英语写作技巧与写作注意事项样本.docx
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英语写作技巧与写作注意事项样本
第七讲:
英语写作
(二)
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大作文
往年试题:
Directions:
writeacompositionofnolessthan250wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.
Sample1
MyViewonPlayingComputerGames
1.有些人认为学生打电脑游戏有利于智力开发。
2.有些人认为学生打电脑游戏妨碍学习。
3.我见解。
Sample2:
对贫富差距加大现象谈谈见解
评分标准
Globalscoring
a.Content
b.Language
2分:
条理不清,思绪紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子全部有错误,且多数为严重错误。
5分:
基础切题。
表示思想不清,连贯性差。
有较多严重语言错误。
8分:
有些地方表示思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误较多,其中有部分严重错误。
11分:
切题。
表示思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少许语言错误
14分:
切题。
表示思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性很好,基础上没有语言错误,仅有部分小错。
注:
白卷,作文和题目毫不相关,或只有多个独立词而无法表示思想,给0分。
严重错误——语法错误
Therearemanyreasonscausedtheaccident.
Thedriverofthecarnoin.
Thelifeisbecominggooderandgooder.
Thatdayrainbigly.
Themanwhothroughthestreet
Thecarwhichinafastspeedhithim.
Thecarwhichinafastspeedhithim.
Igottheplacewherehappenedtheaccident.
Ourcitywouldhappenmanytraffic.
写作注意事项
1.审好题,想好再写,不要写了又划掉,也不要写完了发觉字数不够有写,这么整篇文章就不联贯了。
2.把握好文章重心,通常“我见解”应该是重心。
3.注意写作格式——缩进式或齐头式。
4.拿不准词、短语或使用方法应避免使用。
5.表示要清楚、简练,无须一味追求结构复杂而尽可能多使用从句,这么文章会显得很罗嗦。
如:
Theeconomyisdevelopingataspeedwhichisveryfast.
6.注意用词和搭配。
7.检验-s和-ed,尽可能避免严重错误。
ChoiceofWords
1.ThreelevelsofEnglishwords
Englishnativewords(core)informal(oral)
FrenchorSpanishwords
LatinorGreekwords(academicwords)formal(written)
Examples
EnglishFrenchorSpanishLatinorGreek
askinquireinterrogate
breakseverseparate
fireflameconflagration
houseaboderesidence
kinglyroyalregal
manlymalemasculine
risemountascend
timeageepoch
IknowthatIamawarethat
IbelievethatIamconvincedthat
Ihaveagoodidea.Agoodideaoccurstome.
Causegiveriseto
Emphasizelayemphasison
Becauseofdueto,owingto
Stop,endcometoastop/end
Suddenlyallofasudden
Oftenmoreoftenthannot
2.ConnotationofWords(Englishexplanation)
common,peasant,assassinate,gay,acquire,date,property,enemy,problem,issue
3.GeneralVsSpecificterms(overuseofgeneralterms)
beautiful,delicious,famous,
China’sEnglish
小康社会、缘分、丞相、风水、三个代表孔子、孟子、老子
轻易用错词
1.词性
lack,serve,contact,last,marry,concern,like
2.汉语影响
moreperfect,veryexcellent,returnback,repeatagain,goodmemorypower,listeningability,highqualitygoodslearntheknowledge
常见错误
(1)twopredicatesinonesimplesentence
EveryyearlotsoffamilyssitatthefrontofTVwaitthisgameafterhavedeliciousmeal.
TherehavemanypeoplelikeSFG.
Mymothercooksfoodisverydelicious.
(2)OmissionandoveruseofBe
Nowdaypeople’slifelevelisarise.
ManypersonarelikewatchSFGintheeve.
SFGwasappearedsince1984.
SFGislikedbymanypeople.
Howfasttimewasgone!
SFGcandivideintoseveralparts.
Weverybusy.
(3)Comparativedegree
moreandmorebetter
becomegooderandgooder,
(4)Conjunction
because….so
although….but
While
(5)IverylikeSFG.Veryhate
(6)Partofspeech
mostofweChinese,makemesurprise,
withthequickdevelopmentofeconomicandsocial,
Inmy’sopinion,IadvicetokeepSFG.
eatinggood,drinkinggood,playinggood;
goodplays,goodlook,gooduse;
Ithinkitduestothedevelopment,
Let’sanalysisanddiscoverythemainfactorsleadingthechanges.
Tomen,womenjustlikedclothes.theylikeitlikemelikeit.
twoweekspast
choose,choice,succeed,success,successful,die,dead,death
(7)Choiceofwords
Thewholefamilyassembletohaveadinner.
congratulateSpringFestival,
abolish(stop,giveup)SFG,
sitbehindtheTVtolookSFG,
ManypeoplefallinlovewithwatchingSFG.
Wecanelectotherprogramstosee.
celebrateSFGwithbomb,
standintheshadow/shade
mosquitobite/sting
It’sagaymeeting/party
(8)Phrases
inallin;onehand,anotherhand,thirdhand;atonehand,atsecondhand,atlasthand;inonehand,fromotherhand;lastbutnotthelast,lastbutnotmost;onmyopinion;Acoinhastwohands(coins).Everythinghastwohands(coins).
(9)Spelling
Wecan’tcansle(cancer,cancle)it.
SFGiswatchedbyholeword.
happyness,
include(ing)SF,Everystudentincludemeenjoys
Poorpeoplemaybeveryangry(hungry).
eatthesoap(soup);
Benefitial
Drived
Dispite
Iwilladopttothecampuslife
联贯
1.并列:
and,aswellas
ontheonehand…ontheotherhand
foronething…..foranother
firstly….secondly….thirdly…finally
subsequently,then,thereafter,afterward,inthefollowing…
atfirst,initially,originally
atlast,eventually
2.递进:
Moreover,
Furthermore,
Inaddition,
Additionally
Whatismore
Besides
Apartfrom…
3.转折
But
Yet
However
Nevertheless
While
Whereas
Onthecontrary
Incontrast
4.结果
So
Therefore,
Thus
Hence
Asaresult(consequence)
Consequently
5.原因
Because(of)
Dueto
Owingto
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