高考英语短文改错练习11.docx

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高考英语短文改错练习11

短文改错

李仕才

短文改错专练

（一）

      假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

      增加：

在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

      删除：

把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

      修改：

在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

      注意：

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

A

March29th,

DearDiary,

      I’mwritingthisatmyroom.It’salmostmidnightandIhavetogettingupearlytomorrow,butIcan’tsleep.I’mthinkingaboutmyfuture!

Everyday,myparentsasksme,“Whatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrow?

”Theproblemis:

Idon’tknow!

Mymomalwayssays,“Beadoctor!

”Andshedoesn’tunderstand—tobeadoctor,youhavetostudyforalong,longtimeandthat’snotherideaoffun.AlsoI’mreallybadatbiologyattheschool.Mydadsays,“Beapilot!

”Ishecrazy?

HeknewIhateflying!

      NowI’mgettingtiring,soI’mgoingtobed.Icanthinkaboutmyfutureinbed.IgetmybestideaswhenI’mlaindown.

B

      IhaveknownmyfriendRebeccaforalongtime.Wefirstlymetatafriend’sbirthdaypartyfiveyearsbefore.Wefoundoutthatwebothlikedsinginganddancing,soIinvitedRebeccaovertomyplace.Welistenedtothemusictogetherandsoonbecamebestfriends.Threeyearsago,Rebecca’sparentsinvitedmegoonholidaywiththem.Itisgreat.Wespentthreewonderfulweeksinalittlecottage.RebeccaandIlovedwalkingalongthebeautifullybeach.Wetookalotofphotosandhadalotoffuns.Lastyear,Rebecca’sfatherchangedherjob,andtheymovedtoothertown.Sincethenwehaven’tseeneachotherverymuch,butwe’vetalkedinthephoneandwe’vewrittenemailstoeachother.

C

DearJoe,

      Howareyou?

Thankstoyourpost—goodtoknowwhenyou’reOK.I’vegotnewstoo.I’mgoingonholidaynextweekswithmybrotherandAnna,afriendfromschool.We’regoingtostayonafarmwithfourdays!

We’regoingtolookaftertheanimalsanddoingsomehorse-riding.I’msureI’llloveit.YouknowhowcrazyIamabouttheanimals!

Iwanttolearnallaboutthecowsorthehorses.IhopeIwillhavesometimestogowalkinginthehills,too.Well,rightnowI’mgoingtofinishhomework—lotstodobeforetheholiday!

I’llwritetoyouwhenIgetbacktotellingyouaboutmyholiday.

                                                              Yours,

                                                              Nadia

D

      Peoplehadalwaysbeeninterestedinbees.Thisinterestmayhavebegunwiththehoneywhatbeesmake.Inthefact,ithasbeenfoundthatpeoplehavebeeneatinghoneyforthousandofyears.     Inthemorerecentlypast,peoplewereinterestedinthewaybeesmadehoney.Theyadmiredthewaybeesseemedtoworkingsohard.Somelanguagesevendevelopedexpressionsaboutpeopleworkinglikebees.InEnglish,forexample,wetalkwitha“busybee”.Nowscientistshasanewreasontobeinterestedinbees.Theyhavediscoveredthatbeesabletocommunicatewitheachother.Researchhasrevealedsomesurprisedfactsaboutthis,buttherearestillmanymysteries.

E

      Yesterdayafternoon,ItooktheNo.6bustogohome.Itwascrowdedonthebus,andIhadlistenedtomusicbymyearphones.SuddenlyIsawthenameofthebusstopthatIshouldgetoff,soIgotoffthebusinhurry.WhenIarrivedhome,IrealizedthatIhadleftmybagonthebus.MyIDcardandtenbookswereinthebag.Iwasworriedandeagertofindingit,soIwenttothebuscompaniesforhelp.Fortunate,attheLostandFound,Iseemybag.Iwantedtothankthepersonwhohadfoundmybag,andthestafftheresaidthepersonhadn’tlefthisname.Howagoodman!

F

      Ireadaninterestedpieceofnewsonanewspapertoday.AccordingtoProfessorRichardWiseman,onlylessthanaquarteroftheBritishachievedtheirNewYeargoalsbecausetheydoitinthewrongway.Hestudied700volunteerswhomadeawiderangesofNewYeargoals,includingquittingsmoking,losingtheweight,orgainingaqualification.Just22percentoftheparticipantsmanagedtomeetingtheirgoalsordescribedtheirprogresslike“verysuccessful.”Thereasonsomuchfailedwasthattheytookthewrongapproachandledbyself-helpbooksinthewrongway.Theytendedtospendalotoftimeonthinkingaboutthe“badthings”whatwouldhappeniftheydidnotachievetheirgoalsinsteadoftakingaction.

G

      Lastweekends,Iwentshoppingbymyself.ItwasasunnydayandIfeelveryhappy.WhenIhadboughtanythingIneeded,Iwenttothebusstoptotakeabus.Unfortunately,thereweretoomuchpeopleatthebusstop.Thenitwasmyturntogeton,therewasnoroom.Ihadtowaitthenextbus.Suddenly,itstartedtorain.Ihadnochoicebuttocallataxi.Halfwaythroughthejourney,thetaxiwasbrokedown.IwasfilledwithangrywhenIsawanemptierbusgoby.Finally,Idecidedtowalkhomeinarain.Whatanunluckyday!

H

      MynameisLiHuaandIwantedtobeclassmonitor.Iamresponsible,sociable,oreasy-going.Ienjoyservingothers.Additionally,Ihavevaryinterests.Ilovesingingandplayingthedrumsaswellsoccer.Iamalsoagoodlistenerandbealwaysopentodifferentopinions.IamconfidentthatIcandothejobgood.Beingastudentmyself,firstly,Iwillcreateanacademicatmospheresothateveryoneinourclassescanimprovetheirstudies.Forthosestudentswhoisfallingbehind,Iwillfindwaystohelpthemtocatchup.Secondly,Iwillserveasabridgeamongteachersandstudents.Finally,Iwillarrangepartiessowecanrelax.IbelieveIamtherightpersontothispost.

答案

A

1....atmyroom.                at→in

2....havetogetting...        getting→get

3....myparentsasks...       asks→ask

4....whenyougrow?

”   grow后加up

5.Andshedoesn’t...           And→But

6....notherideaof...         her→my

7....attheschool.               去掉the

8.HeknewIhate...            knew→knows

9....I’mgettingtiring...  tiring→tired

10....I’mlaindown.    lain→lying

B

1.Wefirstlymet...     firstly→first

2....fiveyearsbefore.   before→ago

3....tothemusic...              去掉the

4....goonholiday...          go前加to

5.Itisgreat.                       is→was

6....beautifullybeach.        beautifully→beautiful

7....alotoffuns.               funs→fun

8....changedherjob...       her→his

9....toothertown.     other→another

10....inthephone...          in→on/over

C

1.Thankstoyour...            to→for

2....toknowwhen...   when→that或去掉when

3....nextweekswith...       weeks→week

4....withfourdays!

            with→for

5....anddoingsome...       doing→do

6....abouttheanimals!

       去掉the

7....orthehorses.              or→and

8....havesometimes...  times→time

9....finishhomework...  homework前加my

10....totellingyou...    telling→tell

D

1.Peoplehadalways...       had→have

2....whatbeesmake.          what→that/which

3.Inthefact...        去掉the

4....thousandofyears.        thousand→thousands

5....recentlypast...            recently→recent

6....workingsohard.    working→work

7....wetalkwith...    with→about

8....hasanewreason...   has→have

9....beesableto...     able前加are

10....surprisedfacts...    surprised→surprising

E

1....Ihadlistened...          去掉had

2....bymyearphones.        by→with

3....thatIshould...     that→where

4....businhurry.      hurry前加a

5....tofindingit...     finding→find

6....thebuscompanies...    companies→company

7.Fortunate,atthe...     Fortunate→Fortunately

8....Iseemybag.       see→saw

9....andthestaff...      and→but

10.Howagoodman!

     How→What

F

1....aninterestedpiece...    interested→interesting

2....theydoitin...                   do→did

3....awideranges...     ranges→range

4....losingtheweight...            去掉the

5....managedtomeeting...   meeting→meet

6....like“verysuccessful.”    like→as

7....somuchfailed...       much→many

8....andledby...         led前加were

9....timeonthinking...     on→in或去掉on

10....whatwouldhappen...   what→that

G

1.Lastweekends...       weekends→weekend

2....Ifeelveryhappy.     feel→felt

3....anythingIneeded...    anything→everything

4....toomuchpeople...    much→many

5.Thenitwasmy...            Then→When

6....waitthenextbus.        the前加for

7....wasbrokedown.         去掉was

8....filledwithangry...    angry→anger

9....anemptierbus...         emptier→empty

10....inarain.         a→the

H

1....Iwantedtobe...    wanted→want

2....oreasy-going.       or→and

3....havevaryinterests.    vary→varied

4....aswellsoccer.     soccer前加as

5....bealwaysopen...        去掉be

6....dothejobgood.    good→well

7....inourclasses...     classes→class

8....whoisfalling...     is→are

9....amongteachers...    among→between

10....tothispost.       to→for