应试写作学与练分析篇.docx
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应试写作学与练分析篇
应试写作学与练:
分析篇
分析型议论文主要是判断和分析所讨论的事物或观点的性质。
具体地说就是阐述其重要性,正确性,必要性或荒谬性,危害性等。
例如:
Thebenefitsofmakingfriendsofdifferentkinds;
Theimportanceofmakingcitiesgreener;
TheharmfuleffectsofheavyexposuretoTV.
此类论文基本结构如下:
Paragraph1
STopic
SThesis
Paragraph2
SThesis
SBenefit
SDetail
SBenefit
SDetail
SBenefit
Paragraph3
Conclusion
第一段引出要讨论的主题,如离婚率上升、体育锻炼热等,然后提出对这些问题的基本态度和看法,是赞成还是反对。
第二段S把为什么赞成或反对的基本理由先扼要的提一下。
接着从几个方面来阐述赞成或反对的理由,即阐述事物的重要性或危害性。
SSS则用具体的实例来论证之前提出的重要性或危害性。
最后一段是总结。
有时分析不一定从同一方向进行,也可以从正反两个方向进行。
例如:
在一篇提倡体育锻炼的文章中,当中一段可以先说体育锻炼的重要性,然后说如不进行体育锻炼可能带来的后果。
此时的第二段结构为:
Paragraph2
SThesis
SImportance
SDetail1
SDetail2
SConsequence
SDetail1
SDetail2
此类作文的常用句型如下:
ofthebenefitsderivedfrom/harmfuleffectson……。
is……
haveabetter/fullunderstanding/appreciationof……,wemaylookat/turnto……
’shardlyamanorwomanwhodoesn’t………
benefit/effectisconcernedwith/relatesto………
goodcaseinpoint/typicalexampleofthisis……
allthebenefitsresultingfrom,nonehasbeen/nothingismoresignificantthan/assignificantas………
,itcanbeseenthat………。
分析篇-1写作题目:
MyViewsonExaminations
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMyViewsonExaminations.Youshouldwritenolessthan150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinebelow:
1.我们现在都用考试来衡量学生的成绩。
2.考试可能到来的副作用
3.我对考试的看法
范文:
Inmostschoolsandcollegestheexaminationisusedasachiefmeansofdecidingwhetherastudentsucceedsorfailsinmasteringaparticularsubject.Althoughitdoesthejobquiteefficiently,itssideeffectsarealsoenormous.
Themostundesirableeffectisthatexaminationsencouragebadstudyhabits.Astheexaminationscoreistheonlycriterionforhisacademicperformance,astudentisdriventomemorizemechanicallyratherthantothinkcreatively.Examinationsdonotmotivateastudenttoseekmoreknowledge,buttorestricthisreading;theydonotenablehimtostudyconsistentlythroughoutthesemester,buttoinducecrammingduringexamweek.Examinationsalsolowerthestandardsofteaching.Sinceteachersthemselvesareoftenjudgedbyexaminationresults,theyareoftenjudgedbyexaminationresults,theyarereducedtotrainingtheirstudentsinexamtechniques.Andnosubjectscanbetaughtsuccessfullymerelythroughbeingapproachedwithintenttotakeexaminations.
Actually,fewofusadmitthatexaminationscancontributeanythingreallyimportanttothestudents’academicdevelopment.Ifthat’sthecase,whycan’twemakeachangeanddevisesomethingmoreefficientandreliablethanexaminations?
优秀作文:
MyViewsonExaminations
Sinceschoolcomesintobeing,theteststandardhasbeenusedtoappraiseperformanceofstudents.Sofaritisstillbeingused,whichmaysuggestthatactuallytherearesomeadvantagesinit.However,itisalsohighlypossiblethattheteststandardisanotidealwaytofindoutwhatstudentshavelearnedandwhattheyhaven’t.Mostschoolisstillusingitjustbecausethereisnobettermethodtoreplaceit.
Inmyopinion,thefollowingthreepointsarethecriticalflawsintheteststandard.
Oneofthemostharmfuleffectsonthetestmethodisthatitwillforceustostudyjustforpassingtests,notforacquiringknowledgeespeciallyinChina.Obviouslythefinalobjectofeducationismakingusintellectivebylearningmoreknowledge.Whilethetestisonlyawaytoexaminethelevelofstudents’studies,ithasbeendeterioratedtoasifterdecidingthefateofstudents.Whycanitbecalledaterriblesifter?
Nowinthetests,whichdecidewhocanenterahigherschool,thousandsofpoorstudents,whowantasplendidfuture,mustprepareforthetestsbyfinishingagreatdealofpractices.Thosepracticetestsareheavy-ladentothem.Sointhiscase,howcantheybeexpectedtostudytoobtainknowledge?
Tothemthatareenoughiftheycanreachthelevelwhichtestsneed.Intheendwhatournationwillget,genuinepersonswithabilityorjusttestrobots?
Secondly,testswillbringtheexamineesgreatpressure,whichcanaffecttheirlives.Atypicalexampleofthisisthatmostyoungstudentshavewornglasseseventhoughsomeofthemarestillchildren.Forpreparingfortests,theymustspendalotoftimeondoingtheirhomeworksothattheireyesightbecomesworseandworse.Andthemoretimetheyspendonthose,thelesstimetheyhaveforplayingandrelaxing.Consequently,thereisabadinfluenceontheirhealth.
Thirdly,infact,testsystemitselfcannotveraciouslyestimatewhoisbetterthanothersbecausetherearemanyfactorsimpactingtheresultsoftest.Forinstance,someonecheatedintestsothathisscorewouldbehigherthanothers.Orsomeonewhowastoonervoustoperformwellfellinthetest.
Onlyinsparetimeandnopressureoftestsexistent,studentscanstudysimplyforthefun,forobtainingknowledgeandforthethingsthattheyarereallyinterestedin.Butnowthetestsystemistheonlywaytoselectwhichoneisbetter,whocanreachbetterschoolandwhocangetgoodjob.Thenwhatwecandoistoimprovethetestsystemorhopethatsomethingbetterwillbeinventedandreplacethetestsystem.
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分析篇-2作文题目:
Beliefs
Direction:
Inthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionentitledBeliefs.Yourcompositionshouldbeatleast120wordsandcontainthefollowinginformation.
Outline:
ofhavingbelief;
beliefswillleadtodifferentresults.
优秀作文兼范文:
Belief,acreationofhuman’swise,alwaysplaysanimportantroleinhuman’ssociety.Asasaygoes:
“Ifone’smindisfull,itwon’tbefilledinanybadidea.”Anyonewhohasstrongbeliefscanenjoyacolorfullife.Otherwise,hewilllosehimselfinhiswayoflife.
Beliefsaresoimportantthatitcanchangeone’sfate.Twolittlemicefellinabucketofcream.Thefirstmousequicklygaveupanddrowned.Thesecondmousewouldn’tquit.Hestruggledsohardthateventuallyhechurnedthatcreamintobutterandcrawledout.
Obviously,thelattermouseistheonewhohashisownbeliefs.Therearealwayshopesinhiseyesthatencouragehimtofight,andfight,andfight.Henevergivesupwhenheisinsomedifficultysituations.Becausetheoptimistseestheopportunityineverydifficulty,whilethepessimistseesdifficultyineveryopportunity.Thefirstmouseisoneofthesekindsofpessimists.Heholdsnobeliefinhislifeandbecometheslaveofhisfate.
Thus,itcanbeseenthatonewithfirmbeliefsislikelytogetsuccessfulandmasterhisownlife.
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分析篇-3作文题目:
PrivacyofFamousPeople
Directions:
youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaynolessthan120wordsonthefollowingtopic.
Newspapersandmagazineshavespecialinterestintheprivatelivesoffamouspeople.
Whatcanyouexplainit?
Whateffectitwillhaveonthepeoplebeingexposed?
Andwhatisyouropinionofit?
范文:
Inrecentyears,manynewspapersandmagazinesfocusontheactivitiesoffilmstars,popsingersandsomeotherfamousmenandwomen.Reportersdisguisetheiridentities,infiltratethesubject’sbusinessandfamily,orevenbugandwiretapthem——togetthenewsbywhatevermeansarenecessary.
Itisnotdifficulttoexplainthereasonfortheirsurprisingamountofinterestinfamouspeople’slives.Theyareinthespotlight,renownedornotorious,theyarethetopicofordinarypeoplewholiketoknoweverythingaboutthem.Tosatisfytheircuriosity,or“thepeople’srighttoknow”,journalistsoftenfindittheirdutytoreporttheiractivities.
Moreover,whatmatterstoanewspaperoramagazineisthenumberofreaders.Alargereadershipmeanstheriseinthecirculationoftheirpublications,henceahugeprofit.Sincefilmstarsandpopsingersarenewsworthyfigures,andtheirstoriesdrawsfarmoreattentionthanthoseofotherpeople,itisnaturalthatthepresstriestoattractthemtobuytheirmagazinesbyfeaturingprivatelivesoffamouspeople.
However,thoseexposedpeoplecanbeseverelyinjuredbysuchpressattention.Sensationalstoriesabouttheirprivatelivescausegreatunhappinesstothem.Toescapereporters,theycan’tevenleadanormallife.Sometimestheirliveswillbeindanger.Forexample,PrincessDianadiedinacaraccidentassheattemptedtoescapephotographersinachasethroughParis.
Famouspeoplearealsocitizens.Theyhavetherighttokeeptheirownprivacylikeordinarypeople——thebasicrightwhichshouldberespected,protectedandguaranteedbyourlawsinwhatevercircumstances.
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