanexpectationthatyouwilloffermeanopportunityforacominginterview.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yourssincerely,
ZhangWei
求职信(有经验)
DearSirorMadam,
Iamwritingtoapplyforthepositionofsalesrep/salesperson(thatisadvertisedonthenewspaper)inyourcompany./IamwritingtotellyouthatIaminterestedinthepositionofsalesrep/salesperson…Iamprettysurethatwhenitcomestosaleswork,Iamyourbestcandidate.
Asyoucanseefrommyresume/personalinformation,duringthepast10yearsmytoppriorityhasbeengiventodosaleswork,whichmakesiteasierformetobuildupagoodrelationshipwithclientsandcustomers(consumers)/run/manageapowerfulsalesteam.ThereforeIhave(alotof)confidence/Iamfirmlyconvinced/Ihavereasonstobelievethatmyrichworkingexperienceandprofessionalsalesskillsarelikelytocontributetogoodsalesresults/excellentperformanceinyourcompany.
Iholdanexpectationthatyouwilloffermeanopportunityforacominginterview.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yourssincerely,
ZhangWei
推荐信:
DearMr.Smith,
Iamwritingthislettertorecommendaverygood/perfect/excellentcandidateforthesalespositionopen/availableinyourcompany.Iamprettysurewhenitcomestosaleswork,Tomisyourbestcandidate/choice/person.
辞职信:
为家庭,为搬家,为未来跳槽,为过去不满意,为自个儿创业
DearMr.Smith,
Iamwritingtotellyou/IamsorrytotellyouthatIwillquitthecurrentjobinourcompany.Ifirmlybelievethatwhenweworkedtogetherinthepastfewyears,Ireallyhadawonderfultime.
Asyouknow,whenIamgettingolder,myhappinessdependsinlargemeasureonmyfamily.ThereforeIstronglyfeelthatmytoppriorityshouldbegiventotakecareofmyfamily,whichmakesitmorelikelyformetobeagoodwifeandmother.
Iholdanexpectationthatyouwillapproveof/agreeonmydecision/request.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yourssincerely,
ZhangWei
道歉信,建议信和询问信
ⅠDirections:
YouhavejustcomebackfromCanadaandfoundamusicCDinyourluggagethatyouforgettoreturntoBob,yourlandlordthere.Writehimaletterto:
1)makeanapology
2)suggestasolution
DearBob,
Iamwritingthislettertomakeanapology/apologizethatIforgottoreturnthetraditionalmusicCDtoyou.Asforthealbum,itisbelievedbymanypeoplethatitisnoteasytogetanotheroneinthemarket.
IamstronglyconvincedthatthispieceofCDislikelytocontributetothedevelopmentofyourmusiccareer.IdorealizethatwhenIcomeback,mytoppriorityshouldbegiventomailittoyou,whichmakesiteasierforyoutoenjoythebeautifulandpleasantsongsofit.
IexpectthatyoucouldtellmeyouraddressandIamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.
Yours,
ZhangWei
ⅡDirections:
Writealettertoyouruniversitylibrary,
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