雅思小作文全题型解析+例文.docx

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1.Linegraph------------------------Exp1-3-----------------------P2-4

2.Barchart---------------------------Exp4-5-----------------------P5-6

3.Table-------------------------------Exp6-8-----------------------P6-8

4.Piechart---------------------------Exp9-11----------------------P9-10

5.Flowchart-------------------------Exp12------------------------P11-12

6.Map---------------------------------Exp13-----------------------P12-13

therequirementofgetting6score:

correct+native

Example1

Thegraphbelowshowstheproportionofthepopulationaged65andoverbetween1940and2040inthreedifferentcountries.

Summarizetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeaturesandmakecomparisonswhererelevant.

TheversionofteacherAnswer1

Thegraphshowstheincreaseinthepercentageofpeopleaged65ormoreinJapan,SwedenandtheUSA.

In1940theproportionofpeopleover65yearsstoodatonly5%inJapan,approximately7%inSwedenand9%intheUS.However,whilethefiguresfortheWesterncountriesgrewtoabout15%inaround1990,thefigureforJapandippedtoonly2.5%formuchofhisperiod,beforerisingtoalmost5%againatthepresenttime.

Inspiteofsomefluctuationintheexpectedpercentages,theproportionofolderpeoplewillprobablycontinuetoincreaseinthenexttwodecadesinthethreecountries.Amoredramaticriseispredictedbetween2030and2040inJapan,bywhichtimeitisthoughtthattheproportionofelderlypeoplewillbesimilarinthethreecountries.

Overall,itindicatesthatthepercentageofelderlypeopleinallthreecountriesisexpectedtoincreasetoalmost25%oftherespectivepopulationsbytheyear2040.

Example2

Thegraphbelowshowsthenumber（thousands）ofpeopletakingpartinfourkindsofsportsinaparticularregionbetween1985and2005.

Summarizetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeaturesandmakecomparisonswhererelevant.

NOTE

①表将来：

...%...Be（is/was）predictedtoincrease/decrease

Beexpectedto,,,

Beplannedto..

Beprojectedto...

②Introduction改写题目

Origin：

Thegraphbelowshowsthenumber（thousands）ofpeopletakingpartinfourkindsofsportsinaparticularregionbetween1985and2005.

Revise：

①Thelinegraphreflectshowmanypeopleparticipated/joinedinfourtypesofsportsinaspecificareafrom1985to2005.

②Thelinegraphillustrateshowthenumberofpeoplewhojoinedinfourtypes......changedina....during1985,to2005.

③linegraph步骤

第一段改写

分两段主体段，主体段抓细节描写，不能主观臆断添油加醋，看到什么说什么

按照从左到右，从上到下的顺序描写

不要一条一条描写，必须先分类。

尽量分两类或三类，一类一主体段

分类的依据很多，如同是上升或下降趋势

最后一段得结论。

结论尽量不要像开头那样笼统，也不要像具体内容那样详细。

注意时态，单位

TheversionofteacherAnswer2

Thecurveoftennisovertookthatofrugbyafter1995at190thousand..

Mainbody写作顺序分段特征

Rugby+tennis:

Thecurvesofrugbyandtennisillustratetotallyoppositetrends.Theformer/lattercurvebeganat240thousand,thelargestfigurein1985,andfromthenon,itexperiencedadramaticdecrease/decline/downtrendthroughoutthewholeperiodandendedat50thousandasthesameasbadminton.Conversely/incontrast,around150thousandpeopleplayedtennisatthebeginningofthisperiod,besides,thelattercurveroseslightly,overtakingthatofrugbyafter1995atrough190thousandandreachingthepeakat230thousandbytheendoftheperiod.

Asforthenumberofbasketballandbadminton,theydisplayasimilartendency.Bothofthemremainedthesameat75thousandand50thousandrespectively/,withtheformerfiguresurpassingthatofrugbyafter2004/.

Conclusion

Overall/insummary,thenumberoftennistooktheleadin2005,whileaminorityofpeoplewouldliketochooseotherthreekindsofsports.

NOTE

Nativeexpression

①有一个平缓的上升Thecurvehad/experiencedasteadyincrease/growth:

adj.+n.

平缓地上升Thecurveincreasedsteadily....

多数的---少数的Major---minor

②起点standat,beginat

③上升goup,increase,riseto,jump,climbup,grow

④下降godown,decrease,dilpto,decline,plummet

⑤波动程度：

波动：

dramatic,sharp,remarkable,significant,shark

平稳：

slight,moderate,gradual,steady,stable

⑥交点：

overtake,surpass,exceed

⑦终点：

endat

Example3

ThegraphbelowshowstheinformationofcommunicationtechnologyaboutpercentagesofpeopleusingdifferentdevicesintheUKbetween1998and2008.

Summarizetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.

MyversionAnswer3

Thelinegraphillustratesthatthechangeofproportionofusingdifferentdevicestochatfrom1998to2008.

Therearethesimilartrendbetweenthecurveofcomputer,cellphoneandpad.Allofthemkeeprisingstandat1998exceptthepadonewhichwasstandat2002,witharound15%,5%and0%,andendat2008,witharound90%,95%and60%,inrespectively.Thecurveofcellphoneovertookthatofcomputerafter2006at75%

Thelasttwowhicharecurveoflandlineandfaxhavesomethingspecial.Theyhadtheoppositetrendbeforethetimeof2004.Atfirst,thecurveoffaxoccupiedmoreproportionthanthelandlineoneatabout50%and40%,theformeronekeptdecliningandthelatteronekeptgrowing.Butwhenitcomestothetimeof1999.Thelandlineonehadsurpassedthefaxoneat45%.Therewasaturningpointinlandlinecurvein2004,anditisthetimethatthedataofitreachapeakof75%.Andthen,bothofthemtendedtogodownendin2008,andtheratewhichwashigherwasthelandlineone（20%）andthelowerwasthefaxone（5%）

Overall,majorityofdeviceshaveagrowingproportionofbeingusingtochatbyindividualsSomethinglikecomputers,cellphonesandpads.However,therearealsosomelessusedonelikelandlinesandfaxes.

TheversionofteacherAnswer3

ThelinegraphdisplayshowUKresidentscommunicatedwitheachotherbydifferenttypesofelectronicdevicesfrom1998to2008.

Wecanseeclearlyfromthegraphthatfax,withhalfoftheUKusers,dominatedthewaysofcommunicationintheverybeginningofthisperiod,butthepercentageofUKusersdeclinedgraduallyastimepassedby.Incontrast,pad,attractingnousersoverthefirst4years,suddenlybecamepopularsince2002andthepercentageofUKusersovertookthatoffaxusersafter2004.

Thepopularityoflandlinein1998rankedthesecond,andincreasinglymoreUKcitizenschosetocommunicateinthiswayduringthefollowing6years.Afterpeakingatroughly75%，【分词短语作状语】thefigureforlandlinefans/users,however,experiencedasharpdecreasebytheendofthisperiodinquestion.Althoughcomputersandcellphoneswerenotthatpreferableatfirst,thesetwotypesofcommunicationdevicesshowedtheiradvantagethroughoutthewholeperiod.Whatisnoteworthyisthattheproportionofutiizersexceededthatoffaxandlandlineafter2000and2004respectively.【名词性从句的使用】

Overall,itIsclearthattraditionalcommunicationtechnologyhadalmostlessroletoplayinthesecondhalfoftheperiod,whilethereversewastrueforthenewly-developeddevice.

Example4

ThechartbelowshowsthepercentagesofbothmalesandfemaleswhoatefivekindsoffruitsandvegetablesperdayintheUKin2006

Summarizetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.

TheversionofteacherAnswer4

...Thedataoffemalesoutnumberedthatofmalesinallagegroups..

Around17%offemalesin15to25wouldliketohavefivekindsoffruitsandvegetableeachday,theproportionwas2%morethanthatofmalecounterparts（15%）.Besides,thesamegendergapcouldbenoticedintheagegroupsfrom26to40and41to55,where20%offemalescomparedwith18%ofmales.Whenitcometotheagefrom56to65,thepercentagesoffemalesandmalesreachedthepeakat27%and24%respectively.

Fortheelderlypeoplebeyond65.,thegendergapnarrowedwiththeagesgrowing.Morethan20%.ofpeoplein66to74preferredtolivewithahealthyeatinghabit/diet.（22%offemalesversus21%ofmales）.Incontrast,.intherangeabove75,thedataoffemalesandmalesremainedthesameat19%.

结尾。

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Example5

ThechartbelowshowspercentagesofpeoplelivingbytheirowninfiveagegroupsintheUKbetween1850and2000.

Summarizetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeaturesandmakecomparisonswhererelevant.

MyversionAnswer5

Thebarchartillustratesthatfivekindsofindividualswholivealoneindifferentperiodandage.

Itisclearthattheonewhoagedin26to40hadthelargestproportioninallperiods.Anditkeptrisingwithflustrating,startedat25%andendedat45%.Thereisarisingtrendbetweentherangefrom18to25,55to65andover65yearsold.Butthereissomethingspecialforthecolumnofover65in2000,thenumberofsolitudehaddeclinedfrom1950to2000.Therefore,it（13%）wassurpassedthatofaging55-65（15%）in2000whichusedtobethelowestoneallthetime.Incontrast,thefigureofthefolkaged41-55tendedtokeepplungingfrom20%in1850and10%in2000.

Overall,thechartprovidesspecificdatatoindicatethatthenumberofsolitudeindifferentperiodandage.

Thetablebelowshowstheworkingtimeofmalesandfemalesindifferentregionsintheyearof2002.

NOTE

①Nativeexpression

多余—少于Morethan----lessthan

高于---低于Higherthan---lowerthan

描写差距（此处是两性之间数据的差距）Gendergap/difference:

wide/narrowsignificant（显著的）/notsignificant..

地铁Underground/railway/subway/metro/tubesystem.

②每个区间两条柱的barchart步骤

开头改写。

主体段第一段描写总的趋势，如从哪到哪上升达到峰值，哪里最少那里最多

第二段描写两柱差距的趋势。

留意观察是否差距一致，是否差距为0即两者数量相等

Example6

Thetablebelowgivesinformationabouttheundergroundrailwaysysteminsixcitie