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批改网大二下学期总结

1）InterculturalCommunication

TheEnglishnameof"InterculturalCommunication"is"communicationcross-cultural（orcommunicationinter-cultural）"",whichnotonlyreferstothecommunicationbetweennativespeakersandnon-nativespeakersbutalsoreferstothecommunicationbetweenthepeopleinlanguageandculturalbackgroud.Therearedifferencesaswell. Itispopularllysaidifyoudealwithforeigners（duetotheexistenceoflanguageandculturalbackground）,youshouldpayattentiontowhattheproblemisandhowtocommunicateproperly.

FromthepointofviewofChineseasaforeignlanguageprofessional,"InterculturalCommunication"conceptcanbedefinedlikethis:

1st:

bothpartiesmustcomefromdifferentculturalbackgrounds.

2nd:

bothpartiesmustusethesamelanguage.

3rd:

thecommunicationbetweenthetwosidesisarealtimeoralcommunication.

FormyfirstexperienceaboutInterculturalCommunication,itisembarrassofmetodosomething,whichremindsmeofthetimewhenIcommunicatedwithaforeignteacher. Ifinditdifficultformetounderstandhimbecauseofdifferentcultureandbackground. Therefore,itisnecessaryforustoknowaboutotherculture,costum,history,etc. Onlyitthisway,canweunderstandthembetter.Lastbutnotleast,wewillturnouttobesuccessfulintheendwithoutdoubt!

1.1

TheEnglishnameof"InterculturalCommunication"is"communicationcross-cultural（orcommunicationinter-cultural）"",whichnotonlyreferstothecommunicationbetweennativespeakersandnon-nativespeakersbutalsoreferstothecommunicationbetweenthepeopleinlanguageandculturalbackgroud.

∙[词语错误]请检查backgroud，确认拼写正确。

∙[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。

查看与person的区别。

1.2

Therearedifferencesaswell.

1.3

Itispopularllysaidifyoudealwithforeigners（duetotheexistenceoflanguageandculturalbackground）,youshouldpayattentiontowhattheproblemisandhowtocommunicateproperly.

∙[词语错误] be后面的从句一般不省略that  

∙[词语错误]请检查popularlly，确认拼写正确。

∙[批改提示]注意dealwith和dealin区别。

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 pay...attention 在教材中出现过 18138 次  

第1段

2.1

FromthepointofviewofChineseasaforeignlanguageprofessional,"InterculturalCommunication"conceptcanbedefinedlikethis:

∙[其他]请检查aforeignlanguageprofessional，本族语中很少使用。

∙[批改提示]注意Chinese和theChinese区别。

第2段

3.1

1st:

bothpartiesmustcomefromdifferentculturalbackgrounds.

∙[句子警示]英文句首一般不以阿拉伯数字开头。

第3段

4.1

2nd:

bothpartiesmustusethesamelanguage.

∙[句子警示]英文句首一般不以阿拉伯数字开头。

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 use...language 在教材中出现过 2110 次  

第4段

5.1

3rd:

thecommunicationbetweenthetwosidesisarealtimeoralcommunication.

∙[句子警示]英文句首一般不以阿拉伯数字开头。

第5段

6.1

FormyfirstexperienceaboutInterculturalCommunication,itisembarrassofmetodosomething,whichremindsmeofthetimewhenIcommunicatedwithaforeignteacher.

∙[动词错误] isembarrass 疑似动词连用。

6.2

Ifinditdifficultformetounderstandhimbecauseofdifferentcultureandbackground.

6.3

Therefore,itisnecessaryforustoknowaboutotherculture,costum,history,etc.

∙[词语错误]请检查costum，确认拼写正确。

∙[其他] culture 在本句上下文中多用复数形式。

6.4

Onlyitthisway,canweunderstandthembetter.

6.5

Lastbutnotleast,wewillturnouttobesuccessfulintheendwithoutdoubt!

∙[批改提示]查看withoutdoubt与ofcourse的区别。

2）MyFutureCareer

Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsabouttheirfuturecareer. Ontheonehand,workissomethingwecancountontoliveagreatlife,atrusted,lifelongfriendwhowillneverdesertus. Ontheotherhand,itiscareerthatinwhichwecanbeabsorbedinordertohaveabrightfuture. Asforme,itisalsosignificantforustochooseasuitableworkasourcareer. Nevertheless,weshouldformagoodhabitfirstlytodoeverythingsoastobecomecompetitiveandstandoutinthecrowds.

Ihavebeenalwaysdreamingofbecominganetworkengineerandlookingforwardtothedreamforalongtime. Meanwhile,Ibelievethatwe'veachievedsuccessinourfieldwhendon'tknowwhetherwhatwe'redoingisworkingorplaying. Therefore,itisofimportanceformetolearnmoreaboutnetworkandteachmyselftoprogrammecraftily,withwhich,Iwillturnouttobeskillfulandcompetitiveeventuallythatwillhelpmedifferfromothers. Atthesametime,itisofbenefitformetogetagoodjob.

Sofar,IhavelearnedmanybasiccoursesontheInternet. Inthelongrun,Istillhavealongwaytogo. Furthermore,ifonlyIcouldinsistineverything,IwouldovercomevariousdifficultiesIface. Curiosityalsoplaysanimportantpartinmydevelopment,which,willmakemediscoversomethingthatothersdon'tfocusoneasily. Asaresult,itwilldevelopmycreativitywhichwillbebeneficialtomywork. Lastbutnotleast,itissignificantformetomakeaplandoeverythingtothebestofmyability. Onlyinthisway,canIhaveacareerIlove.1.1

Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsabouttheirfuturecareer.

∙[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。

查看与person的区别。

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 have...opinion 在教材中出现过 2989 次  

1.2

Ontheonehand,workissomethingwecancountontoliveagreatlife,atrusted,lifelongfriendwhowillneverdesertus.

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 live...life 在教材中出现过 7617 次  

∙[批改提示] trust表示“相信”。

注意与trustin的区别。

详情点击  

1.3

Ontheotherhand,itiscareerthatinwhichwecanbeabsorbedinordertohaveabrightfuture.

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 have...future 在教材中出现过 2575 次  

1.4

Asforme,itisalsosignificantforustochooseasuitableworkasourcareer.

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 choose...work 在教材中出现过 65 次  

1.5

Nevertheless,weshouldformagoodhabitfirstlytodoeverythingsoastobecomecompetitiveandstandoutinthecrowds.

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 form...habit 在教材中出现过 17 次  

第1段

2.1

Ihavebeenalwaysdreamingofbecominganetworkengineerandlookingforwardtothedreamforalongtime.

2.2

Meanwhile,Ibelievethatwe'veachievedsuccessinourfieldwhendon'tknowwhetherwhatwe'redoingisworkingorplaying.

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 achieve...success 在教材中出现过 1003 次  

2.3

Therefore,itisofimportanceformetolearnmoreaboutnetworkandteachmyselftoprogrammecraftily,withwhich,Iwillturnouttobeskillfulandcompetitiveeventuallythatwillhelpmedifferfromothers.

∙[高分表达]高分词组，beof接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。

∙[批改提示]注意skilled和skillful的区别。

2.4

Atthesametime,itisofbenefitformetogetagoodjob.

∙[高分表达]高分词组，beof接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 get...job 在教材中出现过 69 次  

第2段

3.1

Sofar,IhavelearnedmanybasiccoursesontheInternet.

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 learn...course 在教材中出现过 12 次  

∙[批改提示]注意byfar和sofar的区别。

3.2

Inthelongrun,Istillhavealongwaytogo.

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 have...way 在教材中出现过 11844 次  

3.3

Furthermore,ifonlyIcouldinsistineverything,IwouldovercomevariousdifficultiesIface.

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 overcome...difficulty 在教材中出现过 182 次  

∙[批改提示]建议将furthermore改为furthermore。

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 face...difficulty 在教材中出现过 672 次  

3.4

Curiosityalsoplaysanimportantpartinmydevelopment,which,willmakemediscoversomethingthatothersdon'tfocusoneasily.

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 play...part 在教材中出现过 4525 次  

3.5

Asaresult,itwilldevelopmycreativitywhichwillbebeneficialtomywork.

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 develop...creativity 在教材中出现过 4 次  

∙[高分表达] bebeneficialto意为应有利于，有益于，属于经典高分短语。

3.6

Lastbutnotleast,itissignificantformetomakeaplandoeverythingtothebestofmyability.

3.7

Onlyinthisway,canIhaveacareerIlove.

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 have...career 在教材中出现过 4142 次 

3）HomeSchooling

Itisknowntousthatparentsarethefirstteachersoftheirchildren. ItisHomeSchoolingthatmakesamajorityofchildrenexcellentwiththehelpoftheirparentstosomeextent,whichisofbenefitforthemtoformagoodhabitandbehavethemselvestoacertaindegree. Letmetakesomeoneasanexample. WeallknowthatHelenKellerwhoisnotonlydeafbutalsoblindturnedtobeafamouswriter,educatorandcharitarianeventually. Nevertheless,allofthatdependsontheassistanceofherhometeacherAnnieandtheirmotherwhofoundhergiftthatsensitiveinsightwhenshewasyoung. Asaresult,shecanachievegreatsuccesswiththeguideofrightidea.

However,Homeschoolinghastwosidesjustascoins. Ontheonehand,thereisagoodguidethatwilldogoodtous. Ontheotherhand,itcanalsoeasilyreadtosomebadbehaviorsresultfromlooseconduct. AllinallweshouldbealwaysfocusingonbothsidesofHomeschooling,which,willbealwaysbeneficialtochildren'sfuture.

Furthermore,comparedtoconventionaleducation,homeschoolingisanewfashionablekindwaytoeducating. Nowadays,itispossibleforchildrentostayathometobeeducatedinallkindsofwayswiththerapiddevelopmentofeconomy.Besides,itisconvenientforthemtoacquirevarioustechnology. Howbeit,therearesomeproblemstakenplaceeasilyaroundus. Forinstance,manystudentsabsorbthemselvesintocomputergames,talkshowprogrammeandsoon. Asaresult,somechildrendon'tlearnwell,butgodownhilleventually. Inshort,itisofgreatnecessityforustoregardhomeschoolingrightly. Onlyinthisway,canwehaveabrightfuturefinally

1.1

Itisknowntousthatparentsarethefirstteachersoftheirchildren.

1.2

ItisHomeSchoolingthatmakesamajorityofchildrenexcellentwiththehelpoftheirparentstosomeextent,whichisofbenefitforthemtoformagoodhabitandbehavethemselvestoacertaindegree.

∙[高分表达]高分词组，beof接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 make...majority 在教材中出现过 108 次  

∙[搭配学习]动名搭配 form...habit 在教材中出现过 17 次  

1.3

Letmetakesomeoneasanexample.

1.4

WeallknowthatHelenKellerwhoisnotonlydeafbutalsoblindturnedtobeafamouswriter,educatorandcharitarianeventually.

1.5

Nevertheless,allofthatdependsontheassistanceofhe