雅思写作真题及高分范文2.docx
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雅思写作真题及高分范文2
2009年2月21日
Somepeoplethinkthatenvironmentalproblemsaretoobigforindividualstodealwith.Others,however,thinkthateachindividualshouldtakesomeactions.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
考题分析:
本题是一道典型的雅思环境类写作考题。
在历届雅思写作环境类话题中,出题思路主要有以下三个方面:
1.环境保护是谁的责任?
考题给出的选项通常会有个人、公司、国家、国际合作等(例如04年5月15日,0-7年2月3日考题)。
2.如何保护环境?
考题通常会给出某个方案问其正确与否(如06年6月17日,08年6月14日考题)。
3.为什么人们明知环境正在被破坏却无动于衷例?
(如08年9月13日A类议论文)
如果考前对以上三方面的雅思写作真题都思考过,相信本题一定会变的很简单,实际上只要把一些理由进行组合就可以了。
由于考题的提问形式是“Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.”所以,既要讨论到个人能够采取何种行动解决一些环境问题,也要讨论为什么有些环境问题个人无法解决(即只有政府或公司才能解决)。
SampleAnswer:
Itistruethatourtinyindividualactionsoftenseeminsignificantcomparedtothescaleandcomplexityofglobalenvironmentalproblemssuchaspollution,deforestationanddepletionofnaturalresources.Butthatdoesnotrelieveourdutyasindividualstodoasmuchaswecantodealwiththeseproblems.
Individualactions,smallastheymaybe,canprovemoreeffectivethanwerealize.Wecanavoiddrivingthecar,andtakepublictransit,walk, or bicycleinstead.Thiswillreducetheuseoffossilfuelsandcutpollution.Savingenergyathome,liketurningontheairconditioneronlywhenwehaveto, or turningwaterheaterdownafewdegrees,isalsoultimatelygoodfortheenvironment.Individualactionscanalsoturnintounitedpowerswhen,forexample,thewholeneighborhoodismobilizedtoparticipateinalocalcampaigntoopposeenvironmentallydamagingpolicies.
Thereare,however,obstaclesthatstandinthewayofindividualactiontowardsenvironmentalconservation.Thefirstobstacleisthelackofprofessionalknowledgeneededtocopewithseriousenvironmentalissueslikesoilerosionandsalinity,whichrequireasignificantamountofinvestigationandresearch.Anotherobstaclewhichmakesindividualactionalmostimpossibleiswhenanenvironmentalemergency or accidenthappens,e.g.anoilspillnearthebordderline,whichwouldnecessitategovernmentintervention or eveninternationalcoordination.
So,inconclusion,whenitcomestoenvironmentalproblems,individualactionsareindispensableintheproblemsolvingprocess.Butthemostpressingandcomplicatedproblemsgofarbeyondanindividual’scapabilityandsorequiretheconcertedeffortofthegovernmentaswellastheglobalcommunity.
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2009年2月28日
Somepeoplebelievethatimprovepublichealthshouldincreasethenumberofsportsfacilities;othersbelievethatithaslittleeffectsandneedothermeasurestoimproveit.
Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.
考题分析:
本题是政府政策类话题和健康类话题的结合。
考题虽新,但政府类话题和健康类话题话题却是经常出现的。
考到政府政策类的话题,有一个思路总是可以通用的,那就是:
政府可以通过教育来提升人们对于......的认识(这比花大笔资金建设某某工程要来的更“实惠”和有效。
)下面的范文是朗阁海外考试研究中心研究员撰写的高分范文,其中就有对该思路的体现,值得借鉴。
SampleAnswer(359words)
Theconstructionofnewsportsfacilitiesaredefinitelyneededinanenvironmentwherepeople'shealthisinadecliningstate.However,therearethosewhobelievethatthewaytoimprovingpeople'shealthshouldlieinothermeasuresthatgovernmentshavetocomeupwithtogetpeopletolivemorehealthily.
Inmanycountriesaroundtheworld,sportsfacilitiesarediminishingatanalarmingrate,withexistingonesbeingthreatenedwithclosureorfaceredevelopmentinfavorofhousingandcommercialdevelopment.Thelackofsportsfacilitieshasdirectlyledtoasharpdeclineinthegeneralpublic’sinvolvementinsportsactivities,whichisthemajorculpritforillhealthandexcessiveweightnowadays.Ifawiderrangeofsportsandfitnessfacilities(swimmingpools,basketballcourtandgymnasiumsetc.)wereavailable,thenpeoplewouldbemorewillingtospendtimeinthesefacilitiestotraintheirbodiesandtoimprovetheirfitness,insteadoflivingasedentarylifeathomewatchingtelevision,playingvideogamesorusingcomputers.
However,thebuildingofsuchfacilitiesmaybecomeawasteoftimeandtaxpayers’moneyiftheyarebuiltfarawayfromwherepeopleliveoriftheyaretooexpensivetouse.Therearescenesofemptysportsgroundsinmanycitiesbecauseittakestoomuchtroubletogetthere,andmanysportsclubsarereceivingfewerguestsbecausetheychargeunreasonablyhighmembershipfees.Inthesecases,thegovernmentshouldbespendingmoreonadvertisinghealthierlifestyleinsteadofjustwastingmoneyonfacilitiesthatarenotgoingtobeactivelyusedbythepeople.Forexample,itisimportantforpeopletoknowthatlittlethingslikejoggingortakingthestairsprovideasmanybenefitsasusingexercisingequipmentinasportsclub.
Allinall,thegovernmentshouldbespendingmoremoneyonthecampaignsofgettingthepeopletobemoreinvolvedinahealthierlifestyleinsteadofwastingtaxpayers’moneyonsportsfacilitiesthatarebarelyusedbythegeneralpublic.Thisisbyfarthebestwayofimprovingthehealthstandardsofanationasawhole.
2009年3月7日
Newspapershavebecomeanenormousinfluenceonpeople’sideasandopinions.Whyisthisthecase?
Isitadesirableorundesirablesituation?
Thenicknameofthe“UncrownedKing”giventothemodernjournalistisbynomeansanexaggeration.Inalmosteverymodernsociety,newspapershavebeenplayinganessentialroleinshapingpeople’sthoughtsonawiderangeofissuesandarealwaysregardedasanindispensablesourceofinformation.Inmyopinion,thiscomplexphenomenoncanbeboileddowntoseveralkeyfactors,andbothitspositiveandnegativeaspectsneedtobeanalyzedthoroughly.
Tobeginwith,humancuriosityisanunderlyingfactorinthegrowingpopularityofnewspapers.Astheonlyspeciesontheplanetequippedwithextraordinaryintelligence,humansareinveteratelycuriousaboutthelatesteventsaroundtheglobe.Therefore,allkindsofnewspapersprosperinsuchanagethatisgushingwithinformation,appealingtopeople’sincreasinglystrongdesiretoknowmoreaboutthisconstantlychangingworld.Itislittlewonderthatnumerousreadersareluredintoheavierrelianceonthosewell-establishedandinternationallyrenownednewspapers.
Toalargeextent,thissituationisadesirableonewithitsmanypositiveaspects.Firstofall,inordertomaintaintheirgoodreputation,mostnewspapersandmagazinesreportactualeventsinadetailedway,providingnotonlyfactualinformationbutalsodeepinsightsintocomplexsocialandpoliticalissues.Inaddition,circulatedonadailybasisandacrossanextensivedemographicregion,majornewspapershavesmoothlyoperatedbranches,seasonedcorrespondentsandahighlyefficientsystemtocollectlocalnewswiththeswiftestactions.Mostimportantly,theircoverageandinsightfulcommentscanencourageyoungreaderstoformtheirownopinionsoncurrentaffairs.
Ontheotherhand,peopleshouldbefullyawareofthedownsideofthejournalisticdominance.Moreoftenthannot,newspapersofnationalimportancearelargelycontrolledbythegovernmentandactastheorganoftheauthorities.Byfurnishingcitizenswithprejudicedandself-opinionatedreportsonsensitiveissues,suchasforeignaffairsandnationalsecurity,thesenewspaperscanmanipulatetheirperspectivesandattitudesandexerciseasortofmonopolyontheirwayofthinking.Onalessseriouslevel,floodingthepageswithtrivialpiecesofentertainmentnewsandcelebritysecretsistheusualwaytodivertthepublic’sattentionawayfromgovernmentscandalsandtoeclipsesuchsocialandeconomicillsasunemployment,crimeandjudicialincompetence.
Inconclusion,althoughthepositivefunctionsofmodernjournalismaretobesufficientlyrecognized,peoplemustnotslackentheirvigilanceagainstthepossibleabuseofsuchatremendouspowerthatnewspaperspossess.Inotherwords,whileabsorbingbitsofinformationinthenewspapers,readersareadvisedtoadoptanobjectiveapproachandcastadiscriminatingeyeontheirwayofpresentation,commentsandimplicitassumptions.
2010年1月30日
Todaythereisagreatincreaseinanti-socialbehaviorandlackofrespecttoothers.Whatarethecausesofthis?
Whatmeasurescanbetakentoreducethisproblem?
Nowadays,theissueofanti-socialbehaviourandlackofrespectforothersisnotuncommon.Thisisespeciallytrueamongyoungpeople.Therearemainlytwocausesofthisphenomenon--thenegativeinfluenceofmassmediaandthedeclineofthefamilyandpoverty.
Asthemassmediabecomeincreasinglycommercialized,programproducersandpublishersofbooksaremorefocusedonratings,whichisclearlyassociatedwithprofits.Therefore,violenceofallkindsispresentedonTVandinbooks.Theconstantexposuretoviolenceistosuggestpeoplethatviolenceisanordinarywayoflife,andthatshootingandcheatingarepossiblewaystosucceed.Wealsonoticethatoursocietiesandevenourfamilieshavebecomelesscohesive,aspeoplehavetostruggletocopewiththechallengesoflife.Thedeclineinoursenseofcommunityandfamilyhasgonehand-in-handwiththeriseofindividualism.Peopleincreasinglylookaftertheirowninterestswithoutconsideringtheneedsofsociety.
Accordingly,itisthegovernment'sresponsibilitytointroducerestrictionsandsupervisiononthemassmedia,i.e.notallowingcertainTVprogramsatgiventimes,orbylimitingthenumberofbookspublishedaccordingtotheircontent.Familiesandschoolsalsoplayequallyimportantroleindealingwiththisproblem.Parentalguidanceisakeyfactorofself-cultivationinone'slifetime.Parentscanspendmoretimestayingwiththeirchildrenandpatientlycarryoutthedutyoffamilyeducation.Forchildrenwhoexhibitsomeanti-socialbehaviour,schoolsshouldhelpthemtorealizewhattheydidiswrongratherthangivinguponthem.
Overall,althoughthepro
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