作文范文之六级作文解析.docx
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作文范文之六级作文解析
2013年12月六级作文解析
【篇一:
2013年12月四级作文真题解析及范文】
2013年12月英语四级作文题目一
directions:
forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashorteasyonthepicturebelow.youshouldstartyoureasywithabriefaccountoftheincreasinguseofthemobilephoneinpeople’slifeandthenexplaintheconsequencesofoverusingit.youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.
peoplearecrossingthestreetlookingattheircellphonesandusingsticksinordertosee.
例文1
theoverusingofcellphones
thereisamanwalkingacrossthe
street
absorbedlyfocusingonhiscellphonewithoutnoticingthesurroundings.thissortofphenomenonisnotuncommonandrareinsomemetropolis,especiallyamongtheyoungsters.
whatthepictureillustratesistheprevailingsituationthathaslongexistedintodayschina.thatisthemobilephoneobsession.withtheadventofinformationage,peoplearebecomingincreasinglyfascinatedontheelectronicproducts,especiallythecellphones.notsurprisingly,youcouldeasilynoticethatmostofusareobsessedinsendingmessages,playingonlinegameswiththeirmobilephones.itcannotbedeniedthatthisphenomenonmaynegativelyimpacttherelationshipamongpeople,andthereforetheywillbecomeestrangedandisolated.
personally,inviewoftheoveruseofmobilephones,iholdthatweindividualsshouldraisethenecessaryawarenessthatgood
relationshiparereinforcedbysincereandface-to-facecommunication.
例文2
(描述图画内容):
ontheroad,standsaman,whoiscompletelyconcentratingonhiscellphonewhereasusingastickfordirection,whichimpliestheunprecedentedpopularityorevenoverusingcellphonesnowadays.
(图画介绍了或传达了什么内涵,想表达什么用意)peopleingrowingnumberstendtobecomeaddictedtothe
excessiveuseofthem.accordingtoasurveycarriedoutinchinadailyseveraldaysago,almost47%ofcitizensexplainthattheywouldexperiencecertainkindofanxietywithoutcellphonesathand.meanwhile,theoverusingcellphones,firstlywouldexertdetrimentalimpactonthehealthofus.whatsworse,itwouldperformanegativecharacterininterpersonalrelationshipsincewehavelesstimetocommunicate.
statistics
judgingfromtheevidenceabove,certainmeasuresshouldbetaken.firstly,certaininstitutionsinchinashouldlaunchrelevantcampaignstolimittheexcessiveuseofcellphones.moreover,we,ascollegestudents,shouldputemphasisonitrightfromourselvesasastart.
例文3
描述图画内容)therearemanypeoplecrossingthestreet.insteadoflookingattheway,theyarestaringattheircellphonesandusingwalkingstickstosee.itisobviousthattheyarefascinatedwithcellphoneswhileevenignoretheirsecurity.
图画介绍了或传达了什么内涵,想表达什么用意)cellphonesareofgreatbenefittoallofus.oneofthemostobviousadvantagesisthatwecancontactwithourfriendsandrelativesmoreconvenientlythaneverbefore.however,itismobile-phonesadvantagesthatleadsomepeopletooveruseorbeaddictedtothem,whichtendstoexertanegativeimpactonourlife.forexample,oversusingcellphoneswillreduceface-to-facecommunicationamongpeople.itseemsthat
【篇二:
2013年6月和12月英语六级考试作文真题及范文】
2013年6月、12月英语六级考试作文真题及范文
2013年上半年的四六级考试已结束,网络课堂四六级辅导团队第一时间力邀四级、六级辅导名师对此次真题进行解析。
以下是对六级写作的思路指导及范文,希望即将参加六级考试的同学能以此为借鉴,运用到自己的写作当中,举一反三。
directions:
forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaycommentingontheremark“asmileistheshortestdistancebetweentwopeople”.youmaycitesomeexamplestosupportyouview.youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words。
难度:
典型的谚语警句型的文章,相比其他三篇难度低很多,谚语本身非常好理解,并且是最好用谚语警句模板套用的一篇。
思路:
第一段:
开篇引用+表义(微笑缩短了人与人的距离)+深意(生活中,我们应该微笑面对他人)
第二段:
正能量(微笑的魔力,比如可以让我们交到更多朋友,可以化解尴尬,对于商家来说微笑可以带来更多商机等,还可反面论证一下,没有了微笑,生活就会失去温暖和色彩,等等)+举例(必须要举例!
题目要求了。
可以写某企业微笑服务取得成功,或者你自己参加面试因为微笑所以获得面试官认可等)
第三段:
再次强调微笑的重要性+我们自己具体应该怎么做
范文:
asmile,astheproverbhasit,istheshortestdistancebetweentwopeople.inotherwords,asmilecouldserveasabridgetoconnecttwopeopleandshortenthedistancebetweentwohearts.simpleastheremarkmaysound,itconveysathought-provokingnotionthatweshouldalwaysbefriendlyandpolitetootherpeople。
toconclude,nothingcanbemoreeffectivethanawarmsmileinbringingpeoplecloser.hence,itisadvisableforpeopletoopentheirmindandtreatotherswithsincerityandwarmth.onlyinthiswaycanwewinmorefriends。
2013年上半年的六级考试已结束,以下是对六级写作的思路指导及范文,希望即将参加英语六级考试的同学能以此为借鉴,运用到自己的写作当中,举一反三。
难度:
谚语本身的难度大于上一个题目,resist和temptation两个词对部分学生有一定难度,但其实都是四六级词汇啊!
!
思路:
第一段:
开篇引用+深意(这里直接写深意就可以了:
生活中充满了各种诱惑,抵御诱惑才能养成好习惯或者我们应该学会抵御诱惑)
第二段:
正能量(抵御诱惑的益处,比如:
让我们能专心致志去做更有意义的事情等)+举例(必须要举例!
题目要求了。
)
第三段:
再次强调抵御诱惑对于培养好习惯很重要+我们自己具体应该怎么做
范文:
inshort,infosteringgoodhabits,nothingcanbemoreimportantthanresistingtemptation.hence,itisessentialthatschools,educatorsandparentscombineeffortstocultivateyoungpeople’sabilityoftellingrightfromwrongaswellasguidetheminfosteringcorrectviewsonlifeandvalues.onlyinthiswaycangoodhabitsbeformed。
难度:
谚语本身的难度一般,其中要注意greed,即为greedy(贪婪)的名词。
思路:
这题写成问题解决型,写人类过渡开发自然资源,破坏环境,资源危机等等,我个人认为也不偏题。
当然,写成谚语题更好。
第一段:
开篇引用+表义(我们的地球给我们人类提供了丰富的自然资源,但是因为人类的贪婪,我们的资源正慢慢枯竭等等)+深意(我们应该节约资源,保护地球)
第二段:
正能量(节约资源有利于子孙后代可持续发展,否则。
。
。
还可反面论证下)+举例(用我们经常看到一些现象,把例子印出来:
比如过渡开采煤矿造成资源紧缺,过渡捕鱼,捕猎造成生态失衡,围湖造田,比如一些旅游景点过度开发,环境被破坏都可以)
第三段:
再次强调保护自然资源重要性+我们自己具体应该怎么做
范文:
savingsuchresourcesaswater,coal,oilandwoodcouldensurethesustainabledevelopmentofthesocietyandenvironment.otherwise,nothingwouldbeleftforthefuturegeneration.theamazonrainforest,whichiscalledthelungoftheearth,isacaseinpoint.duetodeforestation,theareaoftheamazonrainforesthasbeendwindlingyearbyyearandmanyspeciesthereareendangered。
inshort,wehaveonlyoneearth.onnoaccountcouldweexploitnaturalresourcesexcessively.hence,itisimperativeforustocherishandprotectthenatureforthebenefitoffuturegenerationsandourselves.onlyinthiswaycanwepreserveabeautiful,harmonious,abundantandvariedworld。
2013,12
1.directions:
forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayabouttheimpactofinformationexplosionbyrefferingtothesayingawealthofinformationcreatesapovertyofattention.youcanciteexamplestoillustrateyourpointandthenexplainwhatyoucandotoavoidbeingdistractedbyirrelevantinformation?
youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.
【点评】
本次作文主题围绕“信息爆炸给大众带来的困扰”,难度较小。
最近几年六级作文题都是紧扣时代特征,实用性较强,不会导致考生无话可说、无理可讲。
本题型还是按照三段式,第一段可从题中的谚语着手,引出论点。
第二段主要辩证论点“信息爆炸反而给大众带来的注意力转移、无法集中等”,可以举出生活化的实例。
第三段给出问题的解决方法。
注意在写作过程中要有理有据、条理清晰即可。
【参考例文】
waystogetoverinformationexplosion
asafamoussayinggoes,“awealthofinformationcreatesapovertyofattention”.nowadaysweareintheinformationage.somepeoplekeepcomplainingaboutdistractionbytheinformationexplosion.
admittedly,thenewinformationagehasbroughtussomuchconveniencethatweareallowedtogetenoughinformationjustwithasimpleclicksittinginfrontofthecomputers.nevertheless,wearealsoconfused,annoyed,distractedandupsetbyanincrediblylargequantityofinformation.forexample,when
searchingforsomethingonline,peopleareeasilycarriedawaybyirrelevantinformationandforgettheiroriginalplan.besides,someinformationoftenturnsouttobeuselessandisactuallyadvertisement.therefore,itcanbe
time-consumingandtroublesometosearchinformationonline.
thenwhatwecandotoavoidbeingdistractedbyirrelevantinformation?
hereihavesomeusefultips:
firstly,makealistofwhatyoureallywantbeforeyoursearching.thiswillhelpyoutorefusesomeappealing,yetirrelevant
information.secondly,findsometrustfulandprofessionalsourcesorwebsitesandthensaveandcategorizethem.inthiscase,youcaneasilyleavesomeadsanduselessinformationbehind.
2.directions:
forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayonhappinessbyreferringtothesaying“happinessisnottheabsenceofproblems,buttheabilitytodealwiththem.”youcanciteexamplestoillustrateyourpointandthenexplainhowyoucandevelopyourabilitytodealwithproblemsandbehappy.youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.
【点评】
本次作文主题围绕“幸福的源泉”,难度不大。
虽然表面有些抽象,但根据题干意义还是可以迅速地将本文分成2-3部分:
1.总述幸福产生源泉,不是没有问题,而是处理问题的能力。
2.阐述自身有哪些解决问题、保持幸福的方法。
happiness–goforit
inthislongjourneywecalllife,everybodyisinpursuitofhappinessandhastheirowninterpretationofhappiness.aninspiringideaisthathappinessisnottheabsenceofproblems,buttheabilitytodealwiththem,whichrevealstheverytruthabouthappiness.itcannotbeachievedthroughwaiting,butonly
throughstriving.
thereisnowaythatlifealwaysprogressesaswewish.problemsmayoccurandwefindourselvesintrouble,butitdoesntmeanwearedeprivedofhappiness.therearenumerousexamplesforustofollow:
disabledpeopleovercomingobstacles,patientsfightingagainstdisease,poverty-strickenpeopleachievingtheirdreams--alltheseinspiringheroes.theirlivesaredefinitelynotproblem-free,buttheyhavefoundhappinessbycourageouslysolvingproblems.
therefore,itisessentialtodeveloptheabilitytodealwithproblems.weneedtomusterourcourageandconfidencetofacethefact.meanwhile,weneedtofindeffectivewaystocopewiththem.
inaword,ifwestaystrongandapproachproblemseffectively,therewillbenostorminlifethatwecannotweather.andafterthestorm,happinessiswithinourreach.
3.directions:
forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaycommentingontheremark“thegreatestuseoflifeistospenditforsomethingthatwilloutlastit.”youcangiveexamplestoillustrateyourpointandthenexplainwh
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