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届高三英语二轮复习专题六书面表达第六讲怎样赢得大满分衔接要巧过渡要妙练习

第六讲　怎样赢得“大满分”——衔接要“巧”，过渡要“妙”

审题、拟点、联句后，接下来就是润色成文。

有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“启、承、转、合”四方法使文章流畅自然，是考生书面表达争创满分的必备条件。

[写作技法指导]

启——创造良好开端

[常用开头词汇]

表示“启”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。

常见的词汇有：

first,firstly，firstofall，atfirst,inthefirstplace,aboveall,tobegin/startwith,today,now,nowadays,atpresent,currently,recently,generallyspeaking,accordingto等。

First,Ithinkeveryoneneedsfriendsandiseagertogetfriendship.

Firstofall,wemustmakefulluseofevery45minutelesson.

Nowadays/Recently,peopleinmanybigcitiesarecomplainingabouttheheavytraffic.

Inthefirstplace,shecanreadattherateof100wordsaminute.

Tobegin/startwith,smokingshouldbebannedinpublicareas.

Generallyspeaking,th

emoreyoupractise,themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.

[常用开头句式]

Astheproverbsays/Asthesayinggoes，“Timeismoney.”

Ascanbeseenfromthetable,nearlyeveryoneownsonemobilephoneinChina.

WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,computersplayanimportantroleinpeople’slife.

Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.

Thereisnodenyingthatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind.

Itisbelievedthathealthisabovewealth.

Itiswellknownthatanelephantisaverykindandgentleanimal.

I’mexcitedtolearnthatwearegoingtostartamagazine.

[满分作文选粹]

I’mLiHua.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoseetheChinesepapercuttingartexhibition.（2017·全国卷Ⅱ）

Firstofall,I’dliketoknowwhentheclasswillstartandhowmanystudentstherewillbeinaclass.（全国卷Ⅰ）

Asisknowntoall,shoesplayanimportantroleinourlife,foritcanprotectourfeetfrombeinghurt.（湖南卷）

承——顺势承上启下

[常用顺承词汇]

表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。

常见的词汇有：

second/secondly,also,besides,inaddition,soonafterwards,afterthat,what’smore,furthermore，moreover,what’sworse,stillless,tomakemattersworse,worsestill,forexample,inotherwords,especially,particularly,obviously,meanwhile,atthesametime等。

Also,doletmeknowifyouneedmoreinformation.

Secondly，weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.

Besides,developingagoodhabitoflearningcanhelpyouimproveyourlearningeffectively.

What’smore,goodbookscanhelpustodevelopgoodcharacters.

Inaddition,weshouldn’tneglectthateveryonewantsafriendlyandpeacefulsociety.

Meanwhile/Atthesametime,Iwillregarditasmydutytokeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.

[常用顺承句式]

TakeBeijingforexample,itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.

Whatismoreseriousisthatwedon’tcherishwildlife.

AsfarasIamconcerned,theystandforlove,friendshipandunity.

[满分作文选粹]

Inaddition,therearefamousartistswhowillperformhowtocutpaperonthespot.（2017·全国卷Ⅱ）

Worsestill,Idon’tevenknowmuchaboutthewordandformatoftheenclosure.（2016·全国卷Ⅰ）

Furthermore,votingontheInternetmakesinstantfeedbackpossible.（2016·江苏卷）

Afterthat,Isetouttoreadwidelyforaninspiringtopic,wroteaspeech,andpracticeditsdeliveryinbeautifulpronunc

iationwithgoodpublicspeechskills.（2016·浙江卷）

AsfarasI’mconcerned,everysummerIstayatmyuncle’shouseinthecountryforthreeweeksandenjoyawonderfullifethere.（2016·四川卷）

Besides,IhavesuchagoodcommandofEnglishthatIamelectedasassistanttomyEnglishteacher.

（2015·陕西卷）

Soonafterwards,asecondentrancewasopenedtotheparkingplace.（北京卷）

转——巧妙转折过渡

[常用转折过渡词汇]

表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。

常见的词汇有：

but,yet,however,while,otherwise,or（else）,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,contraryto,inanycase,though,although,as,evenif/though,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof等。

ButunfortunatelyImindmyownbusinesswithoutconsideringmyparents.

However,notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwebecametheloser.

Ontheotherhand,onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.

Onthecontrary,thevolunteersalwaysclaimthattheyaretiredofthelifeonearth.

ContrarytowhatIhadoriginallysaid,thetripturnedouttobefun.

[常用转折句式]

Whatever/Nomatterwhatyousay,hewon’tbelieveyou.　

Whetheryoubelieveitornot,itistrue.

Asamatteroffact,Ididn’tagreewithyou.

[满分作文选粹]

However,aplancanbearnofruitwithoutbeingactuallycarriedout.（2016·浙江卷）

Inspiteofthelargescaleconstructionofroadsandhighways,thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement,becauseoftheeverincreasingnumberofcarstheseyears.

（2015·江苏卷）

Otherwise,we’llhavetoanswerforourselfishnesssoonerorlater.（重庆卷）

Butnow,becausemyleftfootwasinjured,Icannotgowithyouasplanned.（北京卷）

合——完美结束全文

[常用结尾词汇]

表示“合”的词汇常用于小结段落中上文的内容，引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。

常见的词汇有：

finally,lastbutnotleast,inshort，inbrief,inconclusion,ina/oneword,tosumup,allinall,onthewhole,ingeneral等。

Allinall,travelingisthebestchoicetorechargeourselvesandgetreadyforthenewchallenges.

Inconclusion,a

goodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.

Onthewhole,Ifindabikemoreenjoyablethanamotorcycle.

Inaword,successisimportant,andsoisfailure,becauseit’sthemotherofsuccess.

Tosumup,environmentalprotectionisofgreatimportance,whichcanmakeuslivemorecomfortablyandhealthily.

[常用结尾句式]

I’dappreciateitifyoucoulddeliverthemassoonaspossible.

Itishightimethatwedidsomethingtopreventtheenvironmentfrombeingpolluted.

Onlywithcombinedeffortscanweexpectourhometowntotakeonanewlookinthenearfuture.

Wecan,therefore,cometotheconclusionthatnothingissopreciousaspeaceintheworld.

Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthatyoumusthaveselfconfidenceifyouwanttoachievesomething.

[满分作文选粹]

Inaword,Ilikeeverythinginspring,especiallythefeelingsbathedintherainandsunshine.

（2016·四川卷）

Inshort,internetvoting,tosomeextent,isunfair,ifimmoral,andcannotbetrusted.（2016·江苏卷）

Therefore,Iholdapositiveattitudetowardsonlinevoting.（2016·江苏卷）

Finally,Iwouldliketoaskafewquestionsabouthispersonallife,whichmustbeveryinteresting.（2015·安徽卷）

Iwillbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeakindconsideration.（2015·陕西卷）

Lastbutnotleast,healthisalsoverysignificantforusstudents.（江西卷）

So,it’ssafetoconcludethatitisreasonabletoincludeEnglishwhichfacilitatesdailycommunication.（江苏卷）

[应用落实体验]

A

（2017·长春实验中学模拟）汽车走进了普通家庭，现在越来越多的人选择开车出行，但这也带来了不少问题。

请你用英语为某一学生报社写封信，内容包括：

1．开车出行的好处；

2．开车出行带来的问题；

3．你的观点和建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearSir/Madam，

________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours，

LiHua

[考生作文]

Dear__Sir/Madam，

Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,moreandmorefamiliesowncars,whichmakesthelifeeasier,quickerandmoreconvenient.Besides,itcansavethemalotoftime.Sothisiswhysomanypeopleprefertodrivecarswhengoingout.Butjustaseverycoinhastwosides,thepopularityofdrivingcarsresultsinmanyproblems.Forexample,toomanycarscancausetrafficproblems.What’sworse/Tomakemattersworse/Worsestill，airpollutionisbecomingworseandworse.

Personally/Inmyopinion/AsfarasI’mconcerned，asausefultraffictool,carsshouldbeusedoccasionally.Ifpossible，wecantakepublictransportorgooutbybikeoronfoot.

Looking__forward__to__your__reply.

Yours，

Li__Hua

[我来提升]　将文中加黑的衔接词升级

1．Besides→In__addition/What’s__more/Moreover

2．So→Therefore

3．But→However

4．Forexample→For__instance

[积累练习]　将下列衔接词进行升级

1．inmyview→in__my__point__of__view

2．becauseof→on__account__of/due__to/owing__to/thanks__to

3．because→in__that

4．assoonas→the__moment/immediately/on__（upon）＋动名词

5．if→providing/provided/supposing/suppose/on__condition__that　

6．although→despite/in__spite__of

B

（2017·青岛模拟）假如你是某中学的学生李华。

前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。

请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。

内容主要包括：

1．付出才有回报；

2．收获自信和友谊；

3．感激之情。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。

LookingbacktotheNationalEnglishSpeakingCompetitionItookpartinseveraldaysago,Ihavealottosharewithyou.________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

[考生作文]

Looking__back__to__the__National__English__Speaking__Competition__I__took__part__in__several__days__ago,__I__have__a__lot__to__share__with__you.IamverygladthatI’vewonthefirstprizeinthecompetitionandIamproudofmyself.I’veestablishedfriendshipanditdevelopedmyselfconfidence.Iowemysuccesstomyteachersandjudges.Theyhavehelpedmealot.FromthecompetitionIhaveunderstoodthemeaningoftheproverb“Nopains,nogains”．Iowemysuccesstomyworkinghard.Ihavemadefriendswithstudentsfromalloverourcountry.Ihavelearnedalotf

romthem.Theexperienceisveryimportanttous.Iwillalwaystreasurethismeaningfulandmemorableexperience.Iexpecttoachievemoresuccess.

[段落升格作文]

Looking__back__to__the__National__English__Speaking__Competition__I__took__part__in__several__days__ago,__I__have__a__lot__to__share__with__you.

Firstly,IfeelreallydelightedthatI’vewonthefirstprizeinthecompetition,whichmakesmeunderstandthetruemeaningoftheproverb“Nopains,nogains”．Besides,I’veestablishedthefriendshipwithstudent